Unit 5 Section Ⅳ Writing—关于农业的辩论性文章（学生用书）-【状元桥·优质课堂】2024-2025学年新教材高中英语选择性必修第一册（人教版2019）

英语 选择性必修 第一册 同步导学案 [习作练笔]-补全句子 [习作练笔]-补全句子 (4)大雨连续下了三个小时,给庄稼造成了很大 (4)在我的记忆深处,我和父亲做过的许多事情 的损失。 历历在目。 It rained heavily for three hours in a row. , many things I did with my father leap before my eyes. 5(教材 P:)Organic farmers also plant diverse 6(教材 P)Organic farming is nowhere near able crops that use different depths of soil to help to meet that need. keepitrich.有机农场主还种植多种作物,利用 有机农业远不能满足那样的需求。 不同深度的土壤来帮助保持土壤肥沃。 ·nowhere near ·depth n.向下(或向里)的距离;深(度 完全没有,远不及 ①We only had $ 1oo and that was nowhere near dj. deep. high wide long strong hroad enough to buy a new computer. depth height width length strength breadth 我们只有100美元,远远不够买一台新电脑。 deepen heighten widen lengthen strengthen broaden ②In my opinion, she is nowhere near as pretty They sat and talked deep into the night asyou.在我看来,她远不如你漂亮。 他们坐着谈到深夜。 [习作练笔]--补全句子 [融会练通]--单句语法填空 (1)这远没有大卫想象的那么痛苦。 (1) If this is not stopped, the financial crisis It was will (deep). David had expected. (2) We felt at home with her and were impressed (2)他还远没有从考试失利中走出来。 with the (deep) of her knowledge. He's yet from the (3) Wandering along the riverside, I was failure of the test. (deep) impressed by its beautiful landscape and gentle lifestyle. 友情提示完成P.s要点自查(十) V Section Writing 一关于农业的辩论性文章 答案精解P. 本单元的写作项目是写一篇关于农业的辩 以读促写 论性文章,属于正反观点式议论文。正反观点式 )跟课文学写作范式 议论文是对某个议论对象提出见解或主张并说 (一)课文范式提炼 把汉长习 如课文第一段:介绍化学耕 明理由,使读者信服的文章。作者通过摆事实、 如课文第二段举例说明化学耕 _--. 讲道理,辨是非来确定基观点的正误,支持或否 的 中问 展开论述一作的缺点:课文第二,四段话 以 细论述了有机拼作的忧势 定某种主张,从而达到计读者信服或接受其观点 ...........-....- 结尾 总结观点 如课文第五段:希望找到解 或看法的目的。 提出建议决方案 . 96· UNrT5 WORKING THE LAND (二)常用范式推荐 (4)(2020·全国 II 书面表达)Wehavea lotof 首段一述问题并表明的观点 [材料 respectable people around us. They may be our teachers, parents or one of our elders. 是另方的观点及原因 =二--二 me, my father is the person I 尾段重中自己的观点和立场 respect most. D跟课文学亮点表达 ★学用各种表达方式陈述自己的观点 ★学各种写作手法的综合运用 课文中使用了多种表达方式来陈述自己的 文中使用了说明、举例、对比等写作手法,并 观点,例如:believe,argue,hold,claim,maintain, 运用了大量的语篇标识词,例如:表示转折的 be in favour of, be opposed to, object to, I am however,but,表示举例的forexample,for fully convinced that ., What I firmly believe in instance,表示并列和递进的and,also,表示补充 isthat..等。多种表达方式的使用完美避开了叙 信息的inaddition,用以引出不同信息的asfor. 述的千篇一律,使得表达丰富多彩,论证有力。 asanalternative,用以引l出原因的because和引 [微写作2]-一补全句子 出结论的therefore,等等。用这些标识词连接句 (1)(2024·1月浙江写作)我赞成“起立伸展”运 子、构成语篇,也体现了文本较强的逻辑性和所 动是一种快速而简单的可以让你的而液流动 说明内容的全面性。 并使身心恢复活力的方法 “Stand [微写作1]--根据语境选用合适的标识词填 Up and Stretch" exercise is a quick and easy 空:therefore, however, as for, for example way to get your blood flowing and re-energize (1)(2022·全国甲书面表达)First of all,what we your body and mind. can do is to place importance on our daily actions. (2)(2023·新高考II写作)我完全相信,如果与 , garbage can't be thrown 他们相处或沟通困难的人配对,学生可能会 into ocean. 感到不舒服或不积极。 (2)(2022·全国乙书面表达)It can easilybe seen students that the percentage of students who choose may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if listening to English songs and watching paired with someone who they don't get along English movies is respectively 65% and 50%. with or have difficulty communicating with those choosing reading (3)(2022·全国乙书面表达)毫无疑问,学生迫 English books and visiting English learning 切需要提高自律性。 websites only account for 18% and 12%. it's urgent for (3)(2020·新高考I读后续写)He tookthe popcorm students themselves to improve their self- around to the houses and sold all his discipline. popcorn. He earned a lot of money. Then, he (4)(2022·新高考I读后续写)我争辩说,除了 wanted to be self-dependent. ,he 你自己,没有人能改变你的想法。 asked Mrs, Meredith to teach him how to no one can make popcorn. change your mind, except yourself. .97. 英语 选择性必修 第一册 同步导学案 最近,鞭炮在中国一直是一个热门话题。一些 素材积累 人声称不应该禁止燃放鞭炮。相反,其他人则 (一)输入好词 持相反意见。 1. heat debate/discussion about/on ②For many of us, our closest encounter with 关于......的热烈讨论 wild animals is at a zoo. These places allow us 2. arouse wide public concern/draw public attention to observe the behaviors and characteristics of 引起了广泛的公众关注 amazing creatures. It's an enjoyable and 3. It is commonly believed/recognized that... educational experience for us, but is it the 人们普遍认为...... best environment for the animals? 对我们许 4. a controversial issue 有争议性的问题 多人来说,与野生动物最亲密的接触是在动物 5. argument on both sides 双方的论点 园。这些地方让我们可以观察到神奇生物的 6. a totally different argument 行为和特征。对我们来说,这是一次愉快的教 完全不同的观点 育体验,但对动物来说这是最好的环境吗 7. every coin has two sides 事物都有两面性 ③Recently our class has had a debate about 8. cannot bear closer analysis/cannot hold water whether organic farming is good for us. 经不起推敲 Different students hold different opinions. 9. be listed as follows 列举如下 最近我们班就有机耕作是否对我们有益展开 10. all things considered 全面考虑 了一场辩论。不同的学生有不同的看法。 11. people/those in favour of the former/latter opinion ④In spite of this, advantages are more than 支持前/后种观点的人 disadvantages.尽管如此,优势大于劣势。 12. Some people ... while others... 一些人......而另外一 Will distance learning replace traditional learning? 些人..... 远程学习会取代传统学习吗? 13. take many factors into account/consideration Is listening to a book better than reading it? 考虑到诸多因素 听书比看书更好吗? 14. from another perspective 从另一个角度 There had been much debate on the issue of 15. the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages easing the burden of excessive homework and 利远远大于弊 off-campus tutoring for students. (二)输入好句 人们对“双减”问题议论纷纷。 1.提出论点,引入话题 2.列举正反方观点及其理由 ① Recently, firecrackers have been a hotly ⑧Admittedly, there is no denying that keeping debated topic in China. Some people claim that pets has negative sides. For example, keeping firecrackers should not be banned. Others, on pets isdangerous.诚然,不可否认,养宠物有消 the contrary, hold the opposite opinion 极的一面。例如,养宠物是危险的。 .98· UNIT5 WORKING THE LAND However, its benefits are far more obvious bring some problems, but they cannot undermine than its downsides. To begin with, there is no the role of pets in our life.从上面提到的内容 doubt that keeping pets can make life more 中,我们可以得出结论,养宠物会带来一些问题 colorful and entertaining for both adults and 但它们不会削弱宠物在我们生活中的作用。 children.然而,它的好处远比缺点更明显。首 From my point of view, micro-blog is a good 先,毫无疑问,养宠物可以使成人和儿童的生 platform for people to show their 活更加丰富多彩和有趣。 personal experiences and communicate with others.在我看来,微博是人们展示个人经历和 oFurthermore, it is ohvious that it is beneficial to 与他人交流的好平台。 our environment. With online shopping, citizens do In my view, environmental protection and not need to go to the malls to buy goods. economic development can coexist in parallel Thus, it can reduce the use of private cars and and can stay in harmony. reduce carbonemissions.此外,很明显,它对我 在我看来,环境保护和经济发展可以并行共 们的环境有益。通过网上购物,市民不需要去 存,并且可以保持和谐。 购物中心购买商品。因此,它可以减少私家车 的使用,减少碳排放。 佳作构建 The advertisements on TV are not only 【写作要求】 about products but also about safety. Some of 假如你是李华,你班就化学耕作和有机耕作 the advertisements play an educational role. 进行了讨论,请你写一篇文章阐述一下你的观 For example, advertisements about the introduction 点。内容如下: of Internet fraud can help raise the general 1.有机农产品更健康,让人放心; public's awareness of safety. 2.有机农耕对环境不造成破坏; 电视上的广告不仅关乎产品,也关乎安全。有 3.有机农耕让农民增加收入。 些广告起到了教育作用。例如,介绍网络诈骗 注意:词数80左右。 可以帮助提高公众的安全意识。 参考词汇:喷洒化学农药spray chemical pesticides 3.表明自己的观点 【四步成文】 All in all, it seems that there are advantages to 第一步:审题谋篇 both physical books and audiobooks. As far as 议论文,对化学耕作和有机耕作表达 I am concerned, physical books can help to _------ learn information better. 第段:计论的话题; 总而言之,实体书和有声书似乎都有好处。就 布局文章架构第一段:支持的理由; 第二段:个人观点。 我而言,读纸质书可以更好地记住信息。 11引入讨论话题:对化学耕作和有机 From what has been mentioned above, we 列出核心梦点2艾持有机耕作的理由; 1耕作进行讨论; may draw the conclusion that keeping pets can 3.表明白已的观点。 .99. 英语 选择性必修 第一册 同步导学案 第二步:由词扩句 第四步:连句成篇 1.最近我们班就有机耕作是否比化学耕作更可取 展开了一场辩论。我赞成有机耕作,原因如下。 Recently our class organic farming is preferable to chemical farming the organic farming. Here are some reasons. 2.在有机耕作中,农民被禁止在植物上喷洒化学 农药。 Farmers on the plants in organic farming. 实战演练 3.农民利用天然的动物肥料。这将有利于改善 除夕之际,全国多地禁止燃放烟花爆竹。虽 土壤条件。 然有明文规定,但除夕之夜爆竹烟花燃放依旧如 Farmers . It 故。对于该不该禁止燃放烟花爆竹,民众主要存 will 在两种看法。请以“Fireworks-to beforbidden 4.有机耕作可以增加农民的收入。 ornot”为题写一篇英语短文,表达自己的观点。 Organic farming can 注意:词数80左右。 5.随着越来越多的人关心自已的健康,他们倾向 于购买有机水果和蔬菜。 , they tend to buy organic fruits and vegetables. 6. 我希望将来越来越多的农民转向有机耕作。 I hope more and more farmers 第三步:句式升级 7.将句3合并升级为定语从句 8.将句5升级为with复合结构 完成P课时作业(十五) 完成PUNIT5 单元回扣 二 完成P.UNIT5 单元验收评价 .100.8.(1)Given (2)DGiven (that)you will take part in a Chinese 。 5.(1)deepen (2)depth (3)deeply poetry reciting contest 2Assuming (that)you will take part (4)In the depths of my memory in a Chinese poetry reciting contest Supposing (that)you 6.(1)nowhere near as painful as (2)nowhere near recovered will take part in a Chinese poetry reciting contest As long Section V Writing一关于农业的辩论性文章 as you will take part in a Chinese poetry reciting contest 9.(1)reality:real:really:to realise/realize (2)in reality 以读促写 (3)to make his dream a reality/to realize his dream/to turn [微写作] his dream into a reality 1.(1)For example (2)However (3)Therefore (4)As for Section I Learning About Language 2.(1)I'm in favour of (2)I'm fully convineed that (3)There is no doubt that (4)I argued that 语法慧学·提升语言能力 佳作构建 [自我感知] 第二步：由词扩句 1.主语2.表语：主语：宾语3.是否：不充当 1.has had a debate about whether;I'm in favour of 4.形式主语：that引导的主语从句5.状语 2.are forbidden to spray chemical pesticides 要义详析 3.use natural waste from animals:be good for improving the [即时训练] conditions of the soil 1.(1)That she could come to help us 4.increase the farmers'income (2)Whether she is coming or not 5.As more and more people care about their health 2.(1)How/When (2)Why (3)Which (4)Where/When 6.will turn to organic farming in the future (5)What (6)Whoever 第三步：句式升级 3.(1)It's a pity that (2)It's suggested that (3)It seems that 7.Farmers use natural waste from animals,which will be good (4)It is doubtful whether (5)It happened that for improving the conditions of the soil. (6)It hasn't been decided yet whether 8.With more and more people caring about their health,they (7)It is known to us all that tend to buy organic fruits and vegetables. 4.(1)was (2)is (3)has been decided (4)is 第四步：连句成篇 跟踪检测 One possible version: 【,单句语法填空 Recently our class has had a debate about whether organic 1.that 2.Whether 3.Who 4.Whoever 5.What farming is preferable to chemical farming.I'm in favour of the 6.Whether 7.(should)learn 8.What 9.Where/How organic farming.Here are some reasons. 10.Why 11.That 12.is 13.was 14.that 15.When Firstly,farmers are forbidden to spray chemical pesticides Ⅱ.语法与写作 on the plants in organic farming.Secondly,farmers use natural 1.What made Mr Lin excited waste from animals,which will be good for improving the 2.that her daughter didn't come back home conditions of the soil.Thirdly,organic farming can increase the 3.What we can't get farmers'income.With more and more people caring about their 4.whether the theme park will appeal to the tourists health,they tend to buy organic fruits and vegetables. 5.that the head teacher is pleased with the result of the exam I hope more and more farmers will turn to organie farming 6.What kids need most in the future. Ⅲ，用适当的关系词填空 实战演练 1.what 2.what 3.that 4.whether 5.whether One possible version: 语基输入·助力语言输出 Fireworks-to be forbidden or not (1)about:;for (2)of (3)care about each other's needs When the Spring Festival of 2024 was around the corner. Section II Using Language bans on fireworks frequently came out.There has long been public argument about fireworks in China.Some people claim 课文研读·发展思维品质 that fireworks should not be banned.Others,on the contrary. I.1~4 DDAA hold the opposite opinion.As far as I'm concerned,I am in favor ll,1.have been 2.what 3.and 4.killing 5.an 6.means of the former as long as we use them properly. 7.to produce 8.entirely 9.suitable 10.keeping There is no denying that fireworks have positive sides.For 语基输入·助力语言输出 example,it is an ancient Chinese custom,which makes festivals 1.(1)to look:by (2)to give (3)learn more effectively in turn and holidays more colorful and entertaining for both adults and (4)i,消化(5).消化(6).文摘(7).领会：理解 children.However,their downsides are far more obvious than 2.(1)(should)be sent (2)to strengthen their benefits.To begin with.lighting fireworks is dangerous. (3)which are essential to learning Furthermore,they are harmful to our environment and health 3.(1)an (2)alternatives (3)Alternatively (4)alternative since they can lead to air pollution. (5)have no alternative but to choose Personally speaking.I think it a good idea to ban fireworks 4.(1)resulting (2)preventing (3)to be told for the sake of safety.Anyway,we have many other ways of (4)causing great damage to the crops celebrating the New Year such as having parties. *178