UNIT 2 Writing——如何描述经历（Word教参）-【勤径学升】2024-2025学年高中英语选择性必修第一册同步练测（外研版2019）

　　　　　　　Writing——如何描述经历　　[对应学生用书第41页] 本单元的写作话题是“Writing about an experience”， 描写一次经历， 属于以记人叙事为主要内容， 以叙述为主要表达方式的文体。在写作时， 要交代清楚时间(when)、地点(where)、人物(who)和事件(what), 然后再进一步叙述事件(what)、原因(why)和过程(how)。写作时应注意的问题： 1．正确运用时态。最常用到的时态是一般过去时和过去进行时， 但也要注意灵活运用其他时态。 2．常用第一人称， 从“参与者”的角度进行叙述。 3．要重视句子的衔接， 用好过渡词。 4．话题通常和生活有关， 如校园生活、旅游、交通、交友等， 平时要注意积累这些方面的词汇和短语。 [基本框架] 第一部分：介绍这次经历发生的背景； 第二部分：具体介绍这次经历； 第三部分：介绍自己对这次经历的感受。 [常用词语] 1．a meaningful experience　 一次有意义的经历 2．upon arrival 一到达 3．breathe the fresh air 呼吸新鲜空气 4．in the warm sunshine 在温暖的阳光下 5．the other day 前几天 6．at the foot of the mountain 在山脚下 7．adapt to 适应 8．as long as 只要 9．make a difference 有影响， 起作用 10．benefit from 得益于 11．to one's surprise 令人惊讶的是 12．feel tired/delighted 感到疲倦/高兴 [常用语句] 1．The story goes like that… 故事是这样的…… 2．…is memorable because I had a meaningful experience on that day. ……是值得纪念的， 因为我在那一天的经历很有意义。 3．Upon arrival, we began to… 一抵达， 我们就开始…… 4．We feel it is our duty to do… 我们认为……是我们的责任。 5．Tired as we were, we still felt quite happy. 虽然我们很累， 但我们仍然感到很高兴。 6．This is really an unforgettable experience. 这真是一次令人难忘的经历。 7．I learn from the experience that… 我从这次经历中学到…… 你校英文报正在举办主题为“A moving experience”的征文活动， 你有意愿参加。请你用英语写一篇短文， 讲述一次让你感动的经历， 并谈谈你的感悟。 注意：词数80左右。 [审题谋篇] 明确体裁话题：记叙文， 一次经历 确定人称时态：以第一、三人称及一般过去时为主 布局文章架构：首段——叙述故事经过 尾段——描述感想收获 列出核心要点： 1．一位看似贫穷的人在饭店吃完水饺后走到捐款箱捐了100元； 2．不能以貌取人。 [词汇推敲] 1．judge from 根据……判断 2．puzzled 疑惑的， 困惑的 3．the donation box 捐款箱 4．shocked 震惊的 5．ashamed 羞愧的 [遣词造句] ①Last Sunday, while I was eating in a restaurant, I noticed a bowl full of dumplings on the table next to ours. 上星期天， 我在饭店吃饭时注意到我们旁边的桌子上有一个盛满饺子的碗。 ②He looked shy． 他看上去害羞。 ③He sat down and started eating． 他坐下开始吃了起来。 ④After finishing the dumplings, he went up to the donation box on the counter, put one hundred yuan in it and left. 吃完饺子后， 他走到柜台上的捐款箱前， 在里面放了100元钱就离开了。 ⑤It left us all shocked and ashamed． 这让我们所有人都感到震惊和羞愧。 ⑥We shouldn't judge a person just from his or her appearance． 我们不应该只从外表来判断一个人。 ⑦A person with a loving heart is the richest in the world． 有爱心的人是世界上最富有的人。 [句式升级] 1．用省略句改写句① Last Sunday, while eating in a restaurant, I noticed a bowl full of dumplings on the table next to ours. 2．用现在分词短语作状语升级句②与句③ Looking shy, he sat down and started eating. 3．用非限制性定语从句升级句④与句⑤ After finishing the dumplings, he went up to the donation box on the counter, put one hundred yuan in it and left, which left us all shocked and ashamed． [妙笔成篇] [参考范文] Last Sunday, while eating in a restaurant, I noticed a bowl full of dumplings on the table next to ours.They must have been left by someone.Just then, an old man entered．Judging from his clothes, I believed he was poor.He saw the dumplings left on the table.Looking shy, he sat down and started eating.The others around looked at him, puzzled, and some even laughed．However, after finishing the dumplings, he went up to the donation box on the counter, put one hundred yuan in it and left, which left us all shocked and ashamed． We shouldn't judge a person just from his or her appearance.A person with a loving heart is the richest in the world． 假如你是李华， 请根据下面的提示描述自己的一次经历。 1．大约六岁时， 你在野外独自玩耍。天突然下起了大雨， 你迷路了， 不知道该怎么办。这时一位女士从你身边走过， 她询问了你的情况， 然后把你送回了家。 2．你的父母非常感激那位女士， 你从此也知道了：做人要乐于助人， 帮助别人会使自己更快乐。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯。 [参考范文] I will not forget the incident happening when I was about six years old．One day, I was playing alone outdoors.Suddenly, it began to rain heavily.I got lost in the heavy rain, which made me very nervous.I stood there, not knowing what to do.Just then a woman walked past.Seeing me standing in the rain crying, she took me to my home.When we arrived home, we were both wet.My parents were very grateful and asked her to stay to have dinner, but she left in a hurry. From then on, I decided to try my best to help those in need．I'm sure that I will be happier if I help others. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$