Unit 1 A new start Developing ideas Writing 课件-2024-2025学年高中英语外研版（2019）必修第一册

A Journal Entry Unit 1 Period 8 Reading & Writing Brainstorming How was your first week at Prime? Brainstorming What class is enjoyable for you? Why? Brainstorming What after-school activities do you take part in? Brainstorming Did you make new friends in the first week? Writing a journal entry Date Body 1.What’s the passage about? 2.What happened in her physics class? 3.What did she do after class? Let’s think It's about the author's experiences during the first week at senior high. She couldn't take notes of everything the physics teacher said, but the teacher told her to stop taking notes and just listen. She hurried to the school skateboarding club,and bumped into a girl on the way. Then she tried skateboarding at the club and made friends with the girl she bumped into earlier. Let’s sum it up My first-week experience at senior high Outline Content Para.1 Para. 2 Para. 3 Para. 4 My impression of the first week My physics class How I made a new friend A movie plan with my new friend My impression 1.How does the author describe her first week? I can’t believe...is coming to an end. Things are going well/smoothly. Something new...just around the corner. My physics class 2.What was the author’s problem with the class? The teacher spoke so fast that I couldn’t take everything down. How I made a friend 3. How does the author organize this paragraph? After class,... I was running out of.....when.... At the club,... Suddenly,... How to write a journal entry? My first-week experience at senior high Outline Content Para.1 Para. 2 Para. 3 Para. 4 My impression of the first week My physics class How I made a new friend A movie plan with my new friend Make an outline Think of your own experiences of the first week at senior high and complete the notes. My impression of the first week ____________________________________________________________ An enjoyable class ____________________________________________________________ After-school activities ____________________________________________________________ How I made a new friend ____________________________________________________________ Organize and select my impression of first week after-school activities an enjoyable class new friend, new start dear diary How time flies! ....coming to an end. Now, things are going well/smoothly... I was deeply impressed by.... ...left a deep impression on me. I was struggling with...when... With the help of..., I ... ...joined the ...club to meet new people to stay fit and healthy to discuss the hottest topics to practice... After class, I was...when... At the club,... Suddenly,... We plan to... can’t wait to... Post-writing How time flies! I can’t believe the first week is coming to an end. Things are going quite well, and there are one or two things in particular that have left a deep impression on me. Friday 8 September 3d178055-a45f-476b-a4ed-5c9eed5d04d2 15 Post-writing The English class on Thursday was unforgettable. During the class, we were asked to give a short speech about the first day at senior high. All my classmates were excited but I buried my head in my book. I had never delivered a speech in English before, and worse still, I didn’t feel quite at ease speaking in public. I was secretly hoping that nobody would notice me, when suddenly I heard my name called. 3d178055-a45f-476b-a4ed-5c9eed5d04d2 16 Post-writing I stood up, blushing, with nothing coming out of my mouth. “Don’t be shy! Just think of your first day at senior high and say whatever comes to mind. Imagine we are all pumpkins if it helps.” The teacher’s words made me relax a bit, and I finally began to say something. Despite my trembling voice, I gave my first ever public speech in English. It was hard, but it felt good to be able to express myslef. 3d178055-a45f-476b-a4ed-5c9eed5d04d2 17 Post-writing After school that day, I decided to go to the English club to further practise my English. I believe that by practising more I can improve a lot. As the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.” While I was trying to pick up the courage to talk to someone, I heard a kind voice behind me. “Hello, I’m Tom, Nice to meet you.” Sitting side-by-side, he shared with me some tips on how to improve my English. We had a lovely chat and soon became friends. 3d178055-a45f-476b-a4ed-5c9eed5d04d2 18 Post-writing The first week of senior high has been quite exciting, and I am looking forward to making the most of senior high! 3d178055-a45f-476b-a4ed-5c9eed5d04d2 19 日记正文一般包括三部分 第三部分：阐述自己的观点、收获或体会 第一部分：引出主题 第二部分：活动过程和结果 While-writing: Layout Setting the Scene Describe the time, place, weather. Say what the main character was doing. Development of the story Describe the main action Conclusion Describe the scene at the end and the main character’s feelings $$