Unit 3 课时5 写作-【宝典训练】2023-2024学年七年级上册英语高效课堂课件(沪教牛津版)

Unit 3　The Earth 课时5 写作 logo 目 录 01 例文呈现 02 课时过关 01 例文呈现 你们班准备开一个主题为“保护地球，从我做起”的班会，你想在会上以“What should we do to protect the Earth？”为主题进行发言。你认为我们只有一个地球，我们应该好好爱护她，但地球上的污染越来越多，所以保护地球非常重要。 要点： 1．节约纸和笔； 2．不乱扔垃圾； 3．离开房间要关灯； 洗完手要关水龙头； 4．步行、骑自行车或乘公交车。 要求：60～80词。题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 返回目录 第 ‹#› 页 课时5 写作 What should we do to protect the Earth? We have only one Earth, so we should love and take good care of her． But there is much pollution on Earth． It is important to protect the Earth． But what can we do? I hope we start out small and do the following things together: First, save paper and pens． Second, we shouldn't throw rubbish here and there． Third, remember to turn off the lights when we leave the room and remember to turn off the taps when we finish washing hands． Fourth, we can walk, ride a bike or take a bus when we go out． The Earth is our home． Let's try our best to protect her！ 返回目录 第 ‹#› 页 课时5 写作 写作常用句型： 1．People throw away a lot of rubbish． It pollutes the land． 人们丢掉许多垃圾，这污染了大地。 2．More and more people drive on the road． It pollutes the air． 越来越多的人们在路上开车，这污染了空气。 3．Many ships put the petroleum into the rivers．It pollutes the water． 许多轮船把石油放进河里，这污染了水。 4．People throw a lot of rubbish into the rivers．It kills many fishes． 人们把大量的垃圾丢进河里，这杀害了许多的鱼。 5．Factories burn many things to make energy．It also pollutes the air． 工厂燃烧大量的东西来获取能量，这也污染了空气。 返回目录 第 ‹#› 页 课时5 写作 02 课时过关 以“How to make Shenzhen more beautiful？”为题，写一份关于环境污染的调查报告，并给出保护环境的措施。 要点包括：1．深圳有哪些污染。 2．这些污染是什么导致的。 3．我们可以做哪些事情来保护环境。 返回目录 写作方法指导与操练 　　　 写什么——细审题，列要点 1．深圳有哪些污染。　　　　2．这些污染是什么导致的。 3．我们可以做哪些事情来保护环境。 　 第 ‹#› 页 课时5 写作 返回目录 写作方法指导与操练 　 怎么写——遣词句，重结构 第一点：深圳有哪些污染。 1．随着社会的发展，深圳出现了各种各样的污染问题； 比如，水污染、空气污染和噪音污染。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第二点：这些污染是什么导致的。 2．人们乱丢垃圾导致了土地以及水的污染。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________　 3．小汽车、工厂等废气的排放使空气污染变得越来越严重。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．人们大量砍伐树木、建造房子，许多地方出现严重的噪音污染。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________　　 With the development of society, there are many kinds of pollution in Shenzhen, such as water pollution, air pollution and noise pollution. People throw rubbish everywhere and it makes the land and water very dirty. Many cars and factories produce much waste gas. It causes the air pollution to become worse. People cut down a large number of trees and build houses. It causes serious noise pollution in many places. 　 第 ‹#› 页 课时5 写作 返回目录 写作方法指导与操练 第三点：我们可以做哪些事情来保护环境。 5．我们应该将垃圾分类(sort)，养成良好的习惯。 ___________________________________________________________________________ 6．我们应尽可能地乘坐公共交通工具或者骑车上学。 ___________________________________________________________________________ 7．此外，我们可以多种树，节约用水、用电。 ___________________________________________________________________________ We'd better sort the rubbish and form good habits. We should try our best to use the public transport or ride a bike to go to school. What's more, we can plant more trees, save water and electricity as well. 第 ‹#› 页 课时5 写作 【参考词汇】短语：stop… from, dirty water, throw…into…， try one's best, public transport(公共交通) 句式：…should do something to…，keep…clean, it is important for…to do… 返回目录 第 ‹#› 页 课时5 写作 【我的完整作品】 How to make Shenzhen more beautiful? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　 返回目录 Shenzhen is a wonderful city. Many people visit it every year. It is a nice place to live in. But there are many kinds of pollution. On the one hand, people throw rubbish everywhere and it makes the land very dirty. On the other hand, many factories produce much waste. It pollutes the river and kills many fishes. It also pollutes the air. So we must take action at once. 第 ‹#› 页 课时5 写作 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 返回目录 First, we should throw less rubbish and put rubbish into the rubbish bins. Then, we should plant more trees. We shouldn't cut down trees or destroy them. Besides that, we should not put dirty water into rivers. At last, we should use public transport. I think Shenzhen will be more beautiful if we can take these actions. 第 ‹#› 页 课时5 写作 阅读理解。 The Earth is very important to us． Most of us don't want to pollute it, but we don't protect the Earth in some correct ways． Here are some easy things that you can do to protect the environment(环境)and the Earth． Plant flowers, grass or trees． The plants can make the environment around you become beautiful． Also, more trees and plants can make the air clean． 返回目录 第 ‹#› 页 课时5 写作 When you visit a park or beach, take away what you bring there—keep rubbish in a bag until you can throw it into a dustbin(垃圾桶)． Turn off the tap when you brush your teeth． You can save some water by not letting it run all the time． Also, use a glass cup instead of(代替)a paper cup because this can protect forests． Stop putting dirty water into the rivers or lakes． In this way, you can protect plants and fish in the rivers or lakes． 返回目录 第 ‹#› 页 课时5 写作 Ask all your friends to do the same things to help protect the Earth． You don't have to wait for Earth Day to do these things． Make every day Earth Day． If everyone does something good to protect the Earth, it will become more beautiful． 返回目录 第 ‹#› 页 课时5 写作 (　　)1．How do we pollute the Earth according to the passage? A．We cut down too many trees． B．We use too many things on Earth． C．We use the things on Earth wrongly． D．We kill lots of animals． 返回目录 C　 第 ‹#› 页 课时5 写作 (　　)2．What does the underlined word “correct” mean? A．Wrong． B．Usually C．Happy　 D．Right 返回目录 D　 第 ‹#› 页 课时5 写作 (　　)3．Which way to protect the Earth NOT mentioned(被提及)about in the passage? A．Turning off the light when you don't use it． B．Not throwing away rubbish anywhere． C．Asking your friends to protect the Earth together． D．Saving water in daily life． 返回目录 　A　 第 ‹#› 页 课时5 写作 (　　)4．What's the main idea of the passage? A．How to protect the Earth． B．The importance of the Earth． C．People are polluting the Earth． D．How to make our friends protect the Earth． 返回目录 A　 第 ‹#› 页 课时5 写作 (　　)5．In which column can we read this passage in the newspaper? A．Science． B．Environment． C．History D．Education(教育)． 返回目录 　B　 第 ‹#› 页 课时5 写作 本节内容到此结束！ logo $$ Unit 3 The Earth 课时5 写作 【课时过关】 【写作方法指导与操练】 1．With the development of society, there are many kinds of pollution in Shenzhen, such as water pollution, air pollution and noise pollution. 2．People throw rubbish everywhere and it makes the land and water very dirty. 3．Many cars and factories produce much waste gas. It causes the air pollution to become worse. 第 ‹#› 页 课时5 写作 返回首页 4．People cut down a large number of trees and build houses. It causes serious noise pollution in many places. 5．We’d better sort the rubbish and form good habits. 6．We should try our best to use the public transport or ride a bike to go to school. 7．What’s more, we can plant more trees, save water and electricity as well. 第 ‹#› 页 课时5 写作 返回首页 【写作范文】 How to make Shenzhen more beautiful? Shenzhen is a wonderful city. Many people visit it every year. It is a nice place to live in. But there are many kinds of pollutions. On the one hand, people throw rubbish everywhere and it makes the land very dirty. On the other hand,many factories produce much waste.It pollutes the river and kills many fishes. It also pollutes the air. So we must take action at once. 第 ‹#› 页 课时5 写作 返回首页 First, we should throw less rubbish and put rubbish into the rubbish bins. Then, we should plant more trees. We shouldn’t cut down trees or destroy them. After that, we should not put dirty water into rivers. At last, we should use public transport. I think Shenzhen will be more beautiful if we can take these actions. 第 ‹#› 页 课时5 写作 返回首页 【能力提升】 1—5 CDAAB 第 ‹#› 页 课时5 写作 返回首页 本节内容到此结束！ logo $$