写作专训Unit 1-5 课件 2024-2025学年人教版英语八年级上册

写作专训　Section B 3a～4 Unit 1　Where did you go on vacation？ [经典例题] 　　（2023·郑州市第十一中学期中）旅游可以让人放松身心，增长见 识。假设你是李华，暑假期间你外出旅游了。请你根据下面的要点提示 用英文写一篇短文，讲述你的暑期之旅，然后在本周的英语角活动中和 大家分享。 　　要点：1. Where did you go？ 2. What did you do there？ 3. How did you feel？ 　　要求：1. 内容完整，层次清晰，表达清楚，书写规范；2. 不要出现 真实姓名和学校名称；3. 词数80左右。 返回目录 [高分范文] My trip to Beijing ① I went to Beijing on vacation with my parents this summer. On the first day， we went to Tian’anmen Square and I watched the national flag raising ceremony. ② How wonderful it was！ Then， we visited the Great Wall. Like its name， it is great. The next day we visited the Palace Museum， the Summer Palace and the Temple of Heaven. We took lots of nice photos. We tasted some delicious food， like Beijing Roast Duck. I also bought some presents for my friends. ③ I was tired but happy. I hope to visit Beijing again. 返回目录 [名师点评] 　　短文采用“三段论”的写作方法，具体描述了作者的暑期之旅，语 言精炼，行文流畅，思路清晰。 　　① 开篇点明作者暑期旅行的目的地。 　　② 感叹句的使用有效增强了文章的感染力。 　　③ 对暑期之旅予以总结，体现了作者的语言综合运用能力。 返回目录 [开头句] 1. Traveling can really open our eyes. 2. I went to the countryside with my family this summer vacation. 3. I still remember my last summer vacation clearly. [中间句] 1. There are lots of places of interest in Henan. 2. We took quite a few photos there. 返回目录 [结尾句] 1. It’s well worth visiting. 2. We all had great fun there. 3. We felt a little tired， but we enjoyed the trip. [名言警句] 1. He who has never been to the Great Wall is not a true man. 不到 长城非好汉。 2. It’s better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books. 读万卷书不如行万里路。 返回目录 [小试身手] 　　今年暑假，你跟你的爸爸一起去四川度假。在8月10日（星期六） 这天，你们去了峨眉山，并参观了动物园。请根据以下要点与要求，用 英语写一篇日记，描述一下当天的情况。 　　要点：1. 你们去的地方；2. 你们进行的活动；3. 你对此次旅行 的感受。 　　要求：1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；2. 词数80左右（日记 格式已给出，不计入总词数）。 返回目录 [思路点拨] 　　① 时态：以一般过去时为主；② 人称：第一人称；③ 写作时：第一段详述旅行的目的地及相关活动，第二段阐述自己的旅行感受。 [写作提纲] 返回目录 [妙笔生花] Saturday， August 10th Sunny  　It is sunny and warm today. I went to Sichuan with my father. We went to Mount Emei. It was really beautiful. Then we visited the zoo and saw pandas there. They are my favorite animals because they’re so cute. For dinner， we had hot pot. It was really delicious. In the evening， we went shopping and I bought something for my friends. Everything was excellent.　 　We were tired but happy all day. We had a good time there. I hope to go there again.　 （更多精彩作文素材见“背记手册”） ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ 返回目录 写作专训　Section B 3a～4 Unit 2　How often do you exercise？ [经典例题] 　　（2023·三门峡陕州区期中）青春不落幕，怎可负韶华！ 杭州第19 届亚运会（the 19th Asian Games Hangzhou）于2023年9月23日至10月8日 在中国杭州举行，这也是值得我们中国人骄傲的一场体育盛会。在这激 动人心的时刻，我们中学生如何发挥自身作用，参与日常体育运动，享 受运动乐趣呢？请写一篇短文，介绍一项自己最喜欢的运动。 　　要点：1. 关于这项运动的好处；2. 你的锻炼情况，如锻炼频率、锻 炼搭档、锻炼场所等；3. 你从这项运动中获得或学到的东西。 　　要求：1. 文中需包括上面所有要点，可适当发挥；2. 文中不得出现 真实姓名和学校名称，词数80左右。 返回目录 [高分范文] My favorite sport ① My favorite sport is running. Maybe you want to know why I like it. Let me tell you something about it. ②Running is easy and interesting. It makes me strong and it can help me relax. I always run with my friends on the playground after class. I run three times a week and I spend half an hour each time. ③ When I run， I look like a lovely bird. I’m so active and healthy. ④ Su Bingtian is my favorite player. I think he is cool and brave. I want to be a runner like him in the future. That’s my dream. 返回目录 [名师点评] 　　短文采用“三段论”的写法，阐述了作者最喜欢的运动及其梦想， 脉络清晰，行文流畅。 　　① 开篇点明自己最喜欢的运动是什么。 　　② 第二段使用不同的长、短句式增强了段落的逻辑性，富有层 次感。 　　③ 时间状语从句的恰当运用体现了作者扎实的写作功底。 　　④ 以自己最喜欢的运动员激励自己努力实现自己的理想，增强了 文章的感染力。 返回目录 [开头句] 1. Last week， we asked some students about their free time activities. 2. Hello， everyone！ I’ll tell you something about myself. 3. Everyone has both good habits and bad ones， and so do I. [中间句] 1. It’s good for my mind and body. 2. I also have a healthy lifestyle. 3. We found that only ten percent of the students keep exercising every day. 返回目录 [结尾句] 1. I’ll try my best to keep the good habits and stop the bad ones， though it’s not easy to do that. 2. In a word， I will keep away from the bad habits and make my life better. [名言警句] 1. Health is better than wealth. 健康胜于财富。 2. An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 一天一苹果，医生远离我。 返回目录 [小试身手] 　　（2023·南阳西峡县期中）为促进学生更健康、更全面地发展，学 校越来越重视体育运动，开展的运动项目也越来越丰富多彩。请以 “Colorful sports make a healthy life”为题，根据写作要求，用英语写一 篇短文。 返回目录 　　要求：1. 文中须包含上图提示的所有信息，可适当发挥；2. 文中不 得出现真实姓名和学校名称；3. 词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词 数）。 　　参考词汇： rope skipping跳绳 返回目录 [思路点拨] 　　① 时态：一般现在时；② 人称：以第一人称为主；③ 写作 时：第一段阐明学校开展体育运动的目的及相关的运动项目，第二 段详述自己最喜欢的运动项目以及运动对健康的影响，第三段阐述 自己对此事的看法。 [写作提纲] 返回目录 　My favorite sport is playing basketball. I think it’s a good way to make me strong. It can keep my heart and lungs healthy. After long hours of studying， playing basketball can help me relax. To keep ourselves fit， doing sports is the best way. It can make us close to nature and take in fresh air. Then we can feel active and healthy.　 In order to make students healthier， our school develops many colorful sports. ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ They are basketball， rope skipping， running and so on.　 [妙笔生花] Colorful sports make a healthy life 返回目录 　I think it’s necessary to develop colorful sports in schools. Students need more exercise to build them up and then they will have a strong body to study harder.　 ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ （更多精彩作文素材见“背记手册”） 返回目录 写作专训　Section B 3a～4 Unit 3　I'm more outgoing than my sister [经典例题] 　　（2023·平顶山郏县期末）亲人在身边是最幸福的事，你了解你的 妈妈/爸爸/爷爷/奶奶/外公/外婆……吗？挑选一个你最想介绍给我们的 亲人，根据提示，写一篇以“My  　　　　”为题的英语短文。 　　要点：1. 这个人的年龄、外貌、衣着；2. 他/她的工作、喜好、每 天的活动等。 　　要求：1. 文中应该包括以上信息，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；2. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名等；3. 词数70左右。 返回目录 [高分范文] My father Hello！ ① I would like to tell you some-thing about my father. He is 40 years old. ② He is tall and he has a big nose and big eyes. He is always in a white coat. He is a doctor. He works in a big hospital. He gets up very early in the morning and goes to work by car. ③ Though he is busy， he often takes us for a trip when he is free. And he likes cooking delicious food for us. ④ I love my father and he loves me， too. 返回目录 [名师点评] 　　本文详细介绍了作者父亲的外貌特征、工作及喜好等，使得一个工 作勤奋的慈父形象跃然纸上。短文语言精炼，文笔生动，长、短句式交 替使用，不失为一篇佳作。 　　① 开篇点题，使用短语would like to说明本文将要描述的人物。 　　② 使用and连接的并列句简单描述了父亲的外貌特征，显示了作者 细致的观察能力。 　　③ 句中连词Though和when的使用，体现了作者运用语法知识 的能力。 　　④ 该句对短文予以总结，言简意赅，将作者与父亲之间的情感予 以升华，体现了作者综合运用语言知识的能力。 返回目录 [开头句] 1. We have a lot in common， but we still have some differences. 2. A good friend is like a mirror. [中间句] 1. My best friend helps to bring out the best in me. 2. He is more outgoing than me and he makes people round him happy and relaxed. 3. We are similar to each other in some ways， but in other ways， she is different from me. 返回目录 [结尾句] 1. We always help each other when we are in trouble. 2. I sincerely hope that our friendship will last long. [名言警句] 1. A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真情。 2. Between friends all is common. 朋友之间不分彼此。 3. A friend is easier lost than found. 得朋友难，失朋友易。 返回目录 [小试身手] 　　（2023·安阳月考）友谊是人生的一个重要组成部分。你喜欢交和 你相似的朋友还是互补的朋友呢？请你以“My best friend and I”为题， 写一篇作文，分别从外貌、性格、爱好、生活习惯、学习成绩等方面描 述你和好朋友的相同点和不同点。 　　要求：1. 包含上述内容，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2. 文中 不得出现真实的人名和校名；3. 词数100左右。 返回目录 [思路点拨] 　　① 时态：一般现在时；② 人称：以第一人称和第三人称为主；③ 写作时：采用“三段论”的写法，即第一段阐述友谊的重要性，第二段 具体介绍自己和好朋友之间的异同，第三段阐述朋友之间遇到困难应倾 心相帮的道理。 [写作提纲] 返回目录 　My best friend is Li Lan. She has two big eyes. She is kind and helpful. So am I. Her favorite sport is basketball. She is used to getting up early. But I’m a little lazy. She often encourages me to get up early. She studies very well. She often helps me with my English.　 My best friend and I ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠  　As we all know， everybody needs friends. I think friends should be similar， because in this way， we have a common hobby.　 [妙笔生花] 返回目录 　When our friends are in trouble， we should try our best to help them out. Only in this way can our friendship last long. With friends around us， we are sure to enjoy a happier life.　 ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ （更多精彩作文素材见“背记手册”） 返回目录 写作专训　Section B 3a～4 Unit 4　What's the best movie theater？ [经典例题] 　　假设你是李华，来自一个小镇。你们镇目前正在大力发展旅游事 业。请你根据思维导图写一篇英语短文，介绍一下你居住的小镇，并发 表在某英文网站的论坛上，以吸引更多的外国游客前来观光。 　　要求：1. 80词左右，可适当发挥（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 至少使用两个含有比较级或最高级的句子。 返回目录 [高分范文] My town ① Hi， everyone！ I’m Li Hua from a small town. My town is famous for its beautiful scenery. It has a river with the clearest water. It also has the loveliest mountain. Here are lots of outdoor activities for fun. ② You can go fishing by the river or climb the mountain. You can enjoy the freshest air here. You can eat farm meals， stay at the farm houses and enjoy the happy and quiet life of the countryside. ③ What’s more， you can find everything here much cheaper. ④ In short， it’s a good place to visit. Welcome to my town！ 返回目录 [名师点评] 　　本文介绍了李华所在小镇的风景、休闲活动以及农家生活等基本情 况。长、短句的有效结合以及比较级、最高级的使用，极大地增强了文 章的渲染力，是一篇佳作。 　　① 开篇点题，说明本文所介绍的对象。 　　② “You can ...”构成的排比句大大增强了文章的感染力。 　　③ 句中插入语What’s more的恰当运用体现了作者扎实的写作 功底。 　　④ 该句对小镇的风土人情予以总结，体现了作者深厚的语言归纳 能力。 返回目录 [开头句] 1. There are lots of interesting places in my town. 2. The park is the best place to visit on the weekend. 3. There are a few movie theaters in our city. [中间句] 1. Its price is higher than any other restaurant in our city， but it has the most delicious food. 2. What’s more， it has the best service and the most comfortable environment. 返回目录 [结尾句] 1. In short， I love my town very much. 2. There is something for everyone in our city. 3. If you want to get more information， you can call us. [名言警句] 1. A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step. 千里之行，始于足下。 2. As long as you step on your feet， you’ll never be sad. 只要迈开两脚，哪愁千里迢迢。 返回目录 [小试身手] 　　你所在城镇有哪些最好的地方或事物？它们有哪些吸引人的地 方？请根据下表所提供的信息，用英语写一篇短文，并说明它们受 欢迎的原因。 返回目录 Best places/things in my town Why best school No.1 Middle School the most beautiful school in town ... best movie theater Sun Cinema the biggest screens， the most comfortable seats ... best restaurant Moon Restaurant ... 返回目录 　　要求：1. 文中须包含表中所有信息，可适当发挥；2. 文中不得出现 真实姓名和学校名称；3. 词数80左右。 [思路点拨] 　　① 时态：一般现在时；② 人称：第一人称和第三人称；③ 写作 时：第一段引出主题，第二段介绍最佳之处适合游览的原因，第三段阐 明自己对家乡前景的展望。 返回目录 [写作提纲] 返回目录 　Well， I think the best school in my town is No.1 Middle School. Because it is the most beautiful school in my town. Sun Cinema is the best movie theater. Because it has the biggest screens and the most comfortable seats. You can also enjoy the newest movies there. Moon Restaurant is the best restaurant. Because it has the most delicious food and the friendliest service. Besides， the best place to relax is Fresh Park because it has the freshest air.　 ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠⁠ ⁠ ⁠ （更多精彩作文素材见“背记手册”） 　Welcome to my town. I think my town will be better and better in the future.　 [妙笔生花] ⁠ What are the best places in my town？　 ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠⁠ 返回目录 写作专训　Section B 3a～4 Unit 5　Do you want to watch a game show？ [经典例题] 　　（2023·安阳滑县期中）在众多的电视节目中，你最喜欢哪种类型 的节目？请以“My favorite TV programs”为题，写一篇80词左右的英 语短文向大家介绍一下。 　　要点：1. 概述众多节目中你最喜欢的电视节目；2. 表明自己喜欢这 类节目的原因；3. 表达你的观点并提出建议。 返回目录 [高分范文] My favorite TV programs ① There are all kinds of programs on TV， such as talk shows， game shows and so on. I like all of them， but talk shows are my favorite programs. ② Some people don’t like them because they think they are meaningless and boring. But I don’t think so. I think they can make me laugh and that they are educational. Every night， I watch them for fun， and I also learn a lot from them. I ask my classmates about talk shows. Most of them like watching them， too. 返回目录 ③ All in all， talk shows are my favorite programs. I think they are worth watching. If you plan to watch TV on weekends， choose talk shows！ They may be your best choice. [名师点评] 　　短文阐述了作者最喜欢的电视节目及其原因，并就此提出一些建 议。文章层次分明，首尾照应，复杂句式的使用极大地增强了文章的说 服力。 　　① 开篇点明自己最喜欢的电视节目，由此引出相关话题。 　　② 原因状语从句的使用增强了句子的感染力。 　　③ 句中All in all及be worth doing等短语的运用展现了作者深厚的写 作功底。本文做到了首尾呼应，这也是本文的亮点之一。 返回目录 [开头句] 1. As is known to everyone， different people like different types of TV shows. 2. Let me share my ideas about different kinds of TV shows with you here. [中间句] 1. As for talent shows， I don’t mind them. 2. Everyone in my family has different ideas about TV shows. 3. There are two main reasons why I love the TV show so much. 返回目录 [结尾句] 1. In my opinion， it’s a really interesting and educational TV program. 2. We can learn a lot from these TV shows. [名言警句] 1. Each one has his own point of view. 仁者见仁，智者见智。 2. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. 只学习不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。 返回目录 [小试身手] 　　朱红和王刚喜欢不同类型的电视节目。请根据表格中所给的提示， 介绍他们所喜爱的电视节目，并谈谈你自己喜爱的节目。80词左右。 朱　红 王　刚 我 喜爱的节目 《动物世界》 《新闻联播》 …… 内容和特点 各种动物， 生动有趣 各类新闻， 七点开始 …… 原　因 喜爱动物， 获得知识 了解时事 …… 返回目录 　　① 时态：一般现在时；② 人称：第一人称和第三人称；③ 写作 时：首先说明每个人喜欢的电视节目，其次介绍电视节目的内容和特 点，最后陈述喜爱的原因。 [写作提纲] [思路点拨] 返回目录 　Zhu Hong likes Animal World best， because she loves animals and she can gain much knowledge about them. This program is interesting and lively. It shows people all kinds of animals. Wang Gang loves CCTV News best， because he can learn about many current events around the world. It has many kinds of news. It starts at 7：00 p.m. every day.　 [妙笔生花] ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠  　There are many different types of TV programs now. Everyone has his or her favorite program.　 返回目录 　I like Sports World best， because I am interested in sports and the program covers different sports， such as swimming， basketball and football. Some players are my heroes. I dream of becoming a basketball player when I grow up.　 ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ （更多精彩作文素材见“背记手册”） 返回目录 $$