内容正文:
高一写作指导
活动介绍
一、美文诵读
假设你是李华,你校学生会即将组织一个英语夏令营 (English Summer Camp) 活动,请你用英语写信给你的加拿大笔友Mike,介绍此次活动的有关情况。内容应包括:
目的:提供同学们一个丰富课余生活的机会。
参与者:高一学生
时间、地点:7月15日到8月15日在我校;
内容:英语口语课,户外活动;
意义:培养学生对英语的兴趣,扩大视野。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
How are you doing these days? I’m writing to tell you something about our school’s English Summer Camp.
Some details about the activity are as follows. In order to provide us with a good chance to enrich our after-class life, the Students’ Union has decided to organize an English Summer Camp among the students of senior one. It will be held in our school from July 15 to August 15. The camp includes oral English classes and outdoor activities. The activity can not only develop our interest in English but also broaden our horizons.
I would be grateful if you can spare your time to take part in it. I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
第一段: 写信背景 + 写信目的
第二段:活动介绍内容可包括:
(1)活动的目的、参与者;
(2)活动的地点、时间;
(3)活动的主题、内容;
(4)活动的意义或效果;
(5)活动要求或注意事项。
第三段:表达希望对方参加活动
一、活动介绍
1. 主要人称:
2. 主要时态:
3. 要点:3 点(目的、内容、意义)
(注意:要点齐全不跑题)
二、文章结构
开头:写作目的或原因
主体:活动介绍
(1. 为了...,××进行了主题为...的活动;
2. 活动在何时何地进行;
3. 活动内容;
4. 活动意义/效果;
5. 注意事项/要求)
结尾:提出要求,期盼回复
第一人称、第二人称
一般现在时、一般将来时
三、主要单词、短语和句型
1. 举行:
2. 参加:
3. 学生会:
4. 提供一个…的机会:
5. 扩大视野:
6. 丰富生活、经历:
7. I’m writing to tell you something about…
8. Some details about the activity are as follows.
9. The activity includes….
10. The activity can not only…., but also….
hold,organize
take part in,participate in,join in,attend
the Students’ Union
provide sb with a chance to do sth
broaden one’s horizons
enrich one’s life / experience
1.时间、地点表达
时间:
1)._____1999 、 _____May 、 _____ spring
____the morning/afternoon/evening
2). _____7o’clock 、
______noon/night/dawn/dusk/sunset/
Christmas
in
in
in
in
in 用于年、月、季节、上下午晚
at
at
at 用于时间点前
1.时间、地点表达
3). _____June7、_____National Day、
_____Sunday morning
on
on
on
on 用于具体日期、特定的日子、特指的上
下午晚上
1.时间、地点表达
4). 3:oop.m-4:00p.m:
从六月七日至六月八日:
5). 2017年1月17日:
from 3:00 pm. to 4:00 pm
from June7 to 8
January 17, 2017或Jan. 17, 2017
注意:用英语表达年月日的顺序:
月 日,年(日和年之间需用逗号隔开)
地点:
___ the school gate
___ No.225 Dongfeng Street
at小地点及门牌号码前。
注意:邮箱,网址,电话号码前也用介词at
(2) ___ the teaching building
___ the library
___ the hall
___ the park
(3) ______ the meeting room
___ the third floor
___ the playground
at
at
in
in
in
in
in/ at
on
on
Eg1:英语演讲比赛将于二月十八日上午七时在校会议室举行。
特别提醒:时间地点放在一起,先写地点再写时间,并且由小写到大
The English speaking contest will be held at the school meeting room at 7a.m. on February 18.
2.目的:
(1).in order to+v in order that+句子
(2).The aim(目标)/purpose(目的)of the activity is to …..
Eg:为了丰富学生的业余生活,学生会决定在高一学生中组织一次歌唱比赛
In order to enrich students’ after-class life, the Students’ Union has decided to organize a singing contest among the students of senior one.
(3) 主题的呈现(介词的有on, about, concerning
短语的有on the topic of , with the theme of)
Eg:我将做主题为人与自然的演讲
I’ll give a speech on the topic of “Man and Nature”.
3.活动的内容或计划:
(1).The activity/ competition includes…
(2).The match can be divided into … parts, including/such as….
Eg:活动内容包括唱流行歌曲和弹奏古典音乐
The activity includes singing pop songs and playing classical music.
4.活动感受或意义:
为某人提供一个做某事的机会
培养习惯:
增进友谊:
扩大视野:
丰富生活、经历:
provide sb. with an opportunity to do sth.
develop a habit of
promote friendship
broaden our horizons
enrich one’s life / experience
Eg1: 这个讲座一定很有意义,它会给你提供一个了解中国传统文化的好机会。
The lecture, which will provide you with a good chance to learn about traditional Chinese culture, must be meaningful.
Eg2: 它不仅会给我门提供一个了解中国传统文化的好机会而且增进了我们之间的友谊。
It can not only provide us with a good chance to learn about traditional Chinese culture but also help us promote our friendship.
二、牛刀小试:
假如你是李华,你校学生会决定举办一次关于莎士比亚作品的讲座,请你用英语写信给你的加拿大笔友Mike, 介绍此次活动的有关情况。内容应包括:
目的:提供学生一个学习外国文学 (foreign literature) 的机会。
参与者:高一学生
时间:3月15日下午2:00-4:00
地点: 学校图书馆三楼阅览室
内容:(1)Mr. Smith的讲座 (2)交流学习经验
意义:培养学生对外国文学的兴趣,扩大视野。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
写作指导:
Step1:审题
Step2:列提纲/要点
Step3:确定句型
Step4:连句成文
1.
2. 审时态:文章以 __________________ 为主。
3. 审人称:由于是给别人介绍活动,所以文章应以 第 _________ 人称为主。
活动介绍
一般现在时/一般将来时
一、二
Step1.审题
关于莎士比亚作品的讲座
提供学生… 机会
3月15日下午2:00-4:00
4. 念慈体育馆一楼多功能厅
5. 交流学习经验
6. 培养对… 兴趣
7. 扩大视野
the lecture on Shakespeare’s works
provide the students with a good chance to do sth.
from 2:00 p.m. to 4:00 p.m. on March 15
Step2.列提纲/要点
in the Multi-functional Hall on the first floor of Nianci Gymnasium
the exchanging of learning experience
broaden our horizons
develop our interest in …
1. I’m writing to tell you something about …
1. Some details about the activity are as follows.
2. In order to …, the Students’ Union has decided to organize … among…
3. It will be held + 地点+ 时间
4. The activity includes …
5. It will not only … but also …
1. I would be grateful if you can spare your time to take part in it.
2. I am looking forward to your reply.
开头:
中间:
结尾:
Step3.确定句型
时间地点放在一起,先写地点再写时间,并且由小写到大。
注意:
Dear Mike,
How are you getting along these days? I’m writing to tell you something about the lecture on Shakespeare’s works in our school.
Some details about the activity are as follows. In order to provide the students with a good chance to learn about foreign literature, the Students’ Union has decided to organize a lecture among the students of senior one. It will be held in the Reading Room on the third floor of the Library from 2:00 p.m. to 4:00 p.m. on March 15. The activity includes the lecture given by Mr. Smith and the exchanging of learning experience. It will not only develop our interest in foreign literature but also broaden our horizons.
I would be grateful if you can spare your time to take part in it. I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours, Li Hua
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