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2025高考备考专题复习高中英语书面表达开放性类作文精选专项训练
1.请你写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿,向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动,内容包括:
1. 介绍这项运动;
2. 说明推荐理由。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答:
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
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2.你刚观看了你校与英国一所友好学校联合在线上举办的音乐会。请在线上留言板上写一则评论,内容包括:
1. 音乐会特点;
2. 观看感受;
3. 意见建议。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
This online concert is absolutely fantastic.
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3.假定你是李华,某英语网站正在讨论对“The man who has made up his mind to win will never say ‘impossible’.”的理解。你打算跟帖参与讨论,内容包括:
1. 你对此的理解;
2. 结合具体实例;
3. 你的启发与感悟。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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4.为了解并更好地指导学生进行职业生涯规划,你校英语报正组织题为The Choice of My Career的英语征文活动。请你写一篇征文投稿,内容包括:
1. 理想职业;
2. 选择原因;
3. 如何实现。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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5.Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
随着中国传统文化越来越受到国人的重视,例如中国的各种传统节日,它们充满了中国的历史、理念、哲学思考和善良的中国人对人性的深刻认知和理解。假如你是中华中学的学生李敏,关于这个话题在知乎上写一篇文章,谈谈你的看法,题目自拟。你的文章必须包括:
1. 选择一项中国传统节日和一项西方节日进行对比;
2. 谈谈你对中国传统文化的理解。
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6.假定你是李华,英语课上,老师要求大家分组讨论使用电子设备阅读的现象。请你作为小组代表,写一篇短文,内容包括:
1. 优点与缺点;
2. 合理建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 题目和首句已为你写好, 不计人总词数。
Make Better Use of Digital Reading
Nowadays, digital reading is becoming increasingly popular.
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7.你所在的城市正在举办“我为家乡代言”英文征文活动,请你写一篇短文参赛。 内容包括:
1. 展现家乡魅力(美食、历史、风景等);
2. 邀请前来参观。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式作答。
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8.假设你是晨光中学的李津。你校英语俱乐部将举办一次英语演讲比赛。请你以“Every Setback Is a Test for Us”为题写一篇演讲稿,内容包括:
1. 描述你自己经历的一次挫折;
2. 你克服挫折的体会和建议。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:setback挫折
Every Setback Is a Test for Us
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Jin Today I am very glad to have the chance to speak about the topic: Every Setback Is a Test for Us.
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Thanks, for your Listening.
9.你所在学校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以“我们为什么需要幽默?”为题写一份英语演讲稿。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Why do we need humour?
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10.近年来,许多城市都流行兴建“口袋公园”,曾经的社区边角地摇身一变,成了家门口高颜值的小公园,给市民带来了惊喜。假定你是李华,你所在的城市也逐渐建了一些口袋公园,为此你校英文报社正在组织以“Pocket Parks in My Eyes”为主题的征文活动,请你撰写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
(1)简要介绍“口袋公园”;
(2)阐述“口袋公园”的好处;
(3)号召绿色生活方式。
注意:(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Pocket Parks in My Eyes
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11.Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
AI技术日新月异,有些职业比如翻译可能将被人工智能翻译软件所替代。因此,你认为未来还有学习外语的需要吗?为什么?请写一篇短文说明你的观点。
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12.假如你在一个网络论坛上发现外国网友提出了一个英语问题:“What do you want to do most with AI(人工智能)?”,请你用英语进行回复,内容包括:
1.回答问题;
2.简述理由。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
What do you want to do most with Al?
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13.Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是美国一所中学的学生Sam,最近你班要召开一次主题为“不让霸凌成为青春的一道疤”的班会。根据主题内容,写一篇发言稿(所给材料可供参考)。
Here are the national statistics about bullying in the USA About 20% of students aged 12-18 experienced bullying nationwide.
Students aged 12-18 who reported bullied said they thought those who bullied them:
-- had the ability to influence other students’ perception of them (56%).
-- were physically stronger or larger (40%).
-- had more money (31%).
Word box:bully v/n 恐吓;伤害;/ 恃强凌弱者
14.假定你是李华。近期,你所在城市的中学生就“最美汉字”进行投票。请阅读下面一则新闻报道,向学校英文报“Happy Teens”专栏投稿。
内容包括:1. 简要概括学生推荐这五个汉字的理由。
2. 简述你最想推荐的汉字及其寓意。
3. 谈谈你的感想。
注意:1.词数100词左右。
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
High school students recommend ren as message to the worldThe Chinese character ren, a word that generally means “benevolence”, has been selected by high school students in a poll(民意调查)to highlight Chinese culture around the world. The character ren was selected by 8.33 percent of the 3,000 respondents who took part in the poll, according to one of the organizers, a student from a high school. It was followed by the characters ai, yi, meng and xiao, which mean ‘‘love”, “one”, “dream’’ and “filial piety”. Those characters ranked in the “top-20 most beautiful Chinese characters”.
(China Daily, March 6, 2022. Page 4)
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15.Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
在一堂写作课上,老师给出了以下三个题目供学生选择。
题目一:
以“盛年不重来,一日难再晨。”(Prime years do not return; a day’s morning is hard to come by again.)为题,结合你的生活体验,写一篇文章。
题目二:
针对目前因为了升学考试而导致的学生知识结构很不平衡(unbalanced knowledge structures)的现象,你觉得有什么好的方法或手段能够改变这种情况,谈谈你的想法。
题目三:
续写“当最后一个地球人(earthling)坐在房间里时,传来了敲门声……”
如果你是这个班级的学生,你会怎么选择呢?
写一篇短文,说明你选择的题目,简述理由并介绍你的写作思路。
文章必须包括以下内容:
1. 你选择的作文题目及理由;
2. 你的写作思路。
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参考答案:
1.
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
Everybody! Are you tired of sitting in class all day? How about incorporating some physical activity into your daily routine? One great option is the “Stand Up and Stretch” exercise. This simple routine involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths. It’s a quick and easy way to get your blood flowing and re-energize your body and mind. This exercise is recommended for several reasons.
First, it helps to combat the negative effects of prolonged sitting, such as back pain and stiffness. Second, it can improve your focus and concentration, making it easier to stay engaged in class. Lastly, it promotes a healthy and active lifestyle, which is essential for overall well-being.
So, next time you feel a bit sluggish during class, remember to stand up and stretch! It’s a small change that can make a big difference in your day.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿,向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
厌倦:be tired of→be fed up with
首先:first→above all
减轻:combat→relieve
提高:improve→enhance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:This simple routine involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths.
拓展句:This is a simple routine that involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Lastly, it promotes a healthy and active lifestyle, which is essential for overall well-being. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] This simple routine involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths. (运用了动名词作宾语)
[高分句型2] It’s a small change that can make a big difference in your day. (运用了that引导的定语从句)
2.This online concert is absolutely fantastic.
The performers from the two schools have done their best in entertaining the audience with one song after another. Their performances are undoubtedly of high quality, which makes the concert almost no different from a live one. I enjoyed every second of the concert and was particularly attracted when the boys and girls from Britain started to sing the traditional Chinese song “Liang Zhu”. They performed the song in a way that touched my heart and gave me a feeling of connection. I hope there will be more opportunities in the future for us Chinese students and our international friends to learn about and from each other.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放作文。要求考生就学校与英国一所友好学校联合在线上举办的音乐会,在线上留言板上写一则评论。
【详解】1.词汇积累
确定无疑地:undoubtedly→without doubt
尤其地:particularly→ especially
感动:touch→ move
希望:hope→ expect
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句:Their performances are undoubtedly of high quality, which makes the concert almost no different from a live one.
拓展句:There is no doubt that their performances are of high quality, which makes the concert almost no different from a live one.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Their performances are undoubtedly of high quality, which makes the concert almost no different from a live one.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I enjoyed every second of the concert and was particularly attracted when the boys and girls from Britain started to sing the traditional Chinese song “Liang Zhu”. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
3.One possible version:
This quote highlights the importance of determination and devotion. To me, a strong willpower is what it takes to accomplish anything difficult.
This is apparently true to Tu Youyou. Faced with the challenges to find a cure for malaria, she encountered numerous obstacles. However, she made up her mind to settle the problem instead of acknowledging defeat. After endless attempts, she led her team to discover artemisinin and win the battle against malaria, saving hundreds of thousands of people’s lives.
Overall, I’m inspired by Tu Youyou and her team. Their contribution demonstrates that in time of difficulties, we are supposed to spare no effort to win. Hopefully, we can turn “impossible” into “I’m possible”.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生就某英语网站正在讨论的“The man who has made up his mind to win will never say ‘impossible’”话题跟帖参与讨论并谈谈自己的理解。
【详解】1.词汇积累
突出,强调:stress →highlight
明显地:obviously → apparently
证明:show → demonstrate
完成:complete →accomplish
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Faced with the challenges to find a cure for malaria, she encountered numerous obstacles.
拓展句:When she was faced with the challenges to find a cure for malaria, she encountered numerous obstacles.
【点睛】【高分句型1】To me, a strong willpower is what it takes to accomplish anything difficult.(运用了what引导的表语从句)
【高分句型2】Their contribution demonstrates that in time of difficulties, we are supposed to spare no effort to win.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
4. The Choice of My Career
Being a doctor is my dream. Many factors contribute to my choice.
For one thing, I can relieve those suffering from different diseases of pain. For another, I can be a responsible citizen, making contributions to our society and nation. In order to achieve my goal, it’s crucial for me to go all out to study right now. Besides professional knowledge, I believe that my enthusiasm, dedication, and curiosity will help me in my career and achieve a promising future.
I am excited to start this journey and looking forward to the challenges and opportunities that lie ahead.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于说明文,要求考生以The Choice of My Career为题写一篇征文投稿,内容包括:1. 理想职业;2. 选择原因;3. 如何实现。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
导致:contribute to→lead to
至关重要的:crucial→vital
除了……还:besides→apart from
兴奋的:excited→thrilled
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:For one thing, I can relieve those suffering from different diseases of pain.
拓展句:For one thing, I can relieve those who suffer from different diseases of pain.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Besides professional knowledge, I believe that my enthusiasm, dedication, and curiosity will help me in my career and achieve a promising future. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I am excited to start this journey and looking forward to the challenges and opportunities that lie ahead. (运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)
5.One possible version:
As a student at Zhonghua High School, I’ve witnessed the growing appreciation of traditional Chinese culture among my fellow countrymen. Traditional Chinese festivals, such as the Spring Festival and Mid-Autumn Festival, embody not only China’s history but also its philosophical reflections and the profound understanding and compassion of the Chinese people towards human nature. On this topic, I recently shared my thoughts on Zhihu, shedding light on my perspective.
Firstly, let’s compare a Chinese traditional festival with a Western one. Taking the Spring Festival and Christmas as examples, the Spring Festival is China’s paramount traditional celebration, symbolizing new beginnings, family reunions, and a profound emphasis on family values. In contrast, Christmas in the West places a greater emphasis on gift exchanges and a commercial atmosphere, highlighting personal enjoyment and festivities.
In my view, traditional Chinese culture is a vast and profound treasure trove. It encompasses not only rituals and customs but also profound contemplations on life, nature, and interpersonal relationships. Traditional Chinese values, centered around family, filial piety, and harmony, have instilled in me a moral compass. Through traditional festivals, I’ve learned the importance of respecting elders and cherishing family.
In today’s society, the comparison between Chinese and Western cultures has deepened my understanding of the uniqueness of traditional Chinese culture. It’s crucial to continue promoting the values embedded in our traditions, fostering a more harmonious and civilized society.
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇开放性作文。要求考生选择一项中国传统节日和一项西方节日进行对比;谈谈自己对中国传统文化的理解。
【详解】1.词汇积累
首先:firstly→to begin with
重要:importance→significance
相比之下:in contrast→in comparison
在我看来:in my view→as far as I’m concerned
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:On this topic, I recently shared my thoughts on Zhihu, shedding light on my perspective.
拓展句:On this topic, I recently shared my thoughts on Zhihu, which sheds light on my perspective.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
In contrast, Christmas in the West places a greater emphasis on gift exchanges and a commercial atmosphere, highlighting personal enjoyment and festivities. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2]
It’s crucial to continue promoting the values embedded in our traditions, fostering a more harmonious and civilized society. (运用了it作形式主语,动词不定式作主语,动名词作宾语)
6.Make Better Use of Digital Reading
Nowadays, digital reading is becoming increasingly popular. It offers several advantages and drawbacks. On one hand, digital reading provides great convenience, allowing us to carry an entire library with us. Additionally, it enhances the experience with interactive elements such as videos. However, potential distractions from other apps on the device can be a drawback. Furthermore, some argue that the lack of physical books takes away the sensory experience and emotional connection with reading.
In my opinion, we should develop digital discipline and strike a balance by occasionally incorporating traditional books into our reading. By enjoying the benefits and minimizing the drawbacks, we can fully enjoy digital reading.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生对于在英语课上,老师要求大家分组讨论使用电子设备阅读的现象这一情况,作为小组代表,写一篇短文。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提供:offers→ provides
此外:Additionally → What’s more
增强,提高:enhances→ improves
观点:opinion→ view
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句:Nowadays, digital reading is becoming increasingly popular. It offers several advantages and drawbacks.
合并句:Nowadays, digital reading is becoming increasingly popular, which offers several advantages and drawbacks.
【点睛】【高分句型1】On one hand, digital reading provides great convenience, allowing us to carry an entire library with us.(运用了非谓语动词中的现在分词作状语。)
【高分句型2】Furthermore, some argue that the lack of physical books takes away the sensory experience and emotional connection with reading.(运用了连接代词that引导的宾语从句。)
7.
My hometown Nanjing is a blend of tradition and modernity, where skyscrapers rise with the picturesque countryside in the background.
While here, you are able to have a taste of delicious local food, such as salted duck, and soak yourself in the rich cultural heritage, such as the Confucius Temple and the Zhanyuan Garden, all in one day. Moreover, I take pride in my city’s green spaces that offer a peaceful escape from the daily rush.
There’s so much more to explore that words alone cannot do justice to its beauty. Thus, I sincerely invite you to come and discover it!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一篇短文向所在城市正在举办的“我为家乡代言”英文征文活动投稿参赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
美味的:delicious→tasty
沉浸于:soak oneself in→immerse oneself in
丰富的:rich→abundant
平静的:peaceful→placid
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Thus, I sincerely invite you to come and discover it!
拓展句:That is why I sincerely invite you to come and discover it!
【点睛】[高分句型1] My hometown Nanjing is a blend of tradition and modernity, where skyscrapers rise with the picturesque countryside in the background. (运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Moreover, I take pride in my city’s green spaces that offer a peaceful escape from the daily rush. (运用了that引导的定语从句)
[高分句型3] While here, you are able to have a taste of delicious local food, such as salted duck, and soak yourself in the rich cultural heritage, such as the Confucius Temple and the Zhanyuan Garden, all in one day. (运用了状语从句的省略)
8. Every Setback Is a Test for Us
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Jin Today I am very glad to have the chance to speak about the topic: Every Setback Is a Test for Us.
As we all know, everyone will face some setbacks every now and then. I came across many setbacks in my study and life. I failed in my physical final exam when I was in Senior One. Knowing the result, I cried hard. I analyzed the situation and studied harder. Finally, I became good at physics. In my opinion, when setbacks happen, we should be brave and stay optimistic. It is a good way to relieve the pain by turning to our trusted ones for comfort, watching a funny movie, listening to music or visiting a beautiful place.
Suffering is the most powerful teacher of life and every setback is a test for us. I absolutely believe that we need to face the setbacks bravely and learn from them. Only the one who passes the test can succeed.
Thanks, for your Listening.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文,要求考生以“Every Setback Is a Test for Us”为题写一篇演讲稿,内容包括:描述你自己经历的一次挫折;你克服挫折的体会和建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
不时地:every now and then→ever and again
遇到:come across→encounter
发生:happen→take place
完全:absolutely→totally
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:I analyzed the situation and studies harder. Finally, I became good at physics.
拓展句:I analyzed the situation and studies harder, which finally made me become good at physics.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I failed in my physical final exam when I was in Senior One. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] Only the one who passes the test can succeed.(运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)
9. Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. The title of my speech today is “ Why do we need humour? ”
I guess all of us enjoy watching a comedy film or hearing a good joke. Humour is what plays the magic. According to recent research, humour has both physical and psychological effects. It helps us relieve our stress and anxiety, relax our whole body and give us a great sense of well-being. Also, it helps us to develop better and stronger relationships. Personally, I’ve become happier and got closer to my friends since l tried to add a little humour when talking with people around.
I hope you’ll benefit from humour too. Thank you!
【导语】这是一篇开放性作为。要求考生以“我们为什么需要幽默?”写一篇英语演讲稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
喜欢:enjoy→like
减轻:relieve→ease
此外:Also→Besides
积极的:optimistic→positive
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:It helps us relieve our stress and anxiety, relax our whole body and give us a great sense of well-being.
拓展句:Not only does it help us relieve our stress and anxiety, relax our whole body but also gives us a great sense of well-being.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Humour is what plays the magic.(运用了what引导的表语从句。)
【高分句型2】Personally, I’ve become happier and got closer to my friends since l tried to add a little humour when talking with people around.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句的省略。)
10. Pocket Parks in My Eyes
“Pocket Parks” is a term that refers to small, urban parks created in limited spaces within the city.
Pocket parks bring numerous benefits to our community from various perspectives. Firstly, they contribute to the economy by attracting visitors and stimulating local businesses. Additionally, pocket parks play a vital role in improving the life quality of residents. These small paradises offer a welcome escape from our busy city life.
In conclusion, pocket parks have many advantages for our cities. Let us embrace a greener lifestyle and make use of these parks, appreciating the beauty of nature right at our doorstep.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于说明文,要求考生以“Pocket Parks in My Eyes”为主题,写一篇短文投稿,参加学校英文报社的征文活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
许多的:numerous→a number of
各种各样的:various→a variety of
首先:firstly→first of all
另外:additionally→moreover
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Firstly, they contribute to the economy by attracting visitors and stimulating local businesses.
拓展句:Firstly, they attract visitors and stimulate local businesses, which contribute to the economy.
【点睛】[高分句型1] “Pocket Parks” is a term that refers to small, urban parks created in limited spaces within the city. (运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Let us embrace a greener lifestyle and make use of these parks, appreciating the beauty of nature right at our doorstep. (运用了现在分词作状语)
11.AI technology is advancing rapidly, and many people believe that manual translation may be replaced by artificial intelligence translation software. We should view this matter objectively.
Firstly, AI translation has both advantages and disadvantages. AI translation is popular and widely used due to its high efficiency, accuracy, and support for multilingual translation. However, the drawbacks of intelligent translation cannot be ignored. For example, it is difficult to understand language and cultural differences, and a lack of understanding of contextual information may lead to inaccurate or unsmooth translation.
On the contrary, manual translation still has irreplaceable advantages. Manual translation is more professional and accurate. Manual translation has a strong human touch. Manual translation can carefully understand cultural differences and language habits, making the translation create a human touch and emotional effect.
Therefore, in the future, we must learn foreign languages well and continue to strengthen our cultivation in language, culture and industry to obtain more opportunities and development opportunities in various industries.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生就“AI技术日新月异,有些职业比如翻译可能将被人工智能翻译软件所替代,未来还有没有学习外语的需要”这一话题说明自己的观点。
【详解】1.词汇积累
进步:advance →improve
看待:view → treat
缺点:drawbacks → shortcomings
导致:lead to → result in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Manual translation can carefully understand cultural differences and language habits, making the translation create a human touch and emotional effect.
拓展句:Manual translation can carefully understand cultural differences and language habits, which makes the translation create a human touch and emotional effect.
【点睛】【高分句型1】AI technology is advancing rapidly, and many people believe that manual translation may be replaced by artificial intelligence translation software. (使用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Manual translation can carefully understand cultural differences and language habits, making the translation create a human touch and emotional effect. (使用了现在分词作结果状语)
12.范文1
What do you want to do most with AI?
What I want to do most with AI is to tackle the issue of climate change.
The situation with climate change is more than serious, and I believe that AI holds a significant potential to make a difference. By leveraging the power of big data, AI can detect changes in climate conditions in real time and provide critical feedback. Thus, this could enable us to implement more effective strategies for mitigation and adaptation, ultimately helping us to protect our planet for future generations.
Hopefully, the capacity of AI to process vast amounts of data quickly and accurately makes it an invaluable tool in our fight against climate change.
范文二
What do you want to do most with AI?
We have entered a world where everyone is expected to engage with AI. As a high school student, what I want to do most with AI is to use it to facilitate my learning process in various subjects.
Firstly, AI in essence is a database of huge amounts of information. Simply type in a prompt and AI can develop creative writing skills from there. Besides, the accuracy rate of AI is far from perfect, which leaves room for further exploration. In other words, I can assess the AI-generated results through self-reflection and peer discussion.
Whether you like it or not, AI is here to stay. We should learn not to be dependent on AI, but rather to use it to our advantage.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生在网络论坛上回复外国网友提出的问题“What do you want to do most with AI?”。
【详解】1.词汇积累(范文二)
各种各样的:various → a variety of
另外:besides→what’s more
换句话说:in other words→that is to say
评估:assess→evaluate
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Firstly, AI in essence is a database of huge amounts of information.
拓展句:Firstly, AI in essence is a database of huge amounts of information, which plays an important role in our daily life.
【点睛】【高分句式1】We have entered a world where everyone is expected to engage with AI. (运用了where引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句式2】Besides, the accuracy rate of AI is far from perfect, which leaves room for further exploration. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
13.Ladies and gentlemen,
Good morning. I am Sam, a student at a high school in the United States. Today, I would like to address the important issue of bullying in our school community. According to recent data, approximately 20% of students aged 12-18 have experienced bullying nationwide. This is a concerning statistic that affects many young individuals in our society.
The victims of bullying have shared their thoughts on why they believed they were targeted. Firstly, 56% of victims believed that the bullies had the ability to influence other students' perception of them. This highlights the power bullies hold in shaping how others view their peers.Secondly, 40% of victims mentioned that bullies were physically stronger or larger. This underscores the unfair advantage some bullies have in these situations. It is disheartening to see that physical strength is used as a means to intimidate and harm others.Lastly, 31% of victims felt that bullies had more money. This suggests that some bullies may use their financial status to exert power and control over their peers. It is crucial to remember that wealth should never be a justification for mistreating others.
We must stand united against bullying and create a supportive and inclusive environment where kindness, empathy, and respect prevail. If we witness any form of bullying, it is our responsibility to speak up and support the victim. We should also report the incident to a trusted adult who can take appropriate action.
Together, we can ensure that bullying does not leave scars on our youth. Let us work towards a future where every student feels safe, accepted, and valued.
Thank you for your attention.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于最近你班要召开一次主题为“不让霸凌成为青春的一道疤”的班会这一情况,根据主题内容,写一篇发言稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
影响:affect→ influence
强调:highlights→ emphasizes
让人沮丧的:disheartening→ frustrating
至关重要的:crucial→ vital
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I am Sam, a student at a high school in the United States.
拓展句:I am Sam, who is a student at a high school in the United States.
【点睛】【高分句型1】This is a concerning statistic that affects many young individuals in our society.(运用了关系代词that引导的限制性定语从句。)
【高分句型2】If we witness any form of bullying, it is our responsibility to speak up and support the victim.(运用了连词if引导的条件状语从句。)
14.A possible version:
Recently, some high school students have conducted a poll to choose the most beautiful Chinese character. Among tens of thousands of characters, “ren, ai, yi, meng, xiao” are strongly recommended. Obviously, most students think the five characters carry typical Chinese culture in terms of traditional beliefs and core values concerning morality and ethics.
Of these characters, I put meng on the top of my list. Holding meng, which means best wishes for the future, one is not only to seek for opportunities for a better life, but also to create brand-new things for people around the world.
Personally, Chinese characters are so charming that they are treasures of human cultures. With deep love for Chinese culture, we should strive to promote them to the world.
【导语】这是一篇开放作文。要求考生根据一则新闻报道,简要概括学生推荐五个汉字(仁、爱、义、梦、孝)的理由,它们的寓意以及自己的感想。
【详解】1.词汇积累
组织,进行:conduct→carry out
显然:obviously→apparently
关于:concerning→with regard to
在我看来:personally→from my point of view
2.句型拓展
合并简单句
原句: Among tens of thousands of characters, “ren, ai, yi, meng, xiao” are strongly recommended. Obviously, most students think the five characters carry typical Chinese culture in terms of traditional beliefs and core values concerning morality and ethics.
拓展句: Among tens of thousands of characters, “ren, ai, yi, meng, xiao” are strongly recommended, which most students think carry typical Chinese culture in terms of traditional beliefs and core values concerning morality and ethics.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Holding meng, which means best wishes for the future, one is not only to seek for opportunities for a better life, but also to create brand-new things for people around the world.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Obviously, most students think the five characters carry typical Chinese culture in terms of traditional beliefs and core values concerning morality and ethics.(运用了that引导宾语从句,that已省略)
15.Sample 1
If I were a student in this class, I would choose topic one: “Prime years do not return; a day’s morning is hard to come by again.”
I am drawn to this topic because it speaks to the essence of seizing the moment and cherishing the present. It prompts reflection on the fleeting nature of time and the importance of making the most of our youth and opportunities.
My approach to this topic would be to draw from personal experiences and observations to illustrate the significance of embracing each day and living with purpose. I would share anecdotes of moments where I felt the weight of time passing, inspiring me to take action and pursue my passions.
I would explore themes of ambition, resilience, and gratitude, emphasizing the value of perseverance in the face of challenges and the importance of cultivating meaningful relationships.
Ultimately, I would aim to convey a message of empowerment and motivation, encouraging others to embrace the present moment, seize opportunities, and live with intention. By recognizing the fleeting nature of time and the preciousness of each day, we can strive to make a positive impact and create lasting memories.Sample 2
If I were a student in this class, I would choose topic two: addressing the unbalanced knowledge structures caused by the current emphasis on entrance exams. My choice stems from the relevance and importance of this issue in the educational landscape today.
My approach to this topic would involve first acknowledging the root causes of the problem, such as excessive focus on exam-oriented learning and neglect of holistic education. Then, I would propose practical solutions like curriculum reforms to encourage interdisciplinary learning, promoting critical thinking skills over rote memorization, and incorporating project-based assessments to gauge a student’s true understanding.
I believe this topic offers a chance to explore innovative educational strategies that can lead to more well-rounded and adaptable learners, better equipped to navigate the complexities of the modern world. By addressing the issue of unbalanced knowledge structures, we can foster a learning environment that values both academic achievement and personal growth.Sample 3
If I were a student in this class, I would choose topic three: continuing the story of “When the last earthling sat in the room, there came a knock on the door...”
I am drawn to this topic because of its open-ended nature, which allows for creativity and imagination to take flight. It presents an opportunity to explore themes of loneliness, curiosity, and the unknown, offering a canvas for storytelling that can captivate both the writer and the reader.
My approach to this topic would involve delving into the emotions and thoughts of the last earthling as they hear the knock on the door. I would consider various possibilities for who or what could be on the other side of the door – perhaps it’s another survivor, an alien visitor, or even a symbolic representation of hope or redemption.
I would aim to create a narrative that builds suspense and intrigue, keeping the reader engaged as they eagerly await the revelation behind the mysterious knock. Through descriptive language and vivid imagery, I would seek to evoke a sense of wonder and anticipation, leaving the reader with a lingering sense of curiosity and a desire for more.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生在所给的三个题目中选择一个题目,并写一篇短文,说明你选择的题目、简述理由并介绍写作思路。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
选择:choose→select
充分利用:make the most of → take full advantage of
机会,机遇:opportunity→chance
努力:strive→endeavour
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:I am drawn to this topic because it speaks to the essence of seizing the moment and cherishing the present.
拓展句:The reason why I am drawn to this topic is that it speaks to the essence of seizing the moment and cherishing the present.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am drawn to this topic because it speaks to the essence of seizing the moment and cherishing the present. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】I would explore themes of ambition, resilience, and gratitude, emphasizing the value of perseverance in the face of challenges and the importance of cultivating meaningful relationships. (运用了现在分词作状语以及动名词短语作宾语)
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