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Writing Lesson
Unit 4 I used to be afraid of the dark.
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As time moves, everything in the world is changing.
Things change from the past to the present and till the future.
The only constant in the world is change.
People change,too.
Teaching contents1.Key words and phrases A. Master the following words and phrases: humorous, silent, helpful, from time to time, dare, deal with,
success, give up, speech, public, seldom, influence, absent, fail,
pride, proud,used to do sth. hang out
B. Know the following words and phrases: appearance, background, introduction, personality, the road to...
2.Understanding the meaning of the passage:
From Shy Girl to Pop Star3.Simple analysis of the discourse4.Key structure: used to do sth.... but now...
Teaching goals
1.Ability goals
To improve students’ ability of extracting the central idea, and analyzing the structure of discourse; let students master the method of cohesion and coherence of the article
2.Language goals
To master the important words and phrases;
to master the key grammar and the key sentences;
to understand the meaning of the text;
enable the students to write an article with the information they get.
Answer:
What did Florencia use to do when she was a child?
Florencia
Lead in
Answer:
What did Florencia use to do when she was a child?
Florencia
Tips:
swimming, park, swing and slide, dolls, go camping, festivals and school activities, ride, birthday party...
Pre-reading
Brainstorming
Work in groups and talk about your childhood one by one, write down some key words or phrase.
Do you remember what your childhood was like?
(Tips: Appearance, personality,
hobbies, habits, environment...)
While-reading
Step 1. Fast reading
Read the story of Candy Wang in three minutes and answer the following questions.
1.What is the overall structure of the article? 2.What is the topic sentence of each paragraph?
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Step 2. Careful reading
1. Identify the information of the three paragraphs. A.how Candy’s life has changed B.Candy’s advice to young people C.Candy’s background
Read the article carefully, then finish the tasks.
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2.Underline the words or phrases that you can’t understand.
3.What is the cohesion and coherence of the article?
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Post-reading
Step 3. Memorize the key points
(1)have straight hair / curly hair 留着直发 / 卷发
(2)be silent in class 在课堂上保持沉默
(3)be interested in ... 对……感兴趣
(4)on a basketball team 在篮球队
(5)from time to time 时常;有时
(6)get good scores on the exams 考试取得好成绩
(7)wear glasses 戴着眼镜
(8)take up singing 开始唱歌
(9)deal with her shyness 克服她的羞怯
(10)dare to do sth. 敢做某事
(11)not ... anymore 不再……
(12)in front of crowds 在众人面前
(13)get tons of attention 吸引无数目光
(14)worry about ... /be worried about ...担心
(15)be careful about ... 对……小心
(16)private time 私人时间
(17)hang out with friends 和朋友们闲逛
(18)give up 放弃
(19)the road to success 成功之路
(20)fight on 奋力坚持下去;继续战斗
(21)make it to the top 成功;出人头地
(22)give a speech 发表演讲
(23)in public 公开地;在别人面前
(24)be nervous about tests 考试紧张
(25)do well in school 在学校表现好
(26)take care of sb. 照顾某人
(27)feel lonely 感到孤独
(28)be absent from classes 缺课;缺勤
(29)fail the exams 他的考试不及格
(30)make the decision to do sth. 决定做某事
(31)make friends 交朋友
(32)take pride in / be proud of 为……骄傲
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Personality
Hobbies
Appearance
Hobbies
Habits
Environment
tall/short/fat/thin/long hair/wear a hat/wear glasses...
outgoing/quiet/friendly/serious/shy/lazy/patient...
sing/dance/swimming/play the piano/do sports...
eat a lot of vegetables/read books/do housework...
the dark/be alone/flying/high places/give a speech...
Step 4. Vocabulary Collections
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My Changes
I’m in Grade 9 and I find that I have changed a lot.
These are my changes.What about yours?
I had straight hair in the past, but now I have curly hair.
I used to be short, but now I am tall and wear glasses.
I used to be shy and quiet. I was afraid of speaking in front of class.
But now I am more outgoing than before. I can give a speech in pubic.
reading. I always went to the library to spend my time on weekends.
I also make many friends.
But now I am interested in playing sports. I join the soccer club, and I always play soccer with my friends after class.I think it is good for my mind and body.
First,
Second,
What’s more,
Third,
I used to enjoy
Step 5.
Sample
writing
Step 6. Writing practice
Write about how you have changed.
What did you use to be like?
Which change is the most important one, and why?
Try to write two paragraphs.
Paragraph 1:
General introduction about the changes in your life
Paragraph 2:
The most important change and how it happened
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How I’ve Changed!
My life has changed a lot in the last few years. I used to_____________________________________________Now I’m_______________________________________ The biggest change in my life was________________This is the most important change because____________
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一审
二列
三拼
四凑
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How I’ve Changed!
My life has changed a lot in the last few years. I used to be overweight. I lost a lot of weight after I started playing tennis. Now I’m fitter and healthier.
The biggest change in my life was becoming much better in English. This is thanks tomy English teacher, Mrs. Song, who gave me an interesting book to read. I enjoyed it so much that I started to read other books. This is the most important change because I am no longer afraid of English and I am doing better in my exams. This has made my parents even prouder of me.
Step 7. One possible version
Step 8. Homework
请你按照下面表格的提示,写一篇题为“Changes in My Hometown”的英语短文,开头已给出。
内容要点
过去 旧房子 现在 高楼
河水肮脏 河水清澈
步行、骑自行车上班 乘公交车、开小汽车上班
写作要求:
1.以今昔整体对比的方式写一篇短文;
2.或者以单项对比的方式写一篇短文; 3.词数:80词左右(包括已经写出的单词)。
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