应用文通知讲练课件-2025届高三上学期英语作文复习专项

Notice 你校英文报将开设一个新专栏，专门刊登学生的英文习作。假定你是该报社的编辑，请你用英文写一则通知发表在该报上，内容如下：1. 专栏目的；2. 习作要求；3. 奖励优秀习作。 开设一个新专栏_____________________________________ 专门____________________________________ 刊登____________________________________ 英文习作_______________________________ set up/found a new column specialize in doing sth publish/display English compositions/articles 集中问题 1. 结构失衡（第一段过长/最后一段仅有一句短句） 2. 无逻辑连接词 ——衔接不合理 3. 表述口语化/中式英语 集中问题 【第一段】1. 结构上，第一段过长 2. 内容上，专栏目的与专栏功能冲突/目的陈述不合理 3. 语法上，目的状语+主句句式使用未更新/错误 2. 【专栏功能】publish English compositions 【不合理专栏目的】 publish students’ articles/encourage students to write English articles 【专栏目的】 提高学生的写作能力_____________________________ 激发学生对学习英语的兴趣_______________________ 丰富我们的校园生活_____________________________ enhance/improve students’ writing ability motivate/ stimulate/arouse students’ interest in learning English enrich our campus life 集中问题 【第一段】3. 语法上，目的状语+主句句式使用未更新/错误 集中问题 【第一段】3. 语法上，目的状语+主句句式使用未更新/错误 3. 为了提高学生的写作能力和激发学生对学习英语的热情，我校英语报将开设一个新专栏，专门刊登学生的英文习作。 ____________________ students’ wrting ability and _________ students’ enthusiasm for learning English, our school’s English newspaper schedules to set up a new column to publish students’ English compositions. ____________________ students’ wrting ability and _________ students’ enthusiasm for learning English, a new column is scheduled to be set up by our school’s English newspaper to publish students’ English compositions. 集中问题 【第一段】3. 语法上，目的状语+主句句式使用未更新/错误 【句式再升级】 为了提高学生的写作能力和激发学生对学习英语的热情，我校英语报将开设一个新专栏，专门刊登学生的英文习作。 In a bid to improve students’ wrting ability and arouse students’ enthusiasm for learning English, our school’s English newspaper schedules to set up a new column_______________________________________________________. （which引导定语从句） _______________________________________________________. （where引导定语从句） _______________________________________________________. （非谓语动词作定语） which specializes in publishing students’ English compositions where students’ English compositions will be published. specializing in publishing students’ English compositions 集中问题 【第二段】1. 出现大量与习作要求无关的表述（时间/地点/报名…） 2. 习作要求表述不合理 （用英语写/书写要求/书面整洁） 3. 表述要求句式待改进/换种说法 Whoever is interested can either go to sign up at the Student Union or directly register on our website. Use English to write/hand in. 集中问题 【第二段】3. 表述要求句式待改进/换种说法 总述句： (1) The basic requirements for the entries are as follows. (2) Listed below are what we’d like to bring to your attention. Listed below are the requirements which we’d like to bring to your attention. 集中问题 【第二段】3. 表述要求句式待改进/换种说法 [原创/不抄袭] First of all, the article must be original, which means that you can’t adapt the article from others. [原创/不抄袭] 首先并且最重要的，你要记住的是投稿的作文必须是原创的/避免抄袭。 First and foremost, _________________________（主语从句）is that the English compositions___________________________________(非谓语动词作定语/定语从句）must be original/should avoid plagiarism. what you should keep in mind contributed to/ which you contribute to 集中问题 【第二段】3. 表述要求句式待改进/换种说法 [主题] Besides, compositions with inspiring and optimistic content will be highly recommended. Last but not least, please notice that real names are not allowed in your works. Preference will be given to brilliant content instead of merely pretty words. 习作要求 [原创/不抄袭] First and foremost, what you should keep in mind is that the English compositions contributed to must be original/should avoid plagiarism. [主题] Besides, compositions with inspiring and optimistic content will be highly recommended. [字数] Any form of writing is acceptable as long as it is limited to 500 words. [描写] Whether the description of your composition is fluent/vivid/logical/reasonable will be taken into account. If your composition is selected, you will be awarded some prizes ranging from English dictionaries to classic English novels. Anticipating your active participation! 集中问题 【第三段】reward award/ 仅有一句小短句 If your composition is selected, you will be awarded some prizes ranging from English dictionaries to classic English novels. Anticipating your active participation! If your composition is selected, you will be awarded some prizes ranging from English dictionaries to classic English novels. Anticipating your active participation! Possible version In a bid to improve students’ writing ability and arouse students’ enthusiasm for learning English, our school’s English newspaper schedules to set up a new column which specializes in publishing students’ English compositions. The basic requirements for the entries are as follows. First and foremost, what you should keep in mind is that the English compositions contributed to must be original. Besides, preference will be given to compositions with meaningful topics which will have a positive influence on our fellows. In addition, please notice that any form of writing is acceptable as long as it is limited to 500 words. If your composition is selected, you will be awarded some prizes ranging from English dictionaries to classic English novels. Anticipating your active participation! $$