写作专训Unit 6～10课件-2024-2025学年人教版英语（河南地区）八年级上册

写作专训　Section B 3a～4 Unit 6　I'm going to study computer science [经典例题] 　　（2023·许昌襄城县期末）一艘没有目标的船，任何方向的风都是 逆风。提前做好规划并严格实施对每个人来说都非常重要。新的一年即 将来到，学校准备举办一次英文演讲比赛，请以“My New Yew’s resolutions”为题，根据下方的思维导图的内容写一篇演讲稿。 返回目录 　　要点：1. 自我介绍；2. 根据思维导图介绍你的新年规划，包含所有 要点；3. 制订计划的重要性。 　　要求：1. 语句通顺、连贯，不少于80词；2. 文中不得出现真实姓名 和校名。 返回目录 [高分范文] My New Year’s resolutions ① The New Year is coming. It is a good time to make resolutions. ② My first resolution is about my physical health. Next year， I will eat healthy food， take up swimming and try my best to help my parents do housework. ③ Next， I promise myself that I will be more hard-working at school than before. Then， I’ll improve my writing skills. This year， I wrote about 30 short stories. Next year， I will try to finish a novel. My dream job is to be a writer. ④ At last， I promise to keep all those resolutions. 返回目录 　　[名师点评] 　　短文阐述了作者制订的新年规划，思路清晰，行文流畅，充分使用 长、短句及多个动词短语进行阐述，是一篇高分范文。 　　① 开篇点明写作主题——新年规划。 　　② first、 Next、 Then等顺序词的使用使短文具有极强的层次感和 逻辑性。 　　③ 句中promise myself that以及比较级的恰当运用体现了作者娴熟的写作技能，为短文增色不少。 　　④ 该句再次承诺实现 “新年规划”，首尾照应，体现了作者深厚 的写作功底。 返回目录 [开头句] 1. The New Year is coming soon and it’s time for us to make resolutions. 2. I’m glad to know that you want to be a pilot when you grow up. Here’s some of my advice. 3. Here are my New Year’s resolutions. 返回目录 [中间句] 1. You must work harder than before and get better grades next year. 2. I’m going to learn to care about others and try my best to help them more. 3. I plan to make a resolution to make myself better. [结尾句] 1. We can improve ourselves if we keep the resolutions. 2. I’m sure I can achieve my resolutions if I try my best. 3. I really hope your dream can come true. 返回目录 [名言警句] 1. Better late than never. 迟做总比不做好。 2. Think big， do small. 从大处着眼，从小事做起。 3. Where there is a will， there is a way. 有志者，事竟成。 返回目录 [小试身手] 　　（2023·郑州新密期末）农历新年即将到来，你是否为新的一年制 订了计划？请你以“My New Year’s plan”为题，用英语写一篇短文。 要点：1. 从学习、健康以及爱好培养等方面谈谈你的新年计划；2. 你会为自己的新年计划做出什么努力。 要求：1. 文中不能出现真实的姓名和校名；2. 词数80左右。 返回目录 [思路点拨] 　　① 时态：一般将来时；② 人称：以第一人称为主；③ 写作时：第 一段点明自己制订的新年计划，第二段介绍该计划的内容及对应的具体 行动，第三段总结计划的最终目标。 [写作提纲] 返回目录 [妙笔生花] My New Year’s plan ⁠ The lunar new year is coming， and I’ve made a New Year’s plan.　 ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ （更多精彩作文素材见“背记手册”） 　First， I’m going to get better grades. I am going to work hard at all my subjects， such as English， Chinese and so on. I will do my homework on time every day. And I will read more books to learn about different cultures. Second， I’m going to be healthier. I will do sports every day and eat more healthy food but less junk food to keep healthy. Third， in order to improve myself， I am going to take up some hobbies， like drawing and playing the piano.　 I want to be a very good student next year.　 ⁠ ⁠ ⁠v ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠v ⁠ ⁠ ⁠v ⁠ ⁠ ⁠v ⁠ ⁠ ⁠v ⁠ ⁠ ⁠v 返回目录 写作专训　Section B 3a～4 Unit 7　Will people have robots？ [经典例题] 　　（2023·郑州高新区期末）学校英文校报社正在以“Life in 2050” 为题对同学们进行问卷调查。请你根据写作要求，用英语写一篇调查报 告，向校报投稿。 返回目录 　　要求：1. 文中须包含思维导图提示的所有信息，可适当拓展；2. 文 中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；3. 词数80左右（开头已给出， 不计入总词数）。 返回目录 [高分范文] Life in 2050 ① These days， the school newspaper is making a survey（调查） of “Life in 2050” among us. Here are some of the results. ② My classmate Li Ming thinks there will be no more wars in 2050. People all over the world will live in peace. In Wang Mei’s opinion， there will be more robot doctors. ③ Therefore， we can live more healthily and happily. As for me， I think there will be no more pollution and that we can enjoy clean air and water every day. ④ All in all， whatever the future life will be like， we all believe it will be better and better. We will work hard for it. 返回目录 [名师点评] 　　短文介绍了作者及同学对2050年生活的美好设想，表达了自己对未 来生活的祝愿。短文语言精辟，层次分明，逻辑性强，不失为一篇高分 范文。 　　① 开篇点明主题是对同学们2050年生活的设想的调查结果，使读 者对本文主题一目了然。 　　② 使用一般将来时态及there will be结构增强了句子的感染力，富有 层次感。 　　③ 句中Therefore的运用，使上下句过渡自然，增强了文章的说服 力，体现了作者扎实的写作功底。 　　④ 句中用All in all总结全文， better and better、 work hard等短语的 运用体现了作者熟练驾驭语言的能力。 返回目录 [开头句] 1. What do you think life will be like in the future？ 2. In 2050， my life will be different from now. [中间句] 1. There will be less pollution and more trees in 20 years. 2. What’s more， robots can do all kinds of work instead of humans. 返回目录 [结尾句] 1. In short， I believe my life in 15 years will be much better than now. 2. In a word， our country will become stronger and more beautiful. [名言警句] 1. Youth is our future and our hope. 青年是我们的未来，是我们的希望。 2. Nothing is impossible to a willing heart. 心之所愿，无所不成。 返回目录 [小试身手] 　　（2023·驻马店上蔡县月考）随着科技的迅速发展，我们的生活方 式发生着巨大的变化。20年后，生活会有哪些变化呢？请你根据下列提 示，以“Life in 20 years”为题，写一篇英语短文，阐述你对未来20年 的预测。词数80左右。 　　提示：1. 将来哪些产品会对人们的生活产生巨大影响；2. 污染将会 更少；3. 你的观点。 返回目录 [思路点拨] 　　① 时态：一般将来时；② 人称：以第一人称为主；③ 写作时：第 一段点明20年后自己的生活与现在有所不同，第二段阐述20年后生活的 具体变化，第三段表达自己的观点。 [写作提纲] 返回目录 　In the daily life， there will be a lot of robots， and they can be helpful and useful. Robots will make our life much easier， so we will have less work to do and we can often travel and relax. And computers will be much more important than they are now. We will use them to do almost everything in life. At that time， we will use wind and sunlight as the main energy. There won’t be pollution anymore， and then we can see clean water and blue sky all year round.　 Life in 20 years ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ My life will be very different in 20 years.　 [妙笔生花] 返回目录 ⁠ ⁠ （更多精彩作文素材见“背记手册”） 　I think our life will get more and more comfortable. I believe it can come true with our hard work.　 返回目录 写作专训　Section B 3a～4 Unit 8　How do you make a banana milk shake？ [经典例题] 　　假设你上周末做了一种美食，而且做得很成功。你想在口语课上与 你的老师和同学分享这件快乐的事情，请用英语写一篇短文为你的发言 做准备。 　　要点：1. 介绍美食的制作过程；2. 你对此的感受。 　　要求：1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；2. 词数80左右，可适 当发挥。 返回目录 [高分范文] ① Hi，everybody！ I have something great to share with you！ I successfully made a chicken hamburger last weekend. Here I want to tell you how I made it. ② First， I put some tomato sauce on a piece of bread. ③ Next， I cut up some lettuce and put the lettuce on the bread. Then， I put some pieces of chicken on the lettuce. Finally， I put another piece of bread on the top. Well， a chicken hamburger was ready. ④ It tasted delicious. 返回目录 [名师点评] 　　短文介绍了作者制作鸡肉汉堡的过程，行文流畅，语言简洁明了， 叙事清楚，是一篇不错的范文。 　　① 开篇点题，分享制作鸡肉汉堡的方法。 　　② 使用First， Next， Then， Finally使得短文层层递进，极富 层次感。 　　③ 句中cut up等动词短语的恰当运用体现了作者扎实的写作功底。 　　④ 最后一句对制作结果进行总结，但句式较为普通。如果能够使 用感叹句式进行表达，则更能提升短文水平。 返回目录 [开头句] 1. Let me tell you how to make it now. 2. Here is a way to make a banana milk shake. [中间句] 1. First， peel an apple and oranges and cut them up. 2. After that， cook them for about ten minutes. 3. Finally， don’t forget to add some salt. 返回目录 [结尾句] 1. Now you can enjoy the delicious salad. 2. How delicious they are！ [名言警句] 1. One man’s meat is another man’s poison！ 萝卜青菜，各有所爱！ 2. Food is the first necessity of people. 民以食为天。 返回目录 [小试身手] 　　请你根据表格内容提示，写一篇题为“How to make fried rice with eggs”的短文，介绍蛋炒饭的制作过程。 材　料 步　骤 一碗米饭、一匙油 （oil）、两个鸡 蛋、一个胡萝卜、 少许食盐 1. 把鸡蛋打碎放入碗中并搅拌； 2. 把胡萝卜洗净、切碎，放在碗中备用； 3. 在锅里放入油；油热后放入鸡蛋，炒1分钟； 4. 加入米饭和胡萝卜，翻炒3分钟； 5. 最后加入食盐。 返回目录 　　　要求：1. 包含表格中的所有信息，可适当发挥；2. 词数80左右。 [思路点拨] ① 时态：一般现在时；② 人称：以第三人称为主；③ 写作时：首 先点明写作对象是蛋炒饭的制作食谱，然后描述制作过程。 [写作提纲] 返回目录 　First， break two eggs into a bowl and mix them. Next， get a carrot and wash it. After that， cut up the carrot. Then， put a spoon of oil into the pot. When the oil is hot， put the eggs into the pot and cook. After one minute， put the rice and the carrot into the pot and cook for three minutes. Finally， add a little salt. Now your fried rice with eggs is OK. Put it on a plate and enjoy it.　 How to make fried rice with eggs ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ （更多精彩作文素材见“背记手册”）  　Do you know how to make fried rice with eggs？ Here’s the way to make it.　 [妙笔生花] 返回目录 写作专训　Section B 3a～4 Unit 9　Can you come to my party？ [经典例题] 　　（2023·内黄县实验中学期末）假设你叫李明，你的哥哥李宁要去 北京上大学了，你的父母打算下星期六（8月25日）在家里为他举办一 个欢送会（going away party），食物和饮料由你的父母提供，来客不需 要带任何东西，吃完晚饭后你们可以一起去看电影。现请你用英语给陈 东写一封邀请函，并请他在下星期二之前用电子邮件或电话对你的邀请 进行回复。 　　要求：1. 条理清楚，行文连贯，书写规范；2. 文中不要出现真实的 校名和师生姓名；3. 词数80左右。 返回目录 [高分范文] Dear Chen Dong， ① We would like to invite you to my brother’s going away party. ② The party will be held at my house next Saturday. It will start at 6 p.m. You do not need to bring anything. My parents will serve food and drinks. After dinner， we can go to the movies together. The cinema is not far from my house. It has good service and comfortable seats. Please reply by next Tuesday. ③ You can send me an e-mail or call me to let me know whether you can come. ④ I hope you can make it. Li Ming 返回目录 [名师点评] 　　本文详细介绍了欢送会的时间、地点及内容等信息，思路清晰，结 构紧凑，能够使用多种句式来表情达意，是一篇高分范文。 　　① 开篇点题，使用句式“We would like to ...”说明邀请的目的。 　　② 使用被动句式提升了句子的档次，彰显了作者熟练运用语言技 能的能力。 　　③ 句中不定式短语及宾语从句的运用体现了作者扎实的写作功 底，为短文增色不少。 　　④ 该句提出殷切希望，简单明了，顺利结尾。 返回目录 [开头句] 1. I’d like to invite you to my birthday party. 2. Thank you for inviting me to your party. 3. I’d love to， but I can’t. [中间句] 1. To show how much we will miss her， we’ll have a surprise party for her at my house this Saturday. 2. I’m sorry I’m not available. I have to look after my mother. 3. I need to study for the coming math exam. 返回目录 [结尾句] 1. I’m looking forward to hearing from you. 2. Let me know if you can come. 3. Please reply in writing to this invitation by this Friday. [名言警句] 1. Love me， love my dog. 爱屋及乌。 2. To give is better than to receive. 给予比获得更好。 返回目录 [小试身手] 　　假设你是曼蒂，请你根据下面的要点和要求写一封邀请函，邀请你 的朋友露西到你家参加你的生日派对。 　　要点：1. 时间：星期六晚上7：00-9：00；2. 地点： No.450， Dahua Road， Shibei District；3. 注意事项：天冷，需穿厚衣服。 　　要求：1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；2. 词数80左右（格式 已给出，不计入总词数）。 返回目录 [思路点拨] 　　① 时态：一般将来时；② 人称：第一、二人称；③ 写作时：首先 点明邀请目的，然后详细介绍派对的时间和地点，最后提及注意事项。 [写作提纲] 返回目录  　I’m writing to invite you to my birthday party. I am going to have the party at my house on Saturday evening. Would you like to come？ I’m sure we will have a great time. The party will start at 7：00 and it’ll last for two hours. I live at No.450， Dahua Road， Shibei District. I’m looking forward to your coming. I will wait for you at my house gate. One more thing， it will be very cold at night. Don’t forget to wear thick clothes.　 Dear Lucy， ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ Yours， Mandy （更多精彩作文素材见“背记手册”） [妙笔生花] 返回目录 写作专训　Section B 3a～4 Unit 10　If you go to the party， you'll have a great time！ [经典例题] 　　（2023·郑州市第一中学期末）在你成长的过程中，一定有开心的 经历，也有许多的烦恼。你最大的烦恼是什么？请你以“My biggest problem”为题，并根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。 　　要点：1. 你最大的烦恼是什么；2. 你是如何解决的。 　　要求：1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；2. 词数80左右。 返回目录 [高分范文] My biggest problem ① During my middle school life， not only did I have happy time， but I had many kinds of problems. ② My biggest problem was from my parents. They wanted me to spend all my time on my lessons. They didn’t allow me to play computer games or have outdoor activities with my friends. But I couldn’t stand the strict rules！ 返回目录 ③ So I wrote to my parents and told them I knew it was important to do well in schoolwork. I would make good use of the time and try to do well in schoolwork first. After a long talk with my parents， they agreed that I could have spare time and do something I like. ④ Now I know communicating with our parents is a good way to solve our problems. [名师点评] 　　本文采用“三段论”的写作方法，讲述了作者最大的烦恼及其解决 方法，思维缜密，行文流畅，逻辑性强，尤其是倒装句和从句的大量使 用为文章增色不少，是一篇很好的高分范文。 返回目录 　　① 开篇总结了作者的快乐与烦恼，倒装句式的使用体现了作者深 厚的写作功底。 　　② 该句直接点明作者最大的问题是什么，从而引出文章的中心。 　　③ 句中宾语从句以及短语write to、 do well in的使用，写出了作者 解决该问题的正确方法，也提升了文章的写作质量。 　　④ 该句写出了作者解决问题的感受，使文章主题得以升华，体现 了作者娴熟驾驭语言的能力。 返回目录 [开头句] 1. I have a problem and I need your advice. 2. As middle school students， not only do we have happy time， but we have problems. [中间句] 1. You shouldn’t keep them to yourself. 2. You should talk to your parents about them if you have some worries. 3. I think you should follow your parents’ advice. 返回目录 [结尾句] 1. I’m sure that you can solve all your problems if you follow my advice. 2. I really hope my advice can help you better. [名言警句] 1. To help others is to help yourself. 帮助别人就是在帮助自己。 2. Two heads are better than one. 三个臭皮匠顶个诸葛亮。 返回目录 [小试身手] 　　假设你的朋友汤姆遇到了一些困惑，请你根据提示，写一篇短文， 表明他的困惑及解决措施。 Problems Possible solutions too heavy eat less junk food and more vegetables； do more exercise be always late for school don’t stay up late； buy an alarm clock have a fight with his friend have a talk with ... 返回目录 　　① 时态：一般现在时和一般将来时；② 人称：以第三人称为主； ③ 写作时：第一段直接点明“汤姆有三个问题”，第二段介绍相关问 题以及解决方法，第三段总结全文，提出希望。 [写作提纲] [思路点拨] 返回目录 　I hope he can solve all his problems soon and have a happy life forever.　 [妙笔生花] ⁠ My friend Tom has three problems.　 　One problem is that he is too heavy. I think he should eat less junk food and more vegetables. If he does more exercise， he will be thin. He also has two other problems. One is that he is always late for school. I think he shouldn’t stay up late. If he buys an alarm clock， he may never be late. The other one is that he had a fight with his friend a few days ago. I think he should have a talk with his friend and try to work things out. If they get over their quarrel， they will not be angry with each other any more.　 ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ （更多精彩作文素材见“背记手册”） 返回目录 $$