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Continuation Writing 读后续写初体验 ——重生之我是编剧 题型概述 读后续写25分，提供一段350词左右的语言材料(多为故事类文章或夹叙夹议类文章)，要求学生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语进行续写，为其补充一篇150词左右，与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节合理和结构完整的短文。 what to read ? continuation writing after reading how to write ? who when where what why how 5w1h 4+3+2+1 reading material I stared at myself in the mirror: blue tights, yellow vest, an aquamarine(海蓝宝石) fish tail , and large googly eyes(金鱼眼) on my head. I raised my eyebrows quizzically at my mom with uncertainty about this costume. Mom ensured that she followed the pattern exactly. “Maybe the makeup will add something,” Mom said hopefully. I sighed(叹气) and looked back at the mirror. Somehow Mom had convinced me to do a play this summer. So here I was about to play the Fish Footman(鱼仆人)in the local theater production of Alice in Wonderland. I can't say it's been the time of my life. Actually, I even wanted to withdraw(退出) from the play. “Well, there’s no turning back now,”she said. “You've been rehearsing(彩排) for two months. I’m so proud of you” She gave me an encouraging smile, pulling me in for a fierce hug. I had to admit: Mom’s hugs are the best. But despite that, I felt a knot(结) in my stomach that got worse as the opening night drew nearer. That day I followed Mom to the backstage of the theater, wearing the questionable costume. I shrank(缩) inside myself, but Mom pulled me toward the makeup table. When my makeup artist had put down her last makeup brush and Mom led me over to a mirror, my jaw(下巴) dropped. A mass of blue spread from my forehead(额头) down my nose, and lime green(石灰绿色) circles bubbled over my cheeks. “Mom! I can't go out on stage like this!” I cried. “I'd be a laughing stock!”(笑柄) “Riley! This is Alice in Wonderland. You’re not the only one in an odd costume.I'm going to watch you go out on that stage tonight.” She left, but then leaned down and kissed me on the forehead. “I love you, honey.”And she went away. Tears filled my eyes as chaos(混乱) closed in around me. It felt like I stood there alone for hours, but in reality it was like ten minutes before the assistant stage came in and called my name. I stared at myself in the mirror: blue tights, yellow vest, an aquamarine(海蓝宝石) fish tail , and large googly eyes(金鱼眼) on my head. I raised my eyebrows quizzically at my mom with uncertainty about this costume. Mom ensured that she followed the pattern exactly. “Maybe the makeup will add something,” Mom said hopefully. I sighed(叹气) and looked back at the mirror. Somehow Mom had convinced me to do a play this summer. So here I was about to play the Fish Footman(鱼仆人)in the local theater production of Alice in Wonderland. I can't say it's been the time of my life. Actually, I even wanted to withdraw(退出) from the play. “Well, there’s no turning back now,”she said. “You've been rehearsing(彩排) for two months. I’m so proud of you” She gave me an encouraging smile, pulling me in for a fierce hug. I had to admit: Mom’s hugs are the best. But despite that, I felt a knot(结) in my stomach that got worse as the opening night went nearer. That day I followed Mom to the backstage of the theater, wearing the questionable costume. I shrank(缩) inside myself, but Mom pulled me toward the makeup table. When my makeup artist had put down her last makeup brush and Mom led me over to a mirror, my jaw(下巴) dropped. A mass of blue spread from my forehead(额头) down my nose, and lime green(石灰绿色) circles bubbled over my cheeks. “Mom! I can't go out on stage like this!” I cried. “I'd be a laughing stock!”(笑柄) “Riley! This is Alice in Wonderland. You’re not the only one in an odd(奇怪的) costume. I'm going to watch you go out on that stage tonight.” She left, but then leaned down and kissed me on the forehead. “I love you, honey.”And she went away. Tears filled my eyes as chaos(混乱) closed in around me. It felt like I stood there alone for hours, but in reality it was like ten minutes before the assistant stage came in and called my name. Story Map quizzical uncertain disappointed a little comfort but still anxious embarrassed/awkward moved/worried negative Story Map Step 1:先写全文最后一句 （根据主题，确定大方向） Step 2:再写第一段最后一句 (根据2段1句来写衔接句） Step 3:再写每段第2句 (根据每段首句，确定本段情节走向) Step 4:最后补写每段的中间内容 （续写主体部分,借助语言/动作/心理/情感,等细节补充3-4句话左右） My scene was coming up.__________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Applause flowed through the audience. ____________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ 读后续写 “4”步骤 reading material I stared at myself in the mirror: blue tights, yellow vest, an aquamarine(海蓝宝石) fish tail , and large googly eyes(金鱼眼) on my head. I raised my eyebrows quizzically at my mom with uncertainty about this costume. Mom ensured that she followed the pattern exactly. “Maybe the makeup will add something,” Mom said hopefully. I sighed(叹气) and looked back at the mirror. Somehow Mom had convinced me to do a play this summer. So here I was about to play the Fish Footman(鱼仆人)in the local theater production of Alice in Wonderland. I can't say it's been the time of my life. Actually, I even wanted to withdraw(退出) from the play. “Well, there’s no turning back now,”she said. “You've been rehearsing(彩排) for two months. I’m so proud of you” She gave me an encouraging smile, pulling me in for a fierce hug. I had to admit: Mom’s hugs are the best. But despite that, I felt a knot(结) in my stomach that got worse as the opening night drew nearer. That day I followed Mom to the backstage of the theater, wearing the questionable costume. I shrank(缩) inside myself, but Mom pulled me toward the makeup table. When my makeup artist had put down her last makeup brush and Mom led me over to a mirror, my jaw(下巴) dropped. A mass of blue spread from my forehead(额头) down my nose, and lime green(石灰绿色) circles bubbled over my cheeks. “Mom! I can't go out on stage like this!” I cried. “I'd be a laughing stock!”(笑柄) “Riley! This is Alice in Wonderland. You’re not the only one in an odd costume.I'm going to watch you go out on that stage tonight.” She left, but then leaned down and kissed me on the forehead. “I love you, honey.”And she went away. Tears filled my eyes as chaos(混乱) closed in around me. It felt like I stood there alone for hours, but in reality it was like ten minutes before the assistant stage came in and called my name. I stared at myself in the mirror: blue tights, yellow vest, an aquamarine(海蓝宝石) fish tail , and large googly eyes(金鱼眼) on my head. I raised my eyebrows quizzically at my mom with uncertainty about this costume. Mom ensured that she followed the pattern exactly. “Maybe the makeup will add something,” Mom said hopefully. I sighed(叹气) and looked back at the mirror. Somehow Mom had convinced me to do a play this summer. So here I was about to play the Fish Footman(鱼仆人)in the local theater production of Alice in Wonderland. I can't say it's been the time of my life. Actually, I even wanted to withdraw(退出) from the play. “Well, there’s no turning back now,”she said. “You've been rehearsing(彩排) for two months. I’m so proud of you” She gave me an encouraging smile, pulling me in for a fierce hug. I had to admit: Mom’s hugs are the best. But despite that, I felt a knot(结) in my stomach that got worse as the opening night went nearer. That day I followed Mom to the backstage of the theater, wearing the questionable costume. I shrank(缩) inside myself, but Mom pulled me toward the makeup table. When my makeup artist had put down her last makeup brush and Mom led me over to a mirror, my jaw(下巴) dropped. A mass of blue spread from my forehead(额头) down my nose, and lime green(石灰绿色) circles bubbled over my cheeks. “Mom! I can't go out on stage like this!” I cried. “I'd be a laughing stock!”(笑柄) “Riley! This is Alice in Wonderland. You’re not the only one in an odd costume.I'm going to watch you go out on that stage tonight.” She left, but then leaned down and kissed me on the forehead. “I love you, honey.”And she went away. Tears filled my eyes as chaos(混乱) closed in around me. It felt like I stood there alone for hours, but in reality it was like ten minutes before the assistant stage came in and called my name. Step 1:先写全文最后一句 Applause flowed through the audience. . . (After the performance, I rushed to h my mom. ) From then on, I c myself and I got c in my heart. theme hallenged ug ourage Step 2:再写第一段最后一句 Despite my im performance in a way, I f the whole play with all effort. I thought , . Applause flowed through the audience. . . perfect inished Step 3:再写每段第2句 My scene was coming up. I was n to stand on that stage./ I went to that stage step by step with n inside. Applause flowed through the audience. I was inspired and got much e from . . . . ervous ervousness ncouragement them and mom Step 4:补全每段的中间内容 My scene was coming up. I was nervous to stand on that stage./ I went to that stage step by step with nervousness inside. . . . . .. Despite my imperfect performance in a way, I finished the whole play with all effort. When I came to the formal stage, many eyes stared at me tightly. Time seemed to stand still. At that moment,the thought of giving up appeared again. But I glanced that mom gave me a determined look. Her words still kept in mind. I was not the only one in a weird costume. There were so many people waiting for the show. I told myself I will make it ! Afterwards, I waved to the audience and said my first line, then ended with graceful curtain calls. Step 4:补全每段的中间内容 Applause flowed through the audience. I was inspired and got much encouragement from the audience and mom . . . . . . . From then on, I knew I challenged myself and got courage in my heart. To my surprise, I noticed my mother was standing at the edge of backstage all the time. She also applaused with a satisfied and proud smile. Before this play, I cried for fear and anxiety. But after the show, she cried for me——her best daughter. Then, on our way home, she held my shoulder tightly. I knew her deeply without any extra explaination. 读后续写 “3”原则 action conflict negative —— response —— solution —— positive 读后续写“2”注意 Example 1: My scene was coming up. I went to that stage step by step with nervousness inside. I want to get... Example 2: My scene was coming up. I went to that stage step by step with nervousness inside. Because I forgot to do my homework, I was anxious about my teacher’s punishment. (惩罚)...... 读后续写“1”一致 Example 3: My scene was coming up. I lived with his parents in one city while his grandparents lived far away in another city. Adam’s parents usually took their son to his grandparents’ house during summer holiday every year and stayed there for around 20 days. Adam’s grandfather loved him very much and spent a lot of time playing with him. His grandmother always cooked delicious food for him. Adam loved his stay there. This continued for years. The boy grew up over time. Assignment 1. Finish and polish your writing after class. 2. Preview the reading for writing in Unit 3. $$ I stared at myself in the mirror: blue tights, yellow vest, an aquamarine(海蓝宝石) fish tail trailing behind me, and large googly eyes(金鱼眼) on my head. I raised my eyebrows quizzically at my mom with uncertainty about this costume. Mom ensured that she followed the pattern exactly. “Maybe the makeup will add something,” Mom said hopefully. I sighed(叹气) and looked back at the mirror. Somehow Mom had convinced me to do a play this summer. So here I was about to play the Fish Footman(鱼仆人)in the local theater production of Alice in Wonderland. I can't say it's been the time of my life. Actually, I even wanted to withdraw(退出) from the play. “Well, there’s no turning back now,”she said. “You've been rehearsing(彩排) for two months. I couldn't be prouder of you.” She gave me an encouraging smile, pulling me in for a fierce hug. I had to admit: Mom’s hugs are the best. But despite that, I felt a knot(结) in my stomach that got worse as the opening night drew nearer. That day I followed Mom to the backstage of the theater, wearing the questionable costume. I shrank(缩) inside myself, but Mom pulled me toward the makeup table. When my makeup artist had put down her last makeup brush and Mom led me over to a mirror, my jaw(下巴) dropped. A mass of blue spread from my forehead(额头) down my nose, and lime green(石灰绿色) circles bubbled over my cheeks. “Mom! I can't go out on stage like this!” I cried. “I'd be a laughing stock!”(笑柄) “Riley! This is Alice in Wonderland. You’re not the only one in an odd costume.I'm going to watch you go out on that stage tonight.” She left, but then leaned down and kissed me on the forehead. “I love you, honey.”And she went away. Tears filled my eyes as chaos(混乱) closed in around me. It felt like I stood there alone for hours, but in reality it was like ten minutes before the assistant stage came in and called my name. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$