内容正文:
Unit 1
Unit1 Where did you go on vacation?
第5课时 Section B 3a-Shelf Check
初中英语 / 人教版 / 八年级上册
Contents
Lead-in
1
Pre-writing
2
While-writing
3
Post-writing
4
Exercises
5
Summary
6
Homework
7
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02
03
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语言能力
思维品质
文化意识
学习能力
学习目标
能掌握本课时的新词汇(duck, dislike, the Palace Museum, Tian’anmen Square);能综合运用所学重难点词汇和所学技巧写好旅行日记。
运用英语思维以及一般过去时完成日记的书写。
通过写日记记录日常生活,传达旅游意识。
学会日记书面表达的审题和计划,并根据风格进行词语润色;知道如何在有限的时间内快速构思和勾勒文章。
0 1 Lead-in
Lead-in
Do you know these places?
Tian’anmen
the Palace Museum
the Great Wall
Lead-in
Do you know these places?
the Summer Palace
a Beijing hutong
the old Summer Palace
Lead-in
Do you know these food?
Beijing Duck
ZhaJiangmian
Lvdagun
Lead-in
0 2 Pre-writing
Pre-writing
Jane's diary entries
Monday, July 15th
I arrived in Penang in Malaysia this morning with my family. It was sunny and hot, so we decided to go to the beach near our hotel. My sister and I tried paragliding. I felt like I was a bird. It was so exciting! For lunch, we had something very special---Malaysian yellow noodles. They were delicious! In the afternoon, we rode bicycles to Georgetown. There are a lot of new buildings now, but many of the old buildings are still there. In Weld Quay, a really old place in Georgetown, we saw the houses of the Chinese traders from 100 years ago. I wonder what life was like here in the past, I really enjoyed walking around the town.
Tuesday, July 16th
What a difference a day makes! My father and I decided to go to Penang Hill today. We wanted to walk up to the top, but then it started raining a little so we decided to take the train. We waited over an hour for the train because there were too many people. When we got to the top, it was raining really hard. We didn't have an umbrella so we were wet and cold. It was terrible! And because of the bad weather, we couldn't see anything below. My father didn't bring enough money, so we only had one bowl of rice and some fish. The food tasted great because I was so hungry!
How to write a diary entry?
Pre-writing
中间:活动内容
结尾:对该活动的个人所感
开头:地点以及天气
Beginning
Body
Ending
How many parts are there in a diary entry?
Pre-writing
在右上角写上日期。
另起一行,写下想要写的事
情或感想。
注意使用正确的时态,如果
记叙已经发生的事,需用
过去时态。
如果写的是感想
等,就可以用一般现在时。
写日记的格式
Pre-writing
0 3 While-writing
While-writing
3a
Complete the diary entry about a trip to one of these places. Use the words and phrases in the box to help you.
Time
Weather
Activities
Food
Description words
Before completing the entry, let's read the words and then fill in the blanks first.
hot and sunny
Beijing duck
take some photos; buy something special; learn something important
tired delicious beautiful interesting
August
写作前可按写作相关内容分类罗列相关的词汇,以便在写作中能快速依据所写内容的线索,从“分类词库”中检索自己所需词汇。
While-writing
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3a
Complete the diary entry about a trip to one of these places. Use the words and phrases in the box to help you.
August
hot and sunny
a Beijing hutong
interesting
took some photos
I learned something important
Beijing duck
delicious
tired
While-writing
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How to write a diary entry in English?
Wednesday, August 20th
Today the weather was hot and sunny.
I went to Tian'anmen. It was beautiful.
We took some photos. I liked this place because I
learned something important. For dinner we had
Beijing duck. It was delicious.
In the evening, I felt really tired .
书端
the format(格式) of the diary
星期在前,月日在后,有时后面加上天气状况
正文
time
另起一行。正文可以顶格写,
也可以内缩3至5个字母空间。
时态
the past tense
人称
the first person
顺序
the time order
What are the features(特点)
of a diary entry?
日期
in the upper(上) right corner
活动
activity + feeling + reason
While-writing
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Wednesday, August 20th
Today the weather was hot and sunny.
I went to Tian'anmen. It was beautiful.
We took some photos. I liked this place because I
learned something important. For dinner we had
Beijing duck. It was delicious.
In the evening, I felt really tired .
How to write a diary entry in English?
My
travel
Beginning
Weather
Person
Place
Date
Body
Activity
Reason
Feeling
Ending
Feeling
While-writing
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1.Where did you go?
2. Did you go with anyone?
3. How was the weather?
4. What did you do every day?
5. What food did you eat?
6. What did you like best?
7. Did you dislike anything?
8. How did you feel about the trip?
I went to the beach.
Yes. I went with my parents.
It was sunny and hot.
We went swimming every day.
We ate sea food.
I liked the paragliding best.
Yes. I didn’t like the bus ride.
It was interesting but tired.
Answer the questions to make notes about a vacation you took.
3b
While-writing
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Write a travel diary like Jane’s on page 5. Use your notes in 3b.
写作指导
本文为写日记,因此应用一般过去时态。应注意动词的过去式形式。
回顾一下在3b中所回答的问题的情况,然后将这些句子按恰当的逻辑顺序排列在一起,形成条理清晰的一段文字。
可根据旅行经历再加一些恰当想像的句子。
再次,阅读一遍短文,看有没有错误的句子。
3c
While-writing
Framework (结构)
My travel
Beginning
Main body
Ending
time
place
weather
feelings
partner
activities
We did
We ate
We thought
We enjoyed
...
We saw/heard
feelings
3w( when, where, who)+weather
what
feelings
how
While-writing
谋篇布局
开篇点题
旅行过程
表达感想
I went to … on vacation with …this summer.
It was sunny …
We went swimming …
We usually ate …
I liked the paragliding …
But I didn’t like …
I think the trip was …
While-writing
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July 24th, Wednesday
I went to the beach on vacation with my parents this summer . It was sunny and hot. We went swimming in the sea every day. We usually ate sea food. I liked the paragliding best. It was exciting. But I didn’t like the bus ride. It’s boring. I think the trip was exciting but tired.
范文欣赏
While-writing
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假如你和你的家人在四月八号这天参观了北京,请你以日记的形式把这天的经历及感受记录下来。
提示:1. 早上:参观颐和园(爬万寿山;在昆明湖划船) 2. 中午:吃北京烤鸭 3. 下午:逛王府井大街
参考词汇:颐和园 the Summer Palace;万寿山 Longevity Hill;昆明湖Kunming Lake;王府井大街 Wangfujing Street;风景 scenery
Writing practice
While-writing
列提纲、写句子
列提纲 写句子
人物、旅行目的地及天气 (1) My family and I ___________________ (到达) Beijing early in the morning.
(2) It _____________________ (晴朗).
arrived in / got to
was sunny / fine / nice
旅行经历 早上 (3) We ______________________________(参观了颐和园).
(4) We _______________________________[lɒnˈdʒevəti hɪl] (爬万寿山) and
________________________________________ (欣赏美丽的风景).
(5) We ________________________________________(在昆明湖划船).
中午 (6) We ______________________ (吃了一些特色食物) like Beijing duck.
(7) It _______________ (美味).
旅行经历 下午 (8) We _________________________(去了王府井大街).
(9) I ______________________________(买了一些有趣的东西) for my friends.
感受 (10) We _______________________________________(过得很愉快).
visited the Summer Palace
climbed Longevity Hill
enjoyed the beautiful scenery
went boating on Kunming Lake
ate something special
was delicious
went to Wangfujing Street
bought something interesting
had a good / great / fun time / had fun
While-writing
on vacation 度假 the next day 第二天
take photos 照相 quite a few 相当多
learn about 了解 go to the beach 去海滩
at first 首先 feel like 给……的感觉;感受到
have fun/enjoy oneself 玩得高兴
have a three-day trip 进行三天的旅行
go hiking/camping/swimming 去远足/野营/游泳
积句成篇
短语储备
While-writing
句型荟萃
开头句:
Last …, … went to … on vacation.
… had a good time with … in /on …
中间句:
We visited …
Because of …, we …
It was time for us to …
Everything was excellent there!
While-writing
句型荟萃
结尾句:
What a pleasant …!
I was so … that …
经典名句:
Read ten thousand books and travel ten thousand miles.
He who travels far knows much.
While-writing
范文欣赏
Thursday, April 8th
My family and I got to Beijing early in the morning.It was sunny.
we visited the Summer Palace, climbed the LongevityHill ,enjoyed the
beautiful scenery and went boating on Kunming Lake. At noon, we ate
something special like Beijing Duck. It was delicious. In the afternoon ,
we went to Wangfujing Street, I bought something interesting for my
friends.
We had a good time today. What a pleasant day!
While-writing
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Hi, my nane’s Pual.
Hi, Pual. I’m Anna. Where did you go on cavation?
I went to_______.
Oh, I went to_______.
Did you do anything special in_______?
Show Time
While-writing
Post-reading
0 4 Post-writing
Complete the conversations with the correct words in the box.
anything
everything
nothing
anyone
everyone
no one
1. A: Did __________ go on vacation with you last month?
B: Yes, my family went to the countryside with me.
2. A: Did your family go to the beach with you last weekend?
B: No. __________ from my family went, but my friend went with me.
3. A: I didn't bring back anything from Malaysia.
B: __________ at all? Why not?
4. A: Did you buy __________ in the shopping center?
B: No, I didn't. __________ was very expensive.
5. A: How was the volleyball game yesterday?
B: Great! __________ had a fun time!
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anyone
No one
Nothing
anything
Everything
Everyone
Self-check
Post-reading
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Last August, our class _______ (do) something very special on our school trip. We _______ (go) to Mount Tai. We _______ (start) our trip at 12:00 at night. Everyone in our class _______ (take) a bag with some food and water. After three hours, someone looked at the map and _______ (find) out we _______ (be, not) anywhere near the top. My legs _______ (be) so tired that I wanted to stop. My classmates _______ (tell) me to keep going, so I _______ (go) on. At 5:00 a.m., we got to the top! Everyone _______ (jump) up and down in excitement. Twenty minutes later, the sun _______ (start) to come up. It was so beautiful that we _______ (forget) about the last five hours!
Complete the passage with the correct forms of the verbs in brackets.
did
went
started
took
found
weren't
started
were
told
went
jumped
forgot
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指导:通读全文可知,本文记叙了去年八月份作者全班去泰山旅行的事情。可知本文应为一般过去时态,因此应用括号中单词的一般过去时态。因此,应明确该动词是规则变化还是不规则变化。
Post-reading
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Exercises
0 5 Exercises
一、单项选择。
1. She is new here, so she has_________ friends at school.
A. much B. few C. little D. a little
2.The weather was rainy, so they decided_________ to the mountains.
A. not go B. not going C. not to go D. not to going
3.-Who taught you to play the guitar?-No one. I taught_________.
A. me B. my C. mine D. myself
4.The two pictures are almost the same, and I can't find any_________ between them.
A. differences B. problems C. activities D. messages
5.-I feel_________ now. -Why not eat out with us?
A. hungry B. large C, heavy D. fat
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Exercises
二、根据句意及首字母提示填空。1. The first day was great but the next day wasn't a______ good as before.2.Is e_________ here? It's time for class.3. Becky can see n_________ because there is not anything in the room.4.The water b_________ the bridge runs very fast. 5.-Did you enjoy y_________ on the Great Wall last Saturday?-Yes, I did.
as
everyone
nothing
below
yourself
Exercises
三、用所给单词的适当形式填空。1.How many_________ (duck) are there on Uncle Wang's farm?2. The weather in Heilongjiang is kind of_________ (difference) from that in Hubei.3.What do you think of these after-school_________ (activity)? 4. His brother wants to take_________ (photo) of the school after he leaves school.5. I am sure Mr. Zhou lives in this tall_________ (build).
ducks
different
activities
photos
building
Exercises
0 6 Summary
Summary
Diary
(记叙文)
Date
Person
Tense
the past tense
the first person
Format
Details
Beginning
Body
Ending
Activity
Weather
Person
Place
Date
Reason
Feeling
Feeling
Summary
Homework
0 7 Homework
Wednesday, ___________
Today the weather was ___________. I went to ____________. It was ___________. We ___________. I liked this place because ___________, but I didn’t like ___________. For dinner we had __________. It was ___________. I felt really __________.
Finish a travel diary. Use the following table to help you.
Homework
Thank you!
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