Unit 1 课时 4 写作-【宝典训练】2023-2024学年九年级下册英语高效课堂课件(沪教牛津版)

Unit 1　Great explorations logo 课时 4 写作 目 录 01 写作指导 02 课时过关 03 附录 学习内容与目标 01 写作指导 本单元依旧以描写人物为主线，通过各个事迹多方面多角度来描写一位名人，一位成功人士或者你身边的人。 注意： 1.初三的学生在写人的时候要更多侧重性格及事迹的描写。 2.可以通过几件事情来描述。 例如： 假如你们学校校报举行英语征文活动，主题是“我心目中的成功人士”，请你写一篇文章介绍一位你心目中的成功人士(可以是你身边熟悉的人或名人)。 文章必须包含以下内容：人物简介；人物事迹；给你的启发。 返回目录 第 ‹#› 页 课时 4 写作 要求：1.条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确，逻辑清晰； 2.假如写的是你身边的人物，文中不能出现真实的姓名和校名； 3.请先完成文章的中心大意，作文要求80词左右。 提示词：famous 有名的；pianist 钢琴家；at a price 付出代价； have fun 玩乐；make it 获得成功； be thankful to 对……感恩的 返回目录 第 ‹#› 页 课时 4 写作 A successful person in my mind Lang Lang is one of the youngest and most famous pianists of our time.He is a successful person in my mind. Lang Lang was born in 1982 in Shenyang, Liaoning, China. He began taking piano lessons at the age of three. He won first prize in the Shenyang Piano Competition only two years later. From then on, he won many awards. He has played with the greatest orchestras in the world and at huge events like the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games. In fact, Lang Lang's success came at a price. His father was very strict with him. He was practising the piano while other children of his age were playing games and having fun. 返回目录 第 ‹#› 页 课时 4 写作 Although Lang Lang is very famous now, he is always grateful to his parents because they encourage and support him all the time. From his success, I know nobody can make it without hard work. At the same time, we must be always thankful to those who have helped us. 返回目录 第 ‹#› 页 课时 4 写作 02 课时过关 假设你叫李华，现在是深圳中学的一名新生。请根据以下提示，给你小学的英语老师王老师写一封感谢信，表达对他的爱戴和尊敬。 提示：1.对英语王老师教学的评价。 2.回忆在校时的一件或两件小事。 3.对老师的理解和祝愿。 要求：1.文中内容必须包括以上提示，可适当发挥； 2.表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范； 3.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名，80词左右。 返回目录 第 ‹#› 页 课时 4 写作 Dear Mr. Wang， ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 返回目录 　　I'm very excited to write to express my thanks to you. I am now studying in Shenzhen Middle School. I still remember the days when you taught me English. Your classes were lively and interesting. My English has been improved greatly because of your creative work. 第 ‹#› 页 课时 4 写作 However, at one time, the pressure of examinations, too much homework and the high expectation made me depressed. I was tired of the warning that if I didn't do my best, I wouldn't have the chance to go to college. Thanks for your encouragement, I didn't give up my dream. And now I really understand you. I wish much more of your students could make their dreams come true. Are you still too busy to have a good rest? How I miss you！ 　　I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon. 返回目录 Yours， Li Hua 第 ‹#› 页 课时 4 写作 03 附录 学习内容与目标 返回目录 话题 功能 单词 词组 句型 语法 第 ‹#› 页 课时 4 写作 本节内容到此结束！ logo $$