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2024新课标I卷 读后续写 写作指导 话题：人与社会——与出租车司机的诚信之约 1 一. 文本解读分析 通过记叙文要素（5w），梳理关键信息，确定文章主旨。 2 “我”因暴风雨航班延误，下飞机后匆忙搭乘出租车去赶最后一辆巴士。 1. 文本分析 I met Gunter on a cold, wet and unforgettable evening in September. I had planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference. Due to a big storm, my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half. I touched down in Vienna just 30 minutes before the departure of the last bus to Prague. The moment I got off the plane, I ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought. 3 “我”和出租车司机Gunter经过一番曲折和沟通后终于前往巴士站。 1. 文本分析 That was when I met Gunter. I told him where I was going, but he said he hadn’t heard of the bus station. I thought my pronunciation was the problem, so I explained again more slowly, but he still looked confused. When I was about to give up, Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend. After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century, Gunter put his phone down and started the car. “我”会顺利赶上最后一班巴士吗？ 4 “我”在出租车司机Gunter的帮助下及时赶到巴士站。 1. 文本分析 Finally, with just two minutes to spare we rolled into the bus station. Thankfully, there was a long queue (队列) still waiting to board the bus. Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus, turned around, and looked at me with a big smile on his face. “We made it,” he said. 5 “我”发现自己没带现金，银行卡支付失败，感到无助。 1. 文本分析 Just then I realised that I had zero cash in my wallet. I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled out my Portuguese bankcard. He tried it several times, but the card machine just did not play along. A feeling of helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue thinning out. 6 “我”跑向车站的取款机取现金，却发现机器故障无法使用。 1. 文本分析 At this moment, Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station. There, at the entrance, was a cash machine. I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the machine, and popped my card in, only to read the message: “Out of order. Sorry.” “我”无法支付车费，为了赶上最后一班巴士，应该如何解决？ 7 narrative 叙述 settings 背景 1 Elements of narrative writing characters 人物 2 theme 主题 3 plots 情节 4 emotions 情绪 5 8 Reading for settings(5W) When In a cold evening in September Where In Vienna Who I, Taxi driver Gunter Why I hurriedly took a taxi to catch the last bus due to my flight being delayed. What I didn’t have any cash and tried several methods but couldn’t pay the taxi fare, and the bus was about to leave. 9 I Reading for characters decisive ... and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought. I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the machine calm ... smile as I pulled out my Portuguese bankcard. Gunter helpful Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend. friendly ... and looked at me with a big smile on his face. 10 I hurriedly took a taxi to catch the last bus due to my flight being delayed. I lacked cash and tried multiple ways but couldn’t pay the taxi, and the bus was about to depart. I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. Beginning Reading for plots Development Climax Gunter eventually got me to the station on time. Midpoint Ending anxious relieved helpless ？ ？ 续写的两段“我”的情感线会如何变化呢？ 11 思考1：“我”是否成功登上了最后一班巴士？ Para. 1: I touched down in Vienna just 30 minutes before the departure of the last bus to Prague. 1. 文本分析 Para. 4: but the card machine just did not play along. A feeling of helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue thinning out. 思考2：“我”会如何解决当时不能支付车费的问题？ 思考3：针对这一情况司机会是什么态度？又会怎么做？ 12 Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend. helpfulness and trust between strangers Gunter的积极帮助：当Gunter不确定车站位置时，他主动打电话询问朋友。这显示了他愿意帮助作者找到车站，并确保作者能赶上巴士。 (1) Finally, with just two minutes to spare we rolled into the bus station. Gunter的努力和承诺：尽管时间紧迫，Gunter还是尽力开车，最终及时将作者送到了车站。这展示了他的承诺和尽职尽责。 (2) Reading for theme clue: At this moment, Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station. Gunter的理解和宽容：在得知作者没有现金且银行卡无法使用时，Gunter并没有生气或拒绝，而是指引作者去寻找自动取款机，这体现了他的理解和宽容。 (3) 13 “3衔接、2过渡、1主题”写作框架 Para.1 I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. Para.2 Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. 衔接句1 过渡句1 主题句 衔接句2 衔接句3 过渡句2 14 范文赏析 I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. I explained to him the urgency of catching the bus, emphasizing that otherwise I would be forced to stay overnight and buy a new ticket the next morning. Ultimately, I suggested, “I will return to Vienna in 4 days. If it’s OK with you, I can pay you then, with an additional 10 euros as a gesture of my gratitude.” Following an uncomfortable pause, he simply nodded, saying, “I agree to this arrangement and trust you.” I thanked him with the biggest smile you can imagine, and we exchanged contact information before I got on the bus. 动作描写，与所给开头有效衔接，说明“我”的困境 “我”继而提出请求建议 该句中的trust点明主旨 动作及情绪描写，生动形象地描述了“我”激动的心情，互换联系方式与下文段首句有效衔接 　　 15 范文赏析 Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. We arranged to meet at the airport, and upon our arrival, we hugged each other like long lost friends. When I gave him the extra €10 I had promised, he didn’t accept. “Buy me a beer next time you are in Vienna,” he said with a warm smile. Then we parted ways with a firm handshake and a promise to keep in touch. Gunter’s kindness had turned a potentially disastrous evening into a memorable story I would cherish for years to come. 与所给开头有效衔接 细节描写，再次描写Gunter的善良 主旨句，点明Gunter的友善信任对我的影响，升华主题 　　 16 2. 语言表达积累 帮助与信任主旨升华句： 1. It was an unforgettable moment to me, which I would treasure forever. 这对我来说是一个难忘的时刻，我将永远铭记。 2. This time I would not hesitate to be the one to reach out and build a bridge. 这一次，我将毫不犹豫地伸出手，搭建一座桥梁。 3. Tears of joy ran down his face. Although it was cold outside, a warm glow of emotion rose inside him. 幸福的泪水顺着他的脸庞流淌下来，尽管外面很冷，但他心里却暖暖的。 4. No act of kindness, no matter how small, will go wasted. 无论多小，善行都不会浪费。 5. In prosperity our friends know us. In adversity we know our friends. 在顺境中，朋友结识了我们。在逆境中，我们了解了朋友。 17 $$