课时作业9（word练习）-【状元桥·优质课堂】2024-2025学年新教材高中英语选择性必修第一册（人教版2019）

课时作业(九)　读后续写专项 (建议用时：35分钟) 动作描写之“笑”(二) 短语 ①with a laugh笑了一声　②burst into laughter大笑　③explode with laughter哄堂大笑 ④scream/roar with laughter放声大笑　⑤laugh from ear to ear笑得合不拢嘴 ⑥howl with laughter狂笑 1.用表示“笑”的表达补全以下各句 (1)我把我的画慢慢地从抽屉里拿出，举了起来，全班同学突然哄堂大笑。 I slowly pulled my picture out of my drawer and held it up. The entire/whole class suddenly exploded with laughter .(简单句) (2)突然，老师严肃的表情一下子变成了笑脸。 All at once, the teacher's serious expression softened into a grin .(名词＋简单句) (3)他笑着拍了拍我的肩膀。 Laughing, he patted me on the shoulder. (分词作状语) (4)他们的笑声把我搞糊涂了，我看了看我的画，结果发现是一张白纸。 Confused by their laughter , I looked at my picture, only to find it was blank.(分词作状语) (5)我看我的同桌，他正咧着嘴笑。 When I looked at my deskmate, he was grinning .(简单句) (6)他们大笑，当然我没笑，我只能若无其事地挤出一个苦涩的笑。 They laughed loudly , except for me, who could do nothing but force/squeeze/manage a bitter smile .(动词＋副词＋定语从句) 2．将以上各句合并成小短文并背诵成文，注意使用合适的衔接过渡词汇 One possible version： I slowly pulled my picture out of my drawer and held it up.The entire/whole class suddenly exploded with laughter.All at once, the teacher's serious expression softened into a grin.Laughing, he patted me on the shoulder.Confused by their laughter, I looked at my picture, only to find it was blank.Worse still, when I looked at my deskmate, he was grinning.They laughed loudly, except for me, who could do nothing but force/squeeze/manage a bitter smile. ★即使时间再紧，也要挤时间把范文抄写在这里，体会如何衔接语篇的同时练习书写。 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 [1]It was Gross's idea to go into Torngat Mountains National Park in Canada's Arctic.Only a few hundred people went to the park each year, and Gross wanted to be part of that club.Chase did, too, but she worried about hiking in polar bear country. [2]Two Sierra Club guides were the leaders.Gross, then 60, worked for a nonprofit in San Francisco.Chase, 59, a medical consultant from North Carolina.The pair had guided 13 trips together.Joining them were Larry, 63, a New York City lawyer; Frankel, 65, an exercise physiologist(生理学家) from Oregon; Dyer, 48, a legal aid lawyer from Maine; and Isenberg, 55, a physician from Arizona.Chase's husband, Mendez, 63, a quality-improvement consultant, would be joining them as well. [3]On Sunday, July 21, a floatplane carrying the Club party went down toward the eastern shore of the Torngats.The first thing the group did was to set up camp 150 yards from the shore.At 4 a．m., Mendez stepped out of his tent and saw that they weren't alone.“Polar bear on the beach！” he yelled.A mother and her cub(幼崽) were walking along the shore in the early-morning light. [4]Over dinner, they laughed, sharing stories of their past trips and lives back home.They didn't talk much about the bear that was observing them.It seemed almost like a piece of the landscape—just another detail in the impressive setting.Mendez felt reassured by their bear interactions that day.The mother and cub weren't interested in them.But Dyer couldn't shake his unease.“Why don't we post a watch？” he asked.But Gross wasn't worried.“That's what the fence is for，” he told Dyer. [5]They fell asleep listening to the waves.At 3：30 a．m., Chase woke to screams.From the window of her tent, she saw a polar bear a few feet away.It was down on all fours, eyes level with her, huge and white except for the black of its eyes and nose.“Gross！” she screamed.The bear tore at a neighboring tent and dragged something into the darkness.Gross grabbed his flare gun (信号枪), ran out in his long underwear, and aimed at the bear.The animal was 75 feet away, heading west. 注意：续写词数应为150左右。 He saw that what was in the bear's mouth was not a thing at all—it was Dyer.　 The bear dropped Dyer hard and fled.　 1．文本分析 主要人物 Tips: 原文中人物较多，要注意筛选出中心人物。续写要对中心人物展开，而不能面面俱到。本文中能展开续写的中心人物有三个： Gross ; Chase ; Dyer 事件主线 Gross等一行人露营时遭到北极熊袭击 情感表达 [Para.1]worried about(v.)→[Para.4] reassured Vs. unease (adj.)→[Para.5]screamed(v.) 2.线索推测：两段首句定发展，始终不忘“3衔接1呼应” 标出两段首句关键词 续写第一段：He saw that what was in the bear's mouth was not a thing at all—it was Dyer. 续写第二段：The bear dropped Dyer hard and fled. 3衔接1呼应 第一段内容和第一段首句密切衔接；第一段结尾和第二段首句密切衔接 ❶根据第一段首句可知，情况紧急，Gross发现 Dyer 被熊叼走了。第一段应写：队员如何从熊口营救 Dyer 。 Tips: 和原文最衔接的办法就是结合文末的信号枪(flare gun)把熊吓跑；根据[Para.4]But Dyer couldn't shake his unease.可以推测，Dyer可能引起了母熊的愤怒而受到攻击。再联想到这是一个熊母亲，那么最有可能的就是Dyer的行为吓到了小熊。 ❷根据第二段首句可知， Dyer 被母熊扔下，母熊逃走了。第二段应写：大家救助 Dyer ，并得知熊发起进攻的原因。❸由此推测第一段结尾：Gross及其同伴想办法赶走了母熊，并让她放下 Dyer 。第二段结尾：根据正能量原则，人和熊都平安，人们学到了宝贵的一课——人与野生动物应该 和谐 相处。 第二段内容和第二段首句密切衔接；第二段结尾和文章主旨相呼应 3.细节构思：每段三个微情节原则 第一段 情节 ①大家惊慌的行为和表现；②大家一起想办法营救Dyer——用信号枪；③√成功　未能吓跑母熊 动作描写 gather one's strength (使尽全身力气)→ chase (追赶)→ fire the gun (开枪) 心理描写 迷惑不解adj. puzzled/confused 第二段 情节 ①救助被扔下的Dyer；②攻击Dyer的原因；③学到宝贵的一课——人与野生动物应该 和谐 相处 动作描写 rush (冲过去)→ threaten (威胁；恐吓)→ run off (跑开) 心理描写 疼痛的adj. painful ；小心翼翼地adv. cautiously 4.遣词造句：连词成句，连句成篇 高级词汇、词块&熟词生义 ① scan v．扫视　② frighten v．吓唬；使惊吓 ③ sigh v．叹气 ④ turn around 转身 ⑤ encounter/meet/come across 遇见 ⑥ upon hearing the gunshot 一听到枪声 ⑦ without hesitation 毫不犹豫 ⑧ with enormous confusion in mind 心里很迷惑 ⑨ shout breathlessly 气喘吁吁地大喊 ⑩ pause for a rest 停下休息一下 ⑪ nod and explain 点头解释 ⑫原文中“They didn't talk much about the bear that was observing them.It seemed almost like a piece of the landscape—just another detail in the impressive setting.”表示人和熊和谐相处，可以用 interaction (n.意为“互动”)来描述。 高分 句型 (1)现在分词作状语；see＋宾语＋宾补 看到北极熊在移动，Gross大惑不解。 Seeing the polar bear on the move , Gross was greatly puzzled. (2)完全倒装＋介词短语作状语 Dyer躺在地上呻吟着，显然非常痛苦。 On the ground lay Dyer , moaning, obviously in great pain . (3)when引导表语从句 就在那时熊母亲发疯了。 That was when the mother bear went crazy. 5.成文誊写 One possible version： He saw that what was in the bear's mouth was not a thing at all—it was Dyer. What happened？Seeing the polar bear on the move, Gross was greatly puzzled.They had encountered the mother bear and her cub in the morning and the interactions between them were just reassuring because the bears showed no interest in them at all.And where was the adorable cub？With enormous confusion in mind, Gross still gathered all his strength to chase the bear.Meanwhile, the two Club guides caught up and shouted breathlessly: “Fire the gun！Fire the gun！” Without hesitation, Gross did so, which immediately frightened the bear.Upon hearing the explosive gunshot, the bear slowed, turned around and scanned the crowd following her. The bear dropped Dyer hard and fled. The whole group rushed to check.On the ground lay Dyer, moaning, obviously in great pain.After careful examination, fortunately, there was no serious injury. They cautiously carried Dyer and headed back to the camp.Gross asked, “What happened？” Dyer sighed, “Maybe I was to blame.” He paused for a rest, “I couldn't shake my unease, so I stayed awake to keep watch. When I saw them wandering towards our camp, I threatened them.The cub got scared and ran off. That was when the mother bear went crazy.” The guides nodded and explained, “That makes sense. Actually, we are camping in their home, their territory.They are generous enough to let us stay and we are supposed to at least respect them.” 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$