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教材单元链接
四步进阶式学作文
模拟实战预测
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教材单元链接
册次 对应教材单元 功能
八年级(上) Unit 2 How often do you exercise? 谈论健康
八年级(下) Unit 1 What’s the matter? 谈论健康与安全
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四步进阶式学作文
第一步 素材积累打基础
▶类型1 健康与疾病
1.alive adj. 活着;有生气的
2.bandage n. 绷带 v. 用绷带包扎
3.blind adj. 瞎的;失明的
4.cough n.& v. 咳嗽
5.deaf adj. 聋的
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7.fever n. 发烧
8.fine adj. 健康的;美好的
9.flu n. 流行性感冒;流感
10.headache n. 头痛
11.healthy adj. 健康的
6.death n. 死;死亡
12.ill adj. 有病;不舒服
13.stomachache n. 胃痛;腹痛
14.toothache n. 牙痛
15.disease n. 疾病
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▶类型2 安全
1.medicine n. 药;医学
2.pain n. 痛苦;疼痛;苦恼
3.wound n. 伤;伤口;创伤 v. 使(身体)受伤;伤害
4.safety n. 安全
5.situation n. 情况;状况
6.hurt v.(使)疼痛;受伤
7.hit v. 击;打
8.risk n. & v. 危险;风险;冒险
9.save v. 救;救助
10.physical adj. 身体的
11.medical adj. 医疗的;医学的
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1.food safety 食品安全
2.take-away food 外卖食品
3.healthy lifestyle 健康的生活方式
4.junk food 垃圾食品
5.go to a/the doctor 看医生
6.save one’s life 挽救某人的生命
7.take one’s temperature 量体温
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8.take medicine 吃药
9.take a rest/break/breaks 休息
10.keep healthy/fit 保持健康
11.look after/take care of/care for 照顾
12.had better (not) do sth. 最好(不要)做某事
13.first aid 急救
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▶开头句
1.As we all know, health is very important in our life.
2.Nowadays, more and more people have known about the importance
of keeping healthy.
3.To keep a healthy lifestyle, we should stay away from junk food.
4.It’s true that health is the first step to success.
5.As far as I am concerned, health is the most precious gift that a
man can ever have.
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▶中间句
6.We think the best way to relax is through exercise.[人教八上Unit 2 P13]
7.You’d better not eat hamburgers for dinner because they are not healthy.
8.Exercise such as playing sports is fun, and you can spend time with
your friends and family when you do them together.
9.You’d better eat more fruit and vegetables instead of junk food.
10.We should pay more attention to food safety.
11.It’s necessary to play different sports to keep fit.
12.It’s a good idea to eat fruit and vegetables everyday.
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▶结尾句
13.In short/All in all, safety must come first!
14.A balanced diet can help make us stronger and healthier.
15.In a word, if we stick to the advice given above, we will lead a
healthy life.
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第二步 审题立意定基调
【典例剖析】[2022黔东南州改编]
How to Develop Good Living Habits
提示:每个人都有不同的生活习惯,养成良好的生活习惯能帮助我们拥有健
康的体魄和美好的生活,你平时有什么好的习惯呢?请以“How to Develop
Good Living Habits”为题,用英语写一篇短文,从日常起居、卫生习惯、健
康饮食、体育锻炼、交通安全等方面介绍你的一个好习惯。
人称:第一人称
时态:一般现在时
文体:说明文
主题:介绍自己好的习惯
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要求:
1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,词数不少于60个;
2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。
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第三步 谋篇构思成框架
【提纲指导】
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第四步 分阶对比成佳作
普通范文 优秀范文
How to Develop Good
Living Habits
Everyone has different
living habits. Good habits
can help us keep healthy
and have beautiful lives. How to Develop Good Living Habits
Everyone has different living habits.
Good habits can help us keep healthy
and have beautiful lives. As teenagers,
what should we do?
特殊疑问句的使用,引出了下文,突
出强调。
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普通范文 优秀范文
In my opinion, everyone should get up and go to bed on time every day. Everyone should wash hands before meals. Everyone should eat more vegetables and fruit. In my opinion, everyone should get up and go to bed on time every day. Don’t stay up too late. Everyone should wash hands before meals. Everyone should eat more vegetables and fruit. Don’t eat too much junk food.
续表
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普通范文 优秀范文
What’s more, everyone should do exercise. Everyone shouldn’t throw litter. It is not allowed to play on the road. When crossing the road, everyone should obey the traffic rules. What’s more, everyone should do exercise. No littering or spitting. It is not allowed to play on the road. When crossing the road, everyone should obey the traffic rules.
续表
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We must develop good
living habits so as to keep
healthy.
祈使句的使用,补充说明了拥有良好生
活习惯的必要性,增强了强调的意味,突出
表现了其重要性以及措施实施的坚决性。
In a word, we must develop good
living habits so as to keep healthy.
引用结束语In a word,凸显了作者的
语言功底,总结全文,起到了强调的作用。
续表
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◆写作范例赏析
In order to keep healthy, I usually get up early and run for an
hour every day.[表明写作的目的,点明主题,引出下文] Every meal I
keep a balanced diet, and I eat many green vegetables and fruit, which
is good for my health. In my spare time, I take part in many
activities/do some sports, such as playing basketball, high jumping,
swimming and running. What’s more, I also like listening to soft music,
because it can make me peaceful and relaxed.[交代具体的做法,丰富
主题]
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模拟实战预测
第一篇[2022内江改编]
How to keep healthy
近年来中学生身体健康越来越受重视。假定你是李华,你校英语校
报正在开展主题为“我运动,我健康”的征文活动,请用所给题目写一篇
英语短文投稿,介绍你关于运动的建议。
要求:
1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,词数不少于60个;
2. 文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。
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How to keep healthy
As students, we can do different kinds of sports after class. As for me,
I think highly of jogging because it’s good for health. I often jog in the
playground for half an hour. Another sport that I like is playing football. I
often play it with my friends after school. It is very interesting.
There is no doubt that doing sports is helpful to us. We can not only
build up our body but keep us healthy and strong. What’s more, when we
feel stressed, we can do some sports to relax ourselves. The most important
is that we can make friends when we do sports. I met my best friend
when I once played football in the playground.
Let’s do more sports. In this way, we can be healthy and happy
every day.
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第二篇
How to Keep
提示:为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识,提高自我保护能力,某校开
展了以“安全”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请以“How to Keep. .”为
题,用英语写一篇短文,介绍如何保护自己的安全。
要求:
1. 请先将题目补全后,再作答;
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,词数不少于60个;
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。
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How to Keep Safe
As teenagers, we should always keep safety in mind. But how can
we keep safe? Here are some of my suggestions.
First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially online.
Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so
that we can keep ourselves safe. Also, we ought to eat healthily and
safely. Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our health.
Last but not least, summer is coming, and we must remember it’s
dangerous to swim in the river. In short, safety must come first!
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