2024年牛津译林版英语中考作文高分指导训练

译林初中英语中考作文高分指导训练 话题一 自我认识 教材链接 写作角度 年级及单元 话 题 外貌特点 七上Unit l This is me Self-introduction; Appearance 性格和品质 七下Unit 7 Abilities Know your good qualities 九上Unit 1 Know yourself Personalities and jobs 兴趣爱好 八上Unit 2 School life School lives and likes { 八上Unit 4 Do it yourself Hobbies; Self-improvement 九上Unit 5 Art world Art forms and interests 如何实现梦想 九下Unit 2 Great people Life goals 高分词汇 单词 [外貌特点] tall高的 short矮的 fat肥胖的 thin瘦的 old年老的 young年幼的 beautiful漂亮的handsome英俊的 strong强壮的 weak虚弱的 [性格和品质]| friendly友好的 kind善良的 outgoing外向的 active活跃的 quiet安静的 shy害羞的strict严厉的 careful认真的 Careless粗心的 cold冷漠的 polite有礼貌的 talented有才能的 serious严肃的 clever/smart聪明的 brave勇敢的 honest诚实的 funny滑稽的 humorous幽默的 confident自信的 warm-hearted热心的 [兴趣爱好] like/love喜欢 habit习惯 hobby爱好 interest兴趣 run跑步 dance跳舞 paint绘图 [短语] be born in出生于 come from来自 look like看起来像 play soccer踢足球 be good at擅长 be interested in对……感兴趣 get used to doing sth.习惯于做某事 get on/along well with sb.与某人相处得好 经典句型 1.She is thin and has straight brown hair.她瘦瘦的,有着一头棕色的直发。 2. Mr Zhang is a tall man with a pair of glasses. 张先生是一个高个子男人,戴着一副眼镜。 3.Kate is more outgoing than me.凯特比我更外向。 4. You are good at telling stories. You can join a storytelling club. 你擅长讲故事。你可以参加讲故事俱乐部。 5. No matter who asks him for help, he is always very warm-hearted. 无论谁向他求助,他总是很热心。 6. She is a kind woman full of love. -1L 她是一个充满爱的善良的女士。 典例分析 典型例题 (2023 泰州模拟)九年级的生活对于我们而言无疑是值得回忆与展望的。欢笑与泪水,希冀与不舍,挣扎与拼搏,都将凝成人生中一个个饱含深情的感叹号。如果用一个关键词来定义你的九年级的生活,它会是什么?某英语网站发起了一个征文活动,请用英文分享你的关键词背后的故事和感悟。 要求: 1.词数100左右,已给出部分不计入总词数; 2.文中不得出现真实校名和姓名等信息。 the key word for my life in Grade 9—_ I'm glad to share with everyone the key word for my life in Grade 9_ 步骤分析 Step 1:快速审题 审人称:第一人称和第三人称 审时态:以一般现在时和一般过去时为主 审体裁:记叙文产 Step 2:细列要点 he key word for my life n Grade 9-_ Beginning I'm glad to share with everyone the key word for my life in grade 9-_. Main body I was always nervous_. When I was too busy to have breakfast, _. When I wanted to give up,_. Ending I believe_. Step 3:衔接成作 试着用衔接词because、when、and衔接成篇。 组句成篇 句型升格 The key word for my life in Grade 9-love I'm glad to share with everyone the key word for my life in Grade 9—love. After I entered Grade 9, I was always nervous because I was not good at my studies. Luckily, my teacher Miss Gao noticed my problem.①She is a kind woman, and she is full of love. She talked with me and offered to help me with my studies.②When I didn't have tme to have breakfast, she handed me milk and bread. When I wanted to give up, she always cheered me up. ③ Her love changed me a lot. I started to study harder and became more confident. And now I have become a top student in my class. I believe love can make a great difference to everyone's life. I'd like to share love with others and do my best to help others. ①用定语从句对句型进行升格 She is a kind woman who is full of love. ②用“too……to.”对句型进行升格 When I was too busy to have breakfast, she handed me milk and breakfast. ③用“It is/was… that/who…”对句型进行升格 It was her love that changed me a lot. 话题二 日常活动 写作角度 年级及单元 话题 家庭、学校活动 七上Unit 4 My day School lives and likes 八上Unit 2 School life School lives and the ideal school 八上Unit 3 A day out Outdoor activities; Tours around the town 娱乐活动 七上Unit 2 Let’s play sports! Sports and health 七上Unit 7 Shopping Places and space; Describe an activity 八下Unit 2 Travelling Places of interest; Travel experiences and feelings 高分词汇 单词 [场所] school学校 library图书馆 farm农场 village村庄 countryside乡下 hospital医院 bank银行 zoo动物园 store/shop商店 factory 工厂 station车站 museum博物馆 hotel宾馆 restaurant 饭店 supermarket超市 theatre剧院 beach海滩 forest森林 [日常活动] sports运动 game比赛 club 俱乐部 basketball篮球 chess国际象棋 skate滑冰boating划船 fishing 钓鱼 volunteer志愿者 repair修理 短语 dining hall餐厅 city park城市公园 get dressed穿衣服 take a shower洗澡go shopping去购物 cook dinner做晚饭 do the dishes洗盘子 wash clothes洗衣服 ride a horse骑马 plant trees栽树 feed chickens喂鸡 raise money筹款 water flowers浇花 sweep the floor清扫地板make the bed铺床 fold the clothes叠衣服 take out the rubbish倒垃圾buy drinks and snacks买饮料和小吃give out the food分发食物 经典句型 1.Cook it at a very high temperature for a long time.以高温长时间烹饪它。 2. I plan to visit my grandparents in the countryside this summer holiday. 今年暑假,我计划去看望我在乡下的爷爷奶奶。 3. Parents should encourage their children to do chores. 父母应该鼓励他们的孩子做家务。 4. Although I was a little tired. I felt very happy. 尽管我有点儿累,但是我感到很开心。 5. Your bedroom should be cleaned every day. 你的卧室应该每天都要打扫。 6. They can learn a lot from working. 他们可以从工作中学到很多。 7. It's necessary for us to help parents to do some housework. 对我们来说,帮父母做一些家务事是必要的。 8. I think reading can open my mind and that I can get great fun from it. 我认为阅读可以开阔我的眼界.并且我可以从中得到很多乐趣。 9. This is one of my common days and I value the simple life very much. 这是我普通的一天,我非常珍惜这种简单的生活。 典例分析 典型例题 (2023 扬州模拟改编)你校英语报社正在举行以“科技”为主题的征文比赛。假如你是李华.上周末你和你的问学们去扬州科技馆参观了机器人展,请你根据以下表格提供的信息并结合这次的参观经历,写一篇英语征文稿。 Time last weekend Place (Yangzhou Science &Technology Museum Activities Watch videos about…… …… My favorite robot The type the reason (at least two points) My feelings and hope. …… 要求; 1.表达清楚、语法正确、上下文连贯; 2.必须包括所有要点.并适当发挥; 3.词数100左右,已给出部分不计人总词数; 4.文中不得出现真实校名和姓名等信息。 The robot show Last weekend, I went to Yangzhou Science & Technology Museum with my classmates. _ 步骤分析 Step 1:快速审题 审人称:第一人称 审时态:以一般过去时为主 审体裁:记叙文 Step 2:细列要点 The robot show Beginning Last weekend, I went to Yangzhou Science& Technology Museum with my classmates. Main body Activities: _ . My favorite robot: _. Ending I hope I can_. Step 3:衔接成作 试着用衔接词because、also、while衔接成篇。 组句成篇 句型升格 The robot show Last weekend, I went to Yangzhou Science & technology Museum with my classmates.① We watched a robot show. It was very exciting. We also took part in many activities. I watched videos about robots while my classmates danced with the robots. In the show. we saw many different kinds of robots. ②People design some robots to do sports and others to how some skills. ③A robot could play the piano, and it as my favorite robot. I liked it very much because it could play nice music and I could play the piano with it. I like the robot show very much because I learn a lot from the robots. I hope I can design my own robot and that it can help me a lot in my daily life. ①合并为一句 We watched a very exciting robot show. ②用被动语态对句型进行升格 Some robots are designed to do sports and others are designed to how some skills. ③用定语从句对句型进行升格 My favorite robot was the robot which could play the piano. 话题三 学校生活 教材链接 写作角度 年级及单元 话题 校园介绍(人/物/作息) 七上Unit3Welcome to our school! The introduction to school and activities 七上Unit 4 My day School lives and likes 八上Unit l Friends Best friends 八上Unit 2 School life School lives and the ideal school 文体活动 七上Unit 2 Let’s play sports! Sports and health 七上Unit 8 Fashion School activities 八上Unit 4 Do it yourself Hobbies: Self-improvement 高分词汇 单词 [课程] subject学科 Chinese语文 Maths数学 English英语 Physics物理 Chemistry化学History历史 Geography地理 Science科学 Art美术 Music音乐 PE体育 [学习内容] language语言 letter 字母 grammar语法 pronunciation发首lesson 课 text课文sentence句子 homework家庭作业knowledge知识 skill技能 expression表达 [情感和感受] glad高兴的 friendly友好的 shy害羞的 lovely可爱的 lazy懒惰的 patient耐心的 pity可惜 shame羞愧 angry生气的 upset沮丧的 nervous焦虑的brave勇敢的bored厌倦的 relaxed放松的 surprised惊讶的 shocked震惊的 satisfied满意的 短语 have classes上课 play sports做运动 keep quiet保持安静catch up with赶上 fall behind落后 give a speech作演讲 pay attention to注意 play a part/role in在……方面发挥作用 经典句型 1. The teacher says Maths is very useful. I think it is difficult. 老师说数学很有用。我认为它是难的。 2.It's too hard for me to understand spoken English.英语口语太难了,我理解不了。 3.You should be patient with your classmates.你应该对你的同班同学有耐心。 4. Although he is your best friend, you should tell him copying others' homework is wrong. 虽然他是你最好的朋友,但是你应该告诉他抄袭他人的作业是错误的。 5.We're encouraged to take part in all kinds of after-school activities. 我们被鼓励参加各种各样的课外活动。 6. My school life is colorful, especially the school activities. 我的学校生活是多姿多彩的.尤其是学校活动。 典例分析 典型例题 假如你是李华。最近,你看到TEENS上正在开展以“Colorful school activities”为题的征文活动。请结合图片提示,介绍学校开展的活动,并陈述你参加此活动的理由或收获。 要求; 1.语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意; 2.思维导图非限定性内容,仅供参考; 3.词数100左右,已给出部分不计入总词数; 4.文中不得出现真实校名和人名等信息。 Colorful school activities My school life is colorful, especially the school activities. _ 步骤分析 Step 1:快速审题 审人称;第一人称 审时态:以一般现在时为主 审体裁:说明文 Step 2:细列要点 colourful school activities Beginning My school life is colourful、especially the school activities. Main body Clubs The sports meeting The Reading Week …… Ending colourful school activities always make me happy. step 3:衔接成作 试着用衔接词besides、when but衔接成篇。 组句成篇 型升格 Colourful school activities My school life is colourful, especially the school activities. In the past three years, I have taken part in all kinds of school activities.I like singing and I'm a member of the Music Club.①We get together and we practise singing wice a week. Singing can also cheer ma un when I am in bad mood. I sometimes go to the Drawing Club. Everything is quiet and peacefnl while I am drawing. I hope| ( b be a world-famous artist Besides, our school held the sports meeting last week. I finished third but I felt satisfied. I'm looking forward to the Reading Week. We can share thoughts with each other. At the same time,②I am also a volunteer in the Project Hope.③I feel fulfilled when helping others and he environment. I like my school. Colourful school activities always make me happy. ①用不定式作目的状语对句型进行升格 We get together to practise singing twice a week. ②用participate in对句型进行升格 I also participate in the Project Hope as a volunteer. ③用动名词作主语对句型进行升格 Helping others and the environment makes me feel fulfilled. 话题四 兴趣爱好 教材链接 写作角度 年级及单元 活题 个人基本情况 上Unit l This is me! Self-introduction; Appearance and hobbies 学校生活方面 七上Unit 4 My day School lives and likes 具体兴趣爱好 八上Unit 3 A day out outdoor activities; Tours around the town 八下Unit 2 Travelling Places of interest; Travel experiences and feelings 九上Unit 5 Art world Art forms and interests 高分词汇 [爱好] love爱 enjoy享受 prefer更喜欢 sing唱歌 dance跳舞 skate 滑冰 draw 画画 piano钢琴 guitar 吉他 violin小提琴 drum鼓 [休闲] relax放松 rest休息 play玩耍 read阅读 swim游泳paragliding滑翔伞运动 [短语] listen to music听音乐 swing dance摇摆舞 fly a kite放风筝 play games玩游戏 play baseball 打棒球 play football踢足球 watch movies看电影go to a concert参加音乐会 paper cutting剪纸 collect stamps/coins 收集邮票/硬币become interested in变得对……感兴趣 take action采取行动 be thirsty for渴望 经典句型 1. I like ping-pong. It is easy for me. 我喜欢乒乓球。对我来说,它是容易的。 2. She likes watching movies in her free time. 在空闲时间,她喜欢看电影。 3. Most students have hobbies, such as painting and growing flowers. 大多数学生有爱好.比如绘画和养花。 4. I prefer traditional music to popular music. 比起流行音乐,我更喜欢传统音乐。 5. Mr Wei likes music that he can sing along with. 魏先生喜欢他能够随之哼唱的音乐。 典例分析 典型例题 每个人都有自己的业余爱好。有益的业余爱好不但可以陶冶我们的情操、增强我们的体质、放松我们的身心,还能让我们在学习或工作时精力更旺盛、效率更高。作为一名中学生,你在忙碌的学习之余做些什么?请根据以下提示写一篇短文,谈一谈你的业余爱好。 内容包括: 1.你的业余爱好; 2.你从事业余爱好的一次经历; 3.你的业余爱好对你的学习和生活的影响。 注意; 1.词数100左右; 2.文中不得出现真实校名和姓名等相关信息。 步骤分析 Step 1:快速审题 审人称:第一人称 审时态:以一般现在时和一般过去时为主 审体裁:夹叙夹议文 My hobby Beginning Everyone has his or her own hobby. As for me, _ Main body When did this happen? What happened in detail? How did you feel during the whole experience? Ending It helps me realize the importance of_ . It makes me aware of_. It is a good way to build up my confidence and_ Step 3:衔接成作 试着用衔接词at that time、from then on、what's more衔接成篇。 组句成篇 句型升格 Everyone has his or her own hobby. Some people enjoy collecting stamps while others choose to spend their free time on sports. As for me, I like painting. I began learning to paint at the age of seven. At that time, I was taken by my mother to a painting class by chance.①When I first tried it, I became interested in this kind of art. It could show beauty to people and express my feelings. From then on, my parents bought a lot of paints and brushes for me.②Now if time allows, I will spend lots of time in painting. ③Painting helps me stay focused. It is also good or my studies. What's more, painting makes my life colourful and meaningful ①用On/Upon doing sth.对句型进行升格 On/Upon trying it, I became interested in this kind of art. ②用bury oneself in doing sth.对句型进行升格 Now if time allows, I will bury myself in painting. ③用which引导的定语从句对句型进行升格 Painting helps me stay focused. which is also good for my studies. 话题五 身心健康 教材链接 写作角度 年级及单元 话题 身体健康 七上Unit 2 Let’s play sports Sports and health 上Unit 6 Food and lifestyle The healthy lifestyle 八上Unit 8 Natural disasters Awareness of safety 心理健康 九上Unit 2 Colours Moods and feelings 九上Unit 3 Teenage problems Deal with stress and relationship problems 高分词汇 单词 [食物] food食物 fruit水果 vegetable蔬菜 apple苹果 banana香蕉 rice米饭 porridge粥 potato土豆tomato西红柿carrot胡萝卜 watermelon西瓜onion洋葱 meat肉类 beef牛肉mutton羊肉 pork猪肉 fish鱼肉 noodles面条 dumpling饺子sandwich三明治 sugar糖 corn玉米 honey蜂蜜 cake蛋糕 pancake烙饼 [饮料] drink饮料 milk牛奶 yogurt酸奶 water 水 tea茶 juice果汁 coffee咖啡 [疾病] illness 疾病 headache头痛 stomachache toothache牙痛 cough咳嗽 hurt受伤 sick生病的 sore酸痛的 [习惯] sleep睡眠 exercise锻炼 smile微笑 lie躺下 break休息 短语 junk food垃圾食品 take a break休息 have a fever发烧 have a cold患感冒 have a toothache才痛 go to a doctor去看医生take medicine服药 have good habits有好习惯keep healthy保持健康 make a wish许愿… take one's order给某人点菜 经典句型 1. It's very important for us to eat healthy food. 对我们来说,吃健康的食物很重要。 2. I don't like hamburgers for dinner. They are not healthy. 我晚餐不喜欢(吃)汉堡。它们不健康。 3. The best way to relax is through exercise. 放松的最佳方式是锻炼。 4. You have to learn more about healthy habits. 你必须更多地学习健康的习惯。 5. A balanced diet is good for our health. 一个均衡的饮食对我们的健康有好处。 6.We should remember to wash our hands before and after meals 我们应该记住饭前饭后要洗手。 典例分析 典型例题 你的安全牵动着家长、老师、朋友们的心,也是你健康成长的保障。请你根据图中有关内容写一篇短文,告诉同学们应如何保障自身安全。 注意: 1.短文须包含所有提示要点,可适当发挥; 2.词数100左右; 3.文中不得出现真实校名和姓名等信息。 步骤分析 Step 1:快速审题 审人称:第一人称 审时态:一般现在时 审体裁:说明文 Step 2:细列要点 How to protect ourselves Beginning Everyone has only one life. Therefore, we should_ Main body Don't swim in deep lakes or rivers Follow traffic rules. Ending Safety comes first. Step 3:衔接成作 试着用衔接词firstly、secondly、in a word衔接成篇。 组句成篇 句型升格 Everyone has only one life. It is our parents ’best wishes to see us grow up happily and healthily. Therefore, we should treasure our lives. So how can we protect our lives? Firstly,① we shouldn't swim alone, especially in deep lakes or rivers, b Because many teenagers end up dead from drowning accidents. If we really want to swim, we should go to the swimming pool with our friends or parents. Secondly②we must follow traffic rules.Everyone nould watch out when crossing the road. And we also sho uld not play on the road. In a word,③we should always remember that afety es first. ①用in no case should sb do sth 对句型进行升格 In no case should we swim alone. especially in deep lakes or rivers. ②用it is a must to do sth对句型生格 it is a must to follow traffic rules. ③用keep in mind that生格句型 we should always remember that safety comes first。 话题六 语言学习 写作角度 年级及单元 话题 诗歌学习 七下Unit 8 Pets Favourite pets 八上Unit 7 Seasons Get close to nature 课外阅读 七下Unit 6 Outdoor fun How to read a good book 八下Unit 4 A good read Reading habits 高分词汇 单词 [学习用品] pen钢笔 pencil铅笔 folder文件夹 ruler尺子 schoolbag书包 notebook笔记本 map地图, desk课桌 chair椅子 dictionary字典 [学校设施] school学校 classroom教室 playground操场 lab实验室 college学院 university大学 [学习方法] practice 练习 train训练 review复习 discuss讨论 improve改进 pass 通过 fail不及格 mark分数 guess猜测 learn学习 method方法 problem问题difficulty难题prize奖品 solve解决 exam考试 test测验 score分数 grade年级 result结果 短语 tape player磁带播放机 make a mistake犯错误 go over复习 make progress取得进步 think about考虐 look up查阅 write down写下look through浏览 take up开始做 read aloud大声读 learn from向……学习take notes记笔记 ask sb for help向某人求助 follow sb’s advice听从某人的建议 经典句型 1. Schools are good places for students to get knowledge and make friends 对学生来说,学校是获得知识和交朋友的好地方。 2. We could solve different problems with the help of the textbooks. 我们可以在教科书的帮助下解决各种各样的问题。 3. Our school starts at eight in the morning from Monday to Friday. 从周一到周五,我们学校在上午八点开始上课。 4. It's very lucky for us to have such a good learning environment 我们很幸运能拥有如此好的学习环境。 5. The English teacher spoke so quickly that I couldn't understand him. 英语老师讲得如此快以至于我听不懂。 6. Don't be afraid to make mistakes. They can help us to learn better 不要害怕犯错误。它们(错误)能帮助我们学得更好。 7. Try to connect what you need to learn with something interesting. 试着把你需要学习的东西和有趣的事物联系起来。 典例分析 典型例题 据了解,为了进一步提高中学生的英语口语交际能力,避免“哑巴英语”,学校打算在期中、期末英语测试中增加口语。假设你是李华,你的英语口语比较优秀,学校邀请你结合自身的学习经验,用英语写一封建议信,刊登在校园网英语学习饭块,为其他学生提出建议。 内容包括: 1.说明当前学生英语口语现状; 2.如何提高口语(至少两点)。 注意: 1.词数100左右,已给出部分不计人总词数; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 参考词汇:fluently流利地;recite背诵 My dear schoolmates, _ I hope my suggestions can help you. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 步骤分析 Step 1:快速审题 审人称:以第一人称为主 审时态:一般现在时 审体裁:应用文 Step 2:细列要点 How to improve your oral English Beginning Everyone_. Main body Read after a recording. Speak English more Recite. Ending hope my suggestions_. Step 3:衔接成作 试着用衔接词however、so、above all衔接成篇。 组句成篇 句型升格 My dear schoolmates, Everyone wants to be a good English speaker. However, It is not easy to make it.①I know most of you can't speak English fluently. So I'm pleased to share my experience with you. Above all , reading after a recording is a good way to practice pronunciation.②secondly, you should speak English with your teachers or classmates more. Don't be afraid of making mistakes or losing face.③Third, it is important to recite. The more you recite, the easier you will find speaking English I hope my suggestions can help you Yours sincerely, Li Hua ①用have trouble doing sth.对句型进行升格 I know most of you have trouble speaking English fluently. ②用as much as possible对句型进行升格 Second, you should talk as much as possible with your teachers or classmates in English. ③用it is of great importance to do sth.对句型进行升格 Third, it is of great importance to recite. 话题七 工作与职业 教材链接 写作角度 年级及单元 话题 性格与工作 九上Unit l Know yourself Personalities and jobs 艺术爱好 九上Unit 5 Art world Art forms and interests 角色与魅力 九上Unit 7 Films Characters and charm 职业成就与贡献 九下Unit 2 Great people Career achievements and contributions 高分词汇 单词 [职业] cook厨师 worker工人 teacher教师 doctor医生 model模特 violinist小提琴手 policeman 警察 dentist牙医 writer作家 nurse护士 director导演scientist科学家pianist钢琴家 artist艺术家 dancer舞者 fireman消防员 engineer工程师 expert专家 musician 音乐家 driver司机 guide导游 pilot飞行员 farmer农民 astronaut宇航员 [家务劳动] housework家务劳动 waste废物 rubbish垃圾 throw扔 sweep打扫 wash洗 mess杂乱 dig挖; [实践经历] volunteer志愿者 raise募集 repair修理 sign标志 train训练 notice通知 carry提;扛 satisfied满意的 realize认识到 unforgettable难忘的 pleased开心的 excited激动的 guilty内疚的 tired疲倦的 proud骄傲的 surprised吃惊的 angry生气的 sad悲伤的 happy高兴的uncomfortable令人不舒服的unexpected出乎意料的 短语 do the dishes洗碗 let sb down使某人失望 fold the clothes叠衣服 tidy up整理好;收拾妥 turn on打开 take pride in/be proud of为……感到自豪 clean up打扫十净 cheer up使振作起来 give out/hand out分发 call up打电话给 try out试用 give away捐赠 set up建立 take part in参加 经典句型 1. I want to be a basketball player 我想成为一名篮球运动员。 2. Not everyone knows what they want to be. Just make sure you try your best. 不是所有人都知道自己想成为什么样的人。只要确保你尽了最大的努力。 3, I think I am going to be a teacher because I like communicating with children. 我想我会成为一名教师,因为我喜欢和孩子们交流。 4. My friend and I would like to be singers. We are going to take singing lessons. 我和我的朋友想成为歌手。我们打算去上声乐课。 5. I decide to be a doctor, because doctors not only are respected, but also can save people's lives. 我决定当一名医生,因为医生不仅受人尊敬,而且可以救人性命。 6. Could you take out the rubbish, fold the clothes and do the dishes? 你能倒垃圾、叠衣服和洗碗吗? 7. I think it is very important for children to learn how to help their parents with housework. 我认为孩子们学习如何帮助父母做家务很重要。 8. Doing chores helps to develop children s independence and teaches them how to look after themselves. 做家务有助于培养孩子们的独立性并教他们如何照顾自己。 9. The earlier kids learn to be independent, the better it is for their future. 孩子们越早学会独立,对他们的未来就越好。 典例分析 典型例题 我们在成长过程中遇到了很多老师,他们就是我们的第二父母,他们给了我们很多帮助和指导。回顾曾经的点点滴滴,很多老师让我们久久不能忘怀。在你的心中,你最喜爱的是哪一位老师?为什么?请以“My favorite teacher”为题,写一篇100词左右的英语作文。 My favorite teacher _ 步骤分析 Step 1:快速审题 审人称:第一人称和第三人称 审时态:以一般现在时和一般过去时为主 审体裁:记叙文 Step 2:细列要点 My favourite teacher Beginning _my favourite teacher. I feel honored to be a student of_. She is _. Main body She helped me in many ways One day, _. Ending I will be grateful to_ forever. Step 3:衔接成作 试着用衔接词and、“so… that…”衔接成篇。 组句成篇 句型升格 My favourite teacher Ms Jiang is my favourite teacher. As the saying goes, teachers are our second parents." For three years in my junior high, I feel honoured to be a student of Ms Jiang, my Maths teacher. She is so kind and friendly that she is just like a close friend She helped me in many ways. One day, there was a| difficult problem about percentages. We students and even some of our teachers were puzzled at it. I couldn't understand how to solve it and had to ask her for help any times.①But Ms Jiang explained patiently. I figured out how to solve it in the end ② Ms Jiang opened the door to Maths fo me. I have been deeply in love with Maths.③I will be grateful to Ms Jiang for her understanding and kind encouragement forever. ①用with对句型进行升格 With Ms Jiang’s patient explanation. I figured out how to solve it in the end. ②用ever since对句型进行升格 Ever since Ms Jiang opened the door to Maths for me. I have been deeply in love with it. ③用“Never could I thank…too much for.”对句型讲行升格 Never could I thank Ms Jiang too much for her understanding and kind encouragement. 话题八 人际交往 教材链接 写作角度 年级及单元 话题 人物性格 八上Unit l Friends Appearance and personalities 校园人际交往 八上Unit 2 School life School lives and the ideal school 社会责任与公共场合礼仪 八下Unit 5 Good manners Politeness and behavior 八下Unit 6 Sunshine for all Social responsibilities 八下Unit 7 International charities Charity work 八下Unit 8 A green world Green lifestyle; Nature protection 高分词汇 单词 [交流与合作] polite有礼貌的 decide决定 behavior举止 visit拜访 proper合适的 suggest/advise建议 ask询问solve解决 believe相信 communicate交流 promise承诺provide提供treat款待 congratulate 祝贺explain 解释 agree同意 discuss讨论 friendly友好的 alone独自 team团队reply答复 friendship友谊 accept接受 understand理解 follow跟随 honest诚实的 invite邀请responsibility责任 group组;群 refuse拒绝 helpful乐于助人的 trust信任 短语 team spirit团队精神 keep one’s word 遵守诺言 look forward to盼望 hear from sb.收到某人的信件(或由话等) be responsible for对……负责 help sbout帮助某人分担工作/摆脱困境 经典句型 1. I found my younger sister looking through my things yesterday. She took some of my new magazines and CDs. 昨天我发现我妹妹在翻看我的东西。她拿走了我的一些杂志和光盘。 2.My problem is that I can't get on with my family. 我的问题是我和我的家人相处不好。 3. It makes Alice fairly unhappy because she thinks Julie is now better friends with me than with her. 这让爱丽丝很不开心,因为她认为朱莉现在和我的关系比和她的要好。 4. She encourages me to be kind to others and learn to communicate with others. 她鼓励我待人友善,学会与他人沟通。 5. Nowadays, most of us have trouble in communicating with our parents, because we don't have enough time to stay together and cannot understand each other. 现在,我们大数人和父母沟通有困难,因为我们没有足够的时间待在一起,无法相互理解。 6. Try to think about things from your parent’s point of view, and you'll find that you can understand them. 试着从你的父母的角度考虑事情,然后你就会发现你能够理解他们了。 典例分析 典型例题 真善美是每个时代都会倡导的主题。一个充满爱心的人无论走到哪里,都会像火光一羊温暖和照亮周围的世界!假设你是李明,你们学校正在举办主题为“付出即是收获”的征文活动,请你联系自己平时的爱心行为和感受写一篇文章投稿。 注意: 1.100词左右,已给出部分不计入总词数; 2.文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名等信息。 Giving is receiving I'm a student from Green Middle School. My name is Li Ming. _ 步骤分析 Step 1:快速审题 审人称:第一人称 审时态:一般现在时 审体裁:记叙文 Step 2:细列要点 Giving is receiving Beginning I like to help others because I think it makes me very happy. | Main body Classmates: _. The elderly: _. Children:_. Charities: _. Ending helping others is helping ourselves Step 3:衔接成作 试着用衔接词because、also、so衔接成篇。 组句成篇 型升格 Giving is receiving I'm a student from Green Middle School. My name Li Ming. I like to help others because I think it makes me very happy. ① I often help my classmates with their schoolwork. Sometimes I help clean up the city parks. I go to the old people's home and do some cleaning for them once a month. So I'm pretty popular there. ② I often visit the children's hospital and cheer the sick ids up. I read stories and sing songs. I am good with hildren. I also give money to charities to help people in rouble. ③I think giving is receiving Helping others is helping urselves. Do you agree with me? ①用“not only…but also…”对句型进行升格 Not only do I often help my classmates with their schoolwork, but also I sometimes help clean up the city parks. ②用when引导的时间状语从句以及不定式作目的状语对句型进行升格 When I visit the children's hospital, I often read stories and sing songs to cheer the sick kids up. ③用“As the old saying goes.”对型进行升格 As the old saying goes, giving is receiving. 话题九 社会服务 教材链接 写作角度 年级及单元 话题 社会关爱 七下Unit 2 Neighbors Help each other 个人能力和责任 七下Unit 7 Abilities Know your good qualities; A recommendation letter. 社交礼仪 八下Unit 5 Good manners Politeness and behavior. 社会责任 八下Unit 6 Sunshine for all Social responsibilities 慈善之举 八下Unit 7 International charities Charity work. 环保责任 八下Unit 8 A green word Green lifestyle; Nature protection 高分词汇 单词 [志愿活动] help帮助 offer主动提出 society社会 warmth温暖 prepare准备 organize组织 charity慈善 kindness善良 短语 in need of需要 tell stories讲故事 care for关心 free time空闲时间 cheer up振作起采be ready to 准备好 be willing to愿意 old people's home敬老院volunteer activity志愿活动 make a difference有影响;有作用 have difficulty in doing sth 在做某事上有困难 经典句型 1. We need to come up with a plan for City Park Clean-Up Day. 我们需要为城市公园清洁日想出一个计划。 2. A lot of old people are very lonely. We should listen to them and care for them. 许多老年人很孤独。我们应该倾听他们,照顾他们。 3. Volunteering here is a dream come true for me. I can do what I love to do and help others at the same time 在这里做志愿工作对我来说是梦想成真。我可以做我喜欢做的事,同时帮助他人。 4. Volunteering to help these people is a good way to spend our free time. 自愿帮助这些人是一种很好的度过我们的空闲时间的方式。 典例分析 典型例题 (2023 宿迁市宿豫区模拟)为了倡导青少年有梦想、有行动,成为对社会有用之人,阳光中学英文校刊开展了题为“Be a strong Chinese teenager”的征稿活动。假设你是李华,请根据以下思维导图展开合理想象,写一篇英文短文参加征稿活动。 注意: 1.语意连贯、层次清楚、书写规范; 2.词数100左右,已给出部分不计入总词数; 3.文中不得出现真实的校名与姓名等信息。 Be a strong Chinese teenager With the fast development of science and technology, China has become one of the most powerful countries in the world. A strong China needs strong teenagers, so it's our duty to improve ourselves. _. 步骤分析 Step 1:快速审题 审人称:第一人称 审时态:一般现在时 审体裁:议论文 Step 2:细列要点 Be a strong Chinese teenager Beginning A strong China needs strong teenagers. so it's our duty to improve ourselves. Main body Studies health volunteering Ending If we follow these, we will be strong enough to realize our dreams. Step 3:衔接成作 试着用衔接词first、second、last but not least衔接成篇。 组句成篇 句型升格 Be a strong Chinese teenager With the fast development of science and technology, China has become one of the most powerful countries in the world. A strong China needs strong teenagers, so it’s our duty to improve ourselves ① I think we have lots of things to do. First, ②we should take an interest in our studies and we must work|②nard to make progress. At the same time, we should have good study methods, such as listening carefully in class and going over what we have learnt in time. Second, it's helpful to be in good health.③We'd better have enough healthy food instead of junk food And we should spend at least an hour doing sports every day. Last but not least, we can spend our weekends doing some voluntary work at our community center or in the old people's home. If we follow these, we will be strong enough to realize our dreams ①用as far as I'm concerned、personally、frankly speaking等适合引出观点的衔接词对句型进行升格 As far as I'm concerned. we have lots of things to do. ②用be supposed to和spare no effort to do sth.对句型进行升格 we are supposed to take an interest in our studies and spare no effort to make progress. 3用“not only…but also…”对句型进行升格 Not only should we have enough healthy food instead of junk food. but also we should spend at least an hour doing sports every day. 话题十 居住环境 教材链接 写作角度 年级及单元 话题 社会居住环境 七下Unit 1 Dream homes Homes around the world 七下Unit 3Welcome to Sunshine Town! Introduce and be proud of your hometown 八下Unit 1 Past and present Social development 八下Unit 8 A green world Green lifestyle; Nature protection 社会人文环境 七下Unit 2 Neighbors Help each other 八下Unit 5 Good manners Politeness and behavior 九下 Unit l Asia Countries and local cultures 高分词汇 单词 [自然生态] animal动物 plant植物pet宠物 panda熊猫 tiger老虎 lion狮子elephant大象 bear熊monkey猴 snake蛇 mouse老鼠 bird鸟 sheep绵羊; horse马 rabbit兔子 wolf狼 flower花 tree树 leaf树叶 season 季节 spring春季 autumn/fall秋季 winter冬天weather天气 rain雨水;下雨snow 雪shower 阵雨area地区 wind风;气流 fog雾temperature温序degree度数 heat热;高温 blow吹;刮 shine发光;照耀cloudy多云的rainy多雨的sunny晴朗的 snowy下雪的windy多风的 dry干燥的wet朝湿的 hot热的warm温暖的 cold寒冷 nature自然 树林forest森林 hill小山 mountain高山 island岛 rock岩石 ground地面 land陆地;土地river河 lake湖;湖泊 stone石头 sand沙beach沙滩 ice 冰 短语 waste water废水 harmful gases有害气体 cut down trees砍伐树木 water/air pollution水/空气污染 deal/do with处理 make laws制定法律 take part in/join in参加 put sth.to good use好好利用某物 stop/keep sb from doing sth阻止某人做某事 wash away冲走 fall down倒塌 first aid急救 save one's life挽救某人的生命 look out当心 fall into落入 make sure确保 all of a sudden突然 in danger处于危险中 pay attention to注意 by oneself独自;独立地 take it easy别着急;别紧张;放轻松at the same time同时 shout at sb 朝某人大 叫 happen to do sth 碰巧做某事 经典句型 1. But elephants are in great danger. People cut down many trees, so elephants are losing their homes. 但是大象处于极大的危险之中。人们砍伐了许多树木,所以大象正在失去它们的家园。 2. Of all the mountains, Qomolangma rises the highest and it is the most famous 在所有的山中,珠穆朗玛峰是最高的并且是最著名的。 3. It also shows that the forces of nature are extremely powerful. 这也证明,自然的威力极其强大。 4. It is clear that water pollution is becoming worse and worse 很显然,水污染正变得越来越严重。 5. We must save the trees and not buy things made of ivory. 我们必须拯救树木,并且拒绝购买象牙制品。 6. We can use less water and plant more trees. 我们可用更少的水,种更多的树。 7. Everyone should play a part in saving the earth. 每个人都应该在拯救地球中发挥作用。 8. If every one of us is kind, generous and helpful to each other, a social climate where every person will be deeply loved and cared in this humane city will definitely be created. 如果我们每个人都是善良的、慷慨的、互相帮助的,那么在这个人道的城市里,一个每个人都将被深深护和关心的社会氛围一定会被创建。 9. Only in this way will our communal home become more charming and glamorous. 只有这样,我们共同的家园才会变得更加迷人和独特。 典例分析 典型例题 (203 苏州)Happy Home Club本期的主题是“How to make Suzhou more beautiful”。你打算以“Starting from me and now”为题向中外朋友介绍你的想法,请你用英语写一篇发言稿,内容包括: 1.触动你的一件事情; 2.这件事给你的启示;干少 3.你的倡议。 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.内浣整(照抄阅读语篇不得分); 3.文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等相关信息。 Starting from me and now _ 步骤分析 Step 1:快速审题 审人称:第一人称和第三人称 审时态:以一般现在时和一般过去时为主 审体裁:应用文 Starting from me and now Beginning Hello, everyone. Today I want to share my idea about how to make Suzhou more beautiful with you. Main body Experiences: _. Thoughts & advice: _. Ending I