读后续写背诵及检测-2025届高三上学期英语作文复习专项

读后续写 ★ 写作指导： 一、三大原则 1.原文一致原则： 内容要前后衔接，上下连贯语言表达风格一致。 2.正能量原则： 故事内容一定要正能量，弘扬社会主义核心价值观。如迷路了但最终一定回到了家；失败了或遇到困难了，但最终一定成功了；吵架了但最后一定是言归于好，和睦相处；犯错了，最后一定会改过自新，重新做人；贼逃了，最后一定是绳之以法，等等。 3. 曲折性原则： 凡是故事都应有跌宕起伏，其中人物会遇到困难或问题，但最终能解决。 二、两句口诀 1. 两段首句定一框 由续写的第一段首句与第二段首句确定第一段的框架。 2. 二框二首正能量 第二段的框架，由第二段首句与正能量结尾来确定。 三、四个步骤 1. 读懂大意，理清脉络： 读所给的不完整故事，弄清大意和主题，理清故事的主要人物和事件。 2. 细读首句，构思框架： 仔细阅读所给两段的首句，结合正能量结尾，思考大致框架。 3. 增加细节，开始写作： 依据情节发和常识，在确定的框架内，可按“所见/遇所想，所为所感”等构思具体细节。 4. 修改润色，整洁誊写： 思考再三，把修正润色后的续写整洁地写入答卷。 adj. 情绪名词n. 喜 开心/喜悦/兴奋 happy happiness delighted delight joyous / joyful joy pleased / cheerful / excited excitement thrilled thrill 感激/感动 grateful gratitude / appreciation obliged / indebted / 钦佩/欣赏/赞赏 admirable admiration 惊讶/吃惊 surprised surprise amazed amazement astonished astonishment 希望 hopeful hope optimistic / positive optimist n.乐观者 ambitious 有雄心的 ambition 抱负，雄心，追求 confident 自信的 confidence 自信，信心 宽慰/欣慰 relieved 宽慰的，放心的 relief 宽慰，安心 怒 生气/愤怒 furious 狂怒的，暴怒的 fury 狂怒，暴怒 angry anger annoyed annoyance 哀 悲伤/难过 sad / blue sadness / grief 悲伤 sorrowful sorrow 悲痛，伤心，惋惜 愧疚/悔恨 guilty 有罪的，内疚的 guilt 内疚，自责 regretful 悔恨的，遗憾的 regret 绝望/无望 hopeless desperate 绝望的，孤注一掷的 despair 绝望 惧 害怕/恐惧 afraid / scared scare frightened fright fearful 胆怯的，害怕的 fear panic 惊慌的 panic 惊慌，恐慌 焦虑/紧张不安 nervous 紧张的，焦虑的 nervousness anxious 焦急的，焦虑的 anxiety stressful 紧张的，有压力的 stress/pressure ★ 写作技巧 一、无灵主语（用无生命的事物做主语） 【1】a burst/flush/wave/sense/surge of + 情绪名词 + 固定动词 + sb. (+as/when sb. did sth.) 固定动词 seize / catch(过去式caught) 抓住 strike(过去式struck) 袭击 surround 围绕，包围 take hold of(过去式took) 控制 come over(过去式came) 包围/支配 envelop 笼罩 blanket 笼罩，覆盖 swallow/engulf 吞没 flood over 充满 sweep upon(过去式swept) 席卷 give way to(过去式gave) 让步于 e.g. I’m happy. 当听见这条好消息时我很开心。 ① 换主语(情绪名词+固定动词) ________________________________________ ② 加短语 ___________________________________________________________________ ③ 加副词 ___________________________________________________________________ （突然/立刻：Instantly、Suddenly、All of a sudden、Immediately......） ④ 加时间状语从句 ____________________________________________________________ ★ 佳句背诵 1、 All of a sudden, panic seized her. 她突然惊慌失措。 2、 A great sense of relief flooded over him. 他深感宽慰。 3、 At the sight of his old friend, a flush of happiness swept over him. 一见到他老朋友一种幸福感觉席卷了他。 4、 His nervousness immediately gave way to gratitude and pleasure. 他的紧张立刻被感激和快乐所取代。 5、 When I heard the approach of the writing contest, a wave of nervousness overwhelmed me. 当我听到写作比赛的临近时，一阵紧张使我不知所措。 【2】时间/地点/场景 + 固定动词 + 事物/sb. ① 时间、地点、场景 时间类：last night, the year 2024, the morning 地点类：school; stadium; my hometown 场景类：dawn; the scene; the visit ② 有灵动词（固定动词） witness 目击，见证 see 看见 rule 笼罩 fall 降临 fill 充满 tell 告知 spread through 传遍 ★ 佳句背诵 1、 The smell of breakfast filled the air in the kitchen. 早餐的香味弥漫在厨房的空气中。 2、 Night approaching, ________________________. 夜幕降临，黑暗笼罩着整个森林。 3、 The stadium has seen many exciting football matches. 体育场里举办过很多精彩的足球赛。 4、 _____________________________________________ 过去的30年见证了中国巨大的变化。 5、 The year 1949 witnessed the founding of the People’s Republic of China. 1949年中华人民共和国成立了。 【3】自然现象 + 固定动词 + 事物/sb. ① 自然现象 fog雾 rain 雨水 snow 大雪 wind 大风 earthquake地震 sunshine阳光 moonlight 月光 snowstorm暴雪 ② 有灵动词 （固定动词） blanket 覆盖 rule 统治 flood into 涌进 come 到来 bring 带来 prevent 阻止 hit 击中；使想到 threaten 威胁 strike 使突然想起，碰 ★ 佳句背诵 1、 The heavy rain prevented tourists from enjoying the full moon. 大雨使游客无法欣赏满月。 2、 At midnight the sky became clearer and the stars _______ brighter. 午夜时分，天空变得更清晰，星星也变得更明亮。 3、 The snowflakes ________ in the night air, making a beautiful picture. 雪花在空中飞舞，像一幅美丽的图画。 4、 Sunlight ________________ the window when Anne awoke and sat up in bed. 当安妮醒来坐在床上时，阳光照进了窗户。 5、 The gentle breeze _________ his head, as if comforting all his tiredness. 微风轻抚着他的头，仿佛抚慰了他所有的疲惫。 【4】主语（表示思考动作行为的名词）+ 固定动词 + 事物/ sb ① 表示思考动作 行为的名词 thought 想法 presence 出席，到场 visit访问 glance 瞥一眼 look 看一看 sight 看见 feeling 感觉 idea 主意 ② 有灵动词 （固定动词） remind 使提醒 drive 促使 arouse 唤醒 occur使想起 fill 充满 change 改变 bring 带来 pop into 突然进入 escape 遗忘，逃脱 overwhelm压垮；淹没 ★ 佳句背诵 1、 His name ____________ me at the moment. 他的名字我一时想不起来了。 2、 A ten minutes’ walk __________us to the museum. 步行十分钟我们就走到了博物馆。 3、 A brilliant idea suddenly _____________ my mind. 我突然想到了一个绝妙的主意。 4、 The sight of the picture ________________ the unforgettable trip to Hangzhou. 一看到这张照片我就想到了难忘的杭州之行。 5、 This experience reminds me of a saying that “Never judge a person by his appearance”. 这个故事使我想起了一句谚语“不能以貌取人”。 二、独立主格结构 主语 + 动词非谓语（有灵动词）， sb. did sth. 【注意：with】 ① 主语 身体部位：face heart hand leg eye fingers foot head 音容笑：tears smile laughter 笑声 throat 喉咙 sweat 汗水 ② 有灵动词（固定动词） brighten 使开心 fill 充满 stream 流淌 twinkle 闪烁 linger 继续存留 well up涌出 spread across浮现 blur 使视线模糊(blurred) light up露出喜色( lit up) e.g. 杰克走上舞台，紧张得汗流浃背。 ① 主谓宾 ________________________________________ ② 加独立主格 _________________________________________________________________ e.g. 当她看到草莓时，她的眼睛闪烁着喜悦和甜蜜。 ① 主谓宾 ________________________________________ ② 加独立主格 _________________________________________________________________ ③ 加时间状语 _________________________________________________________________ ★ 佳句背诵【注意：with】 ① Her hands were trembling with excitement as she opened the box. 当她打开盒子时，她的手激动得发抖。 ② All of a sudden, the twin’s face lit up with their head nodding firmly. 突然这对双胞胎的脸亮了起来，他们坚定地点头。 ③ When l realized that my diligent efforts had paid off, tears welled up in my eyes. 当我意识到我的勤奋努力得到了回报时，泪水夺眶而出。 三、非谓语 【情绪形容词1 + 情绪形容词2, sb. did sth, doing sth.】 e.g. 怀着自信与决心，杰克一直在跑，奋力到达终点。 ① 主谓宾 ________________________________________ ② 前加情绪形容词 _____________________________________________________________ ③ 后加非谓语(分动作) ___________________________________________________________ 四、让步状语从句（尽管......某人还是......） 情绪形容词 + as/though sb. + be动词, sb (still) did sth , [doing sth.] e.g. 杰克走上舞台。 ① 主谓宾 ________________________________________ ② 加让步状语从句 _____________________________________________________________ ③ 后加非谓语(分动作) ___________________________________________________________ 五、结果状语从句（某人如此......以至于......） sb. was so + 情绪形容词 + that从句 e.g. 她太伤心了，突然哭了起来。 ① 主谓宾 ________________________________________ ② 加结果状语从句 _____________________________________________________________ ★ 佳句背诵 ① ___________________my mind went blank. 我太紧张了，脑子一片空白。 ② 我如此害怕以至于脸色变得苍白，手心出汗。 ___________________ my face turned pale and my palms were sweating. ③ ___________________he was unable to utter a single word. 他吓得一句话也说不出来。 ④ 我既害怕又担心，不知道发生了什么。 __________________________________I didn’t know what happened. 六、动作链 公式一：主语+动作A+动作B and 动作C（三个并列谓语，动作依次发生） e.g. 歌手瞥一眼观众，深呼吸一下，就开始唱起来。 The singer _______ at the audience, ___________________ and __________________. ★ 仿写 ① He took a taxi to the police station. 他拦下一辆的士，拿着手提箱跳进去冲着司机说,“去警局。” He ______a taxi, ______with the suitcase and ______ the driver, “Go to the police station, please.” ② He patted me on the shoulder, saying softly, “Where there is a will, there is a way.”. 他走上前，拍了拍我的肩膀，轻声说：“有志者事竟成。” He stepped forward, patted me on the shoulder, and said softly, “Where there is a will, there is a way.” ③ I rushed home to get the cotton cat. 我冲回家，翻遍我收集的帽子，拿起那顶棉质的。 I rushed home, searched through my collection of hats and grabbed the cotton one. ④ I went to school in a hurry this morning. 我早上匆忙穿上大衣，抓起书包，骑着自行车匆忙去上学了。 I pulled on my coat hurriedly, grabbed my schoolbag and cycled to school this morning. ⑤ Jimmy quickly threw the meat at the fierce wolf. 吉米快速拿出肉，瞄准，径直朝凶猛的狼扔过去。 Jimmy quickly pulled out the meat, aimed at the wolf and threw it straight to the fierce animal. 公式二：Having done…, 主谓宾（表示先做了某事，再发生核心动作） e.g. 在银行排队等了一个小时后，这个女人变得不耐烦，然后离开了。 Having waited in line for an hour at the bank, the woman grew impatient and left. ★ 仿写 ① After having queued for 3 hours, he was told that the tickets had been sold out. 排了三个小时队后，他被告知票卖完了。 ______________ for 3 hours, he was told that the tickets had been sold out. ② After he told the truth, he felt at ease in his mind and returned home with a lighter heart. 说出真相后、他心里轻松了很多、心情放松地回家了。 Having told the truth, he felt at ease in his mind and returned home with a lighter heart. ③ After I promised that we would get there before five, I was seized with panic when the car broke down. 因为承诺了五点之前我们一定到那儿，所以当车抛锚的时候，我非常慌张。 Having promised that we would get there before five, I was seized with panic when the car broke down. ④ After waiting for a long time, I walked to school through the snow by myself. 等了很久之后，我独自在雪地里跋涉到学校。 Having waited for what seemed to be ages, I trudged to school through the snow by myself. ⑤ After experiencing so many failures one after another, she finally picked herself up. 她接连经历了那么多次失败后，终于振作起来了。 Having experienced so many failures one after another, she finally picked herself up. 【高考实战运用一】(2023年新高考I卷读后续写片段) A few weeks later, I almost forgot the contest when the news came. To my surprise, I was informed that my essay had ranked first in the contest. A mix of excitement and doubt washed over me. ____________________________________________________________________________（再三仔细检查后，我再也无法控制自己，立即与我的英语老师分享了这个消息。）Without her help, I would never have had the chance to obtain the honor. My face lit up with joy as I accepted the award, my smile filled with pride. I felt a burst of gratitude welling up in my heart and surging though me. 答案：Having double-checked it, I could no longer contain myself and promptly shared the news with my English teacher. 【高考实战运用二】(2022年新高考I卷读后续写片段) We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn't look at me. Tapping him gently on the shoulder, I asked David what had caused him to decide to give up the opportunity. 1__________________________________________________________________________（犹豫了一下，他低声回答：“你知道，我跑得很慢，而且我的跑步姿势很难看，这会让别人嘲笑我。”）2_______________________________________________________________________________ （我笑了笑，摇摇头说：“事实上，所有的人都尊重和钦佩那些克服自己的困难，勇敢地实现目标的人。”）“Really?” He seemed to be in doubt about my words. Seeing me nod firmly, he wore his big toothy smile again, his eyes sparkling with excitement and curiosity. 答案：1. Having hesitated for a moment, he replied in a low voice, “You know, I run very slowly and my running posture is ugly, which will result in others laughing at me.” 3. I smiled, shook my head and said, “As a matter of fact, all the people respect and admire those who overcome their own difficulties and bravely achieve their goals.” 七、修辞 1. 比喻- like, as, seem, as...as, as if, as though 1　 (明) Love is like the wind, you can't see it but you can feel it. 爱如风，看不见但能感受到它。 2　 (明) The smile on her face shone like a diamond. 她的笑容像宝石一样闪闪发光。 3　 (明) I reached out to touch her face, which was as cold as the ice. 我伸手去摸她的脸，发现她的脸像冰一样冰冷。 4　 (明) I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness. 我感觉自己像漂浮在悲伤的海洋中。 5　 (暗) I felt a lump in my throat, tearing welling up in my eyes.我如鲠在喉，泪水湿润了眼眶。 2. 夸张-----使用数词、动词、形容词、介词短语等 1　 My heart sank when he left. 当他离开时我心都碎了。 2　 I was so hungry that I could eat a horse. 我很饿以致于可以吃掉一只马。 3　 When they told the news, I was on the top of the world. 当他们告诉我这个消息时，我乐不可支。 4　 When she heard the bad news, a river of tears poured out.听到这个坏消息时，她泪流成河。 5　 Hearing the news, she found scores of arrows were piercing her chest. 听到这个消息，她感到万剑穿心。 3. 拟人----把自然现象、抽象的概念、动物当作人来描写（无灵主语） 1　 Anger choked my words. 我气得说不出话来。 2　 Birds on the tree are singing a beautiful song. 树上的小鸟在树上唱着美妙的歌曲。 3　 The breeze gently kissed her cheeks. 微风轻柔地亲吻着她的脸庞。 4　 Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest. 顷刻间，黑暗统治了森林。 5　 The church has witnessed the city's changes in the past 20 years. 这个教堂目睹了这个城市20年的变化。 4. 排比----把结构相似、意思相关、语气一致的词句成串地排列 1　 Reading makes us wise and exercises make us strong. 读书使我们睿智，锻炼使我们强健。 2　 Whether in class, at work, or at home, James was always busy. 无论是在课堂, 在工作, 还是在家, James总是忙。 3　 The afternoon sunlight fell on the grass, the wind blew lightly, and the water flew silently down the stream. 午后的阳光洒落在草地上，风轻轻地吹着，水静静地顺着小溪往下流。 八、结尾升华 1　 What an unforgettable experience! 多么难忘的经历啊！ 2　 True friendship is like a lighthouse, guiding you home. 真正的友情就像灯塔，指引你回家。 3　 From then on, I was determined to pass on love to others.从那时起我就决定把爱传递给别人。 4　 Just as a saying goes: “Rose given and fragrance in hands.” 正如谚语所说：“赠人玫瑰，手留余香。” 5　 The unforgettable experience has made me realize that helping others is the source of happiness. 这次难忘的经历让我意识到帮助别人是快乐的源泉。 6　 That unforgettable experience was carved into my heart, which I will cherish forever in my life！ 那段难忘的经历刻在我的心里，我将在人生中永远珍惜它！ 7　 Friendship is like the light of fireflies. The darker it is, the brighter the light will be. 友谊就像萤火虫的光。越暗光就越亮。 8　 This unforgettable experience taught me that friends are like an umbrella and whether it’s sunny or rainy, they will always be there for you. 这段难忘的经历教会了我，朋友就像一把伞，无论晴天还是雨天，他们都会一直在你身边。 9　 The special experience is like an everlasting flower, blooming in the river of my memories. 这个特殊经历就像一朵永恒的花朵，盛放在我记忆的长河里。 10　 It dawned on Adam that one should stick to his dream no matter what happens. 亚当突然想到无论发生什么事，都要坚持自己的梦想。 11　 The setting sun cast a golden glow on the boys, witnessing the start of a new friendship. 夕阳的余晖洒在孩子们的身上，见证了一段新友谊的开始。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$