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Unit 1 People of achievement
单元话题满分范文必背
1.(23-24高二下·浙江温州·期中)假如你是李华,收到好友John 的邮件。John希望你介绍他所敬佩的著名中国科学家钱学森。请你给他回一封电子邮件告知。
主要内容包括:
(1)他的主要经历;
(2)他的伟大成就;
(3)他的个人品质;
注意:(1)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(2)词数80左右。
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【答案】Dear John,
Learning that you hope to know something about Qian Xuesen, I’m honored to write to you here.
Born in Hangzhou in 1911, Qian attended schools in Beijing, then entered Shanghai Jiao Tong University and switched his major to aviation. During the 1930s and 1940s, he went to the US for further studies. At last, he returned to China in 1955, suffering from some difficulties in the US. Under his leadership, China developed the Dongfeng missiles and launched its first man-made satellite, worth its name of “the father of China’s aerospace.”
Such is Qian Xuesen, a knowledgeable and self-sacrificing man who was patriotic and served his homeland with efforts, achievements, and devotions.
【导语】这是一封介绍信,要求考生以李华的身份,向好友John介绍他所敬佩的著名中国科学家钱学森。
【详解】词汇积累
主要经历:main experiences → significant life events
领导:leadership→ guidance
伟大成就:great achievements → monumental accomplishments
个人品质:personal qualities → character traits
句式拓展
同义句改写
原句:At last, he returned to China in 1955, suffering from some difficulties in the US.
拓展句:Ultimately, he made his way back to China in 1955, amidst a series of hardships encountered during his sojourn in the United States.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】Learning that you hope to know something about Qian Xuesen, I’m honored to write to you here.(使用了现在分词作状语)
【高分句型 2】Such is Qian Xuesen, a knowledgeable and self-sacrificing man who was patriotic and served his homeland with efforts, achievements, and devotions.(使用了 such that句型和以man为先行词、关系代词who为引导词的定语从句)
2.(23-24高二下·贵州贵阳·阶段练习)假定你是李华,你们学校英文校报正在进行有关“工匠精神”的征文活动,请以“Father of Hybrid Rice”为题写一篇短文投稿, 简要介绍“杂交水稻之父”袁隆平。
要点:1.生于1930年,北京;
2.被誉为“杂交水稻之父”(Father of Hybrid Rice);
3.一生致力于科学研究,具有无私奉献的工匠精神;
4.不注重名誉和金钱。
注意:1.字数80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Father of Hybrid Rice
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【答案】Father of Hybrid Rice
Yuan Longping, who was born in 1930 in Beijing, is a simple but great man. He is regarded as “Father of Hybrid Rice”.
Having graduated from college, he was determined to find a way to increase the rice harvest worldwide. Thus, he devoted all his energy to scientific research, making great contributions to alleviating hunger and poverty in numerous countries.
However, he cared little about fame and wealth. Instead, he spared no effort to help those in need. Yuan Longping is so selfless and relentless in the pursuit of agricultural innovation that we all admire such a prominent craftsman.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“Father of Hybrid Rice”为题写一篇短文投稿, 简要介绍“杂交水稻之父”袁隆平。
【详解】1.词汇积累
被称为:be regarded as → be referred to as
有决心的:determined → resolved
然而:however → nevertheless
名声:fame → reputation
2.句式拓展
改为倒装句
原句:Yuan Longping is so selfless and relentless in the pursuit of agricultural innovation that we all admire such a prominent craftsman.
拓展句:So selfless and relentless is Yuan Longping in the pursuit of agricultural innovation that we all admire such a prominent craftsman.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Yuan Longping, who was born in 1930 in Beijing, is a simple but great man. (运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Yuan Longping is so selfless and relentless in the pursuit of agricultural innovation that we all admire such a prominent craftsman. (运用了so…that…引导的结果状语从句)
3.(23-24高二下·福建福州·期中)假定你是李华,你的美国笔友Tom发来邮件,提到他对中国所取得的科技成就感到无比钦佩,想了解一些中国科学家的事迹。请你用英语给他写一封邮件,为他介绍一位你最喜欢的中国科学家,内容包括:
1.科学家介绍;
2.对你的影响。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom,
I’m glad that you show admiration for Chinese scientific achievement.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom,
I’m glad that you show admiration for Chinese scientific achievement.
One of my favorite Chinese scientists is Tu Youyou. She is renowned for her discovery of artemisinin, a breakthrough in the treatment of malaria. Tu Youyou’s work has had a profound impact on global health, saving countless lives in malaria-endemic regions.
Personally, Tu Youyou’s dedication to scientific research and her perseverance in the face of challenges have inspired me. Her groundbreaking discovery highlights the importance of scientific innovation in addressing global health challenges.
Sincerely, if you want to know more about this, you can write to me again.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。美国笔友Tom发来邮件,提到他对中国所取得的科技成就感到无比钦佩,想了解一些中国科学家的事迹。要求考生用英语给他写一封邮件,为他介绍一位你最喜欢的中国科学家。
【详解】1.词汇积累
知名的: renowned →famous
影响:impact→ influence
奉献:dedication→devotion
真挚地:sincerely→ genuinely
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:One of my favorite Chinese scientists is Tu Youyou.
拓展句:One of my favorite Chinese scientists is Tu Youyou, who is a great female scientist.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Tu Youyou’s work has had a profound impact on global health, saving countless lives in malaria-endemic regions.(运用了现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】 Her groundbreaking discovery highlights the importance of scientific innovation in addressing global health challenges.(运用了动名词作宾语的结构)
4.(23-24高二上·贵州毕节·期末)假定你是李华,为宣扬伟大的科学精神和帮助同学们树立正确的科学价值观,下周你校将举行主题为“What Makes a Great Scientist?”的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇英语演讲稿参赛。
内容包括:1. 你心中最伟大的科学家;
2.他/她伟大的原因;
3.你的感想。
注意: 1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】【参考范文】
Boys and girls,
I’m Li Hua. It’s a great honor for me to deliver a speech with the theme of “What Makes a Great Scientist?”
Everyone has an idol. Mine is Qian Xuesen, who is known as the father of China’s aerospace. Personally, I think he was a pioneer who was determined to pursue his dreams. More importantly, he was patriotic and served our country with effort and devotion. All of this makes him a great scientist.
Undoubtedly, we, the successor of socialism should learn and pass on his scientific spirit as well as his perseverance in the face of frustration.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一篇英语演讲稿参加学校将举行的主题为“What Makes a Great Scientist?”的英语演讲比赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
主题:theme→subject
毫无疑问:undoubtedly→without doubt
传承:pass on→inherit
面对:in the face of→in front of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:All of this makes him a great scientist.
拓展句:It is all of this that makes him a great scientist.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Mine is Qian Xuesen, who is known as the father of China’s aerospace. (运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Personally, I think he was a pioneer who was determined to pursue his dreams. (运用了who引导的定语从句)
5.(23-24高二上·湖北襄阳·期中)假定你是中学生李华,你校正在举办以“我最喜爱的科学家”为主题的征文活动。请你根据下面要点提示,描述你所喜爱的科学家,内容包括:
1.介绍你最喜欢的科学家;
2.喜欢的原因;
3.你的感想。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
My Favorite Scientist
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【答案】My Favourite Scientist
Of so many famous scientists all over the world, I admire Yuan Longping most, who is an agricultural scientist of China.
In 1973, he became the first agricultural pioneer in the world to grow rice that enabled farmers to expand their output greatly. Though he achieved his goal, he still devoted himself to research on rice so as to feed more people in the world. Yuan Longping made such great contributions to mankind that he is respected and admired by people all over the world.
All in all, we must learn from Yuan Longping in order to serve our country better when we grow up.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇短文,描述自己所喜爱的科学家,参加学校正在举办的以“我最喜爱的科学家”为主题的征文活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
著名的:famous→well-known
钦佩:admire→appreciate
致力于:devoted oneself to→committed oneself to
总之:all in all→in conclusion
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Yuan Longping made such great contributions to mankind that he is respected and admired by people all over the world.
拓展句:Such great contributions Yuan Longping made to mankind that he is respected and admired by people all over the world.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Of so many famous scientists all over the world, I admire Yuan Longping most, who is an agricultural scientist of China.(运用了who引导定语从句)
【高分句型2】Though he achieved his goal, he still devoted himself to research on rice so as to feed more people in the world.(运用了让步状语从句,不定式作目的状语)
6.(23-24高二上·湖北·阶段练习)假定你是李华,你校英语报正在举办主题征稿活动,请你结合屠呦呦、袁隆平以及John Snow身上共同的优秀品质,写一篇英语短文。要点如下:
1.简述其共同的优秀品质;
2.介绍其品质对自己的影响。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】Tu Youyou, Yuan Longping, and John Snow possess admirable qualities that have contributed to their remarkable achievements. These qualities include determination, dedication, and a strong commitment to benefiting others.
Their exceptional traits have a profound impact on me. Witnessing their determination to overcome obstacles encourages me to persevere in the face of challenges. Their unwavering dedication to their work inspires me to give my best in everything I do. Moreover, their sincere commitment to improving the lives of others motivates me to make a positive difference in my own community.
In conclusion, the outstanding qualities demonstrated by Tu Youyou, Yuan Longping, and John Snow serve as a source of inspiration for me. Their determination, dedication, and selfless attitude remind me of the importance of striving for excellence and using my abilities to contribute to the well-being of others.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生结合屠呦呦、袁隆平以及John Snow身上共同的优秀品质写一篇英语短文向校英语报投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
非凡的:remarkable→ significant
影响:impact→ influence
提高:improving→ boosting
总之:In conclusion→ To summarize/all in all
2.句式拓展
同义句替换
原句:In conclusion, the outstanding qualities demonstrated by Tu Youyou, Yuan Longping, and John Snow serve as a source of inspiration for me.
同义句:To summarize, the exceptional characteristics which are exhibited by Tu Youyou, Yuan Longping, and John Snow act as a motivating factor for me.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Witnessing their determination to overcome obstacles encourages me to persevere in the face of challenges. (运用了动名词作主语)
【高分句型2】Tu Youyou, Yuan Longping, and John Snow possess admirable qualities that have contributed to their remarkable achievements. (运用了that引导的定语从句)
7.(23-24高二上·新疆·阶段练习)假定你是李华,你将参加校英语报举办的主题为“The Scientist I Admire Most”的演讲比赛。请用英语完成你的演讲稿,内容包括:
1. 这位科学家是谁;
2. 你崇拜他/她的原因;
3. 你从他/她身上学到了什么。
注意:1.词数 100 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
Dear friends,
I’m glad to be here to make a speech.
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【答案】Dear friends,
I’m glad to be here to make a speech. The scientist I admire most is Tu Youyou, the first Chinese scientist to win the Nobel Prize for Physiology or Medicine.
Her most outstanding contribution is the discovery of artemisinin, which is a highly effective cure for malaria. She convinces us the importance of doing basic research. Besides, her success tells us that we should stick to our dream. I want to be a scientist and spare no effort to save people’s lives, helping them enjoy a healthy life.
I do believe my dream can come true as long as I stick to it firmly.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于说明文。 要求考生用英语写一篇演讲稿, 参加校英语报举办的主题为“The Scientist I Admire Most”的演讲比赛, 讲明这位科学家是谁, 考生崇拜他/她的原因是什么, 以及从他/她身上学到了什么。
【详解】1. 词汇积累:
钦佩、 仰慕: admire→look up to
杰出的、 显著的: outstanding→remarkable
坚持:stick to→persist in
此外: besides→in addition
2. 句式拓展:
同义句转换:
原句: The scientist I admire most is Tu Youyou, the first Chinese scientist to win the Nobel Prize for Physiology or Medicine.
拓展句: The scientist I admire most is Tu Youyou, who is the first Chinese scientist to win the Nobel Prize for Physiology or Medicine.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】 Her most outstanding contribution is the discovery of artemisinin, which is a highly effective cure for malaria. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型 2】 Besides, her success tells us that we should stick to our dream.(运用了that引导宾语从句)
8.(23-24高二上·福建福州·期中)假如你是李华,在学完“People of Achievement”这一单元后,请以“Tu Youyou, a Scientist I Admire Most”为题,在班级做一次演讲。
内容包括:
1.对她的评价;
2.她的经历与成就;
3.你崇拜她的原因。
注意:
1.词数120-150个;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.尽量使用该单元的词汇和语法。(参考词汇:artemisinin, malaria)
Tu Youyou, a Scientist I Admire Most
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【答案】Possible version
Good morning, everyone! I am very glad to have the opportunity to make this speech. My topic today is “Tu Youyou, a Scientist I Admire Most”.
Tu Youyou was awarded the Nobel Prize in 2015 for her research, which led to the discovery of artemisinin, a crucial treatment for malaria. Her contribution has saved hundreds of thousands of lives. As a committed and patient scientist, Tu Youyou deserves more than the prize.
Early in the 1960s, Tu Youyou began to conduct a project with the objective of discovering a new treatment for malaria. Her team examined numerous old medical texts and evaluated millions of plants. Even though they got stuck from time to time, Tu Youyou refused to acknowledge defeat. After years’ effort, Tu Youyou succeeded in drawing out the extract that worked.
I admire Tu Youyou because she has proved the great value of traditional Chinese medicine to the world and improved health for millions of people. Besides this, Tu Youyou sets a good example for us to be persistent.
Thank you!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“我最崇拜的科学家,屠呦呦”为题,在班级做一次演讲。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:glad→delighted
拯救:save→rescue
大量的:numerous→a great number of
除……之外:besides→in addition to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Besides this, Tu Youyou sets a good example for us to be persistent.
拓展句:Besides this, Tu Youyou sets a good example for us to be persistent, which will have a great effect on our life.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Tu Youyou was awarded the Nobel Prize in 2015 for her research, which led to the discovery of artemisinin, a crucial treatment for malaria. (运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Even though they got stuck from time to time, Tu Youyou refused to acknowledge defeat. (运用了even though引导的让步状语从句)
9.(23-24高二上·全国·单元测试)请根据以下内容写一篇文章介绍中国科学家潘建伟。
1.1970年3月生,浙江东阳人。1999年获奥地利维也纳大学实验物理博士学位。潘建伟教授主要从事量子通信等方面的研究。
2.他是该领域有重要国际影响力的科学家,并且取得了一系列有重要意义的研究成果。他获得“改革先锋”等称号。
3.他对世界保持着孩童般的好奇,一心做研究,保持与名利的距离。他站在世界的最前沿,和宇宙对话,做前无古人的事业。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:量子通信quantum communication
维也纳Vienna
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【答案】【参考范文】
Pan Jianwei was born in Dongyang, Zhejiang Province in March 1970. It was in 1999 that he received his doctor’s degree in experimental physics from the university of Vienna, Austria. Professor Pan Jianwei is so engaged in the research of quantum communication that he is an internationally influential scientist in this field and has achieved a series of significant research results. He received titles such as “pioneer of reform”. He keeps childlike curiosity about the world, devotes himself to research, and keeps his distance from fame and fortune. He stands in the front row of the world, talking to the universe,and doing things that no one has done before.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据所给内容介绍中国科学家潘建伟。
【详解】1.词汇积累
获得:receive/acquire/obtain
忙于:is so engaged in/engages himself in/is so involved in
有意义的:significant / important/meaningful
献身于:devotes himself to/is devoted to
不在意:keeps his distance from/doesn’t care much about
财富:fortune/wealth
名誉:fame/name/reputation
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:He stands in the front row of the world, talking to the universe, and doing things that no one has done before.
拓展句:He stands in the front row of the world, where he talks to the universe, and does things that no one has done before.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It was in 1999 that he received his doctor’s degree in experimental physics from the university of Vienna,Austria.(运用了强调句型)
【高分句型2】Professor Pan Jianwei is so engaged in the research of quantum communication that he is an internationally influential scientist in this field and has achieved a series of significant research results.(运用了so...that引导的结果状语从句)
10.(23-24高二上·山东菏泽·期末)假定你是李华,你的美国朋友John发来邮件,提到他对中国所取得的科技成就感到无比钦佩,想了解一些中国科学家的事迹。请你用英语给他写一封邮件,为他介绍一位你最喜欢的中国科学家,内容包括:
①科学家简介;
②主要成就;
③对你的影响。
注意:①词数80左右;
②可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear John,
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Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear John,
I’d like to introduce my favorite scientist to you. He is Qian Xuesen, a patriotic, outstanding and gifted scientist.
Initially, Qian Xuesen studied Railway Mechanical Engineering, but after the Songhu Battle broke out, he shifted his major to aviation to defend his country. In 1955, he returned from America to China and was in charge of China’s space and missile programme. Under his leadership, China made steady progress in aerospace and aviation. He made great contributions to the development of China’s aerospace.
Qian Xuesen devoted all his life to science and he will inspire me to follow my dream.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你的美国朋友John发来邮件,提到他对中国所取得的科技成就感到无比钦佩,想了解一些中国科学家的事迹。请考生用英语给他写一封邮件,为他介绍一位自己最喜欢的中国科学家。
【详解】1.词汇积累
出色的:outstanding→excellent
鼓舞:inspire→cultivate
追求:follow→pursue
贡献:devote→contribute
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:He is Qian Xuesen, a patriotic, outstanding and gifted scientist.
拓展句:He is Qian Xuesen, who is a patriotic, outstanding and gifted scientist.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Initially, Qian Xuesen studied Railway Mechanical Engineering, but after the Songhu Battle broke out, he shifted his major to aviation to defend his country. (运用了after引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] Qian Xuesen devoted all his life to science and he will inspire me to follow my dream. (运用了and连接并列句)
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