UNIT 3 Writing——如何写家庭往事（Word教参）【勤径学升】2024-2025学年高中英语必修第一册同步练测（外研版2019）

Writing——如何写家庭往事 [对应学生用书第71页] 写家庭往事属于记叙文范畴。主要是描述某一个具体事物引发的个人对过去家庭中所发生的一件小事的美好回忆。整篇文章以复述故事为主。同样需要具备记叙文的六大要素， 即时间、地点、人物、起因、经过和结果。要交代清楚时间、地点、人物和起因， 然后再进一步叙述经过和结果。注意语言运用的正确性、句子的连贯性、信息表述的完整性等。 [基本框架] 1.引入话题。是什么唤醒了自己的记忆。 2.讲述故事内容。时间、地点、人物、事件。 3.联系现实， 表述个人感受或对自己产生的启迪。 [常用词语] 1. remember/memorize 记住 2. unforgettable 难忘的 3. happen 发生 4. experience 经历 5. later on 后来 6. communicate with 与……交流 7. attend 参加；出席 8. get together 聚会 9. be/get involved in 参与；牵涉进 10. volunteer to do sth. 自愿做某事 11. take an active part in 积极参加 12. praise 表扬；赞扬 13. award 奖；奖项；奖励 14. reward 奖励；回报；报酬 15. shape one’s character 塑造某人的性格 [常用语句] 1. On my way to school/When I was walking on the street， I came across an old friend. 在去学校的路上/当我正走在大街上时， 我遇到了一位老朋友。 2. Last night I was busy preparing for my test when I heard a loud noise. 昨夜当我正忙着准备我的考试时， 我听到一声巨响。 3. Our family had a pleasant festival. 我们全家过了一个欢快的节日。 4. Looking at the photo， a wonderful memory came back to me/my mind. 看着这张照片， 我想起了一段美好的回忆。 5. A visit to the museum is an unforgettable experience. 参观博物馆是一段令人难忘的经历。 6. Tired as we were， we still felt quite happy. 虽然我们很累， 但我们感到很快乐。 7. It will stay in my mind forever. 它将永远留在我的脑海里。 8. Although/Though/While it is a long time away， it is still clear in my mind/it seems as if happening just now. 虽然已经过去很长时间了， 但它仍然清楚地在我的脑海中/似乎正在发生。 假定你是李华。你在整理书架时偶然看到妈妈曾经写给你的一叠卡片。刚进入高中时， 你的学习压力很大， 这些卡片是妈妈为了鼓励你并帮助你减轻压力， 使你开始快乐学习的见证。请你把这段美好的回忆分享给你的好友Tom。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯。 　 　 [审题谋篇] 明确体裁话题：记叙文， 关于家庭的回忆。 确定人称时态：以第一人称及一般过去时为主。 布局文章架构：首段：引入话题； 尾段：叙述故事。 列出核心要点： 1.整理书架时看到妈妈写的卡片； 2.这些卡片是妈妈为了鼓励我并帮助我减轻压力， 最后开始快乐学习的见证。 [词汇推敲] 1.　bookshelf　 书架 2.　a stack of cards　 一叠卡片 3.　encouraging　 鼓励人的；鼓舞人的 4.　go through　 经受；通过 5.　frustration　 挫折 6.　fall behind　 落后 7.　considerate　 考虑周到的；体贴人的 8.　deal with　 处理；应对 [遣词造句] ①　While I was cleaning up my bookshelf　 this weekend， I found a stack of cards. 这个周末我在整理我的书架时， 发现了一叠卡片。 ②　When I read the words on each card　， my eyes watered. 当我读每张卡片上的话语时我的眼睛湿润了。 ③These encouraging cards 　helped me go through　 my frustration. 这些鼓励卡片帮助我经受住了挫折。 ④I felt pressured 　at the beginning of high school　 and I was afraid of falling behind every minute of the day. 刚开始上高中的时候， 我感到很有压力， 我一天中的每一分钟都害怕会落后。 ⑤Mum was 　very considerate　. 妈妈很周到。 ⑥She found 　my problem　. 她发现了我的问题。 ⑦Mum makes me understand 　that pressure can’t be avoided　. 妈妈让我明白压力是无法避免的。 ⑧What counts is 　how to deal with it properly　， and how to turn it into pleasure or a challenge. 重要的是如何恰当地处理它， 如何把它变成乐趣或挑战。 [句式升级] 1.用强调句型改写句③ 　It was these encouraging cards that helped me go through my frustration.　 2.用so…that…连接句⑤和句⑥ 　Mum was so considerate that she found my problem.　 [妙笔成篇] 　 　 [参考范文] Dear Tom， While I was cleaning up my bookshelf this weekend， I found a stack of cards. When I read the words on each card， my eyes watered. It was these encouraging cards that helped me go through my frustration. I felt pressured at the beginning of high school and I was afraid of falling behind every minute of the day. Mum was so considerate that she found my problem. From then on， I could find a special card on my desk every morning. Gradually， I became less anxious and began to find pleasure in my studies. Mum makes me understand that pressure can’t be avoided. What counts is how to deal with it properly， and how to turn it into pleasure or a challenge. Yours， Li Hua 假如你是 Tony， 有一件东西让你回忆起了家庭中发生的一件事。请你写一篇80词左右的文章， 叙述该故事。 　 　 [参考范文] Every time I look at my watch， a lovely memory will come into my mind. Three years ago， I just attended junior school. I spent much time playing and I was rather lazy in my study. One day， Father talked to me in a serious tone.“As a junior student， you should know how to manage your time.” And then he took out a nice watch and handed it to me. I took it eagerly， falling in love with it at first sight. Father told me to make good use of the watch and have a strong sense of time. I have been following Father’s words and have benefited a lot from it. I am thankful to my father. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$