专题02 书面表达(2014-2024年高考真题)-备战2025年高考英语名校模拟真题速递(北京专用)

备战2025年高考英语名校模拟真题速递(北京专用) 第一期 专题02 书面表达(2014-2024年高考真题) 1．（2024·北京·高考真题）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： (1)建议投稿内容； (2)就以上建议简要说明理由。 注意：(1)词数100左右； (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jim, It’s great to hear you’re planning to write about China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country. Here are a few suggestions for your article. To begin with, talk about China’s economic growth and technological advancements, which are the highlights in the past few decades. Then, projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good topic to discuss because it showcases China’s determination to build a shared future with the world. In addition, you can also mention China’s role in helping solving global issues such as the global warming, offering a more comprehensive view. Looking forward to reading your article! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写。外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，要求考生给他回复邮件，就此给予他建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 很好的：great →wonderful 成就：achievement→ accomplishment 建议：suggestion →advice 此外：In addition → what’s more 2.句式拓展 句式变换 原句：It’s great to hear you’re planning to write about China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country. 拓展句：It’s great to hear what you’re planning to write about is China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country. 【点睛】【高分句型1】To begin with, talk about China’s economic growth and technological advancements, which are the highlights in the past few decades.（运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句） 【高分句型2】Then, projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good topic to discuss because it showcases China’s determination to build a shared future with the world.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句） 2．（2023·北京·高考真题）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： (1)活动形式； (2)活动内容。 注意：(1)词数100左右； (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim， ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jim, Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions. I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding of “Green Beijing” through getting involved in different activities by themselves. You can showcase garbage classification on site, plant trees and publicize sharing economy, which will all fit into the theme of “Green Beijing”. Hopefully, you will get some inspiration from my suggestions. Wish you success. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友Jim策划的“绿色北京”社团活动给出一些建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 建议：suggestion→tip 提供：offer→provide 开展：carry out→conduct 主题：theme→topic 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my d help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions. 拓展句：Since you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions. (运用了that引导宾语从句) [高分句型2] I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding of “Green Beijing” through getting involved in different activities by themselves. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句) 3．（2022·北京·高考真题）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你打算邀请英国好友Jim为你们班做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1．建议交流的具体内容及其原因； 2．交流时间和其他相关事项。 注意：1．词数100左右； 2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jim, How’s everything? I’m writing to invite you to give us an online talk on English writing. Our classmates seem to be weak in organisation. Would you please give us some suggestions on how to connect sentences logically, how to develop a paragraph, and how to structure an essay? The talk will last about an hour, and you can decide on a date at your convenience. Please let me know which platform you’ll use. It would be great if we could have a 10-minute question and answer session at the end of your talk. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一份电子邮件，邀请英国好友Jim为班级做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流 【详解】1.词汇积累 最近好吗：How’s everything → How’s it going 提供、给予：give → offer / provide 不擅长：be weak in → be bad at / be poor in 建议：suggestion → advice 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I’m writing to invite you to give us an online talk on English writing. 拓展句：I’m writing to ask if it is convenient for you to offer us an online talk on English writing. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Would you please give us some suggestions on how to connect sentences logically, how to develop a paragraph, and how to structure an essay?(运用了疑问词+不定式作宾语) 【高分句型2】It would be great if we could have a 10-minute question and answer session at the end of your talk.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句) 4．（2021·北京·高考真题）假设你是李华。你和英国好友Jack原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1. 表达歉意并说明原因； 2. 提出建议并给出理由。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 作文开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总字数。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Jack, I’m terribly sorry that I can’t go out with you this weekend. I’ve just been informed that I have to attend an important class meeting this Saturday afternoon and I’ll have to give a lecture at the meeting. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble. Shall we go out next Sunday afternoon? We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to have a face-to-face talk. If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 2: 30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week. Yours Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国好友Jack写一封信，对不能如约一起外出表示歉意，并说明原因。 【详解】1.词汇积累 非常地：terribly→extremely 出发：set out→set off 会面：meet→get together 不变：trouble→inconvenience 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：I’ve just been informed that I have to attend an important class meeting this Saturday afternoon and I’ll have to give a lecture at the meeting. 同义句：I’ve just been informed that I have to attend an important class meeting this Saturday afternoon, when I’ll have to give a lecture at the meeting. 【点睛】【高分句型1】We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to have a face-to-face talk.（运用了so that引导的目的状语从句） 【高分句型2】If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 2: 30 outside the school gate.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句） 5．（2020·北京·高考真题）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校英语戏剧俱乐部外籍指导教师Jim因疫情滞留英国。复学在即，作为俱乐部负责人，你给Jim写一封电子邮件，请他推荐一名外籍指导教师，内容包括： 1. 条件及要求； 2. 表示感谢并提醒注意防护。 注意：1. 词数不少于50； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jim, How are you doing? I hope everything's OK with you. Our school's drama club plans to start practising. Since you're away in Britain, we need a drama teacher to be in your place. Would you please recommend one for us? He or she should be a native English speaker, currently in Beijing, and experienced in both directing and teaching. Thank you for your help. Please take care of yourself. Remember to wear a mask when necessary. Best wishes, Yours, Li Hua 【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。 【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校英语戏剧俱乐部外籍指导教师Jim因疫情滞留英国。复学在即，作为俱乐部负责人，你给Jim写一封电子邮件，请他推荐一名外籍指导教师，内容包括：1. 条件及要求；2. 表示感谢并提醒注意防护。 第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：drama club (戏剧俱乐部)；plan to do sth.(计划做某事)；in one's place(代替某人)；recommend(推荐)；a native English speaker(以英语为母语的人)；currently (目前)；experienced(熟练的)；both…and…(两者都……)；take care of(照顾)；wear a mask(戴口罩)等。 第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。 第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。 【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Since you're away in Britain, we need a drama teacher to be in your place.运用原因状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。 6．（2019·北京·高考真题）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游，发来邮件询问相关信息。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括： 1. 交通出行； 2. 必备衣物。 注意： 1. 词数不少于50； 2. 开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jim, I’m pleased that you’re coming to tour in China. I suggest that you begin from Beijing, and I’ll show you around. Tianjin will be your next stop. After that, you can go to Shanghai, where you can stay for a week. You can take high-speed trains to both cities. Summer in these cities is hot and rainy, so take summer wear plus an umbrella with you. Looking forward to your arrival. Yours, Li Hua 【分析】本文是一篇应用文，要求给朋友写回信。 【详解】红星中学高三学生李华的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游，发来邮件询问相关信息。要求给他回复邮件，内容包括: 1.交通出行；2.必备衣物。本文时态应采用一般现在时和一般将来时，用第一人称和第二人称来写。文章可以分为三部分来写：首先表达欢迎Jim来中国；然后交代交通出行和必备衣物；最后盼望朋友的到来。注意使用高级词汇和句式，为文章增添色彩；注意使用连接词、衔接词，使文章自然、流畅。 【点睛】本文内容完整，语言表述流畅。文章使用了几个高分句型。that you’re coming to tour in China.和that you begin from Beijing, and I’ll show you around.是宾语从句。where you can stay for a week.是非限制性定语从句。 7．（2018·北京·高考真题）【2018·北京】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣，计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件，内容包括： (1) 表示欢迎； (2) 推荐他上哪所大学； (3) 建议他做哪些准备工作。 注意：(1). 词数不少于50； (2). 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jim, I’m so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter. First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing. Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. As for preparation, some reading in advance in needed like The Story of the Stone while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt into the Chinese language environment. I sincerely hope your dream will come true and it’s my pleasure to show you around in Beijing when that day comes. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】本文为提纲式作文，文章要求写推荐信，为英国朋友介绍北京的大学。首先可以介绍一下写作背景（Jim对中国文化感兴趣，要来中国学习），表达欢迎。然后推荐一所大学，并简要介绍推荐的原因（如大学的特色，可以学到什么等）。再次简单介绍应该做哪方面的准备，如可以提前学习汉语，读点有关中国传统文化的书，了解中国的习俗，让自己更好地适应中国的生活。文章可采用一般现在时，人称可以使用第二人称。 亮点说明：文章中巧妙使用非谓语Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, 使句子结构紧凑。 使用定语从句Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. 使句子表达更完美；巧妙使用连接词while引出来中国前的准备，使句子结构对称。 8．（2017·北京·高考真题）你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括： 1.你建议的线路； 2.你的理由； 3.你的祝愿。 注意：1.词数不少于50； 2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jim, I’m happy receive your letter and know you’re coming to China. Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended. Personally, I prefer the your along the Yangtze, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots.  That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice. Hope you’ll have a good time in China. Yours Li Hua 【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。 【详解】首先，学生要仔细阅读提示：你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括： 1.你建议的线路； 2.你的理由； 3.你的祝愿。 弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。 其次，要注意提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语， 按照一定逻辑关系来写。 最后，要根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。本文是一封信，按照内容要求可以确定文章的框架结构，三段式，其中第一段写你所建议的路线，第二部分是本文的主体，要阐述你所建议的路线的原因，好让 他们有很好的掌握，最后一段，提出你的祝愿。写作时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。 【点睛】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。表语从句的使用：That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.高级词汇的使用：highly recommended。连接副词的合理使用：Personally，moreover。 9．（2016·北京·高考真题）假设你是李华。你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣，并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给Jim回信，内容包括： 1、该人物是谁； 2、该人物的主要贡献； 3、该人物对你的影响。 注意：    1. 词数不少于100； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ Yours Lihua 【答案】Dear Jim, It’s great to hear from you. I feel proud knowing your interest in Chinese history. As for my favorite figure in Chinese history, it must be Wei Yuan, a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty. He, in his book, Haiguo Tuzhi (Maps and Records of the World), introduced modern technologies and ideas to China, which opened our eyes to the world. So he and his works are still worthy of being respected by us now. In fact, he inspires me to major in English in college, to be a bridge between China and the world. Interested in knowing more? I can find you some books! Just let me know. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友Jim写封信，介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物，内容包括：1、该人物是谁；2、该人物的主要贡献；3、该人物对你的影响。 【详解】1.词汇积累 激励：inspire→motivate 至于，关于：as for→with regard to 值得做：be worthy of being done→be worth doing 事实上：in fact→as a matter of fact 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：As for my favorite figure in Chinese history, it must be Wei Yuan, a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty. 拓展句：As for my favorite figure in Chinese history, it must be Wei Yuan, who was a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty. 【点睛】[高分句型1] So he and his works are still worthy of being respected by us now.  (运用了动名词的被动式作宾语) [高分句型2] He, in his book, Haiguo Tuzhi (Maps and Records of the World), introduced modern technologies and ideas to China, which opened our eyes to the world. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 10．（2016·北京·高考真题）假如你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim得知你要参加CCTV《朗读者》节目的录制，来信询问相关情况。请你给Jim回信。内容包括： 1）你朗读的内容； 2）你选择上述内容的原因； 3）上述内容对你的影响。 注意：1）词数不少于50；2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】One possible version: Dear Jim, How is it going? Thank you for your support of my upcoming attendance in the CCTV program The Reader. The book I have chosen is “Fu Lei’s Family Letters” in which he shared his view about art and life in order to guide his son. There are two reasons why I’ve decided to read one of his letters to the audience nationwide. Firstly, you can feel the profound fatherly love and his efforts to guide the next generation, which I believe will touch the youngsters like me. Besides, many traditional virtues, such as integrity, can be found in his works, which can inspire students like us. The book has an immense influence on me. Actually, this book has changed me from a troubled teen to a caring son. Besides, the wisdom in the book helps me shape a positive attitude towards life and future. Thus, it came to my mind the moment I got the invitation. That’s all about it. I hope my introduction can be of some help. Is there any book that also plays an important role in your life? I’m looking forward to your reply! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于信函类应用文，要求考生给Jim写一封回信，告诉他你朗读的内容、你选择该内容的原因、该内容对你的影响。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 ……的努力：effort to do…→attempt to do… 触动：touch→move 美德：virtue→merit 鼓励：inspire→encourage 有帮助：be of help→be helpful 对……起重要作用：play an important role in→play an important part in/make a lot of difference to 2. 句式拓展 简单句改为强调句 原句：Actually, this book has changed me from a troubled teen to a caring son. 拓展句：Actually, it is this book that has changed me from a troubled teen to a caring son. 【点睛】【高分句型1】The book I have chosen is “Fu Lei’s Family Letters” in which he shared his view about art and life in order to guide his son.(使用了省略关系词的定语从句、“介词+which”引导的定语从句、in order to do…目的状语) 【高分句型2】Firstly, you can feel the profound fatherly love and his efforts to guide the next generation, which I believe will touch the youngsters like me. (使用了不定式作后置定语、which引导非限制性定语从句、I believe作插入语) 11．（2015·北京·高考真题）假如你是红星中学高三李华，请给你的美国朋友Jim写一封信，告诉他你打算参加龙舟训练营，希望他一起参加，邮件的内容包括： 1. 介绍训练营的相关内容（例如：时间，地点，参加者等）； 2. 说明你打算参加的原因； 3. 询问对方的意向。 注意：1. 词数不少于50； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 提示词：龙舟训练营  Dragon Boat Training Camp Dear Jim, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jim, I’m writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday. I want to join a Dragon Boat Training Camp. I wonder if you’d like to go with me. This camp will open on July 20th. It offers teenagers like you and me a chance to enjoy sports and learn about Chinese culture. If you are interested in it, let me know and I’ll send you more information. Hope to meet you at the training camp this summer. 【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给美国朋友Jim写信，邀请他一起参加龙舟训练营。 【详解】1.词汇积累 想要做某事：want to do sth.→would like to do sth. 提供某人某物：offer sb. sth.→provide sb. with sth. 机会：chance→opportunity 对……感兴趣：be interested in→take an interest in 2.句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：This camp will open on July 20th. It offers teenagers like you and me a chance to enjoy sports and learn about Chinese culture. 拓展句：This camp will open on July 20th, which offers teenagers like you and me a chance to enjoy sports and learn about Chinese culture. 【点睛】[高分句型1] I wonder if you’d like to go with me.（运用了if引导宾语从句） [高分句型2] If you are interested in it, let me know and I’ll send you more information.（运用了if引导条件状语从句） 12．（2014·北京·高考真题）你给英国朋友Chris写一封信，内容包括： 1.你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游； 2.由于脚部受伤，你无法按原计划前往； 3.表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。 注意： 1.词数不少于50. 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Chris, ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ Yours, Joe 【答案】Dear Chris,      How is everything going?     Do you remember our plan? We planned to visit Yunnan in July. But now because my left foot was injured, I cannot go with you as planned. I’m sorry about it. Can I suggest that we put it off until early August? I wish you could understand.      I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.                                                                                                                                                                    Yours,                                                                                                                                                                     Joe 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给给英国朋友Chris写一封信，内容包括：你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游；由于脚部受伤，你无法按原计划前往；表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。 【详解】1.词汇积累 游览：visit→travel around 因为：because→since 受伤了：be injured→get injured 建议：suggest→advise 2.句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：Do you remember our plan? We planned to visit Yunnan in July. 拓展句：Do you remember our plan that we will visit Yunnan in July? 【点睛】[高分句型1] But now because my left foot was injured, I cannot go with you as planned. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句) [高分句型2] Can I suggest that we put it off until early August? 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