Unit 2 Period Five Part Ⅰ Language Points（学生用书）-【状元桥·优质课堂】2024-2025学年新教材高中英语选择性必修第一册（北师大版2019）

UNIT 2 SUCCESS Period Five Writing Workshop Other Parts of the Unit Part I Language Points 新知感悟自测基础知识 答案精解Pm 1.重点单词 18. n.设计师，设计者→ 1. n.方式，特点 n.&.u.设计 2. ade.向前 19 ado,痛苦地：愤恨地→ 3. .自制力.惩罚，处罚 adj.痛苦的：令人不快的 4 t.创立：创建 20. n.提升，晋升→ 5. n.时尚 .提升，晋升 6. n.便签，标记.贴标签于 .进人许可：入口 掌握规律 巧记单词 8. n.收人：收益 1.ship结尾的名词（表示身份：关系： 9. adj.公认的：经过检验的→ 资格) .认识：认出：辨别出：认可→ leader n.领导者；首领-leadership n.领 n.认识；认出：辨别出：认可 导：领导职位 10. u.捐献：促成→ member n,成员：会员→membership n.会 n.捐献；促成 员资格 11. i.退休；退职→ friend n.朋友→friendship.友谊 n.退休：退职 2.名词+-ful→形容词 12. 领导：领导地位 faith n.相信；信任→faithful adj.忠实 认.领导→ .领 的：忠诚的 导者：首领；指挥者 care n,小心：关心→careful adj,小心 13. n.奉献：忠心→ 的：仔细的 0.奉献→ adj.挚爱的：忠诚的 14. ad.先进的：高级的：晚期的→ Ⅱ.核心短语 n.&..前进：进步：发展 从…退休 15. ”推荐信：谈到，提及→ 贡献；促进 u.谈到，提及 一系列 16. n相信：信任→ 4. 呈现：接受 adj,忠实的：忠诚的 5. 参加 17. 儿.嫌弃；拒绝接受 6. 看穿：看破 .拒绝 7 为…付出代价 ·57 英语选择性必修第一册课堂学案(BS) 8. 被诊断为 Ⅲ.经典句式 9. 信任 1.not only.but alse0…不但…而且… She is loved because of her 10. 迫切需要 devotion to her career, because 11. 发表演讲 of her huge influence on the sport of volleyball. 12. 为…打下基础 她被喜爱不仅是因为她对事业的贡献，而且还 13. 阻止某人做某事 因为她对排球运动的影响。 14. 依靠 2.s0…that…引导结果状语从句 15. 得到好结果：取得成功： The disease was 付清 16. 坚持 这病已经是晚期了，他只能活几个月了。 课文释疑助力高效课堂 READING CLUB 1 CONTRIBUTION AND SACRIFICE [教材原文] [词汇注解] Huang Danian,Dthe renowned Chinese geophysicist,was born 〈1)further vt,促进，增进 in 1958 in Guangxi,China.As a keen and able student,Huang went further one's studies/career to the UK in 1993 to further his studies. 深造/发展某人的事业 DHuang Danian的同位语。 (2)leading experts一流的 By the time Huang moved back to China in 2008,he had been 专家 living and working in the UK for 15 years.He had a good job and a leading adj.最重要的，一 life there,but he gave it all up to return to home,2driven by the idea 流的 that he needed to contribute to his country.As one of the world's <3>approach/aprautf/ut. leading experts in deep earth exploration technology,Huang was 洽，建议，要求 approached to participate in the "Thousand Talent"programme.He approach sb (about/for sth) took up a position at Jilin University,Changchun. (就某事)与某人接洽/商议 ②u.ed结构作原因状语，drive与其逻辑主语he之间为动宾关系：that approach sb about(doing) 在此引导同位语从句，解释说明the idea的具体内容 sth就（做）某事与某人接 Huang was named lead scientist on China's deep earth exploration 洽/商议 programme,developing advanced cameras that can see through (4>advanced/ad'va:nst/ the Earth's crust so that it can be analysed without having to dig into ad.先进的：高级的，晚 it.He set up a state-of-the-art lab,sometimes paying for equipment with 期的 his own money.Some described him as a "lunatic"(a madman),but the advanced stages of the this passion and drive enabled Huang to propel China's deep earth disease疾病晚期 ·58+ UNIT 2 SUCCESS exploration technology into a world-leading position.Huang's <5>pay a/the price for (doing) dedication contributed to China's lunar probe Yutu being landed on the sth为（做）某事付出代价 moon in 2013 and the launch of the spacecrafts Shenzhou1I and (6>collapse/koleeps/vi. Tiangong-2 in 2016. 指因病重而)倒下，昏倒，晕 ③u.ing结构作伴随状语。第一个that在此引导定语从句，修饰先行 倒：（突然）倒塌，坍塌 词cameras:so that在此引导目的状语从句。 (7)be diagnosed with被诊 Huang's health also paid the price for his commitment to his 断患有… work.He began having fainting fits in 2012,but paid them little attention,stating he did not have time to go to see a doctor-his work 〈8)letters of reference推 always came first.In November 2016,Huang collapsed5 and was 荐信 taken to hospital,where he was diagnosed with cancer.The disease reference/'refarans/n.[C] was so advanced that he had just a couple of months to live 荐信：[C,U]说到（或写到） ④s0…that…引导结果状语从句，意为“如此…以至于…” 的事，提到，谈及 Like the true scientist he was,Huang never gave up,but always (9》have faith in相信…， tried to push forwards.Even from his hospital bed,he continued his 对…有信心 work,writing letters of reference s for his colleagues and replying to faith/fe0/n.[U]信任，相 questions from his students.He had great faith in the talent of the 信，信心 up-and-coming generation."Our country is in urgent need of (10>up-and-coming adj. talented people,"he said."If we spend more time and pay more attention to the young,masters and even Nobel prize winners may rise 前途的，前程似锦的 among them.” 〈1I)in urgent need of迫切 Huang died in January 2017,aged just 58.More than 800 people 需要 attended his funeral to celebrate a life that burned so bright,but was urgent//3 :d3ont/adj.紧急 so short. 的，紧迫的，迫切的 中国著名地球物理学家黄大年1958年出生于中国广西。黄大年聪明好学，1993年赴英国留学 深造。 至2008年黄大年回到中国时，他已在英国生活和工作了15年，他在那儿工作稳定，生活优裕，但 他认为白己要为国家作出贡献的想法驱使他放弃一切，回到祖国。作为世界一流的地球深部探测技 术专家之一，黄大年被邀请参加“千人计划”，并在长春的吉林大学任职。 黄大年被任命为中国地球深部探测项目的首席科学家，开发可以透视地壳的先进照相机，这样， 不用掘人地壳就可以分析它。他建立了最先进的实验室，有时会自掏腰包采购设备。有人说他是个 “疯子”，但这种激情和动力让黄大年将中国的地球深部探测技术推向了世界领先地位。黄大年为 2013年月球探测器“玉兔”的登月以及2016年“神舟十一号”和“天宫二号”的发射作出了卓著贡献。 黄大年为工作付出了（失去）健康的代价。2012年，他开始出现昏蹶，但他没有太在意，说自己没 有时间去看医生一他的工作总是排在第一位。2016年11月，黄大年病倒，被送往医院，在那里被 确诊患了癌症。癌症已是晚期，他只有几个月的生命了。 像真正的科学家一样，黄大年从不放弃，而是努力向前。即使在病床上，他也继续工作，为同事写 推荐信，回复学生的问题。他坚信这一代人才华横溢，大有前途。“我们的国家急需人才，”他说。“如 果我们在年轻人身上投入更多的时间，给予他们更多的关注，专家甚至诺贝尔奖获得者可能就出现在 他们中间。” 黄大年于2017年1月去世，年仅58岁。800多人参加了他的葬礼，纪念他燃烧得如此明亮，却又 如此短暂的一生。 ·59. 英语选择性必修第一册课堂学案(BS) READING CLUB 2 THE IMPORTANCE OF FAILURE [教材原文] [词汇注解] When the world-famous author J.K.Rowling gave a speech at a <1)no other way别无他 法：没有别的出路 Harvard University graduation ceremony,some may have been a little (2>discipline/disiplin/ surprised by the topic she chose:"The Benefits of Failure". n.[U门自制力，遵守纪律 Rowling's first novel was rejected by 12 publishers before it was t,惩罚，处罚 (3>co-found共同创建found/ finally published,yet paradoxically.D it was this experience that faund/vt.创建，创办（组织 helped her to succeed:"Failure taught me things about myself that I 或机构，尤指提供资金) could have learnt no other way I discovered that I had a strong will, (4>rejection/rrd3ckfan/ m.[C,U门拒绝，否绝 and more discipline than I had expected. (5>replace ut..代替，取代 ①强调句，强调主语this experience, 〈6>lay the groundwork(for…) The late Apple CEO Steve Jobs experienced failure early in his (为…)做准备工作 〈7)fashion designer时装设 career,when he was fired from the company he had co-founded.He 计师fashion/faefon/n.[U] felt despair and rejection.However,it was,in his view,"the best 时装业：[U,C](衣服、发式 thing that could have ever happened to me.The heaviness of being 等的)流行款式，时兴式样： successful was replaced s by the lightness of being a beginner again. [C](行为、活动等的)时尚， 时兴come into fashion时兴 less sure about everything.It freed me to enter one of the most in fashion流行out of fashion creative periods in my life. 过时designer/dizaino/n.[C] Even Bill Gates has experienced failure.His first company was 设计者，构思者 (8>straightforward/streit called Traf-O-Data,but unfortunately,its product didn't work.It fo:wod/adj.简单的，易懂 was a total disaster.But 2 what Gates learnt from this experience 的，不复杂的：坦诚的，坦率 helped lay the groundwork for the global success that is now 的，率直的 〈9>bitterly disappointed极 Microsoft.He didn't make the same mistake twice. 其失望bitterly/brtoli/acd,痛 ②what引导的主语从句，what在从句中作learnt的宾语。 苦地：愤恨地 ③that引导的定语从句，修饰先行词success。 10>assistant/a'sistant/ adj.助理的，副的n.[C]助 Talented fashion designer?Vera Wang has built a global fashion 理，助手 empire,yet life wasn't always so straightforward A dedicated ice 〈11)pass over sb(考虑提职 skater as a young woman,Wang was bitterly disappointed"when she 等时)跳过某人pass over sth 避免提及（或考虑） did not make the 1968 US Olympic team.She gave up sport and joined <12>promotion/pra'maufan/ Vogue as an assistant editor,but was crushed.After 15 years at the n.[U,C]提升，提拔，晋升 magazine,she was passed over for promotion to editor-in-chief. promote.提升，晋升：促 进，推动 However,this setback prompted her to set up her own bridal 13〉bridal/brad/adj.婚 fashion label.The rest is history. 礼的，新娘的 ·60* UNIT 2 SUCCESS Ang Lee,a worldwide-famous director,wasn't successful either <14>the college entrance as a student or as an actor.Twice failing the college entrance examination高考 examination at home,Lee turned to study drama in the US.but his entrance/'entrans/n.[U] poor English prevented him from becoming an actor.After being (俱乐部、社团、大学等的) accepted for a directing major,Lee spent six years looking for 准许加人，进人许可：[C] opportunities to direct a film,but was only asked to look after 大门（口） filming equipment.He then spent most of his time writing plays which <15)major n.[C]主修课 were rejected by more than 30 companies within two weeks.During 程，专业课i.以…为专 six years with no income,he had to depend on his wife.In the end, 业major in…主修 with his wife's encouragement and his determination,all his efforts (16)direct a film执导电影 finally paid off. (17>income/inkAm/ n.[C,U]收入，收益，所得 ④u.ing短语作原因状语，fail与其逻辑主语Iee之间为主谓关系。 high/low incomes高/低 All these individuals share something in common:At tough 收入 moments in their lives,they showed grit.But what is "grit"exactly? 〈18)pay off成功，奏效，达 Put simply2,it's a passion for something and the determination to 到目的 work hard and to stick with it.It's very easy to give up when we hit <19>share/have sth in common setbacks,but people who have grit keep going. 有共同之处 So,how can we become "grittier"?This is where the importance (20>put simply/to put it of failure comes in:If we can learn how to manage failure,we'll learn simply简单地说to put it how to succeed.By working through a series of failures,we're better mildly婉转地说to put it prepared for the bigger challenges we'll face in the adult world:We'll another way换个说法 have the resilience we need to keep going.We'll have true grit. (21)stick with持续，坚持 世界著名作家J.K.罗琳在哈佛大学毕业典礼上发表演讲时，有些人可能会对她选择的话题 “失败的好处”感到有点惊讶。 罗琳的第一部小说在最终出版前遭到12家出版商的拒绝，然而矛盾的是，正是这一经历帮助她 取得了成功：“失败教我更了解自己，这是我用其他方法学不到的。我发现我有坚强的意志，而且比我 预想的还要自律。” 已故的苹果公司首席执行官史蒂夫·乔布斯在其职业生涯早期经历过失败，当时，他被自己与他 人共同创建的公司解雇。他体验到了绝望和被拒绝的滋味。然而，在他看来，这是“发生在我身上最 好的事情。成功的重担被再次成为新手的轻松取代，一切都有不确定性。它使我能腾出时间进人人 生中最有创造力的时期之一。” 就连比尔·盖茨也经历过失败。他的第一家公司叫Traf-O-Date,但不幸的是，其产品销路不佳。 那完全是次失败。但盖茨从这次经历中学到的东西为他获得全球性的成功一现在的Microsoft-一奠 定了基础。他设有再犯相同的错误。 才华横溢的时装设计师王薇薇微建立了全球时装帝国，但她的生活也不总是一帆风顺的。作为 名满腔热忱的年轻女子滑冰运动员，王薇薇没能人选1968年的美国奥运代表队，这让她非常失望 她放弃了运动，加入《Vogue》做助理编辑，却遭遇打击。她在该杂志工作15年后，没有被提升为总 编。然而，这一挫折促使她建立了自己的婚礼时尚品牌。接下来的事大家都知道了。 ·61* 英语选择性必修第一册课堂学案(BS) 世界著名导演李安，无论是当学生还是当演员时，他都不成功。在国内两次高考失利后，李安前 往美国学习戏剧，但他的英语很差，这使他没能成为演员。被导演专业录取后，李安花了六年时间寻 找执导电影的机会，却只得到看守拍摄设备的工作。然后他花了大部分时间写剧本，这些剧本在两周 内又被30多家公司拒绝。没有收人的六年里，他不得不依靠妻子。最后，凭着妻子的鼓励和他自己 的决心，他所有的努力终于带来了成功。 所有这些人都有个共同点：在他们生活中艰难的时刻，他们表现出了毅力。但是，到底什么是“毅 力”？简而言之，它是对某种事物的热情，以及努力工作并坚持下去的决心。当我们遇到挫折时，我们 很容易放弃，但有毅力的人则会坚持下去 那么，如何才能变得“更有毅力”？这就是失败的重要之处：如果我们能学会如何应对失败，我们 就能学会如何成功。通过克服一系列失败，我们将准备得更充分，以迎接成人世界中的更大挑战：我 们将获得继续前进所需的韧性。我们会获得真正的毅力。 语基输入助力语言输出 答案精解P 1(教材Pu)L,ang Ping is one of China's most (3)We recognise him a hard-working recognised athletes. and honest person. 郎平是公认的中国最好的运动员之一。 我们认为他是一个勤奋并且诚实的人。 ●recognised adj.公认的：经过检验的 (4)After 25 years the town centre has changed beyond (recognise). ①recognise t.认出；承认：认识：辨别出 25年过去了，市中心变得认不出米了。 recognise sb's/one's voice 2(教材Pw)She has been a volleyball star for 辨别出某人的声音 more than thirty-five years and has contributed recognise sb/sth as/to be... greatly t0 the sport…她当排球明星已经超过35 承认…是… 年了，对这项运动作出了很大的贡献 It is recognised that… 人们公认… 。contribute.捐献，捐助：贡献：投稿：促成，造成 ②recognition n.承认；认出：认识：辨别出：认可 ①contribute.to 把…捐献给… beyond recognition 无法辨认 向…投稿 (1)(2023·新高考I)Shanghai may be the contribute to 捐赠：捐献：有助于； recognized home of the soup dumplings but food 导致：投稿 historians will actually point you to the neighboring ②contribution ,贡献：捐助 canal town of Nanxiang as Xiao long bao's make contributions/a contribution to birthplace.上海可能是公认的小笼包之乡，但美 对…作出贡献 食历史学家会告诉你，邻近的运河小镇南翔才 [联想]表示“引起：导致；有助于”的词汇还有： 是小笼包的发源地。 cause,lead to,result in,bring about等。 (2) Confucius (1)(2024·1月浙江)Be sure to schedule set was a famous educationalist. times to watch your lectures,read materials and 孔子是一位著名的教育家，这是大家公认的。 contribute to online discussion boards. ·62* UNIT 2 SUCCESS 一定要安排好固定的时间来观看你的讲座，阅 [句型转换] 读材料，并参与在线讨论区。 (2)I not only knew her,but also was her best (2)Everyone of us should be grateful and make friend. (contribute)to our society. I know her,but 我们每个人都应该心存感激并为我们的社会作 also her best friend. 出贡献。 (3)Tom and Mary as well as I are fond of the music. [一词多义]一写出下列句中contribute to的含义 Tom (3)Many people contributed money to the poor and Mary fond of the music. boy who dropped out of school,which contributed 4(教材Ps)The disease was so advanced that he to his returning to school.A writer wrote a story had just a couple of months to live. about it and contributed it to China Daily. 这病已经是晚期了，他只能活几个月了 。advanced adj..先进的；高级的：晚期的 3(教材Pm)She is loved not only because of her advance .&.以.前进：促进；提前：发展 devotion to her career,but also because of her in advance 提前，预先 huge influence on the sport of volleyball. in advance of预先，事先：（时间上）在…前； 她被喜爱不仅是因为她对事业的贡献，而且还 (发展上)超前 因为她对排球运动的影响。 ●句型：not only...but als0…不但…而且… (1)(2023·新高考I写作)This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate ①not only...but(also)…连接的两个并列成 the conversation,leaving little room for the other 分作主语时，谓语动词的人称和数遵循 students to improve. “就近原则”。 这可能会阻碍学生的进步，因为程度高的学生可能 ②not only...but(also)…连接两个并列分 会主导谈话，给其他学生留下很少的进步空间。 句，且not only位于句首时，not only后的 (2)We had extremely advanced in our knowledge 分句需部分倒装，but(also)后的分句不 of the world.我们在世界知识方面大有长进。 倒装。 (3)It's Sunday morning and I should be editing ③not only只能连用，而but(also)既可连 articles my upcoming vacation. 用，也可分开用，also也可省略 星期天的早上，我本应该赶在即将到来的假期 ④not only B but also A=A as well as B,此 来临前完成文章的校订。 时两者强调的都是A。 (4)You can borrow a history book and learn the (1)(2023·全国乙)Not only do they look beautiful, history of the Tang Dynasty but studies have shown that they can promote 你可以借一本历史书，提前了解唐朝的历史。 people's wellbeing by improving their mood. ⑤（教材Pa)Even from his hospital bed,he continued reducing stress and helping their memory. his work,writing letters of reference for his colleagues 它们不仅看起来很漂亮，而且研究表明，它们可 and replying to questions from his students. 以通过改善情绪、减轻压力和帮助增强记忆力 即使在病床上，他仍然继续工作，为他的同事写 来促进人们的健康。 推荐信，回复他学生的问题。 ·63 英语选择性必修第一册课堂学案(BS) reference n.推荐信；谈到，提及：查阅；参考书目 (3)It is the astronaut's belief that one cannot be t00 (faith)to one's duty.对自己 ①in/with reference to 关于 的职责再忠诚也不为过，这是这位宇航员的信仰。 ②refer u谈到：查阅：提交：指 ⑦（教材Pa)After 15 years at the magazine,she refer to 参考：涉及：指的是 was passed over for promotion to editor-in-chief. refer to...as... 把…称为/当作… 在杂志社工作了15年后，她没有晋升为主编。 refer...to... 将…送交给… 。promotion n.提升，晋升 (1)The publisher made no reference to any agreement and cooperation. ①get a promotion 获得晋升 这个出版商没有提到任何协议和合作。 ②promote u促进，提升：促销：晋级 (2)(2022·6月天津改编)A kind and sympathetic get promoted 得到晋升 person is frequently referred to promote sb to 提升某人为… one with a soft heart.一个善良和富有同情心的 (1)(2022·全国甲)Cao and Wu also collected 人通常被认为有一颗柔软的心。 garbage along the road,in order to promote (3)I have nothing to say environmental protection. that incident.关于那个事件，我无可奉告。 曹和吴还沿路收集垃圾，以促进环境保护。 (4)You should refer this matter (2)To our surprise,he should give up the opportunity the teacher who you respect most for a decision. 你应该把这个问题交给你最尊敬的老师做决定。 to get a promotion and a pay rise. 令人惊讶的是，他竟然放弃升职加薪的机会。 ⑥（教材Pa)He had great faith in the talent of the up-and-coming generation. (3)While waiting for the opportunity to get 他坚信这一代人才华横溢，大有前途。 (promote),Henry did his best to perform his duty.在等待升迁机会的同时，亨利 。faith n.相信：信任：信心：信仰 尽力做好自己的工作。 ①have faith in 对…有信心 (4)Her (promote)to Sales Manager lose faith in 对…失去信心 took everyone by surprise. ②faithful adj.忠实的：忠诚的 她被提升为销售经理，这使每个人都感到意外。 ③faithfully adu.忠实地 3(P)In the end,with his wife's encouragement (1)(2022·新高考I读后续写)It was his brave and his determination,all his efforts finally paid heart and strong faith that could make something o忙.最后，凭着妻子的鼓励和他自己的决心，他 unusual happen finally.正是他勇敢的心和坚定 所有的努力终于带来了成功。 的信念，才使得奇迹最终发生 。pay off得到好结果：取得成功；偿清，还清 (2)What I want to know is whether or not you pay for 为…付钱：为…付出代价 the cooperation. pay back 还钱：报复 我想知道的是你对这次合作是否已失去了信心。 64 UNIT 2 SUCCESS [提示]pay off表示“得到回报”时，无被动语态， 。句型：强调句型 且一般用表示事物的名词作主语：表示“偿清” 强调句结构为：1tis/was十被强调部 时，用人作主语。 分+that/who…a (1)(2022·1月浙江读后续写)Our hard work ①强调句型通常用来强调主语、宾语或状语。 paid off and Dr.Henderson was very satisfied ②如果强调的是人，可以用who替换that, with our wonderful findings..我们的努力得到了 其他情况一律用that。 回报，亨德森博士对我们的惊人发现非常满意。 [句型转换] (2)After ten years of hard work,the old couple I picked up the bag occasionally in the park last Sunday. all the debts in the end.经过十年 picked up 的辛苦工作，这对老夫妇终于还清了所有债务。 the bag occasionally in the park last Sunday. (3)Your fruit basket is special because you 调主语) it yourself. 你的果篮很特别，因为是你自己付钱买的。 picked up occasionally in the park last Sunday. (强调宾语) (4)Can you lend me some money?I'll on Friday. picked up the bag occasionally last Sunday. 你能借我一些钱吗？我周五还给你。 调地点状语) ⑨（教材Pu)-it was this experience that helped I her to succeed. picked up the bag occasionally in the park. …正是这次经历帮助她取得了成功。 调时间状语) 随堂演练 核心素养落实 答案精解P。 I.单词拼写 the nest,she decided it was time to take the 1.(2022·6月浙江)Similarly in the workplace, plunge. trust is important for strong (领导). 6.If you want to gain success,what you should 2.(2022·北京)For instance,we must exercise have first is (自制力). 7.In the (时尚)world,.the woman daily regardless of our age and working is influential and has got countless awards. 8.As a d he has designed many 3.It is r that he is an outgoing famous buildings and is influential in the field. student in the science class. 9.After many years of hard work and saving 4.The employee complains about his low i money,he f his own business occasionally. last year. 5.(2022·全国甲)When she (退 10.Slowly,he clawed his way out from under from dancing and her sons eventually flew the c building. ·65 英语选择性必修第一册课堂学案(BS) Ⅱ.单句语法填空 6.The publisher had supported the local team 1.Not only you but also I be) (faithful)for 30 years. unlucky this time. 7.My nephew's hard work paid 2.The evidence will contribute to (catch)the thief. when he was admitted to a key university. 3.(2022·1月浙江改编)t's a technique 8.(2022·新高考Ⅱ)Registration must be made helps turn a long narrative into at least two weeks advance. an interesting one. 9.I really can't figure why he left 4.When I said some people were stupid,I the company without telling other employees. wasn't referring_ you. 5.I'm sorry to have prevented you from 10.His (reject)of this cooperation (chase)your own dream. with the company made his career collapse. Part II Writing-Write a Life Story 答案精解P 写作指导 >2 佳作构建 本单元的写作任务是人物传记。人物传记 你校准备在新建的“名人长廊”中为每一位 主要是介绍某人的基本信息及其事迹。一般是 名人画像配上英文介绍，以便让同学们有更多的 介绍人物的童年、少年，青年，中年或老年时期的 机会学习英语。请你根据以下信息写一篇80词 经历（包括生活、工作和学习），末尾一般总述人 左右的英语短文介绍郎平。 物的功绩成败，也可以在记叙成长经历的同时加 1.郎平，1960年12月10日出生于天津市。1973 人一些议论 年，13岁的郎平开始练习打排球： [常用表达] 2.1978年，郎平因在全国排球比赛中表现突出， 1.He/She was one of the greatest scientists in 进入国家队： the 20th century. 3.从1980年起，郎平获得很多荣誉及奖励： 2.He/She was born in 1911. 4.退役后，郎平成为排球教练。2016年，郎平带 3.He/She studied at a local high school and 领中国女排，时隔12年，在里约奥运会(the graduated from Peking University. Rio(Dlympic Games)上获得金牌： 4.He/She is such a learned/strong-willed person 5.郎平是中国第一位作为球员和教练均夺取奥 that we all admire/respect him/her. 运会冠军的排球运动员。 5.He/She devoted all his/her life to the work. ©审题谋篇 6.He/She made great contributions to our [审题] country. 写作要求是写一篇人物传记。写作时应注 7.He/She was highly thought of by many 意下面三点： people. 1.确定文体：这是一篇人物传记。写作时注意人 8.He/She will live in the hearts of us forever. 物介绍的写作特点： ·66Period Five Writing Workshop Other 2.She began to play volleyball at the age of 13. 3.She was hard-working and she won a lot of awards. Parts of the Unit 句式升级 Part I Language Points 1.Lang Ping.who was born on Dec.10th,1960,is a famous 新知感悟自测基础知识 volleyball coach. I,重点单词 2.She began to play volleyball when she was 13. 1.style 2.forwards 3.discipline 4.found 5.fashion 6.label 3.She was so hard-working that she won a lot of awards. 7.entrance 8.income 9.recognised:recognise;recognition ©组句成篇 10.contribute:contribution 11.retire;retirement 12.leadership: One possible version: lead;leader 13.devotion:devote;devoted 14.advanced:advance Lang Ping,who was born on Dec.10th,1960.is a famous 15.reference;refer 16.faith;faithful 17.rejection;rejeet volleyball coach and we all admire her very much. 18.designer;design 19.bitterly:bitter 20.promotion:promote She began to play volleyball at the age of 13.She joined the Ⅱ，核心短语 national team because of her excellent performance in the national 1.retire from 2.contribute to 3.a series of 4.take on volleyball game.She was so hard-working that she won a lot of 5.participate in 6.see through 7.pay the price for awards.After she retired from the volleyball team,she became a 8.be diagnosed with 9.have faith in 10.be in urgent need of volleyball coach.In 2016 she took the Chinese Women Volleyball team 11.give a speech 12.lay the groundwork for 13.prevent sb from doing sth 14.depend on 15.pay off 16.stick with to take part in the Rio Olympic Games and won the gold medal. Ⅲ.经典句式 She is the first Chinese volleyball player to win the Olympie 1.not only:but also championship as a player and coach.She is loved and respected 2.so advanced that he had just a couple of months to live by us all and will always be remembered as a great woman. 语基输入助力语言输出 UNIT 3 CONSERVATION 1.(2)It is recognised that (3)as/to be (4)recognition 2.(2)contribution(3)捐款：促使：投稿 Period One Topic Talk Lesson 1- 3.(2)Not only did:I was (3)Not only:but also;are Comprehending 4.(3)in advance of (4)in advance 课文释疑助力高效课堂 5.(2)as (3)in/with reference to (4)to 1.他们发现人类活动导致物种灭绝的速度比正常情况快 6.(2)have lost faith in (3)faithful 1000倍。 7.(3)promoted (4)promotion 2.显然，人类活动对地球上所有其他物种，包括动物和植物都 8.(2)paid off (3)paid for (4)pay you back 产生了负面影响。 9.It was I that/who:It was the bag that; 3.没有森林，我们将没有空气呼吸：没有干净的水，我们将无法 It was in the park that:It was last Sunday that 随堂演练核心索养落实 生存。 I.单词拼写 课文研读发展思维品质 1.leadership 2.style 3.recognised 4.income 5.retired Step One Fast reading 6.discipline 7.fashion 8.designer 9.founded 10.collapsed I.1.including 2.vary 3.blame 4.faster 5.affected Ⅱ，单句语法填空 6.balance 7.way 8.work 9.Improve 10.Stop 1.am 2.catching 3.that 4.to 5.chasing 6.faithfully ll.extinctions:reasons:avoid 7.off 8.in 9.out 10.rejection Step Two Detailed reading 1-4 CDAD Part Writing-Write a Life Story Step Three Post reading ○遣词造句 略 核心词汇 Step Four Sentence learning 1.at the age of 2.join the team 1,主句：定语：状语物种灭绝，即某个物种的完全消失，在地 3.because of/as a result of/thanks to 4.win the award 球的历史上并不罕见 5.the Chinese Women Volleyball team 6.take part in 2,主句：定语：定语：主语这其中包括称为“大灭绝”的第三次 连词成句 灭绝，那期间90%至96%的物种灭亡了 1.Lang Ping was born on Dec.10th,1960,and she is a famous 3.主句：让步状语：定语虽然物种的自然灭绝并不罕见，但现 volleyball coach. 在灭绝的速度让人担忧。 ·176