内容正文:
● perhaps(adv.可能)
● modern physics(现代物理学)
● numerous contributions(很多贡献)
● general theory of relativity(广义相对论)
● formula(公式)
● a courageous figure 勇敢的人物
● gentle genius (温柔的天才)
● due to (由于)
● low scores (低分)
● entrance exam(入学考试)
● obtaining exceptional scores
(获得杰出成绩)
● managed to(设法做)
● patent office(专利局)
● passion for knowledge (对知识的激情)
● earning a doctorate(获得博士学位)
● a miracle year (奇迹年)
● extraordinary papers(优秀的论文).
● research full-time(全职研究)
● photoelectric effect(光电效应).
● came to power(掌权)
● academic institutions(学术机构)
● As a consequence(结果)
● flee Germany. (逃离德国)
● took up a position(在任职位)
● slightly odd-looking(稍微看着奇怪)
● thick moustache(浓密的小胡子)
● as though(好像)
● electric shock(电击).
● his peculiarities(他的怪异)
● encountered people (遇到人们)
● such occasions(这种场合)
● Professor Einstein!(爱因斯坦教授)
● it was reported that(据报道)
● passed away(去世)
● mourned(哀悼)
● brilliant scientist.(极好的科学家)
● remarkable achievement 显著的成就
● rhetorical devices 修辞手法/工具
● sum up 总结
● review the draft 检查草稿
— Period 5 Reading & Writing
PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT
1
Unit
3
Guessing: Who is he?
He was a Jewish(犹太人).
He had Curly hair(卷发).
He loved to play violin.
He openly opposed(反对) Germany's participation in World War I.
He was a friend of Chaplin(卓别林).
His discovery was used to invent Atomic bomb(原子弹).
But he opposed it.
He discovered E=mc^2, the theory of relativity.
Reading
— for the genre & main idea
The text mainly talks about
Albert Einstein's ________ and ____________.
life story
What's the genre of the text?
A. Exposition
B. Biography
C. Argumentation
D. Practical writing
achievements
_________
___________ to Albert Einstein
General
introduction
________ ____________ of Albert Einstein
Detailed
information
___________ to Einstein’s death
Reaction
Introduction
Body
Summary
Structure :
The man who changed our understanding of the universe
Para.1: of Einstein
Para.2: of Einstein
Para.3: of Einstein
Para.4: the reason why he left Germany
Para.5:the and quality of Einstein
Para.6: of Einstein
the greatest contribution and personal qualities
Early life and education
Work experience
appearance
he death
skimming
Albert Einstein ,who is perhaps(adv.可能) the greatest scientist in modern physics(现代物理学), is often considered(认为) one of the smartest men who ever lived. He made numerous(很多的) contributions to the world , the most well-known being the general theory of relativity(广义相对论) and the famous formula(公式) E= mc². Einstein was not only a genius(天才) ; he was a courageous(勇敢的) and kind figure(n.人物/数字/图;v.认为) loved by many people.
Para. 1
Albert Einstein
1. Job: .
2. field: .
3. Achievement:
;
.
4. comment:
;
.
scientist
modern physics
the general theory of relativity
formula E= mc²
courageous
kind, loved by many people
This gentle(温柔的) genius was born in Germany on 14 March 1879. When he was 16, he tried to enter university in Switzerland(瑞士), but failed due to(由于) his low scores(低分) in the general(总的/一般的) part of the entrance exam(入学考试), despite obtaining exceptional scores(获得杰出成绩) in maths and physics. After studying for another year, he managed to(设法做) pass the exam, entering university in 1896 and graduating in 1900.
Para. 2
Born in Germany
1879
1896
1955
1933
1895
Entered university
1900
Graduated from university
1902
1905
1922
1909
Failed to
enter university
T/F
( )
At the age of 16, Einstein managed to enter university in Switzerland.
F
After two years of looking for work as a teacher, Einstein took a job as a clerk(店员) in the Swiss(瑞士) patent office(专利局). While working there, out of a strong passion(激情) for knowledge, he continued to(继续做) study, earning a doctorate(获得博士学位) in physics in 1905. That same year, which was later recorded as(记录为) a miracle(奇迹) year in science, he published four extraordinary(卓越的) physics papers(论文). Following this, he gradually(逐渐地) became famous throughout the world as the new Isaac Newton.
Para. 3
Born in Germany
1879
1896
1955
1933
1895
Entered university
1900
Graduated from university
1902
1905
1922
1909
Took a job
as a clerk
Earned a doctorate
Graduated from university
Failed to
enter university
After four years, he was able to quit(离职/戒掉) his job at the patent office and enter research full-time(全职研究) at a university. In 1922, he was awarded(被授予) the 1921 Nobel Prize for Physics for his explanation(解释) of the photoelectric effect(光电效应).
Para. 3
Born in Germany
1879
1896
1955
1933
1895
Entered university
1900
Graduated from university
1902
1905
1922
1909
Took a job
as a clerk
Earned a doctorate
Graduated from university
Failed to
enter university
Awarded the Nobel Prize
Entered research full-time at a university
Circumstances(情况) changed in 1933, when Hitler came to power(掌权) in Germany. Einstein, who was Jewish, found the doors of academic institutions(学术机构) closed to him. As a consequence(结果), he had to flee(逃离) Germany. After spending time in Europe, he finally took up a position(职位) as a researcher at the Institute for Advanced Study(高等研究院) in Princeton, USA. Following that, he continued to make great achievements in physics and mathematics(数学).
Para. 4
Born in Germany
1879
1896
1955
1933
1895
Entered university
1900
Graduated from university
1902
1905
1922
1909
Took a job
as a clerk
Earned a doctorate
Graduated from university
Failed to
enter university
Awarded the Nobel Prize
Entered research full-time at a university
Fled
Germany
To the public, he was seen as a slightly(稍微地) odd-looking(看着奇怪) but kind and funny man. He had a thick moustache(浓密的小胡子) and long white hair, which sometimes stood on end as though(好像) he had just received an electric shock(电击). Although he was a genius, he sometimes forgot things, like his friends’ birthdays. But despite his peculiarities(个性/怪异), he was loved by his friends and neighbours. There is even a story about how he helped a little girl who knocked on his door and asked for help with her homework.
Para. 5
Appearance
thick moustache
long white hair
Personality
kind, funny
forgetful
In fact, Einstein often encountered(遇到) people on the street who would stop him and ask him to help explain things. After many such occasions(场合), he finally started saying, “Pardon me! Sorry! Always I am mistaken(弄错) for Professor(教授) Einstein!”
Para. 5
On 18 April 1955, it was reported that(据报道) Einstein had passed away(去世), and the whole(整个) world mourned(哀悼) the great loss of a brilliant(极好的) scientist.
Para. 5
Born in Germany
1879
1896
1955
1933
1895
Entered university
1900
Graduated from university
1902
1905
1922
1909
Took a job
as a clerk
Earned a doctorate
Graduated from university
Failed to
enter university
Awarded the Nobel Prize
Entered research full-time at a university
Fled
Germany
Passed away
What rhetorical devices(修辞手法) are used in the passage?
Rhetorical Device Example
Analogy (类比)
Metaphor (暗喻)
Simile(明喻)
Personification
(拟人)
Euphemism
[ˈjuːfəmɪzəm] (委婉语)
Following this, he gradually became famous throughout the world as the new Isaac Newton .
Einstein, who was Jewish, found the doors of academic institutions closed to him.
Einstein had passed away.
He had a thick moustache and long white hair, which sometimes stood on end as though he had just received an electric shock
Albert Einstein, who is perhaps the greatest scientist in modern physics, is often considered one of the smartest men who ever lived. He 1.made numerous contributions to the world(对世界做出了许多贡献), the most well-known being the general theory of relativity and the famous formula(2. 方程式)E=mc2. Einstein was not only a genius; 3.a courageous and kind figure loved by many people (他也是一个勇敢而善良的人,受到许多人的喜爱) This gentle genius was born in Germany 4.on 14 March 1879. When he was 16,he tried to enter university in Switzerland, but failed due 5.to his low scores in the general part of the 6.entrance(enter) exam, 7.despite obtaining exceptional(8.出色的) scores in maths and physics. After studying for another year, he managed to pass the exam, 9.entering (enter)university in 1896 and graduating in 1900. After two years of looking for work10.as a teacher, Einstein took a job as a clerk(11.职员) in the Swiss patent(12.专利) office. While 13.working(work) there, 14.out of a strong passion for knowledge(出于对知识强烈求知欲), he continued to study, earning a doctorate(15博士学位). 16.in physics in 1905. That same year, 17.which was later recorded as a miracle year in science, he published four extraordinary(18.杰出的) physics 19.papers(paper).
20.Following this(此后), he gradually became famous throughout the world 21.as the new Isaac Newton. After four years, he was able to quit his job at the patent office and enter research full-time at a university. In 1922, he was awarded the 1921 Nobel Prize for Physics for his 22.explanation(explain) of the photoelectric effect. Circumstances(23.环境)changed in 1933, When Hitler 24.came to power(上台执政) in Germany. Einstein, who was Jewish, found the doors of academic institutions 25.closed(close) to him. 26.As a consequence(作为结果), he had to flee(27.逃离) Germany. After spending time in Europe, he finally 28.took up a post(担任职位) as a researcher at the Institute for Advanced Study in Princeton, USA. Following that, he continued to make great achievements in physics and mathematics. To the public, he was 29.seen(see) as a slightly(30.稍微) odd-looking but kind and funny man. He had a thick moustache(31.胡子) and long white hair, which sometimes 32.stood on end(竖起来) as though he had just received an electric shock. 33.Although he was a genius, he sometimes forgot things, like his friends' birthdays. But despite his peculiarities(34.怪癖), he was loved by his friends and neighbours. There is even a story about how he helped a little girl who knocked on his door and asked for help with her homework. In fact, Einstein often encountered(35.遇到) people on the street36.who would stop him and ask him to help explain things. After many such occasions(37.情况), he finally started saying, "Pardon me! Sorry! Always I am 38.mistaken(mistake) for Professor Einstein!" On 18 April 1955, 39.it was reported that(据报道) Einstein had 40.passed away (去世), and the whole world mourned(41.哀悼) the great loss of a brilliant scientist.
如何写一篇人物简介
【文体感知】
伟人总是给我们榜样的力量, 那么, 我们如何对伟人做人物简介呢? 人物介绍是高中生基础写作任务中常见的一种话题类型。
体裁
内容
时态
人称
记叙文
人的出生、家庭背景、教育、生平经历、成就和评价
一般现在时态和过去时态
第三人称
人物简介的一般步骤可以概括为5个字: 概、貌、育、生、评。
1. 概指概况: age, sex, birth-place, background
2. 貌指外貌: appearance, character, hobby
3. 育指教育: education process
4. 生指生平: big events in one’s life(in order of time)
5. 评指评价: evaluation
1)出生于某地某时
..., (who was ) born in…(place) on…(date)
2)在某人多少岁时
at the age of…
3)来自穷苦家庭的儿子
the son of a poor family
4)出生于一个农民/知识分子家庭/书香门第
was born into a peasant / intelligent family/ a
family of scholars
概
一. age, birthday and birthplace (个人概况)
1. 托马斯·爱迪生(Thomas Edison)生于美国,是一位伟大的科学家和发明家。
Born in America, Thomas Edison was a great scientist and inventor.
Thomas Edison, a great scientist and inventor, was born in America.
二、句式模板
介绍概况 用非谓语/同位语结构/定从,使文章通顺,语言更丰富
3.肖老师,我们的化学老师,毕业于华南师范大学。
Mr. Xiao, our chemistry teacher, graduated from South China Normal University.
2.居里夫人是一位伟大的科学家,1867年11月7日出生在波兰。
Madam Curie, a great scientist, was born in Poland on Nov. 7, 1867.
描写外貌: 巧用with短语。
貌
1.他是一个有着酷酷的外表,安静害羞的人。
He is a quiet and shy man with a cool appearance.
2. 我的语文老师长着一双大眼睛, 留着长发。
My Chinese teacher is a beautiful lady, with long hair and big eyes.
3.他近视,鼻子上戴着一副眼镜。
He is a near-sighted guy with a pair of glasses on his nose.
1.被大学录取
2.主修.......
3.获得硕士学位 /博士学位
4.出国深造
5.毕业于.......大学......系
育
education background (教育背景)
be admitted to ...
major in...
have further study in ...
go abroad for the further education
obtain/receive / get a master's / doctor's degree
graduate from…department of…university
He studied at Tsinghua University and then had further study in London, where he received his Doctor’s Degree.
(1)他就读于清华大学,后赴伦敦深造,获得博士学位。
(2)1997年毕业于中山大学,主修英语。
He graduated from Zhongshan University in 1997 and majored in English.
例句:
1致力于…
2决心做……
3有…的天赋
4获得......奖
5被誉为
6作为......而著名
7做......工作
big events in his or her life (生平经历)
生
devote oneself / one’s effort/one’s life to (doing)sth
make up one's mind / be determined to do
have a gift/ talent for = be gifted/ talented for
be awarded ...prize for...= get/receive ...prize for...= win...award
be honoured as...
be known as
work as
(1)国内外著名的
(2)为……树立好榜样
(3)高度赞扬……
(4)为……作出巨大贡献
be famous / well-known at home and abroad
set a good example to sb=set sb a good example
speak / think highly of…
make great / numerous contributions to
评
evaluation (评价)
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