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Unit 1 Back to school
单元话题满分范文必背
1.(23-24高一上·江苏南通·期末)假定你是李华,最近你的外国朋友John作为交流生来中国学习,他的邮件中提到不适应高一的集体住宿生活,和室友相处不太融洽。请你为他提供一些与他人相处的建议。根据下面的要点提示,写一封邮件。
内容包括:
1.表示安慰;
2.提供建议。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文相关。
3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇:accommodate(vt. 提供住宿)
Dear John,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear John,
I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble accommodating at your new school and getting along with your roommates. I understand quite well you are anxious and feel terrible. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.
I recommend that you try to communicate with your roomates more, sharing with them your concerns as well as joys and pleasure. Besides, it’s a good idea to take part in various after-school activities, which will make your school life amazing. At last, you could turn to your teachers for help if necessary.
Hope you can take my advice into consideration and be happy with your new life soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。外国朋友John作为交流生来中国学习,他的邮件中提到不适应高一的集体住宿生活,和室友相处不太融洽。要求考生李华为他提供一些与他人相处的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
问题:problem → trouble
此外:besides → what’s more
建议:advice→ suggestion
把……考虑进去:take...into consideration→ take...into account
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:At last, you could turn to your teachers for help if necessary.
拓展句:At last, you could turn to your teachers for help if it is necessary.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I recommend that you try to communicate with your roommates more, sharing with them your concerns as well as joys and pleasure.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Hope you can take my advice into consideration and be happy with your new life soon.(运用了祈使句和省略了that的宾语从句)
2.(23-24高一上·江苏苏州·阶段练习)假如你是李华,最近收到你的英国朋友Tim的来信。他在信中表示由于刚进入高中还不能很好地适应高中的学习和生活,他感到压力很大因而情绪低落。请你用英语给他回信。
内容包括:
1. 向Tim表示问候和安慰;
2. 针对他的问题提出以下建议:
(1)积极参加学校的各种活动,结交新朋友;
(2)养成良好的学习习惯,保持积极心态;
(3)遇到困难及时求助,不断努力。
注意:
1. 词数80词左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Tim,
I was sorry to hear that you’ve been feeling down due to the pressure of adjusting to high school. I understand that it can be challenging, but remember that you are not alone.
First, try to actively engage in various school activities, such as clubs or sports teams. This will give you a chance to meet new friends. Secondly, it is crucial to develop good study habits. Maintaining a positive mindset and believing in your abilities will help you overcome obstacles. Lastly, don’t hesitate to seek help when facing difficulties. Keep striving for improvement, and with time and effort, things will get easier.
If you ever need someone to talk to, feel free to contact me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生回复朋友Tim的来信,需向情绪低落的他表示问候和安慰,针对他不能很好地适应高中的学习和生活的问题,根据提示提出相应的建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
低落的:down→downhearted, discouraged
适应:adjust to→adapt to, get used to
有挑战性的:challenging→demanding, taxing
参与:engage in→participate in, take part in
至关重要的:crucial→significant, vital
克服:overcome→conquer, surmount
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:First, try to actively engage in various school activities, such as clubs or sports teams. This will give you a chance to meet new friends.
拓展句:First, try to actively engage in various school activities, such as clubs or sports teams, which will give you a chance to meet new friends.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I was sorry to hear that you’ve been feeling down due to the pressure of adjusting to high school. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] If you ever need someone to talk to, feel free to contact me. (运用了if引导条件状语从句)
3.(23-24高一上·江苏无锡·期中)假如你是李华,你昨天收到好友 Jim 的来信,他说他上了高中以后遇到了很多学习和生活上的问题,感觉很郁闷,很孤独。请你帮帮他,给他提些建议。
要点:
(1)和同学友好相处;
(2)找到适当的放松方式;
(3)努力学习,课前做好准备。
注意:
(1)字数 100 左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)可紧扣主题适当发挥。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jim,
I am very sorry to hear that you are having trouble with your middle school life. However, the situation is very easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you:
First of all, you should be friendly to anyone who you meet at the new school and try to make friends with them. And it is also a good idea to take part in after-school activities. That can make you happy. Secondly, Why not choose some proper ways to relax. In my opinion, taking exercise, watching TV or playing computer games is a good way to relax yourself. Thirdly, I agree that you should study hard and have a good preparation for every class so that you can understand the teacher.
I hope that you will find these tips useful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。你昨天收到好友 Jim 的来信,他说他上了高中以后遇到了很多学习和生活上的问题,感觉很郁闷,很孤独,要求考生给他回信,提些建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议:advice→suggestion
首先:first of all→at first
参加:take part in→join in
有益的:useful→beneficial
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:And it is also a good idea to take part in after-school activities. That can make you happy.
拓展句:And it is also a good idea to take part in after-school activities, which can make you happy.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I am very sorry to hear that you are having trouble with your middle school life. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] First of all, you should be friendly to anyone who you meet at the new school and try to make friends with them. (运用了who引导定语从句)
4.(23-24高一上·江苏苏州·阶段练习)你的朋友李华是一名高一新生,最近他正在为住校还是走读举棋不定。因此,写信向你求助。请你用英语给他写封回信,你的信必须包括以下内容:
1. 就住校还是走读的选择提供你的建议。
2. 说明你建议的理由。
参考词汇:住校board
Dear Li Hua,
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【答案】Dear Li Hua,
You have asked me for my advice with regard to whether to board at school or live at home and I will try to make some conductive suggestions here.
In my humble opinion, it is wise to board at school. First of all, you will save much time because you needn’t go a long distance. You can make use of the time that students live at school spend going between home and school. What’s more, it will be a good chance to experience life like college in advance, and you can learn how to live independently and have a good command of many life skills. Last but not least, there is no doubt that you can communicate with classmates and talk about the questions together, which will be of benefit to your study.
I hope you will find these proposals useful and I will be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给高一新生李华写封回信,就住校还是走读的选择提供你的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议:advice →suggestion
观点:opinion →view
而且:What’s more →Moreover
对……有好处:be of benefit to →be beneficial to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:You have asked me for my advice with regard to whether to board at school or live at home and I will try to make some conductive suggestions here.
拓展句:You have asked me for my advice with regard to whether to board at school or live at home and I will try to make some conductive suggestions here, which I hope are useful to you.
【点睛】[高分句型1] You can make use of the time that students live at school spend going between home and school. (运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Last but not least, there is no doubt that you can communicate with classmates and talk about the questions together, which will be of benefit to your study. (运用了that引导的同位语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
5.(23-24高一上·江苏无锡·期中)假设你是高中学生李华,你发觉自己在生活、学习中有一些不良习惯,很是苦恼。你用英语写信,向你的心理辅导老师(Jack)求助,希望得到帮助。要点如下:
1. 陈述写信原因;
2. 简要描述一些不良习惯;
3. 苦恼不知如何改变这些习惯;
4. 期待回复并表示感谢。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头、结束语已为你写好。
Dear Jack,
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Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jack,
I’m Li Hua, a senior high school student. Knowing that you are a helpful psychologist, I’m writing to consult you about some problems I have come across, hoping to get help from you. What annoys me most is that whenever I felt hungry, I would eat snacks like chips or candies without normal meals. Besides, I’m easily satisfied with what I have done without clear goals. I always hesitate to work out, keeping myself indoors. All these have made me suffer a lot. I am wondering if you could offer some effective methods of getting out of these habits to me.
I hope you can give me some positive response and I will be grateful .
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求写一封求助信,告诉心理辅导老师自己的一些不良习惯并寻求帮助。
【详解】1.词汇积累
遇到:come across→encounter
帮助:help→assistance
此外:besides → what’s more
摆脱:get out of→get rid of
2.句式拓展
并列句变复合句
原句: I hope you can give me some positive response and I will be grateful.
拓展句:I will be grateful if you can give me some positive response.
【点睛】【高分句型1】What annoys me most is that whenever I felt hungry, I would eat snacks like chips or candies without normal meals.(运用了what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句)
【高分句型2】I am wondering if you could offer some effective methods of getting out of these habits to me.(运用了if引导的宾语从句)
6.(23-24高一上·江苏苏州·阶段练习)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Tom不太适应高中生活,他因此感到焦虑并且写信向你求助。请你用英语给他写一封回信。内容包括:
1.表示理解;
2.提出你的建议(至少两点);
3.给予鼓励祝愿。
注意:
1.写作词数应为 80 左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to hear that you’re feeling anxious about your high school life. However, I want you to know that it’s completely normal to feel this way.
Firstly, I suggest that you try to get involved in school activities. This will help you make new friends and have fun experiences. Secondly, you should create a schedule to balance your study and relaxation time. Make sure you’re giving yourself enough time to rest and recharge.
I know it might be tough right now, but I believe you have the strength to overcome this. Keep your head up and remember that things can always get better.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。英国朋友Tom不太适应高中生活,他因此感到焦虑并且写信向你求助。要求考生给他回信,提供一些建议并给予鼓励和祝愿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
焦虑的:anxious → worried
然而:however → nevertheless
建议:suggest → advise/propose
困难的:tough → difficult
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Secondly, you should create a schedule to balance your study and relaxation time. Make sure you’re giving yourself enough time to rest and recharge.
拓展句:Secondly, you should create a schedule to balance your study and relaxation time so that you can give yourself enough time to rest and recharge.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m sorry to hear that you’re feeling anxious about your high school life. (运用了连词that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Firstly, I suggest that you try to get involved in school activities. (运用了连词that引导宾语从句和虚拟语气)
7.(23-24高一上·江苏苏州·阶段练习)假定你是李华,今天是你高中生活的第一天,你无比激动。请用日记的形式记叙所发生的事情及自己的所思所想。内容要点包括:
1. 校长励志演讲鼓励我们积极迎接挑战和机遇的高中三年;
2. 老师强调设定基于自身能力的目标,管理好时间并注意细节;
3. 努力平衡学业和活动,充分利用学校资源,争做全面发展的学生。
注意: 1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
September 4th, 2023 Monday
Sunny
Today is my first day in senior high school. I experienced many things, feeling a bit excited.
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【答案】September 4th, 2023 Monday
Sunny
Today is my first day in senior high school. I experienced many things, feeling a bit excited.
In the morning, the headmaster delivered an inspiring speech in the auditorium. He encouraged us to actively embrace the challenges and opportunities of the upcoming three years in high school, and to fully explore our potential and make continuous progress.
Subsequently, our teacher also gave us some valuable advice. He emphasized the importance of setting goals based on our own abilities, managing our time effectively, and paying attention to details.
I also realized that high school is not just about learning knowledge, but also about developing ourselves in an all-round way. Therefore, I will strive to balance my studies and extracurricular activities, actively participate in various clubs and societies, make full use of the school’s resources, and strive to become a well-rounded student.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的日记。要求考生用日记的形式记录自己高中生活的第一天所发生的事情和自己的所思所想。
【详解】1.词汇积累
经历:experience→ go through
重要性:importance → significance
各种各样的:various → a variety of
充分利用:make full use of→ make the most of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:In the morning, the headmaster delivered an inspiring speech in the auditorium. He encouraged us to actively embrace the challenges and opportunities of the upcoming three years in high school, and to fully explore our potential and make continuous progress.
拓展句:In the morning, the headmaster delivered an inspiring speech in the auditorium in which he encouraged us to actively embrace the challenges and opportunities of the upcoming three years in high school, and to fully explore our potential and make continuous progress.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I experienced many things, feeling a bit excited.(运用了现在分词担当状语)
【高分句型2】I also realized that high school is not just about learning knowledge, but also about developing ourselves in an all-round way.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
8.(23-24高一上·江苏连云港·期中)假定你是李华,你的笔友Mike向你求助,进入高中后他感觉生活学习节奏加快,考试压力增大,学习缺乏目标,为此他很苦恼。请你给他写一封回信,内容包括:
1.表示理解和安慰;
2.提出至少2点建议。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mike,
Sorry to hear that you are upset due to fast pace of school life and great pressure of study. Don’t worry, as you are not alone. Try the following tips to see if they can help.
Firstly, talk with your parents and teachers about difficulties you are going through. I believe they can provide useful advice for you. Additionally, hold a positive attitude towards exams. Remember, they are just a way to help you evaluate what you have learnt recently. Last but not least, instead of pushing yourself too much, you’d better set small goals based on your abilities and stick to them.
Hope my suggestions will be of use to you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。你的笔友Mike向你求助,进入高中后他感觉生活学习节奏加快,考试压力增大,学习缺乏目标,为此他很苦恼。要求考生给他写一封回信,表示理解和安慰并提供建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
建议:tip→advice
首先:firstly→to begin with
提供:provide→offer
另外:additionally→what’s more
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Last but not least, instead of pushing yourself too much, you’d better set small goals based on your abilities and stick to them.
拓展句:Last but not least, instead of pushing yourself too much, it would be better if you set small goals based on your abilities and stick to them.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Sorry to hear that you are upset due to fast pace of school life and great pressure of study.(that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]Firstly, talk with your parents and teachers about difficulties you are going through.(省略that或者which的定语从句)
9.(22-23高一上·江苏南京·期中)随着学习竞争的加剧,高中学生们在课间越来越不愿意离开课桌和教室,长期以往,这对视力、健康和学习会造成很大的危害。假定你是学生会主席李华,请你代表学生会给全体同学写一封倡议书。
内容如下:1.课间学生们久坐的现象;2.久坐的危害及建议同学们如何去做;3.号召同学们课间行动起来,去享受阳光和新鲜空气。
注意:
1.写作词数应为100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear fellow students,
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【答案】Dear fellow students,
Nowadays, many students have to stay for a long time due to heavy work, which may be harmful to their health.
New research shows that sitting more than three hours a day might reduce your life by two years and some studies found that cutting television time to less than two hours a day could add 1.4 years to life.
If you always spend your time on sitting, now stand up. Besides, move your legs, and touch your toes, if you can. What’s more, get up from your desk as often as you can. Additionally, you can have a walk to enjoy sunshine and fresh air.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放式作文。随着学习竞争的加剧,高中学生们在课间越来越不愿意离开课桌和教室,长期以往,这对视力、健康和学习会造成很大的危害。假定你是学生会主席李华,请你代表学生会给全体同学写一封倡议书,号召学生们课间行动起来,去享受阳光和新鲜空气。
【详解】1.词句积累
因为:due to→because of
对……有害:be harmful to→do harm to
站起来:stand up→rise to one’s feet
此外:besides→furthermore
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Besides, move your legs, and touch your toes, if you can.
拓展句:Besides, move your legs and touch your toes,which is of benefit to you.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Nowadays, many students have to stay for a long time due to heavy work, which may be harmful to our health.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】New research shows that sitting more than three hours a day might reduce your life by two years and some studies found that cutting television time to less than two hours a day could add 1.4 years to life.(运用了that引导宾语从句,动名词作主语,and连接并列句)
10.(23-24高一上·江苏·阶段练习)假定你是李华,进入高中学习已经一个多月了。现在你以“My Senior School Life”为题给Teens 杂志投稿,描述你的高中生活。要点如下:
你已在高中学习一个多月。高中课程,对你有点挑战,但是老师和同学都很友好。他们鼓励你接受挑战。同时学校提供了很多的选修课程。你参加了中国书法来开阔视野。
千里之行始于足下。你会建立目标,这会帮助你养成良好的学习习惯。在接下来的三年,你会保持积极的心态,充分利用学校资源来实现自己的潜能,享受个人成长。
注意:
(1)词数100词左右(标题已为你写好,但不计入总词数);
(2)注意过渡和衔接;
(3)注意书写和卷面。
My Senior School Life
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【答案】 My Senior School Life
I have been in senior high school for more than a month. The courses are a bit challenging to me, but teachers and classmates are always helpful. They encourage me to rise to challenges bravely. Meanwhile, there are many optional courses to take. I choose Chinese calligraphy course to broaden my horizons.
A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step. I will set goals, which may help me develop good habits. Over the next three years, I will keep a positive attitude, make the most of school resources to realize my potential and enjoy personal growth.
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。要求考生以“My Senior School Life”为题向Teens 杂志投稿,描述你的高中生活。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
课程:course→lesson
鼓励:encourage→inspire
选择:take→select
目标:goal→target
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The courses are a bit challenging to me, but teachers and classmates are always helpful. They encourage me to rise to challenges bravely.
拓展句:The courses are a bit challenging to me, but teachers and classmates are always helpful, who encourage me to rise to challenges bravely.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I will set goals, which may help me develop good habits.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Over the next three years, I will keep a positive attitude, make the most of school resources to realize my potential and enjoy personal growth.(排比句)
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