读后续写---记忆中的礼物：父亲的故事讲义-江苏省无锡市2023-2024学年高二下学期期末调研英语试题

读后续写(满分25分) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My dad was more than a father to me; he was my friend and one of the most amazing people in my life. So when he passed away suddenly from a stroke at the age of 51, my world fell apart. I was lost, along with my mother who had been with my father since age 16, two brothers, and everyone who knew him. We were thrown into a thick haze of anger, sadness, and shock. I cried every night and tried to hold onto all my memories of him. I replayed every moment I could remember—jotting down thoughts, printing out old e-mails, reading old birthday cards—anything I could hang on to because I didn’t want to forget. As I was going through all these old memories, I began to wonder about all the things I had missed. My dad was a quiet man who was known for his listening skills, his patience and his smile. He was often the one listening instead of telling stories. I wanted to know what stories I had missed by losing him so soon. So I decided to compile(汇编) a memory book as a surprise Christmas gift for my mom and brothers. I started my project in November, contacting everyone I knew who was close to my dad. I sent e-mails and letters asking for friends to send me their thoughts and memories of him. I asked them specifically to share funny stories about my dad and the stories that maybe no one had ever heard. I told them to respond no later than one week prior to Christmas. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Before long, the responses started pouring in. _________________________________________________________ I gave it to my family as a gift on Christmas Day. ____________________________________________________________ 文章梗概： 这篇文章讲述了作者在父亲突然去世后，如何通过收集亲朋好友的回忆和故事，制作了一本记忆册，以此来纪念父亲并帮助自己和家人缓解悲痛。在圣诞节那天，这本记忆册成为了一份特别的礼物，让家人在回忆中感受到父亲的精神和爱，同时也为他们带来了治愈和安慰。 本文故事山（Story Arc） 1. 引入（Introduction） · 描述作者的父亲突然去世，给家庭带来的巨大冲击和悲痛。 · 作者每晚哭泣，努力回忆与父亲共度的时光。 2. 冲突（Conflict） · 作者意识到自己错过了许多与父亲有关的故事和记忆。 · 决定通过收集父亲的故事来弥补这一遗憾。 3. 升级（Rising Action） · 作者在11月开始项目，联系所有与父亲关系密切的人。 · 请求他们分享关于父亲的有趣故事和不为人知的回忆。 4. 高潮（Climax） · 收到大量关于父亲的回应，这些故事让作者对父亲有了更深的了解。 · 作者感受到父亲对他人生活的深远影响。 5. 回落（Falling Action） · 作者整理这些故事，将它们汇编成一本记忆册。 · 这个过程帮助作者处理自己的悲伤，同时保留父亲的记忆。 6. 结局（Resolution） · 在圣诞节，作者将这本记忆册作为礼物送给家人。 · 家人共同阅读记忆册，感受到父亲的爱和精神，这份礼物成为家族的宝贵财富。 7. 反思（Reflection） · 作者和家人通过这本记忆册找到了一种与父亲保持联系的方式。 · 故事以作者对父亲的记忆和爱得到传承和庆祝作为结尾。 续写要点： 第一段：收集回忆的过程 1. 收到来自不同人的回忆和故事，包括童年朋友、同事以及与父亲有过交集的人。 2. 描述这些故事如何丰富了作者对父亲的认识，从年轻时的恶作剧到成熟后的智慧。 3. 表达作者在整理这些回忆时的情感体验，如感动、治愈和与父亲重新建立联系的感觉。 4. 强调这个过程对作者情感上的积极影响，以及对父亲记忆的保存和对悲痛的处理。 第二段：记忆册作为圣诞礼物的影响 1. 描述圣诞节当天家人收到记忆册的场景，以及那一刻的复杂情感。 2. 叙述家人轮流阅读记忆册中的故事，共同体验欢笑和泪水交织的时刻。 3. 强调记忆册作为连接过去和现在的桥梁，以及它在家人心中的重要性。 4. 总结这份礼物如何成为家族历史的一部分，以及它将如何被未来世代所珍视。 参考范文    Before long. the responses started pouring in. Handwritten letters and old photographs piled on my desk. I was amazed and moved by what people had written about my dad. Almost all the stories were new to me, from my dad’s first job, how he met my mom, to his love for his family and friends. Every story was a precious gift. In the end, my compilation was up to 85 pages long. I had the book printed at a local copy store. I gave it 10 my family as a gif on Christmas Day. My mom bawled her eyes out while looking at the thickness of the book. My brothers hugged me. They were both moved beyond words and it took them hours to go through the book. This book was more than just a book of memories. It was a healing process. I felt happier knowing that he had led a great life and touched so many people. I am so proud to have him as my father. (150 words) 下水文1 Before long, the responses started pouring in. Stories from childhood friends, colleagues, and even acquaintances who had crossed paths with my dad filled my inbox. Each narrative painted a fuller picture of the man he was, from his youthful mischief to his mature wisdom. I was amazed by the number of lives he had touched and the profound impact he had made. As I compiled these anecdotes, I felt a deep connection to him, and the memories that were once fading started to come back to life. The process was cathartic, a healing journey that not only allowed me to preserve his legacy but also helped me to process my grief. I gave it to my family as a gift on Christmas Day. The moment was bittersweet, as we gathered around the tree with the memory book in hand. As we flipped through the pages, laughter and tears mingled, and we found ourselves lost in the shared joy of recalling the many facets of my dad's life. It was a poignant reminder of his presence in our lives, even in his absence. The book became a treasure, a tangible piece of him that we could hold onto, a testament to the love and admiration that so many had for him. That Christmas, we didn't just exchange gifts; we celebrated the life of a man who was more than a father, a friend, and a cherished memory. 下水文2 Before long, the responses started pouring in. Each day brought new tales of my dad's kindness, his humor, and his quiet strength. The anecdotes were as varied as the people who shared them, from the times he helped a neighbor in need to the moments he offered a listening ear to a friend in distress. I was moved by the depth of the connections he had made, and the love that was evident in every word. Piecing together these fragments of his life, I felt as if I was getting to know him all over again, and the process helped me to find a sense of peace amidst the sorrow. I gave it to my family as a gift on Christmas Day. The room fell silent as we each took turns reading aloud the stories and reflections that filled the pages of the memory book. It was a day of mixed emotions, where the joy of remembering was intertwined with the pain of loss. But as we shared in the laughter and the tears, we also shared in the love that bound us together as a family. The book became a bridge between the past and the present, a way to keep my dad's spirit alive in our hearts. That Christmas, we didn't just receive a gift; we received a priceless piece of our history, a legacy that we would continue to cherish for years to come. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$