2025届高考英语读后续写个人成长类之网络幻影：Sara的线上友情与现实教训 讲义

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 When I was a twelve-year-old girl I was so addicted to chatting online that some people even called me CyberSara. My mom, a lawyer, always complained that I spent too much time chatting with my Internet friends. One day I got an instant message from a kid I didn’t know. His name was Bradley, who said he was twelve and lived in New York. He asked if he could be my secret friend, and I thought that seemed pretty cool. Within a few days’ chatting, I found that we both loved to play soccer, even though I didn’t play as much as I used to. To my great joy, we both loved playing computer games very much. Every day, Bradley and I chatted and emailed each other. We became best friends. He was interesting and seemed kind of smart—actually, much smarter than the typical (典型的，平常的) twelve-year-old boys I knew. I really liked chatting with him. He told me he really liked me. Bradley kept telling me New York  was a cool place to live and emailed me amazing pictures of extremely tall skyscrapers (摩天大楼). He asked me where I lived. I told him I lived in Tampa. One day, Bradley shared good news with me that he was coming to Tampa with his parents. He invited me to have a secret meeting and go for ice cream with him in the ice-cream shop near my school. Eager to find what my secret Internet friend was like, I promised to keep it a secret, not telling my parents about our plan. I was excited that I was finally going to meet Bradley after months of chatting. However, he refused to send me a picture of himself, saying he didn’t want to ruin the surprise. It made me quite confused. Was there something wrong with him? Was he a weird (奇怪的) guy who was not confident enough to show a picture of himself? But he said everyone in his school thought he was the cutest boy in his class, so I thought he had to be normal. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卷的相应位置作答。 Para.1 The next day, I accidentally told Mom that I would meet my Internet friend alone. Para.2 The moment we entered the ice-cream shop there was no one but a weird grown-up. ___________________________________________ 故事梗概： 故事讲述了12岁的女孩Sara沉迷于网络聊天，被称为CyberSara。她在网上结识了一个自称来自纽约的12岁男孩Bradley，两人很快成为了好朋友。Bradley邀请Sara在现实生活中见面，Sara兴奋地答应了，但未告知父母。后来，Sara无意中告诉妈妈她要单独去见网友，妈妈担心她的安全，坚持陪同。见面时发现只有一名成年男子自称是Bradley的叔叔，但事情很快揭露，这名男子并非Bradley的叔叔，Sara意识到了网络安全的重要性。 根据"故事山"模型对上述故事的分析： 1.引入（Setting）：Sara，一个12岁的女孩，沉迷于在线聊天，被称为CyberSara。她的母亲对她的上网时间表示担忧。 2.冲突（Conflict）：Sara遇到了一个名叫Bradley的陌生网友，他邀请Sara在现实生活中见面，这引发了潜在的安全问题。 3.升级（Rising Action）：Sara和Bradley建立了友谊，并且Sara对即将到来的见面感到兴奋。然而，Bradley拒绝发送自己的照片，这增加了Sara的困惑和好奇心。 4.高潮（Climax）：Sara无意中告诉妈妈她要去见网友，妈妈坚持要陪同，这导致了Sara必须重新考虑她的决定。 5.下降（Falling Action）：在冰淇淋店，Sara和妈妈遇到了一个自称是Bradley叔叔的陌生成年人，但事情似乎并不简单。 6.结局（Resolution）：妈妈对这名男子的真实身份表示怀疑，并报告了警察。Sara学到了关于在线安全的重要教训，并意识到了信任直觉和家人指导的重要性。 参考范文 The next day, I accidentally told Mom that I would meet my Internet friend alone. Upon hearing that, she began annoying me with a ton of questions, with her face full of anxiety. I eventually told her that Bradley was going to take me for ice cream near my school. “No. Never will you meet a stranger all alone. You are just a 12-year-old girl!”, mom was beside herself with rage when I showed my determination to go. This was the first time in my life that I had witnessed my elegant lawyer mom lose temper. So furious was she that I had no choice but to bring her together. We prepared and drove to the ice-cream shop. The moment we entered the ice-cream shop, there was no one but a weird grown-up. Noticing his strange appearance, I was enveloped by a sense of fear and clenched mom’s hands tightly. “Who are you? Are you Bradley?” asked my mom. Shocked and speechless, the man sprang from the chair, attempting to flee away. But it was too late. Mom grasped his hand with all her might and asked me to call the police. Finally, my plan with the secret Internet friend ended up with a narrow escape from being cheated. Whenever I recalled the unusual experience, fear still lingered in my mind mixed with a sense of relief. Neither should we meet Internet friend without informing parents, nor should we share private information on the Internet. 下水文： Para. 1: The next day, I accidentally told Mom that I would meet my Internet friend alone. Her eyes widened with surprise and a flicker of concern. "Sara, you can't meet a stranger without me or your father being there," she said firmly. I protested, insisting that Bradley was my friend and there was nothing to worry about. But Mom wasn't convinced. She explained the potential dangers of meeting someone from the Internet in real life, and I realized she was right. Reluctantly, I agreed to let her accompany me, feeling a mix of anxiety and anticipation about the meeting. Para. 2: The moment we entered the ice-cream shop there was no one but a weird grown-up. He was sitting in the corner, looking around nervously. As we approached, he stood up and introduced himself as Bradley's uncle, explaining that Bradley was too shy to come but had sent him instead. My mom's expression was a mix of relief and skepticism. She insisted on staying with me during the meeting, and we all sat down together. The man tried to make small talk, but his stories about Bradley didn't match what Bradley had told me. I felt a growing sense of unease. After the meeting, my mom reported the incident to the police, and it turned out that the man was not who he claimed to be. I learned a valuable lesson about online safety and the importance of trusting my instincts and my parents' guidance. 文中高分句积累： 1. I was so addicted to chatting online that some people even called me CyberSara."（我沉迷于在线聊天，以至于有些人甚至叫我CyberSara。）这句话使用了"addicted to"和"CyberSara"这个昵称，生动地表达了主人公对网络聊天的痴迷。 2."He asked if he could be my secret friend, and I thought that seemed pretty cool."（他问我是否可以成为我的秘密朋友，我觉得这听起来很酷。） 这句话通过"secret friend"和"pretty cool"传达了一种神秘和兴奋的感觉。 3."To my great joy, we both loved playing computer games very much."（让我非常高兴的是，我们俩都非常喜欢玩电脑游戏。） "To my great joy"表达了主人公发现共同爱好时的强烈情感。 4."He told me he really liked me. Bradley kept telling me New York was a cool place to live and emailed me amazing pictures of extremely tall skyscrapers."（他告诉我他真的喜欢我。Bradley一直告诉我纽约是一个居住的好地方，并给我发送了非常高层的摩天大楼的惊人照片。） 这句话通过"really liked me"和"amazing pictures of extremely tall skyscrapers"传达了Bradley对纽约的热爱和对Sara的好感。 5."Eager to find what my secret Internet friend was like, I promised to keep it a secret, not telling my parents about our plan."（急于想知道我的秘密网友是什么样的人，我承诺保守秘密，不告诉我的父母我们的计划。） "Eager to find"和"promised to keep it a secret"描绘了Sara对即将到来的会面的兴奋和对秘密的承诺。 6."The moment we entered the ice-cream shop there was no one but a weird grown-up."（我们一进入冰淇淋店，除了一个奇怪的成年人外没有别人。） "The moment we entered"和"no one but a weird grown-up"制造了一种紧张和神秘的气氛。 7. "I learned a valuable lesson about online safety and the importance of trusting my instincts and my parents' guidance."（我学到了关于网络安全的宝贵教训，以及信任我的直觉和我父母的指导的重要性。） 这句话总结了故事的教训，使用了"valuable lesson"和"the importance of trusting"强调了教训的重要性。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$