写作专训Unit 6-10 课件2024-2025学年人教版英语（浙江地区）八年级上册

写作专训　Section B 3a～4 Unit 6　I’m going to study computer science 本单元主要学习使用规范的词和句型来介绍自己或他人的学习、假 期计划以及将来的人生规划等。主要使用第一人称或第三人称来描写， 时态用一般将来时和一般现在时。 返回目录 [教材原句] 1. Do you know what a resolution is？（开头句） 2. Not everyone knows what they want to be.（开头句） 3. Many resolutions have to do with self-improvement.（中间句） 4. For example， some people promise them-selves they are going to start an exercise program or eat less fast food.（中间句） 5. How about you—will you make any next year？（结尾句） 6. For this reason， some people say the best resolution is to have no resolutions！（结尾句） 7. Then you can be anything you want！（结尾句） 返回目录 [课外典句] 1. I hope to be a writer when I grow up.（开头句） 2. I’m going to keep on practicing painting pictures.（开头句） 3. The following is about my coming vacation.（开头句） 4. I’m going to do much practice to make my dream come true.（中间句） 5. I’m going to take more acting lessons to help myself to be an actor.（中间句） 6. I might practice it three times a week.（中间句） 7. I think I can make my resolution come true as long as I can work hard.（结 尾句） 返回目录 [传世金句] 1. Luck is what beyond plans. 运气是计划之外的东西。 2. If you don’t have a plan， that is planning to fail. 如果你没有计划，就是 计划着失败。 返回目录 [经典例题] 决定是对自己的承诺。请根据提示并发挥想象说说你的三个新年决 定。不少于70词。 Resolutions How improving your physical health get more exercise； eat healthier food improving your relation-ships with your family and friends spend more time with your family； help your friends ... ... 返回目录 首先要开篇点题，交代你有三个决定；然后分层叙述你的这三个决 定，并具体说出自己的打算或计划；最后可提出祝愿或希望。书写时以 第一人称为主，时态以一般将来时为主。 [写作提纲] [思路点拨] 返回目录 [妙笔生花] 　　 ⁠ I’m going to make three New Year’s resolutions.　 ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ 　The first resolution is about improving my physical health. I’m going to get more exercise and eat healthier food， because I think more exercise and healthier food will help me to become healthier. The second resolution is improving my relationships with my family and friends. I’m going to spend more time with my family. I’m also going to help my friends more. The third resolution is that I am going to study harder at school. And I’m going to make weekly plans for schoolwork. I think all these will help me to get better grades and acquire more knowledge.　 I hope these resolutions may help me become a better person.　 返回目录 写作专训　Section B 3a～4 Unit 7　Will people have robots？ 本单元学习使用一般将来时来介绍未来的生活或对未来进行大胆预 测，需要逐一写出话题内容，从而使文章流畅、层次清楚、条理清晰。 通常用第一人称或第三人称来描写，时态用一般将来时和一般现在时。 返回目录 [教材原句] 1. When we watch movies about the future， we sometimes see robots.（开 头句） 2. What will the future be like？（开头句） 3. But I think there will be fewer trees.（中间句） 4. Cities will be more polluted.（中间句） 5. People will live to be 200 years old.（中间句） 6. Everyone should play a part in saving the earth.（结尾句） 7. We never know what will happen in the future！（结尾句） 返回目录 [课外典句] 1. Let’s talk about the future life.（开头句） 2. I wonder what our future life will be like.（开头句） 3. There will be lots of robots to help us.（中间句） 4. Maybe some robots will be dangerous to humans.（中间句） 5. We might no longer use paper money.（中间句） 6. I dream of living in space in the future.（结尾句） 返回目录 [传世金句] 1. The dream has become a dream. 有梦者事竟成。 2. We should be happy that the future must belong to us. 我们应该感到高兴，未来必将属于我们。 返回目录 [经典例题] 畅想一下20年后你的样子，请根据表格提示，完成一篇短文。要 求：不少于70词。 What will you be like？ Job a teacher Home in Hangzhou Free time activities play basketball； go boating Neighborhood near the park Holiday ... 返回目录 首先点明你未来的职业；然后分层叙述你未来的家庭、业余活动、 社区位置、假期去处等。书写时用第一人称，时态为一般将来时。 [写作提纲] [思路点拨] 返回目录 　　 ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ 　　 　In 20 years， I think I’ll be a teacher. I’ll live in Hangzhou because it’s a beautiful city. Lots of people go to visit the city every year， so I’ll meet many interesting people there. I’ll live in a big apartment near a park. I think the air will be clean there. I’ll probably have more free time， so I’ll spend more time with my friends. I’ll play basketball with my friends on weekends. I’ll also go boating on the West Lake when the weather is fine. And I’ll keep a bird as the pet. I like traveling. I think I’ll take a holiday in Hawaii one day.　 [妙笔生花] 返回目录 Unit 8　How do you make a banana milk shake？ 本单元主要围绕“Describe a process”和“Follow instructions”这两 个话题展开。通过掌握制作食物的常用句型，以达到互相交流食物制作 方法的目的。短文主要用第二人称，兼用其他人称。文中主要用一般现 在时来描写，也可穿插使用一般将来时，以使短文更丰富生动。 返回目录 [教材原句] 1. In most countries， people usually eat traditional food on special holidays. （开头句） 2. I want to make Russian soup for a party on Saturday.（开头句） 3. Next， put the beef， carrots and potatoes into a pot and add some water. （中间句） 4. Then， add the cabbage， tomatoes and onion and cook for another 10 minutes.（中间句） 返回目录 5. When it is ready， place the turkey on a large plate and cover it with gravy. （中间句） 6. Finally， don’t forget to add some salt.（结尾句） 返回目录 [课外典句] 1. If you want to enjoy fish， I can teach you how to cook it.（开头句） 2. I’m good at cooking egg fried rice.（开头句） 3. Pour some honey into it and then mix them up.（中间句） 4. You need to buy a bottle of honey and two apples for it.（中间句） 5. First， you need to cut them up and mix them up.（中间句） 6. Now you can enjoy delicious beef noodles with me.（结尾句） 7. Let’s taste the nice dish now！（结尾句） [传世金句] Practical work is an important education weapon. 实践工作是重要的教育武器。 返回目录 [经典例题] 假设你最喜欢的食物是火鸡三明治，请根据下列提示，用英语写一 篇80词左右的短文，描述制作火鸡三明治的过程。 所需食材：火鸡肉、两片面包、黄油、洋葱、番茄、生菜。 制作步骤：1. 在一片面包上放上黄油；2. 把洋葱和番茄切碎放在面 包上；3. 在面包上放一些生菜和火鸡肉；4. 把另外一片面包放在上面。 返回目录 [思路点拨] 首先，简要说明要制作的食物；其次，根据提示说明所需要的食 材；最后，介绍每一步的具体做法，可用first、 next、 then、 finally等 词连接。 [写作提纲] 返回目录 　　 ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ 　　 　Here is a recipe for a great turkey sandwich. To make this kind of sandwich， you need two pieces of bread， butter， onions， tomatoes， lettuce and pieces of turkey. It’s easy to make it. First， put some butter on a piece of bread. Then， cut up some tomatoes and an onion. Add these to the bread. Next， put some lettuce and pieces of turkey on the bread. Finally， put the other piece of bread on top. Now it’s time to enjoy your turkey sandwich.　 [妙笔生花] 返回目录 Unit 9　Can you come to my party？ 本单元学习使用“发出、接受、拒绝邀请”及“谈论义务”的常用 句型来介绍活动的类型、时间、地点、客人如何穿着、是否需要回复、 什么时候回复等，并简单说明理由。主要采用第一人称或第三人称，以 及用一般现在时或少量的一般将来时。 返回目录 [教材原句] 1. Thanks so much for planning this.（开头句） 2. My cousin Sam from Xi’an is going to be here.（开头句） 3. I’d love to come， but I’m afraid I can’t.（中间句） 4. Oh， but Sam isn’t leaving until next Wednesday.（中间句） 5. However， I’d still be glad to help out with any of the party preparations， like planning the games.（中间句） 6. I look forward to hearing from you all.（结尾句） 7. Let me know if you need my help.（结尾句） 返回目录 [课外典句] 1. I’ll have a birthday party in my home this weekend and I hope you can come.（开头句） 2. It’s a good idea to have a surprise party for our new teacher.（开头句） 3. I expect you can have a great time here.（中间句） 4. This party will be the best way to show my love to them.（中间句） 5. Please accept my warm invitation.（中间句） 6. I’ll be glad to meet you on time.（结尾句） 返回目录 [传世金句] A friend is a present you give yourself. 朋友是你送给自己的一份礼物。 返回目录 [经典例题] 假如你是Mandy，请你根据下列提示信息写一封邀请函，邀请你的 朋友Lucy参加你的生日聚会。词数80左右。 提示： Time： 7：00-9：00 on Saturday evening Place： your house Address： Yiyang Road， Shibei District Attention： It will be very cold at night. Don’t forget to wear more clothes. 返回目录 [思路点拨] 首先，简要说明此邀请函的意图；其次，说明聚会的具体时间和地 点；最后，说明需要注意的问题等。书写时主要用第一、第三人称，时 态以一般将来时为主。 [写作提纲] 返回目录 [妙笔生花] ⁠ Dear Lucy，　 ⁠ ⁠ 　I’m writing to invite you to my birthday party. I am going to have the party at my house on Saturday evening. Would you like to come？ I’m sure we will have a great time.　 ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ 　The party will start at 7：00 and it’ll last for two hours. I live on Yiyang Road， Shibei District. I’m looking forward to your coming. I will wait for you at my house gate. And it will be very cold at night. Don’t forget to wear more clothes.　 ⁠ ⁠ Yours，　 Mandy　 返回目录 Unit 10　If you go to the party， you’ll have a great time！ 本单元学习使用if引导的条件状语从句来进行假设，并给别人提出 建议。写作目标是能正确陈述自己的问题及困惑，能针对所提的问题或 困难给出自己的建议。通常使用第一人称或第二人称，有时也使用第三 人称，并用一般现在时和一般将来时。 返回目录 [教材原句] 1. Students these days often have a lot of worries.（开头句） 2. I don’t know what to do about going to Mike’s birthday party tomorrow night.（开头句） 3. If we do that， more people will want to play the games.（中间句） 4. Also， I’m not sure how to go to the party.（中间句） 5. Can you give me some advice please？（结尾句） 6. So you’re halfway to solving a problem just by talking to someone about it！（结尾句） 返回目录 [课外典句] 1. I hope you can give me some advice on how to solve my worries. （开头句） 2. I hope to get some help from you.（开头句） 3. I won’t leave until they ask me to.（中间句） 4. I should do anything they ask me to do.（中间句） 5. If you can come， you’ll have a good time.（中间句） 6. Welcome to the party.（结尾句） 7. As long as you can come， you’ll have fun.（结尾句） 返回目录 [传世金句] A man becomes learned by asking questions. 不耻下问才能有所学。 返回目录 [经典例题] 假如你的朋友Tom遇到了一些问题，请根据下表中的提示，写一篇 80词左右的短文，说明他的问题并提出解决办法。 Problems Possible solutions too heavy eat less junk food and more vegetables； do more exercise be always late for school shouldn’t stay up late； buy an alarm clock have a quarrel with his best friend have a talk with ... 返回目录 首先要开篇点题，指出Tom有三个问题；然后分层叙述他的问题及 解决方法；最后提出希望，希望他尽快解决问题。书写时以第三人称为 主，时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。 [写作提纲] [思路点拨] 返回目录 　　 ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ 　　 　My friend Tom has three problems. One problem is that he is too heavy. I think he should eat less junk food and more vegetables. If he does more exercise， he will be thin.　 　His second problem is that he is always late for school. I don’t think he should stay up late. If he buys an alarm clock， he may never be late.　 [妙笔生花] 返回目录 ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ 　His third problem is that he had a quarrel with his best friend a few days ago. It was just a misunderstanding. I think he should have a talk with his best friend and try to work things out. If they get over their quarrel， they will not be angry with each other anymore.　 　I hope he can solve all his problems soon and have a happy life forever.　 返回目录 $$