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启英语 高考英语读后续写高分策略·读思写 4.我几乎没有意识到那天会发生一些异常的事情。 5.直到那时,我才意识到,尽管乔(Joe)在做家务方面有困难,但是他还是懂得如何照顾我。 6.他是如此绝望和无助,以至于跪了下来。 7.她几乎不知道的是,家里的一个朋友已经联系该组织了。 8.她做梦也没想到自已会遇到这么大的麻烦。 二、如何正确使用修辞 在读后续写中适当使用修辞手法,能够突出所描写事物的特点,增强感染力和语言的生动性,丰富句子 含义,给人留下深刻印象。下面介绍四种常用且相对容易掌握的修辞手法。 1.明喻(simile),是将抽象事物具体化,复杂情况简单化,给文字增加画面感。明喻常用as、like、asif asthough、similarto、seem等词语指出两种不同事物的共同特征。基本形式是“甲像乙”,即“本体+比喻词 喻体”。以下是三种常见的明喻结构 类型 例句 I reached out to touch her face. which was as cold as the ice. 我伸手去摸她的 as或者as...as作比喻词 脸,那张像冰一样冷的脸 The icy wind started howling, cutting my face like a sharp knife. 寒风开始响 like作比喻词 哮,像锋利的小刀一样刺痛我的脸。 Her hair grew grayer and grayer, as if it were covered with snow and frost. 她 as if作比喻词 的头发越来越白了,仿佛盖了一头霜雪。 He ran like lightning.他跑得如闪电一般飞快。 He looks like a fish out of water.他看起来像一条离开水的鱼。 Like the sands through the hourglass, so are the days of our lives.就像沙漏中的沙子一样,我们生命中 的每一天也如此。 The teacher's instructions were of little use to the boy, as if like water off a duck's back 老师的教导,男孩只当耳旁风,好比是水滴在了鸭子背上,丝毫不起作用 Those old favorite songs are very dear to me as though they are like long-lost friends that make me cry. 这些老歌对我来说很亲切,犹如好久不见的老友,令我潜然泪下。 As happy as a lark is my daughter, whose presence makes everyone happy and relaxed. 我女儿就像百灵 鸟,只要她在,家里人人都心情愉快、情绪放松。 2.暗喻(metaphor),也叫隐喻,根据两个事物的共同特征,把一个事物比喻成另一个事物。通常只出现 本体和喻体,不使用like和as等比喻词,典型结构是“本体+是+喻体”。 The best mirror is an old friend.老朋友是最好的镜子 A heavy silence blanketed the room.一片沉默笼罩在整个房间。 The boy wolfed down the food.那个小男孩狼吞虎咽. Wind and rain whipped the house.风雨鞭答着房子。 The computers at school are old dinosaurs.这些电脑老旧得不像样 17/ 第五章 读后续写的写作策略 Her tears were a river flowing down her cheeks.她的泪水如河水一般,从脸颊倾泻而下。 Ben's temper was a volcano. ready to explode.本脾气不好,随时都会发脾气 My bigbrother is a couchpotato.我大哥成天都坐着不动 The oldman's face isamapof time.这位老人的脸就是岁月的写照 Life is an unexplored river,full of twists and turns.生命就像一条未被涉足的河流,充满曲折 Laughter isthe sun that drives winter from the human face.笑声是太阳,驱散人们脸上的寒冬。 He doesn't have an idea of his own. He just parrots what others say.他没有自已的观点,只会鹞鹉学舌 3.拟人(personification),是指给自然现象、抽象概念、动物等赋予人的情感和动作,使得语言生动形 象、富有情趣和感染力。 Slowly,the citybegan to breathe again.慢慢地,这座城市恢复了呼吸。 The breeze gently kissed her cheeks.微风轻吻她的脸颊。 Anxietytore him into pieces.焦虑把他撕碎。(焦虑让他崩溃。) Angerchockedhiswords.愤怒让他的话嘹住。(他气得说不出话来。) Confidence desertedhim.信心遗弃了他。(他失去了信心。) Agoodideasuddenlystruckme.一个好主意突然敲了我一下。(我突然想到一个好主意。) Last year sawa lot of changes.去年,很多事情发生了变化 The stars danced playfully in the moonlit sky.星星在月光笼罩的天空中欢快地舞动着。 She did not realize that opportunity was knocking at her door.她没有意识到机会已经来临 He did not realize that his last chance was walking out of the door.他不知道他的最后一次机会已经 逝去。 Time flew and before we knew it. it was time for me to go home.时间过得飞快,我们还没意识到,我就 该回家了。 4.夸张(hyperbole),是指对事物的形象、特征、作用、程度等方面刻意夸大,以加强语气,增加表达 效果。 My headache is killing me.我的头痛死了。 It's a crime to neglect sucha lovelygarden.让这么可爱的花园荒废是极不应该的 It seemed as if the world were coming to an end.似乎世界末日即将来临. The old woman almost cried her eves out.那位老妇人痛哭流涕 The girl brought the house down with her performance.那位女孩的表演赢得满堂喝彩 My dad's car was worn out,as if one million years old.我爸爸的汽车十分破旧,简直老掉牙了 A million thanks to you.Mr.Brown.布朗先生,非常非常感谢你。 After hearingthebadnews,mybloodfroze.听到这则坏消息,我的血液都凝固了。(形容消息对我的打 击太大) 牛7小试 一、根据提示,用比喻的手法翻译以下句子。 1.他喜欢健身,所以他体壮如牛。(strong,ox) 2.我的心甜如蜂蜜。(sweet,honey) 3.这辆公交车走得慢如蜗牛。(slowly,snail) 4.我们眼前的风景美如画。(pretty,picture) 175 启航英语 高考英语读后续写高分策略·读思写 5.他一动不动地站着,就像一块石头。(standstill.stone) 6.她脸上的笑容就像钻石一样闪闪发光。(shine.diamond) 7. 他焦急得像热锅上的蚂蚁。(anxious,an ant on a hot pan) 8.这本日记像老朋友一样陪伴我很久了。(accompany,oldfriend) 二、根据提示,用拟人的手法翻译以下句子。 1.他自由地奔跑着,仿佛他是一只快乐的小鸟。(runfreely,happybird) 2.那只小狗无辜地看着我,仿佛不知道发生了什么。(innocently) 3.他感觉心脏被捕了一刀。(stab) 4.夏天的微风轻拂我的脸。(breeze) 5.这座桥见证了这座城市过去十年的巨变。(witness) 6.到处都有鸟儿在歌唱。(everywhere) 7.我非常兴奋。(take holdof) 三、根据提示,用夸张的手法翻译下列句子。 1.我被吓死了。(be scared to death) 2.我的心成了碎片。(break into pieces) 3.听到这个消息的时候,我的心几乎要出来。(burst) 4.听到这个消息的时候,我高兴极了。(onthe topof the world) 三、如何长短句结合 长句容量大,可以承载复杂的信息和思想,适用于传递有轻重之别的信息,能进行细致的描述和论证 短句结构简单,意义清楚,生动活泼,干脆利落,节奏明快,便于表达具有相同重要性的概念。但若一篇记叙 文全部使用长句,那么读起来就费力,故事也不吸引人;而全部使用短句,则表达缺乏连贯性,显得简单松 散、平铺直叙。长短句结合,使写作兼有长句和短句的优点,做到简繁有度、层次分明,这样,文章就是优 秀的。 【段落1】 It was daybreak when Jane woke up and it was at that moment that she heard a helicopter come by. Jane screamed and waved her yellow blouse with every bit of her strength, happy to find that the helicopter noticed her and landed, after which Jane was rescued. She burst into tears and threw herself into Tom's arms the moment she saw him. believing their reunion after along separation brought great delight to them both. 176启航英语高考英语读后续写高分策略·读思写 2.To satisfy his curiosity.he slipped into the room and softly 三、如何长短句结合 closed the door. 【牛刀小试】 =In order to satisfy his curiosity,he slipped into the room 以长短句结合的结构改写以下段落。 and softly closed the door. One summer night a few years ago.my parents and I. 四、用介词结构为开头，翻译下列句子。 very happy after supper with a cold breeze,went to have a 1.With tears in her eyes,Jane looked up to her husband. walk by the river.Suddenly.I saw a great structure standing 2.Without hesitation.the thin and small young man threw beautifully in the moonlight.It was the TV tower,the highest himself into the cold and swift river. building in the city. 3.To her great joy,the helicopter noticed her and landed. 四、如何进行篇章的衔接 4.In surprise,they kept their eyes wide open to read the 【牛刀小试】 result. 翻译下面的句子，使用恰当的连接词汇。 五、用倒装句翻译下列句子。 1.On his arrival,Ali found Zahra was waiting outside I.Never in her life had she tasted anything better. 2.Fortunately,with his kind and immediate help,I smoothly 2.No sooner had we turned up than the dog ran off. got on the train. =Hardly/Scarcely had we turned up when the dog ran off. 3.Cold rain was beating against the bus window.However 3.Tired as/though he was,he insisted on finishing the work. Nevertheless,I felt warm inside. 4.Little did I realize something different would happen that 4.The instant Zahra saw the new shoes,her face lit up. day. 5.So thrilled was Zahra that she threw herself into Ali's arms 5.Only then did I realize Joe actually understood how to take hugging warmly with him. care of me despite his trouble with the housework. 6.He started coming out of the house and talking to his neighbors.Soon.he and the boy became friends. 6.So desperate and helpless was he that he felt on his knees. 7.Thanks to the little boy,the old man stepped out of his 7.Little did she know that a family friend had already reached loneliness and opened the door of his heart. out to the organization. 8.Before long,we caught sight of the light in the distance 8.Never in her wildest dream had she thought that she would We knew we were safe. run into such serious trouble. 9.On the one hand,I can earn some money by doing it to help 二、如何正确使用修辞 my parents,and on the other hand,I can gain some experience from it,which will do good to my future life. 【牛刀小试】 10.Leaving the store,Missus Sommers was no longer elegant 一、根据提示，用比喻的手法翻译以下句子。 but relieved.After all,it was her responsibility to take 1.He loves working out,so his body is as strong as an ox. good care of her dear children. 2.My heart is as sweet as honey. 六、如何进行读后续写的结尾 3.The bus went as slowly as a snail. 【牛刀小试】 4.The scenery in front of us is as pretty as a picture. 请给出恰当的结尾句。 5.He stood still like a stone. 1.Only at that time did we realize that things would turn out 6.The smile on her face shone like a diamond fine if we faced it with sincerity,honesty as well as 7.He was anxious like an ant on a hot pan. responsibility. 8.The diary has accompanied me for quite a long time like an 2.We were wild with joy and promised to take good care of old friend. Timothy later. 二、根据提示，用拟人的手法翻译以下句子。 3.Watching Timothy pacing in the yard and pecking at its food 1.He was running freely as if he were a happy bird. leisurely,we felt the bitter winter wind became warmer than ever before. 2.The puppy looked at me innocently.as if he didn't know 4.Mom and Dad seemed to understand the friendship between what had happened. two kids and a feathery bird,saying,"It's OK.And you 3.He felt as if his heart had been stabbed by a knife. have to promise to take good care of it from now on. 4.The summer breeze gently touched my face. 七、如何升华写作主题 5.The bridge has witnessed the city's great changes in the past decade. 【牛刀小试】 6.Birds are singing everywhere. 根据短文的内容，写作文章的主题句。 7.Excitement took hold of me. 1.Mastering English requires continuous practice,a positive approach towards difficulties,and an unwavering belief in 三、根据提示，用夸张的手法翻译下列句子。 persistent hard work. 1.I was scared to death. 2.Actually,love and care from the teachers and his classmates 2.My heart broke into about a million pieces. has changed him entirely./In my opinion,it's love and 3.When I heard the news,my heart burst. care from the teachers and his classmates that has changed 4.Hearing the news,I was on the top of the world. him entirely. 010