内容正文:
Period Ⅳ Writing
——与诗歌有关的写作
Unit 5 Poems
If winter comes, can spring be far behind?—Percy Bysshe Shelley
冬天来了,春天还会远吗?——珀西·比希·雪莱
目录
CONTENTS
写作指导•演练提素养
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写作指导•演练提素养
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通技法——学写作规范
本单元的写作任务是写一篇与诗歌有关的文章;要求学生根据自己所熟悉的古诗,写出其大意,详细介绍对诗歌的理解,并说明诗中所蕴含的作者的思想。写作结构一般是“三段式”,具体为:
积“黄金”词句,写高分文章
一、话题词汇
1.nature and life 自然和生活
2.vivid adj. 生动的
3.character n. 人物
4.describe/picture vt. 描绘
5. to the point 简单恰当;简洁中肯
6.line n. 诗行
7.mood n. 心情;语气
8.recite v. 背诵
9.intention n. 意图;目的;打算
10.sorrow n. 悲伤
11.sympathy n. 同情
12.blank adj. 没表情的
13.innocent adj. 天真无邪的
14.polish v. 修改;润色
15.be made up of/consist of
由……组成/构成
二、话题句式
开篇
1.Here is a poem entitled “... ” by... ,which enjoys great popularity among readers.
2. Here is a poem entitled “... ”,written by Li Bai, a famous Chinese poet in the Tang Dynasty.
3.It is popular with Chinese readers./ It wins great popularity with Chinese readers.
4.The theme of the poem is nature and life.
5.It is written with special writing skills.
主体
1.It rhymes at the end of each line.
2.The language of the poem is descriptive and vivid.
3.Whenever I read this poem, some characters flashed through my mind clearly.
4.Only by reading it repeatedly can we grasp the spirit of this poem.
5.Young as we are, we come to realise that as long as we try, nothing is impossible.
6.She often encourages me to face everything, sad or happy.
7.Remember,the best love is to love others unconditionally.
结尾
1.I’m deeply moved by the above poem reminding us of the importance of trying to seize every chance to do what we should do before it’s too late in our life.
2.We should call on people all over the world to change our living ways before all hopes have gone.
3.Considered as one of the greatest poets of the Tang Dynasty,... will undoubtedly live in people’s hearts forever.
4.In my opinion, the young generation today should understand and learn from the poem.
5.This is the most beautiful poem that I have ever read. I strongly advise you to read the poem and enjoy its beauty.
【典题示例】
请你根据唐代诗人李绅的《悯农》,用英语写出这首诗的大意,并说明诗中所蕴含的作者的思想,以便向你的外国朋友解释这首诗。
Sympathy on the Farmers
Li Shen
At noon,farmers are weeding,
Down the field,sweat is dripping.
Who knows rice on a dish,
Every grain is full of moiling?
注意:
1.不得照抄短诗原文;
2.必须结合短诗的内容,发挥想象,适当展开;
3.短文不能写成诗歌形式;
4.写作词数应为80左右。
【思路点拨】
Ⅰ.布局谋篇
体裁 说明文 时态 以一般现在时为主
主题 解释一首诗 人称 以第三人称为主
结构 开篇:介绍作者及这首诗的影响;
主体:描述诗歌内容;
结尾:表达感想、说明诗歌表达的思想以及现实意义。
Ⅱ.遣词造句
一、对接单元词汇
1.一首题目是……的诗 a poem____________
2.受……欢迎 ___________________
3.在地里除草 ________________________
4.频繁地 ______________
5.掉到土里 ______________________
entitled…
be popular with
weed in the fields
frequently
fall into the soil
6.提醒某人…… ________________
7.年轻一代 ________________________
8.珍惜每粒粮食 ________________________
9.遵循特殊的节奏和押韵形式 _________________________________ ______________
10.使某人了解某事的重要性 _____________________
remind sb of
the young generation
treasure every grain
follow special patterns of rhythm and
rhyme
impress sth on sb
二、巧用单元句式、语法
1.完成句子
(1)这首题目为《悯农》的诗是李绅写的。(entitle)
Here is a poem by Li Shen and__________________ Sympathy on the Farmers.
(2)李绅很受中国读者欢迎。(popular)
Li Shen ________________________ Chinese readers.
it is entitled
is very popular with
(3)夏日正午时刻,外面天气炎热;农民依然在地里除草。(weed)
It is so hot outside at the summer noon time. The farmers ___________ ________________________.
(4)他们全身湿透,汗水频繁地掉在庄稼生长的土地上。(fall into)
They are wet all over and their sweat _____________________________.
The crops grow there.
are still
weeding in the fields
is frequently falling into the soil
2.句式升级
(1)用过去分词作后置定语以及定语从句将上题中的句子(1)和句子(2)合并成一句话。
Here is a poem ________________________________________________ _____________________________________________.
entitled Sympathy on the Farmers by Li Shen who/that is very popular with Chinese readers
(2)用as引导的倒装句改写上题中的句子(3)。
________________ outside at the summer noon time, the farmers are still weeding in the fields.
(3)用with复合结构和where引导的定语从句改写上题中的句子(4)。
They are wet all over ____________________________________________ _______________________________.
Hot as it is
with their sweat frequently falling into the soil,
where the crops grow
【连句成篇】
Here is a poem entitled Sympathy on the Farmers by Li Shen who is very popular with Chinese readers.
It goes like this:Hot as it is outside at the summer noon time,the farmers are still weeding in the fields.They are wet all over with their sweat frequently falling into the soil,where the crops grow.But who knows exactly all our foods, the delicious dishes on our table,come from the hard work of the farmers?
The poem follows special patterns of rhythm and rhyme,making the poem pleasing to read. It creates a clear picture and makes readers feel the beauty of images.
With the minimum of words, Li Shen wrote this poem in order to remind people of the importance of the farmers’ hard work. In the meantime, it tries to impress treasuring every hardearned grain on the young generation.
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