2024年北京卷高中英语真题书面表达变式题 (3)

1．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： (1)建议投稿内容； (2)就以上建议简要说明理由。 注意：(1)词数100左右； (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 2．假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你的英国笔友Jim在邮件中提到，他们校刊正在对“如何成为优秀高中生”的话题进行讨论，他发来邮件向你寻求建议。请你用英文给他回复，提出2-3条建议，以及相关理由。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, I’m glad to hear from you. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 3．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。最近你收到英国好友Jim的来信，得知他和朋友们骑车旅行一周的计划没有得到父母的许可，他感到非常沮丧。请你给Jim写一封回信，内容包括： 1.表示安慰； 2.给出建议。 注意：1.词数100左右； 2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 4．假如你是红星中学的李华，你看到一个海外网站在征集利用网络宣扬各国文化的建议稿。请你发邮件说明你的建议。主要内容包括： 1. 推荐一个中国文化的代表(人物、城市、历史古迹、文物…等); 2. 提出如何利用网络宣扬的具体建议。 注意：1. 词数 100 左右; 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Editor, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 5．假如你是红星中学学生李华，你的英国朋友Chris想在寒假去打工，但他的父母不同意，他写信寻求你的帮助，请给他写回信，给出你的建议。 注意： 1.词数100左右; 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Chris, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 6．假设你是红星中学高二学生李华。你的英国好友Jim遇到了时间管理方面的问题，特发来邮件向你求助，请你用英文给他回一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 表示安慰； 2. 给出建议。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 7．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友 Jim最近在北京学习，感到不适应，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： 1．表示理解； 2．提出建议。 注意：1．词数100左右； 2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 8．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。今年是学校英文校刊创办十周年，为了更好地迎合读者的需求，校刊决定增加一个新栏目。现向全校同学征集意见。你作为一名忠实读者，请写一封邮件给校刊主编 Jim， 内容包括： 1. 对创刊十周年表示祝贺； 2. 建议新增栏目的名称、内容和推荐理由。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Jim, ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 9．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim来信，询问你如何提高学习效率。请你给他写一封回信，介绍你的具体做法及原因。 注意：1.词数100左右； 2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 10．假设你是某中学高一学生李华。你在某英语报上看到同为高一新生的Jerry的求助信，他想参加学校的学生会，但父亲担心会影响他的学习而和他产生了争执。他很烦恼，向同龄人征求建议。请你给他写一封英文回信，内容包括： 1．表示安慰； 2．分析加入学生会的利弊； 3．提出合理可行的建议。 注意：1．词数100左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 提示词：学生会 student union Dear Jerry, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 参考答案： 1．Dear Jim, It’s great to hear you’re planning to write about China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country. Here are a few suggestions for your article. To begin with, talk about China’s economic growth and technological advancements, which are the highlights in the past few decades. Then, projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good topic to discuss because it showcases China’s determination to build a shared future with the world. In addition, you can also mention China’s role in helping solving global issues such as the global warming, offering a more comprehensive view. Looking forward to reading your article! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写。外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，要求考生给他回复邮件，就此给予他建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 很好的：great →wonderful 成就：achievement→ accomplishment 建议：suggestion →advice 此外：In addition → what’s more 2.句式拓展 句式变换 原句：It’s great to hear you’re planning to write about China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country. 拓展句：It’s great to hear what you’re planning to write about is China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country. 【点睛】【高分句型1】To begin with, talk about China’s economic growth and technological advancements, which are the highlights in the past few decades.（运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句） 【高分句型2】Then, projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good topic to discuss because it showcases China’s determination to build a shared future with the world.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句） 2．Dear Jim, I’m glad to hear from you. In your last email, you mentioned that your school is currently discussing the topic of “How to become an outstanding high school student”. You have asked me for some advice, so I’m writing to share my thoughts. Firstly, I think it’s important to maintain a positive attitude. Keep a positive mindset, and you’ll be able to navigate through the tough times with ease. Secondly, I would recommend taking advantage of all the resources available at school. Lastly, make time for extracurricular activities. I hope my advice is helpful to you, and I wish you the best in your studies and future endeavors. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你的英国笔友Jim在邮件中提到，他们校刊正在对“如何成为优秀高中生”的话题进行讨论，他发来邮件向你寻求建议。请你用英文给他回复，提出2-3条建议，以及相关理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 建议：advice→suggestion 利用：take advantage of→make use of 有用的：helpful→useful 重要的：important→vital 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：You have asked me for some advice, so I’m writing to share my thoughts. 拓展句：Since you have asked me for some advice, I’m writing to share my thoughts. 【点睛】[高分句型1] In your last email, you mentioned that your school is currently discussing the topic of “How to become an outstanding high school student”. (运用了that引导宾语从句) [高分句型2] Keep a positive mindset, and you’ll be able to navigate through the tough times with ease. (运用了“祈使句+and+简单句”) 3．Dear Jim, I’m sorry to hear that you didn’t get your parents’ permission to go on a week-long bike trip with your friends. You’re upset and I’d like to give you some comfort and advice. As far as I’m concerned, the most important thing that you need do now is have a good conversation with your parents, which is beneficial to your relationship. Besides, there is no need for you to be disappointed about this because your parents just want to protect you from potentially dangerous situation. I hope you will get better in no time. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。最近你收到英国好友Jim的来信，得知他和朋友们骑车旅行一周的计划没有得到父母的许可，他感到非常沮丧。请你给Jim写一封回信，表示安慰，并提出建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 失望的：disappointed/upset→discouraged 建议：advice→suggestion 有益的：beneficial→helpful 此外：besides→in addition 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：You’re upset and I’d like to give you some comfort and advice. 拓展句：Since you’re upset, I’d like to give you some comfort and advice. 【点睛】[高分句型1] As far as I’m concerned, the most important thing that you need do now is have a good conversation with your parents, which is beneficial to your relationship.  (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] Besides, there is no need for you to be disappointed about this because your parents just want to protect you from potentially dangerous situation. (运用了because引导原因状语从句) 4．Dear Editor, I’m writing to offer some suggestions to promote Chinese culture online. In my opinion, Confucius stands for Chinese culture, because his philosophy has a deep influence on our law, life, and especially in education. Many of his teaching methods, which promote the combination of learning and thinking, are still of great importance in practice today. To spread Chinese culture, we can build a bilingual website to introduce Confucius and his famous sayings. In this way, even foreigners can appreciate Confucius better. Besides, we can invite some influential vloggers to Temple of Confucius to shoot some videos, which is also a vivid way to stir up others’ interest in Chinese culture. Moreover, it’s a good idea to create an app which keeps every user updated on the latest activities about Confucius. Hope my advice can get more people learn about Chinese culture. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生发邮件向一个征集利用网络宣扬各国文化的海外网站说明你的建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 建议：advice/suggestion→tip 影响：influence→impact 重要：be of great importance→important 方法：method→way/approach 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：To spread Chinese culture, we can build a bilingual website to introduce Confucius and his famous sayings. 拓展句：We can build a bilingual website to introduce Confucius and his famous sayings, which can spread Chinese culture. 【点睛】[高分句型1] In my opinion, Confucius stands for Chinese culture, because his philosophy has a deep influence on our law, life, and especially in education. (运用了because引导原因状语从句) [高分句型2] Many of his teaching methods, which promote the combination of learning and thinking, are still of great importance in practice today. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句) 5．Dear Chris, Sorry to hear that you want to take a part-time job during the winter vacation but your parents disagree. As a friend, I understand your situation and here are some suggestions.       First, have a talk with your parents and explain to them why you want to work. Maybe you want to earn some money, or gain some work experience, or develop new skills. Whatever your reason, make sure you express it clearly to your parents. If your parents still disagree, offer to compromise. You could suggest working for a limited time, so that you can still spend some time with your family and do your homework. Besides, listen to your parents’ concerns and try to address them. They might be worried about your safety, your studies, or your health. You can promise to take care of yourself, keep up with your studies, and follow their rules. I hope these suggestions are helpful. Good luck! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的建议信。要求考生给英国朋友Chris写封信，就其想在寒假去打工，但他的父母不同意一事给出建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 建议：suggestion→ advice 首先：first → first of all 此外：besides → what’s more 解决：address→ deal with 2.句式拓展 简单句变并列句 原句：They might be worried about your safety, your studies, or your health. You can promise to take care of yourself, keep up with your studies, and follow their rules. 拓展句：They might be worried about your safety, your studies, or your health, so you can promise to take care of yourself, keep up with your studies, and follow their rules. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Whatever your reason, make sure you express it clearly to your parents.(运用了whatever引导的状语从句和省略that的宾语从句) 【高分句型2】If your parents still disagree, offer to compromise.(运用了if引导的状语从句) 6．Dear Jim, I understand your struggle with time management and want to offer some comfort. It’s a skill that takes time to develop, but with practice, you’ll get there. To help you out, I suggest you start by identifying your priorities and allocating time accordingly. Additionally, set clear goals and work towards them step by step. Remember to stay focused and avoid unnecessary distractions. With these tips in mind, I’m sure that you’ll find a way to manage your time effectively. Good luck! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的建议信。要求给英国好友Jim写封回信，就其遇到的时间管理方面的问题表示安慰并给出建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 想要：want→ would like 建议：suggest → advise 此外：additionally → in addition 不必要的：unnecessary→ uncalled-for/needless 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Remember to stay focused and avoid unnecessary distractions. 拓展句：Remember to stay focused so that you can avoid unnecessary distractions. 【点睛】【高分句型1】It’s a skill that takes time to develop, but with practice, you’ll get there.（运用了that引导的定语从句） 【高分句型2】With these tips in mind, I’m sure that you’ll find a way to manage your time effectively.（运用了that引导的宾语从句） 7．Dear Jim, I’m sorry to learn that you are having such a hard time these days. Actually, most people will feel homesick and anxious when they leave home and come to a new place, especially a foreign country. So don’t worry too much. To meet a new environment, sometimes we have to change some of our habits and expand our social circle as well. If you feel lonely, you can make new friends, who can share their hobbies and ideas with you. Joining student clubs is a good way to reduce loneliness, and it will help you learn more about the local culture. Wish you a pleasant time in Beijing! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本文是应用文。要求考生给最近在北京学习，感到不适应而发来邮件询问你建议的Jim回信。 【详解】1.词汇积累 事实上：Actually→In fact 焦虑不安的：anxious→uneasy 扩大：expand→widen 令人愉快的：pleasant→pleasing 2.句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：Joining student clubs is a good way to reduce loneliness, and it will help you learn more about the local culture. 拓展句：Joining student clubs is a good way to reduce loneliness, which will help you learn more about the local culture. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m sorry to learn that you are having such a hard time these days.(运用了that引导的宾语从句) 【高分句型2】If you feel lonely, you can make new friends, who can share their hobbies and ideas with you.(运用了if引导的状语从句和who引导的非限制性定语从句) 8．Dear Jim,       Congratulations on the 10th anniversary of our English school magazine. Knowing that the school newspaper has decided to add a new section, I am writing to give my suggestion.       Have you ever considered adding the column “Teen Life”? High school students have their own stories, interests and thoughts, which are valuable materials for them to write about. The column will be a stage for them to present their colorful life in English. Many students may take an active part in writing their stories, which I believe will be of great help to improve their English.       Hope our school English newspaper will become more and more popular.                                                                                                                                           Yours,                                                                                                                                          Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给校刊主编Jim写封邮件，对创刊十周年表示祝贺，建议新增栏目的名称、内容和推荐理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 决定：decide→determine 建议：suggestion→advice 宝贵的：valuable→precious 参加：take part in→participate in 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：The column will be a stage for them to present their colorful life in English. 拓展句：The column will be a stage where they can present their colorful life in English. 【点睛】[高分句型1] High school students have their own stories, interests and thoughts, which are valuable materials for them to write about. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] Many students may take an active part in writing their stories, which I believe will be of great help to improve their English. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 9．Dear Jim, In your last letter, you mentioned that you wanted to know how to improve learning efficiency. I’ll give you some advice. Firstly, when acquiring new knowledge, you should try to make connections with what you have already learned. Secondly, you should learn to do “spaced review”, especially during the first day after learning. Besides, there are some common practices you should know, such as sleeping well and doing physical exercise. All these can help improve your memory and learn effectively. I hope my advice will be useful. If you need more help, please let me know.                                                                                                                                                                   Yours,                                                                                                                                                                  Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Jim写一封信，针对如何提高学习效率给出一些建议并说明理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 建议：advice→suggestion 首先：firstly→first of all 此外：besides→what’s more 有帮助的：useful→helpful 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Secondly, you should learn to do “spaced review”, especially during the first day after learning. 拓展句：Secondly, you should learn to do “spaced review”, especially during the first day after learning, which can improve learning efficiency. 【点睛】【高分句型1】In your last letter, you mentioned that you wanted to know how to improve learning efficiency.(运用了that引导的宾语从句) 【高分句型2】If you need more help, please let me know.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句) 10．Dear Jerry, I knew about your problem on the newspaper and I really relate to it. So I am writing to you just to offer my advice to you. I can quite understand your father’s position. Of course if you join the student union, it will take much of your time and your academic performance may be affected. However, you can practice your abilities in many aspects, especially the ability of communicating and cooperating with others. So in my view, the key lies in you: can you manage the time properly? If you are confident to handle it, you can have a talk with your father and list your reasons. And remember: be calm. I believe your father won’t stop you from becoming a well-rounded person. I hope it will be of a little help for you. Best wishes!                                                                                      Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给Jerry写封信，对他表示安慰，分析加入学生会的利弊，提出合理可行的建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 提供某物给某人：offer sth. to sb.→provide sb. with sth. 然而：however→nevertheless 在我看来：in my view→as far as I am concerned 在于：lie in→consist in 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I knew about your problem on the newspaper and I really relate to it. 拓展句：I knew about your problem on the newspaper, to which I really relate. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Of course if you join the student union, it will take much of your time and your academic performance may be affected. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句) [高分句型2] I believe your father won’t stop you from becoming a well-rounded person.(运用了省略that引导的宾语从句) 答案第1页，共2页 答案第1页，共2页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$