课时作业15（word练习）-【状元桥·优质课堂】2024-2025学年新教材高中英语选择性必修第一册（人教版2019）

课时作业(十五)　读后续写专项 (建议用时：35分钟) 动作描写之“哭泣”(二) 短语 ①make sb cry让某人哭；惹某人哭　②break down(因情绪失控而)痛哭；大哭　③a good long cry痛痛快快哭一场　④cry bitterly伤心地哭 1.用表示“哭”的表达补全以下各句 (1)汤姆捉弄我，把我弄哭了。我的两只眼睛哭得又红又肿。 Tom teased me, making me burst into tears . My eyes were both red and swollen from crying .(现在分词短语作状语) (2)我羞愧难忍，扑到床上，自己哭着睡着了。 Ashamed, I threw myself onto the bed and cried myself to sleep .(简单句) (3)汤姆来了，哭得很伤心，请求我原谅他。 Tom came, cried his eyes out , and begged me to forgive him.(简单句) Tom came, crying his eyes out and begging me to forgive him .(现在分词作状语) (4)他满脸泪水，浑身颤抖。 His face was wet with tears and he was trembling. (简单句) (5)我恼怒地说：“伤心地哭也没用，你不能取笑我。” I said in an annoyed voice, “ It's no use crying bitterly .You couldn't make fun of me.”(简单句) (6)我赶快离开了，因为我不想在其他人面前失控大哭。 I left quickly, not wanting to break down in front of others .(现在分词作状语) 2．将以上各句合并成小短文并背诵成文，注意使用合适的衔接过渡词汇 One possible version： Tom teased me, making me burst into tears.My eyes were both red and swollen from crying.Ashamed, I threw myself onto the bed and cried myself to sleep.Later, Tom came, crying his eyes out and begging me to forgive him.His face was wet with tears and he was trembling.I said in an annoyed voice, “It's no use crying bitterly.You couldn't make fun of me.” After that, I left quickly, not wanting to break down in front of others. ★即使时间再紧，也要挤时间把范文抄写在这里，体会如何衔接语篇的同时练习书写。 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Our Garden and the Salad [1]“Christine, come and help me in the garden.I want to plant all of the seeds today，” my father was calling to me. “I'm busy…” I said.I didn't understand why working in the dirt excited him so much. [2]By the end of April, his plants had come up in neat rows.Unfortunately, in early May, my father was seriously injured in an accident.He was in hospital for about two months and during that time he often asked me about his garden.Even after he came home, he had to stay in bed for a while. [3]My mother had several business trips so I said unwillingly that I would take care of his garden.I assumed that the little plants would continue to grow as long as they had water, and luckily it rained fairly often so I didn't think much about the garden. [4]One Saturday morning in July, my father said to me, “Christine, I think that the vegetables should be about ready to be picked.Let's have a salad today！” I took a bowl and went out to the garden.I looked at the leaves and was upset to see that many of the leaves had been half eaten.There were hundreds of bugs(虫子) all over them! I tried to get them off, but there were just too many.I looked at the carrots next, but they didn't look healthy. [5]I got in panic for a moment, but then thought of a good idea.I quietly went to the nearest store to buy some vegetables.I went back home and cut them up to make a salad for my father.When I gave it to him, he said, “Oh, Christine, what a beautiful salad! You must be taking very good care of my garden.” My father looked happy, but I felt a little bit guilty. 注意：续写词数应为150左右。 I went back to the kitchen when my mother came home.　 I carefully made a salad and took it to my father.　 1．文本分析 主要人物 I, my father and mother 事件主线 “我”帮助生病的父亲照料菜园 情感表达 [Para.1] didn't understand →[Para.3] unwillingly (adj.)→[Para.5]a little bit guilty 2.线索推测：两段首句定发展，始终不忘“3衔接1呼应” 标出两段首句关键词 续写第一段：I went back to the kitchen when my mother came home. 续写第二段：I carefully made a salad and took it to my father. 3衔接1呼应 第一段内容和第一段首句密切衔接；第一段结尾和第二段首句密切衔接 ❶根据第一段首句可知，母亲出差回来了。推测应该是她发现了“我”的秘密。所以第一段应描写：母亲得知真相后，帮助“我”一起将菜园重新打理好。❷根据第二段首句可知，“我”小心翼翼地做了一份沙拉，拿给父亲。第二段应描写：“我”用父亲菜园里的菜为父亲重做了一份沙拉。❸由此可推测第一段结尾：菜园恢复了生机并收获了果实。第二段结尾：根据正能量原则，“我”感悟到劳有所获的幸福。 Tips: 起先作者未能兑现承诺，在其父亲提出要用菜园的菜做一份沙拉时，用在商店买回来的菜做的沙拉；等作者醒悟，为父亲重新做一份沙拉时，也即刻明白其实父亲早就知道“真相”。父亲的爱与尊重，不仅让作者尝到了收获果实的快乐，也感悟到如何欣赏成果的真谛。 第二段内容和第二段首句密切衔接；第二段结尾和文章主旨相呼应 3.细节构思：每段三个微情节原则 第一段 情节 ①母亲发现了蔬菜是从商店买来的秘密；②母亲帮“我”将菜园重新打理好；③菜园恢复生机，“我”收获了蔬菜 动作描写 see/notice/observe (看到)→ water (浇水)→ drive away (驱赶)→ pick (采摘) 心理描写 尴尬的adj. embarrassed/awkward 第二段 情节 ①给父亲重新做了一份沙拉；②意识到父亲早就知道之前的沙拉是买回来的菜；③“我”感悟到该如何欣赏成果 动作描写 taste/eat (品尝)→ smile back (回报以微笑)→ better understand (更好地理解) 心理描写 幸福n. joy/happiness ；满足n. contentment 4.遣词造句：连词成句，连句成篇 高级词汇、词块&熟词生义 ① not harmful/harmless 无害的 ② was/felt embarrassed/awkward 感到尴尬的 ③ make time to do sth 抽出时间做某事 ④ drive away 驱走 ⑤ eat/taste it with a good appetite 津津有味地吃起来 ⑥ face lit up with joy 脸上洋溢着幸福 ⑦ beyond description 无以言表 ⑧ appreciate the results 欣赏结果 高分句型 (1)that引导的宾语从句 我意识到他一直都知道我的“购物之旅”。 I soon realized that he had known all along about my shopping trip . (2)however引导的让步状语从句 现在，我更好地理解了花大量的精力去照料某物如何能帮助你更欣赏成果，无论成果多么微小。 Now, I better understand how putting a lot of effort into caring for something can help you appreciate the results more, however small they may be . 5.成文誊写 One possible version： I went back to the kitchen when my mother came home.She saw the bag from the supermarket.I was embarrassed and told her the truth.She laughed but promised to make time to help me in the garden.We made a mixture of water with chopped up fresh hot peppers and then watered it on the vegetables.The water is not harmful but can drive away the bugs.The bug-free-vegetables grew quickly, and finally I was able to pick some. I carefully made a salad and took it to my father.He looked at it and then ate it with a good appetite, whose face lit up with joy.“Christine, the carrots are smaller in this salad, but they taste better.” I soon realized that he had known all along about my shopping trip.I smiled back at him.My contentment is beyond description.Now, I better understand how putting a lot of effort into caring for something can help you appreciate the results more, however small they may be. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$