课时作业6（word练习）-【状元桥·优质课堂】2024-2025学年新教材高中英语选择性必修第一册（人教版2019）

课时作业(六)　读后续写专项 动作描写之“笑”(一) 短语 ①smiling face笑脸　②a big/broad/wide/bright smile灿烂的微笑　③smile and wink笑着眨眼 ④force/manage/squeeze a smile强作欢颜　⑤flash a bright smile露出灿烂的微笑 ⑥beam with smiles笑逐颜开 1.用表示“笑”的表达补全以下各句 (1)15岁的詹妮嘴角挂着灿烂的笑容，跑到母亲屋里炫耀她的新画作。 With a big/broad/wide/bright smile on her lips , 15-year-old Jenny rushed to her mom's room to show off her new painting.(介词短语) (2)她的母亲停下来转过脸来朝她微笑。 Her mother stopped to turn a smiling face to her. (分词作定语) (3)美丽的画让她的母亲激动不已，笑容满面。 Her mother was thrilled at the beautiful painting, and a broad smile spread across/crossed her face .(并列句) (4)她笑着朝詹妮眨了眨眼：“詹妮，你画得真好，我相信你会成为一个著名的画家。我真为你骄傲。” She smiled and winked at Jenny , “Jenny, you paint really well. I'm sure you will be a famous painter one day. I'm so proud of you.”(简单句) (5)当她想象着自己成为画家时，她的脸上容光焕发，嘴角露出微笑。 When she pictured herself becoming a painter, her face lit up and her lips curved in a smile .(简单句) (6)她带着灿烂的笑容，满怀期待地奔向她的卧室。 Smiling widely, she hurried to her bedroom with great expectations. (现在分词作状语) 2．将以上各句合并成小短文并背诵成文，注意使用合适的衔接过渡词汇 One possible version： With a big/broad/wide/bright smile on her lips, 15-year-old Jenny rushed to her mom's room to show off her new painting.Her mother stopped to turn a smiling face to her.Her mother was thrilled at the beautiful painting, and a broad smile spread across/crossed her face.She smiled and winked at Jenny, “Jenny, you paint really well.I'm sure you will be a famous painter one day.I'm so proud of you.” Happily, when she pictured herself becoming a painter, her face lit up and her lips curved in a smile.Smiling widely, she hurried to her bedroom with great expectations. ★即使时间再紧，也要挤时间把范文抄写在这里，体会如何衔接语篇的同时练习书写。 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Dream for Future [1]People were busy in their own laboratories on Mars.Turtex told me, “Let us go to Earth to have a cup of coffee.” [2]I laughed for such a childish joke and I also jokingly asked him, “Is there no coffee shop on Mars？” [3]He replied, “It has but they can't prepare coffee as tasty as that on Earth.” [4]However, for a while I thought it would be better to take a cup of tasty coffee from Ramu's Coffee Shop located at our village, Kushmandi. [5]Turtex told me to enter a room near his laboratory.We entered there and found that the room was internally coated with some materials like sponge.Turtex closed the door of the room with a clap.I saw some colorful buttons inside the room.After a few seconds I heard another clap and noticed that the door opened. [6]Turtex said, “Come with me.” [7]I asked, “Where？” [8]He replied, “Now we are at Kushmandi.” [9]I shouted, “What？” [10]We came out of the room and I astonishingly viewed the sky-scrapers around me.Turtex said loudly, “What's wrong with you? Come with me.” [11]Eventually we entered a coffee club designed like a Five Star Restaurant.Suddenly I noticed a display board with an electronic text on, “Welcome to Kushmandi.Now you are in famous Ramu's Coffee Shop.Enjoy the taste of the best coffee on Earth.” [12]Suddenly many hazy and crazy questions came to my mind. [13]“What was the nearby room of the lab? How was it possible to travel an enormous distance from Mars to Earth? Is it like opening my favorite TV channel with a remote? How the poor coffee stall of our village turned into a Five Star Coffee Club? In which century were we？” 注意：续写词数应为150左右。 Thinking such hazy things, I followed Turtex into the coffee club.　 The waiter brought us two cups of coffee and left.　 1．文本分析 主要人物 I; Turtex 事件主线 对未来展开想象：生活在火星上的作者和同伴想回地球喝咖啡 情感表达 [Para.2]I laughed for such a childish joke→[Para.4] it would be better to take a cup of tasty coffee→[Para.10] astonishingly viewed the sky-scrapers around me→[Para.12] hazy and crazy questions came to my mind 2.线索推测：两段首句定发展，始终不忘“3衔接1呼应” 标出两段首句关键词 续写第一段：Thinking such hazy things, I followed Turtex into the coffee club. 续写第二段：The waiter brought us two cups of coffee and left. (续表) 3衔接1呼应 第一段内容和第一段首句密切衔接；第一段结尾和第二段首句密切衔接 ❶根据第一段首句可知，想着这些模糊的事情，“我”跟着Turtex　走进了咖啡俱乐部　。第一段可描写：“我”在 咖啡俱乐部 的所见。❷根据第二段首句可知，服务员给我们端来两杯咖啡就走了。❸由此推测第一段结尾：“我”在咖啡俱乐部 等待 享受咖啡。❹结合原文标题(Dream for Future)和第二段首句可推测第二段描写：“我”正要享受咖啡，却发现这是 一场梦 。 Tips: 此篇续写一定要结合原文标题——这是以未来的梦想为线索展开，最终结局要回归现实。所以第二段结尾：梦醒发现自己身在医院(或其他地方)。 第二段内容和第二段首句密切衔接；第二段结尾和文章主旨相呼应 3.细节构思：每段三个微情节原则 第一段 情节 ① 闻到 了咖啡的香味；②迫切想喝；③就座， 等待 品尝咖啡 动作描写 have a cup of coffee (喝咖啡)→ follow (跟随)→ sit beside a table (坐在桌旁) 心理描写 渴望的 eager/urge/hopeful/full of expectations ；困惑的 hazy/uncertain/confused 第二段 情节 ①喝咖啡烫到了嘴；②惊醒；③发现是一场梦 动作描写 burn (烫伤)→ wake up/come to life (梦醒)→ find/discover (发现) 心理描写 惊讶的adj. surprised/astonished 4.遣词造句：连词成句，连句成篇 高级词汇、词块&熟词生义 ① hazy adj.朦胧的；困惑的　　 　　 ② delicious smell rushed into nose 香味扑鼻而来 ③ tasty/delectable/delicious coffee 美味可口的咖啡 ④ sit beside a table 坐在桌旁 ⑤ be absorbed in 全神贯注于；专心致志于 ⑥ be coated with 涂上；被覆盖 高分句型 (1)感叹句：How＋adj./adv.＋主语＋谓语＋其他！ 我多么渴望立刻喝一杯！ How eager I was to have a cup of it at once！ (2)分词作状语 我仍然沉浸在这些模糊的问题中，跟着Turtex坐在一张涂着奇怪的材料的桌子旁，等待着享用地球上最好的咖啡。 Still absorbed in those hazy questions , I followed Turtex and sat beside a table, which was coated with strange materials, waiting to enjoy the best coffee on Earth . (3)so…that…如此……以至 于……，that引导结果状语从句 它(咖啡)太热了，我的嘴好像被烫了。 It was so hot that it seemed that my mouth got burnt. 5.成文誊写 One possible version： Thinking such hazy things, I followed Turtex into the coffee club.The delicious smell of coffee rushed into my nose.Oh, my lovable tasty coffee.How eager I was to have a cup of it at once! “Come here，” Turtex said.Still absorbed in those hazy questions, I followed Turtex and sat beside a table, which was coated with strange materials, waiting to enjoy the best coffee on Earth. The waiter brought us two cups of coffee and left.Impatiently I took it and took a sip.“Oh.My gosh.” It was so hot that it seemed that my mouth got burnt.But then I heard a hair-cutting sound.I slowly opened my eyes and found that a nurse was cutting my hair and putting them into a tray beside my bed and telling me, “Nothing serious.It needs just two stitches on your forehead and you will be OK within a week.” I finally realized that it was our village hospital at Kushmandi that I was in, not at the coffee club. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$