专题10 书面表达 -【好题汇编】5年（2020-2024）中考1年模拟英语真题分类汇编（天津专用）

专题10书面表达 年份 考题内容（2020-2024） 命题趋势 2024年 假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，给你的笔友Peter用英文写一封邮件，向他讲述你班同学王红所做的一件好事，并谈谈感受。上周四，王红在回家途中看到一位上年纪的盲人在街角徘徊。王红与老人交流后，主动帮他过马路。 · 基于教材，与学生的生活 实际紧密相连，让学生有话可说。 · 文体多为记叙文和日常应 用文，如信件、日记等。 · 半开放性，提供写作要点 和参考词汇，同时给予学生一定自由发挥的空间。 · 全面考查学生综合运用语 言的能力，包括叙述事件、描述人物、表达观点等。 · 注重对学生思维能力和文 化意识的考查，引导学生关注身边的人和事，并形成自己的见解。 2023年 假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，给你的笔友Peter用英文写一封邮件，向他讲述你班同学王亮的一个感人故事。一个下雨天，王亮在路上看到一群人聚在一起。他走过去，看到一位老妇人躺在地上。了解情况后，他蹲下为老人撑伞。 2022年 假如你是李华，给美国笔友David写一封信，讲述你班同学王红回家路上做的一件好事并谈感受。上周五一棵树被大风吹倒挡住道路，王红捡起树枝并试图移动树干，因树干太沉搬不动，人们过来帮忙 2021年 假如你是李华，给英国好友Tom写一封信分享一件令人感动的事。两周前同学王红伤了左腿但想来学校上课，校长决定将班级从四楼搬到一楼，大家帮助王红买午饭等 2020年 假如你是校报英语专栏的小记者，描述你校学生李华在假期去甘肃参加文化交流活动的一次难忘经历并表达想法。他向当地学生介绍天津历史和名胜古迹、分享学习方法并演奏钢琴，还与很多学生成为朋友并保持联系 （2024·天津·中考真题） 66. 假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，给你的笔友Peter用英文写一封邮件，向他讲述你班同学王红所做的一件好事，并谈谈感受。 （1）上周四，王红在回家途中看到一位上年纪的盲人在街角徘徊。 （2）王红与老人交流后，主动帮他过马路。 （3）路上的司机都停下车耐心等候。 （4）王红将老人带到马路对面并向他告别。 （5）你认为…… 参考词汇：盲人 blind man 徘徊 wander 要求： （1）词数：80~100个。 （2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Dear Peter, It is two weeks since you wrote to me. I’m writing to tell you a story about my classmate Wang Hong. Last Thursday,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ What do you think of the story? Waiting for your reply! Yours, Li Hua （2023·天津·中考真题） 66. 假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，给你的笔友Peter用英文写一封邮件，向他讲述你班同学王亮的一个感人故事。 （1）一个下雨天，王亮在路上看到一群人聚在一起。 （2）他走过去，看到一位老妇人躺在地上。 （3）了解情况后，他蹲下为老人撑伞。 （4）救护车到达后，他悄悄地离开了。 （5）你认为…… 参考词汇：蹲下 crouch down 救护车 ambulance 要求： （1）词数：80~100个。 （2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Dear Peter, How is everything going? I’d like to tell you a story about my classmate, Wang Liang. On a rainy day, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Do you have a story to share? Looking forward to your reply! Yours, Li Hua （2022·天津·中考真题）假如你是李华，请你给美国笔友David写一封信，讲述你班同学王红回家路上做的一件好事，并谈谈感受。 （1）上周五，一棵树被大风吹倒，挡住了道路。 （2）王红看到后，捡起地上的树枝，又去移动树干。 （3）树干太沉，她搬不动。 （4）人们过来帮忙。 （5）你认为…… 参考词汇：被吹倒be blown down   挡住block   树枝branch   树干trunk 要求： （1）词数：80~100个。 （2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Dear David, How are you? I’d like to share a story with you. Last Friday, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Do you have a story to tell? Hope to hear from you. Yours, Li Hua （2021·天津·中考真题）假如你是某中学学生李华, 最近你班发生了一件令人感动的事情。请根据以下提示, 给你的英国好友 Tom 写一封信, 与他分享你的感动。 （1）两周前同学王红伤了左腿。 （2）王红上下楼很困难, 但想来。 （3）校长知道后, 决定将你班从四楼搬到一楼。 （4）你们帮助王红（如买午饭等）。 （5）你认为…… 要求： （1）词数： 80~100 个。 （2）开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全, 行文连贯, 可适当发挥。 Dear Tom,    How are you? I have a moving story to tell you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Please tell me something interesting about you and your classmates. Yours, Li Hua （2020·天津·中考真题）假如你是学校校报英语专栏的小记者，请根据以下要点写一篇短文，描述你校学生李华的一次难忘经历，并表达你的想法。 （1）李华在假期中去甘肃参加了文化交流活动。 （2）他向当地学生介绍天津的历史和名胜古迹。 （3）他介绍自己的学习方法，还为他们演奏钢琴。 （4）他与很多学生成为朋友并保持联系。 （5）你认为…… 参考词汇：文化交流活动       cultural exchange activities 名胜古迹       places of interest 要求： （1）词数：80~100个。 （2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Li Hua, a student of our school, went to Gansu to ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （2019·天津·中考真题）书面表达 86.假如你是晨光中学的学生李华，平时坚持用英语写日记。请根据以下要点，描述你星期三放学乘地铁回家路上看到的事情，并表达自己的想法。 (l)一个男孩不舒服，开始呕吐，一位穿着漂亮的女士帮着擦拭地面，男孩表达感谢。 (2)地铁到站，有人挤向座位，有人下不去车，有人因此争吵。 (3)你认为…． 参考词汇：开始呕吐begin to vomit 挤向座位push towards the seat 争吵havea quarrel 要求： (1)词数：80～100个。 (2)日记格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数 (3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥 Wednesday When I took the underground back home from school, I noticed 1．（2024·天津西青·二模）本周我校校报开展了英文征文活动，活动的主题是用英文讲述发生在你身边的好人好事，请根据以下提示，完成一篇英文作文。 (1)两周前李明在踢球时腿受伤住院了； (2)李明家庭困难无法支付住院费； (3)班长李华决定号召同学筹钱帮助他；同学们积极参与； (4)李华亲自把钱交到李明的父母手中，李明的父母非常感动； (5)我认为…… 参考词汇：号召 call on 要求：(1)词数：80～100个。 (2)开头已给出，不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全，行文连贯,，可适当发挥。 Two weeks ago, _______________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（2024·天津和平·二模）随着2024年春节档电影《热辣滚烫》的爆火，我们看到了主演贾玲减肥100斤的励志故事。科学减肥、健康生活的话题再次引起人们热议。在接受采访时，贾玲结合自身经历，给我们提出了几条建议。假如你是学校的小记者，请你将主要内容进行梳理。 1. 学会控制日常饮食，吃低脂的食物，像鱼肉，水果和蔬菜； 2. 多喝水，每天至少八杯水，不容易感到饥饿； 3. 选择适合自己的锻炼方式，比如跑步、游泳和瑜伽； 4. 合理计划时间，养成良好的生活习惯； 5. 要有坚强的意志； 6. 你的观点……。 参考词汇： diet 日常饮食 low-fat 低脂的 yoga 瑜伽 写作要求： (1)不得使用真实姓名和学校名。 (2)包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 (3)字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清楚。 (4)词数80词左右。(开头已给出，不计入总词数。) With the success of YOLO (You Only Live Once)《热辣滚烫》, the topic of losing weight in a healthy way becomes hot again. During the interview, Jia Ling, the main role, gives us some advice. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（2024·天津河北·一模）假如你是李华，请你给英国笔友 Kevin写一封电子邮件，讲述你班同学王亮的一个感人故事，并谈谈感受。 (1) 上周六，王亮在街上拍着篮球，走过一个摆满花盆的架子； (2) 不巧，他手中的篮球飞向花架，打碎了一个花盆； (3) 他站在原地，思考片刻； (4) 随后他把钱和纸条放在打碎的花盆下； (5) 他在纸条上道歉并留下了电话号码； (6) 你很感动…… 参考词汇：拍 (球)  pat             花盆 a flower pot             纸条 a slip of paper 要求： (1) 词数：80—100个； (2) 电子邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； (3) 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Dear Kevin, How are you? I’d like to share a story with you. Last Saturday, my classmate Wang Liang _______________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Do you have a story to tell? Hope to hear from you. Li Hua 4．（2024·天津南开·一模）为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识，提高自我保护能力，学校即将开展以“安全”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请根据以下要点提示写一篇演讲稿。 要点： (1)遇到危险时，拨打报警电话求助。 (2)慎重交友，不随便与陌生人交谈。 (3)上网时，不要轻易告诉别人个人信息。 (4)如独自一人在家，要与家长保持联系。 (5) …… (补充一点) 参考词汇： casually 随便地 要求： (1)词数：80～100个。 (2)短文的开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Dear friends, As students, we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you. 5．（2024·天津和平·三模）中华优秀传统文化是中华民族的精神命脉，是涵养社会主义核心价值观的重要源泉，作为中华儿女，我们深知传统文化是坚定文化自信的底色，更是民族精神的源泉。 假如你是李华，你的美国笔友 Tony 对中国传统文化非常感兴趣。恰好这周末就是端午节，请你给他写封邮件，介绍中国的传统节日——端午节。 主要内容提示： 1. 端午节在农历五月初五，是中国重要节日之一； 2. 有很多传统，例如：吃粽子，纪念伟大诗人屈原； 3. 北方人喜欢甜粽子，而南方人喜欢咸粽子； 4. 最有趣的活动：赛龙舟，象征着团队精神。人们站在河边，加油喝彩； 5. 端午节的意义深远，蕴含丰富的历史和文化，我们要保护和传承传统文化。 参考词汇： zongzi/rice dumplings 粽子；dragon-boat race 赛龙舟；pass on 传承 写作要求： (1)不得使用真实姓名和校名。 (2)包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 (3)字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清楚。 (4)词数80词左右。(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。) Dear Tony, Knowing that you’re interested in Chinese traditional culture, I’d like to introduce an interesting festival to you. The Dragon Boat Festival is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope you’ll join in next time you come to Tianjin. Li Hua 【2024年天津市红桥区中考二模】 66. 请你根据以下提示，以“The Story of Wang Ping”为题，为学校广播站英语专栏写一篇短文，介绍发生在一位年轻的公交车司机王平身上的一件事。 (1)昨天上午九点王平驾驶公交车，看到有位老人躺在路边，旁边的女士在呼救。 (2)王平把车停住并下了车，他了解到老人有心脏病。 (3)王平告知乘客他必须将老人送到医院，所有乘客部同意。 (4)医生及时挽救了老入的生命。 (5)你认为…… 参考词汇：呼救 shout for help； 心脏病 a heart problem 要求： (1)词数：80～100个。 (2)题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 The Story of Wang Ping At 9:00 a.m. yesterday, Wang Ping was driving the bus along the road when ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【2024年天津市南开区中考二模】 66. 假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，给你的笔友Tony用英文写一封邮件，向他讲述一个发生在海河岸边的感人故事。 (1)上周日晚上，你在海河边散步。当时游人很多。 (2)你发现一个小女孩在哭。她与父母走散了。 (3)你一边安慰她一边打电话报警。 (4)警察最终找到了她的父母。 (5)她的父母非常感谢你，你认为…… 参考词汇：安慰 comfort 要求： (1)词数：80—100个。 (2)短文的开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Dear Tony, How are you? I’d like to tell you a story that happened by the Haihe River. Last Sunday evening, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Do you have a story to share? Hope to hear from you. Yours, Li Hua 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！5 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 专题10书面表达 年份 考题内容（2020-2024） 命题趋势 2024年 假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，给你的笔友Peter用英文写一封邮件，向他讲述你班同学王红所做的一件好事，并谈谈感受。上周四，王红在回家途中看到一位上年纪的盲人在街角徘徊。王红与老人交流后，主动帮他过马路。 · 基于教材，与学生的生活 实际紧密相连，让学生有话可说。 · 文体多为记叙文和日常应 用文，如信件、日记等。 · 半开放性，提供写作要点 和参考词汇，同时给予学生一定自由发挥的空间。 · 全面考查学生综合运用语 言的能力，包括叙述事件、描述人物、表达观点等。 · 注重对学生思维能力和文 化意识的考查，引导学生关注身边的人和事，并形成自己的见解。 2023年 假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，给你的笔友Peter用英文写一封邮件，向他讲述你班同学王亮的一个感人故事。一个下雨天，王亮在路上看到一群人聚在一起。他走过去，看到一位老妇人躺在地上。了解情况后，他蹲下为老人撑伞。 2022年 假如你是李华，给美国笔友David写一封信，讲述你班同学王红回家路上做的一件好事并谈感受。上周五一棵树被大风吹倒挡住道路，王红捡起树枝并试图移动树干，因树干太沉搬不动，人们过来帮忙 2021年 假如你是李华，给英国好友Tom写一封信分享一件令人感动的事。两周前同学王红伤了左腿但想来学校上课，校长决定将班级从四楼搬到一楼，大家帮助王红买午饭等 2020年 假如你是校报英语专栏的小记者，描述你校学生李华在假期去甘肃参加文化交流活动的一次难忘经历并表达想法。他向当地学生介绍天津历史和名胜古迹、分享学习方法并演奏钢琴，还与很多学生成为朋友并保持联系 （2024·天津·中考真题） 66. 假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，给你的笔友Peter用英文写一封邮件，向他讲述你班同学王红所做的一件好事，并谈谈感受。 （1）上周四，王红在回家途中看到一位上年纪的盲人在街角徘徊。 （2）王红与老人交流后，主动帮他过马路。 （3）路上的司机都停下车耐心等候。 （4）王红将老人带到马路对面并向他告别。 （5）你认为…… 参考词汇：盲人 blind man 徘徊 wander 要求： （1）词数：80~100个。 （2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Dear Peter, It is two weeks since you wrote to me. I’m writing to tell you a story about my classmate Wang Hong. Last Thursday,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ What do you think of the story? Waiting for your reply! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Peter, It is two weeks since you wrote to me. I’m writing to tell you a story about my classmate Wang Hong. Last Thursday, Wang Hong saw an elderly blind man wandering around the street corner on her way home. Wang Hong offered to help him cross the road after communicating with the old man. When they crossed the road, the drivers on the road stopped their cars and waited patiently. Wang Hong took the old man across the road and said goodbye to him. I think Wang Hong is really a very warm-hearted and kind girl. I should learn from her and try my best to help others. What do you think of the story? Waiting for your reply! Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图； 第二步，具体介绍王红所做的好事； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①on her way home 在她回家的路上 ②offer to do sth 主动提出做某事 ③communicate with 沟通 ④learn from 向某人学习 [高分句型] ①When they crossed the road, the drivers on the road stopped their cars and waited patiently.（when引导的时间状语从句） ② I think Wang Hong is really a very warm-hearted and kind girl.（省略that的宾语从句） （2023·天津·中考真题） 66. 假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，给你的笔友Peter用英文写一封邮件，向他讲述你班同学王亮的一个感人故事。 （1）一个下雨天，王亮在路上看到一群人聚在一起。 （2）他走过去，看到一位老妇人躺在地上。 （3）了解情况后，他蹲下为老人撑伞。 （4）救护车到达后，他悄悄地离开了。 （5）你认为…… 参考词汇：蹲下 crouch down 救护车 ambulance 要求： （1）词数：80~100个。 （2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Dear Peter, How is everything going? I’d like to tell you a story about my classmate, Wang Liang. On a rainy day, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Do you have a story to share? Looking forward to your reply! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear Peter, How is everything going? I’d like to tell you a story about my classmate, Wang Liang. On a rainy day, Wang Liang saw a group of people gathering on the road. He went over and saw an old woman lying on the ground. Knowing the situation, he crouched down to hold an umbrella for the old man. When the ambulance arrived, he left quietly. I think Wang Liang is a good student who helps others. We should learn from him. Do you have a story to share? Looking forward to your reply! Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏给出的五个要点提示，写邮件向笔友Peter讲述同学王亮的感人故事。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题，介绍同学王亮的故事； 第二步，具体讲述这个感人故事； 第三步，发表自己的感想； 第四步，期望收到对方回复。 [亮点词汇] ①tell sb. sth. 告诉某人某事 ②go over 走过去 ③see sb doing sth. 看到某人正在做某事 ④learn from sb. 向某人学习 [高分句型] ①When the ambulance arrived, he left quietly.（when引导时间状语从句） ②I think Wang Liang is a good student who helps others.（省略that的宾语从句；who引导定语从句） 1．（2022·天津·中考真题）假如你是李华，请你给美国笔友David写一封信，讲述你班同学王红回家路上做的一件好事，并谈谈感受。 （1）上周五，一棵树被大风吹倒，挡住了道路。 （2）王红看到后，捡起地上的树枝，又去移动树干。 （3）树干太沉，她搬不动。 （4）人们过来帮忙。 （5）你认为…… 参考词汇：被吹倒be blown down   挡住block   树枝branch   树干trunk 要求： （1）词数：80~100个。 （2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Dear David, How are you? I’d like to share a story with you. Last Friday, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Do you have a story to tell? Hope to hear from you. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear David, How are you? I’d like to share a story with you. Last Friday, on Wang Hong’s way home, she saw a big tree was blown down by wind and it blocked the way. After Wang Hong saw it, she picked up the branches on the ground and then moved the trunk again. But the trunk was so heavy that she couldn’t move it by herself. When other people saw what she was doing, they were moved by her and came to help her. Finally, they succeeded in moving the trunk away. I think she is a very kind person. And from this story, I learn that we should offer to help when someone needs help. It not only helps others, but also makes ourselves happy. Do you have a story to tell? Hope to hear from you. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 1.题干解读：本文要求根据题干中的提示内容讲述你班同学王红回家路上做的一件好事，并谈谈感受，可适当增加细节。 2.写作指导：本文以一般过去时为主，人称以第三人称为主。第一段和最后一段已给出，第二段具体描述她做好事的过程；第三段描述自己的感受。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。 2．（2021·天津·中考真题）假如你是某中学学生李华, 最近你班发生了一件令人感动的事情。请根据以下提示, 给你的英国好友 Tom 写一封信, 与他分享你的感动。 （1）两周前同学王红伤了左腿。 （2）王红上下楼很困难, 但想来。 （3）校长知道后, 决定将你班从四楼搬到一楼。 （4）你们帮助王红（如买午饭等）。 （5）你认为…… 要求： （1）词数： 80~100 个。 （2）开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全, 行文连贯, 可适当发挥。 Dear Tom,    How are you? I have a moving story to tell you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Please tell me something interesting about you and your classmates. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】范文： Dear Tom, How are you? I have a moving story to tell you. Wang Hong is my classmate. She hurt her left leg in an accident two weeks ago. It was difficult for Wang Hong to go up and down the stairs, but she wanted to come to school. The headmaster decided to move my classroom from the fourth floor to the first floor after he knew it. Wang Hong is very grateful to the headmaster. As her classmates, we should also help her. Some helped her buy lunch, others helped her to clean up. She is happy. I think students should help each other and make progress together. Please tell me something interesting about you and your classmates. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【分析】 1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，要求根据所给的汉语提示，以李华的名义想Tom写一封信谈谈最近你班发生的令人感动的事情，注意要点齐全，写作时要按信的格式来写。 2.写作指导：本文应该用第三和第一人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时；在写作时应承接短文开头，根据汉语提示的内容，叙述王红同学受伤后，校长和同学对她的帮助，并写作自己的感受。在叙述内容时，力求语言正确，内容完整，保证行文连贯。 3．（2020·天津·中考真题）假如你是学校校报英语专栏的小记者，请根据以下要点写一篇短文，描述你校学生李华的一次难忘经历，并表达你的想法。 （1）李华在假期中去甘肃参加了文化交流活动。 （2）他向当地学生介绍天津的历史和名胜古迹。 （3）他介绍自己的学习方法，还为他们演奏钢琴。 （4）他与很多学生成为朋友并保持联系。 （5）你认为…… 参考词汇：文化交流活动       cultural exchange activities 名胜古迹       places of interest 要求： （1）词数：80~100个。 （2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Li Hua, a student of our school, went to Gansu to ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Li Hua, a student of our school, went to Gansu to take part in the cultural exchange activities. He introduced the history and places of interest of Tianjin to the local students. He showed his ways of learning and played piano. He made friends with some students there and kept in touch with them. I think it is an unusual experience. It is necessary for the students to take part in cultural exchange activities. They can not only learn some useful cultural knowledge but also making friends with other people. It’s a good way to communicate with other students. 【解析】 1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应紧接文章开头继续写作，根据内容提示讲述李华假期的经历并发表自己的看法。 2.例文点评：例文主要用第三人称进行写作，主要采用一般过去时态来写作。讲述李华假期的经历叙述完整且条理清晰。 3.高分亮点： 短语：take part in；kept working；places of interest；played   the piano；made friends with；kept in touch with；communicate with。 句型：it做形式主语的句子；not only…but also…的句型；and表示并列的句子。 4．（2019·天津·中考真题）书面表达 86.假如你是晨光中学的学生李华，平时坚持用英语写日记。请根据以下要点，描述你星期三放学乘地铁回家路上看到的事情，并表达自己的想法。 (l)一个男孩不舒服，开始呕吐，一位穿着漂亮的女士帮着擦拭地面，男孩表达感谢。 (2)地铁到站，有人挤向座位，有人下不去车，有人因此争吵。 (3)你认为…． 参考词汇：开始呕吐begin to vomit 挤向座位push towards the seat 争吵havea quarrel 要求： (1)词数：80～100个。 (2)日记格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数 (3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥 Wednesday When I took the underground back home from school, I noticed 【答案】Wednesday When I took the underground back home after school.I noticed a boy who felt not very well and whose face was pale.I was wondering what's wrong with him when he suddenly began to vomit.Seeing this scene, a lady who wore beautiful dress not only gave a helping hand but also cleaned the floor without hesitate.And then the boy expressed gratitude with a low bow. As time passed by, the subway arrived.Someone pushed toward the seat while others can't get off，therefore they had a quarrel angrily. From my perspective,I wish we all can help each other when someone is in trouble just like the beautiful lady and be polite all the time.Only in this way can our world become better and better. 【解析】 这是一篇日记，根据材料中的相关信息用英语写一篇日记。所提供的材料中列举了你星期三放学乘地铁回家路上看到的事情，主要从(l)一个男孩不舒服，开始呕吐，一位穿着漂亮的女士帮着擦拭地面，男孩表达感谢。(2)地铁到站，有人挤向座位，有人下不去车，有人因此争吵。(3)你认为…。写出自己的想法。这几个方面去写。时态为一般过去时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。 【高分句型一】 I noticed a boy who felt not very well and whose face was pale.我注意到一个男孩感觉不太好，脸色苍白。 句子who felt not very well是由who引导的定语从句。 【高分句型二】 Seeing this scene, a lady who wore beautiful dress not only gave a helping hand but also cleaned the floor without hesitate.看到这一幕，一位穿着漂亮衣服的女士不仅伸出援助之手，而且毫不犹豫地打扫了地板。 句子who wore beautiful dress是由who引导的定语从句。该句话还运用了not only…but also…：不但……而且……。 【高分句型三】 Only in this way can our world become better and better.只有这样，我们的世界才能变得越来越好。 这句话是由only引起的倒装句。 1．（2024·天津西青·二模）本周我校校报开展了英文征文活动，活动的主题是用英文讲述发生在你身边的好人好事，请根据以下提示，完成一篇英文作文。 (1)两周前李明在踢球时腿受伤住院了； (2)李明家庭困难无法支付住院费； (3)班长李华决定号召同学筹钱帮助他；同学们积极参与； (4)李华亲自把钱交到李明的父母手中，李明的父母非常感动； (5)我认为…… 参考词汇：号召 call on 要求：(1)词数：80～100个。 (2)开头已给出，不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全，行文连贯,，可适当发挥。 Two weeks ago, _______________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： Two weeks ago, Li Ming, one of my classmates, hurt his legs while he was playing football. His legs hurt too badly to walk. So he had to be in hospital. What’s worse, Li Ming’s family was so poor that they couldn’t afford the cost. After hearing this, our monitor Li Hua decided to call on our classmates to raise money to help Li Ming. Each of us took an active part in giving money. Soon Li Hua raised enough money. When he gave the money to Li Ming’s parents, they were moved a lot. I believe that the world is what you think it is. If we are always ready to help others, our world will surely become more beautiful! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，根据提示，讲述发生在自己身边的好人好事； 第二步，介绍自己对此的观点。 [亮点词汇] ①too…to太……而不能 ②be in hospital住院 ③call on号召 ④raise money募款 ⑤take an active part in积极参与 [高分句型] What’s worse, Li Ming’s family was so poor that they couldn’t afford the cost. (so…that引导结果状语从句) 2．（2024·天津和平·二模）随着2024年春节档电影《热辣滚烫》的爆火，我们看到了主演贾玲减肥100斤的励志故事。科学减肥、健康生活的话题再次引起人们热议。在接受采访时，贾玲结合自身经历，给我们提出了几条建议。假如你是学校的小记者，请你将主要内容进行梳理。 1. 学会控制日常饮食，吃低脂的食物，像鱼肉，水果和蔬菜； 2. 多喝水，每天至少八杯水，不容易感到饥饿； 3. 选择适合自己的锻炼方式，比如跑步、游泳和瑜伽； 4. 合理计划时间，养成良好的生活习惯； 5. 要有坚强的意志； 6. 你的观点……。 参考词汇： diet 日常饮食 low-fat 低脂的 yoga 瑜伽 写作要求： (1)不得使用真实姓名和学校名。 (2)包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 (3)字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清楚。 (4)词数80词左右。(开头已给出，不计入总词数。) With the success of YOLO (You Only Live Once)《热辣滚烫》, the topic of losing weight in a healthy way becomes hot again. During the interview, Jia Ling, the main role, gives us some advice. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 With the success of YOLO (You Only Live Once)《热辣滚烫》, the topic of losing weight in a healthy way becomes hot again. During the interview, Jia Ling, the main role, gives us some advice. First of all, we should learn to control our diet and it’s a good idea to eat some low-fat food, like fish, fruit and vegetables. Besides, we had better drink more water. She advises us to drink at least eight cups of water so that we won’t feel hungry easily. And remember the ways of exercise we choose must be fit for us, such as running, swimming and doing yoga. Also, don’t forget to plan our time properly, so we can get into good living habits. Above all, it’s necessary that we have a strong will to keep doing it. As far as I’m concerned, we can achieve success as long as we stick to the end. Losing weight is certainly good for our health, but remember to do it in a scientific way. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，根据所给主要内容提示具体介绍科学减肥、健康生活的建议； 第二步，表达自己的观点。 [亮点词汇] ① first of all首先 ② advise sb to do sth建议某人做某事 ③ such as比如 ④ above all最重要的 ⑤ as far as I’m concerned就我而言 [高分句型] ①She advises us to drink at least eight cups of water so that we won’t feel hungry easily. （目的状语从句） ②Above all, it’s necessary that we have a strong will to keep doing it.（it作形式主语） 3．（2024·天津河北·一模）假如你是李华，请你给英国笔友 Kevin写一封电子邮件，讲述你班同学王亮的一个感人故事，并谈谈感受。 (1) 上周六，王亮在街上拍着篮球，走过一个摆满花盆的架子； (2) 不巧，他手中的篮球飞向花架，打碎了一个花盆； (3) 他站在原地，思考片刻； (4) 随后他把钱和纸条放在打碎的花盆下； (5) 他在纸条上道歉并留下了电话号码； (6) 你很感动…… 参考词汇：拍 (球)  pat             花盆 a flower pot             纸条 a slip of paper 要求： (1) 词数：80—100个； (2) 电子邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； (3) 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Dear Kevin, How are you? I’d like to share a story with you. Last Saturday, my classmate Wang Liang _______________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Do you have a story to tell? Hope to hear from you. Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Kevin, How are you? I’d like to share a story with you. Last Saturday, my classmate Wang Liang was patting the basketball on the street while he was walking past a shelf with lots of flower pots. Unfortunately, the basketball flew towards a pot so hard that the pot was broken into pieces. He stood there and thought about what to do for a moment. Then he put some money and a slip of paper under the pot which he broke just now. He apologised to the owner and left his mobile phone number. I’m deeply touched by what he has done. I think he was honest and brave enough to pay for his action. He sets such a good example that we should learn from him. If everyone takes a simple step, our society will be better and better. Do you have a story to tell? Hope to hear from you. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”； ③提示：文章应该包括所列6个方面的要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，分享一个感人的故事，从而引出话题； 第二步，讲述故事的经过； 第三步，表达自己的感受； 第四步，表达期待。 [亮点词汇] ① break into pieces 破成碎片 ② set a good example 树立好榜样 [高分句型] ① Last Saturday, my classmate Wang Liang was patting the basketball on the street while he was walking past a shelf with lots of flower pots. (while引导时间状语从句) ② I think he was honest and brave enough to pay for his action. (宾语从句) 4．（2024·天津南开·一模）为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识，提高自我保护能力，学校即将开展以“安全”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请根据以下要点提示写一篇演讲稿。 要点： (1)遇到危险时，拨打报警电话求助。 (2)慎重交友，不随便与陌生人交谈。 (3)上网时，不要轻易告诉别人个人信息。 (4)如独自一人在家，要与家长保持联系。 (5) …… (补充一点) 参考词汇： casually 随便地 要求： (1)词数：80～100个。 (2)短文的开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Dear friends, As students, we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you. 【答案】例文 Dear friends, As students, we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here is some advice. Firstly, we must call the police for help when we are in danger. Secondly, be careful to make friends online and don’t talk to strangers casually. Thirdly, don’t give personal information to others when surfing the Internet. Fourthly, if you are alone at home, keep in touch with your parents. What’s more, we must follow the traffic rules and pay attention to the food safety. Don’t eat too much junk food. In a word, we must always keep safety all the time. That’s all. Thank you. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出下文的建议； 第二步，根据要点提示具体描述如何自我保护。 [亮点词汇] ①in danger处于危险中 ②personal information个人信息 ③what’s more此外 [高分句型] ①Firstly, we must call the police for help when we are in danger.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②Fourthly, if you are alone at home, keep in touch with your parents.（if引导的条件状语从句） 5．（2024·天津和平·三模）中华优秀传统文化是中华民族的精神命脉，是涵养社会主义核心价值观的重要源泉，作为中华儿女，我们深知传统文化是坚定文化自信的底色，更是民族精神的源泉。 假如你是李华，你的美国笔友 Tony 对中国传统文化非常感兴趣。恰好这周末就是端午节，请你给他写封邮件，介绍中国的传统节日——端午节。 主要内容提示： 1. 端午节在农历五月初五，是中国重要节日之一； 2. 有很多传统，例如：吃粽子，纪念伟大诗人屈原； 3. 北方人喜欢甜粽子，而南方人喜欢咸粽子； 4. 最有趣的活动：赛龙舟，象征着团队精神。人们站在河边，加油喝彩； 5. 端午节的意义深远，蕴含丰富的历史和文化，我们要保护和传承传统文化。 参考词汇： zongzi/rice dumplings 粽子；dragon-boat race 赛龙舟；pass on 传承 写作要求： (1)不得使用真实姓名和校名。 (2)包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 (3)字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清楚。 (4)词数80词左右。(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。) Dear Tony, Knowing that you’re interested in Chinese traditional culture, I’d like to introduce an interesting festival to you. The Dragon Boat Festival is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope you’ll join in next time you come to Tianjin. Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear Tony, Knowing that you’re interested in Chinese traditional culture, I’d like to introduce an interesting festival to you. The Dragon Boat Festival is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month. It’s one of the most important festivals in China and there are many traditions. For example, we always eat zongzi which is a kind of sticky rice dumplings in order to remember the great poet Qu Yuan. People in the north of China like sweet zongzi while people in the south like salty ones. As for me, the most interesting event is the dragon boat race. It’s an exciting match that stands for teamwork and thousands of people stand on both sides of the Haihe River, cheering loudly. In a word, the Dragon Boat Festival is meaningful because it contains rich history and culture. Therefore, it’s necessary for us to protect and pass on our traditional culture. Hope you’ll join in next time you come to Tianjin. Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括节日的时间、传统和意义。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍你要介绍的节日——端午节； 第二步，描述节日的时间和传统，包括吃粽子和赛龙舟； 第三步，描述节日的意义和对你的影响； 第四步，希望对方能参加这个节日。 [亮点词汇] ① For example 例如 ② in order to 为了 ③ dragon boat race 龙舟比赛 [高分句型] ① The Dragon Boat Festival is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month.（使用被动语态） ② For example, we always eat zongzi which is a kind of sticky rice dumplings in order to remember the great poet Qu Yuan.（使用which引导的定语从句） ③ In a word, the Dragon Boat Festival is meaningful because it contains rich history and culture.（使用because引导的原因状语从句） 【2024年天津市红桥区中考二模】 66. 请你根据以下提示，以“The Story of Wang Ping”为题，为学校广播站英语专栏写一篇短文，介绍发生在一位年轻的公交车司机王平身上的一件事。 (1)昨天上午九点王平驾驶公交车，看到有位老人躺在路边，旁边的女士在呼救。 (2)王平把车停住并下了车，他了解到老人有心脏病。 (3)王平告知乘客他必须将老人送到医院，所有乘客部同意。 (4)医生及时挽救了老入的生命。 (5)你认为…… 参考词汇：呼救 shout for help； 心脏病 a heart problem 要求： (1)词数：80～100个。 (2)题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 The Story of Wang Ping At 9:00 a.m. yesterday, Wang Ping was driving the bus along the road when ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The Story of Wang Ping At 9:00 a.m. yesterday, Wang Ping was driving the bus along the road when he found an old man lying on the side of the road. A woman next to him was shouting for help. Wang Ping stopped the bus without thinking twice and got out. He knew that the old man had a heart problem. He told the passengers that he must take the old man to the hospital immediately. To his surprise, all the passengers agreed with him. Thanks to Wang Ping, the old man was saved by the doctors in time. As far as I’m concerned, Wang Ping, a young driver, has set a good example for us. We are supposed to learn from them and help others if necessary. 【解析】 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，首先叙述公交车司机王平救人的经过； 第二步，谈谈自己对这件事的看法。 [亮点词汇] ①without thinking twice毫不犹豫地 ②to one’s surprise令某人惊讶是 ③agree with sb认同某人 ④set a good example树立好榜样 [高分句型] ①At 9:00 a.m. yesterday, Wang Ping was driving the bus along the road when he found an old man lying on the side of the road.(when引导的时间状语从句) ②He knew that the old man had a heart problem.(宾语从句) 【2024年天津市南开区中考二模】 66. 假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，给你的笔友Tony用英文写一封邮件，向他讲述一个发生在海河岸边的感人故事。 (1)上周日晚上，你在海河边散步。当时游人很多。 (2)你发现一个小女孩在哭。她与父母走散了。 (3)你一边安慰她一边打电话报警。 (4)警察最终找到了她的父母。 (5)她的父母非常感谢你，你认为…… 参考词汇：安慰 comfort 要求： (1)词数：80—100个。 (2)短文的开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Dear Tony, How are you? I’d like to tell you a story that happened by the Haihe River. Last Sunday evening, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Do you have a story to share? Hope to hear from you. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Tony, How are you? I’d like to tell you a story that happened by the Haihe River. Last Sunday evening, I took a walk with our parents by the sea. There were many tourists there. At that time, I found a little girl crying loudly because she was separated from her parents. So I comforted her and called the police. The police finally found her parents. Her parents thank me very much. From my point of view, I am very happy to help the little girl. We should do what we can to help those people in need. We should pass love. As the old saying goes, give someone a rose and leave a lingering fragrance in your hand. Do you have a story to share? Hope to hear from you. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封邮件； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，写作意图开头已给出，写作时可直接描写发生在海河岸边的感人故事。 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“时间”、“地点”以及“具体的故事”展开，适当补充，丰富细节。 第三步，书写结语，表达感受和期望。 [亮点词汇] ①take a walk with sb.和某人一起散步 ②by the sea在海边 ③At that time在那时 ④be separated from与……分离 ⑤From my point of view在我看来 ⑥As the old saying goes正如谚语所说 [高分句型] ①At that time, I found a little girl crying loudly because she was separated from her parents. (because引导的原因状语从句) ②We should do what we can to help those people in need. (what引导的宾语从句) ③As the old saying goes, give someone a rose and leave a lingering fragrance in your hand. (祈使句) 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$