衔接点20 书面表达（初高考点差异及衔接）-2024年初升高英语无忧衔接（通用版）

衔接点20 书面表达（初高考点差异及衔接） 初中要求 书面表达主要考查学生以下能力: 1.综合运用英语的能力; 2.观察能力、理解能力、联想能力、灵活运用所学英语知识的能力; 3.初步运用所学的英语知识和表达方式传递信息和表达思想的能力。 浙江中考书面表达的话题包括个人情况、家人朋友、生活学习、兴趣爱好、人际交往、节假日活动、计划愿望、文化习俗、旅游交通、文娱体育、科技发明、饮食健康、自然环境等。设题通常有写人叙事类、介绍说明类、做法建议类、观点表达类、邮件回复类等。词数80—100。 高中要求 应用文写作任务贴近学生真实生活,试题具有开放性和灵活性,有利于学生使用所学英语知识讲述身边的故事,表达自己的思想,有利于培养学生的创造性思维。撰写祝贺信,邀请信等应用文。考生需要根据情境任务,分析写作目的、写作对象,将审题时的思考与写作内容相关联,并结合自己的背景知识或经验,展开丰富的想象,构思活动内容和栏目内容,运用恰当的语言、得体的语气完成交际任务,撰写出各具特点的文章。 【初中书面表达考点聚焦】 答题步骤 Step 1　审和列 先审题,理清、明确写作任务的体裁、主旨和要点,弄清题目所给的情境、要求表达的要点、文体格式、时态和人称等。然后,根据要点及关键词列出提纲,提纲可包括段落结构、单词、短语、句式等。 Step 2　扩和连 首先,将提纲中的单词、短语、句式扩展成句,再将句子扩展成段。然后,加上适当的连接词使文章层次分明,逻辑清晰。最后,酌情选用高阶表达优化写作,美化文章。至此,完成草稿。 Step 3　查和抄 把草稿誊抄到答题卡上之前要检查:①是否偏离主题;②是否遗漏要点;③语言是否正确、规范、得体;④行文是否连贯、流畅;⑤语言是否丰富多样;⑥词数是否符合要求。 誊抄时要注意书写整洁、大小写和标点符号使用规范。抄完后再核对一遍,确保无误。 分类训练一　写人叙事类 为了弘扬传统文化,你校结合“宁波元素”在今年5月19日(中国旅游日)开展了 丰富多彩的文化活动(cultural activities)。假如你是李华,请根据表格中的信息并 结合自身经历,写一篇英语短文向学校英语报投稿。 注意:(1)短文必须包括表格中的所有要点,并适当发挥; (2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名; (3)词数80—100;标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。 My Traditional Cultural Experiences On May 19, our school organized_____________________________________ 分类训练二　介绍说明类 你校英语文化节举办了主题为“Sharing My Hometown”的短视频征集活动, 你所在组的作品成功入选。请根据下表信息写一篇发言稿,在英语课上分享你们的创作历程及收获。 Process Gains •make a plan •collect information •create a video •understand local culture better •... 注意:(1)发言稿必须包括上表所有信息,可适当增加细节; (2)你们的收获至少两条; (3)词数:80—100; (4)发言稿开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 参考词汇: 收获gain Hi, everyone! I am happy here to share our experience in making a video of Sharing My Hometown. To start with,_____________________________________ Thanks for your listening! 分类训练三　做法建议类 假设你是刘军,在上周末的乡村旅游中,你发现了一些游客的不文明行为。请根据下表信息给某英文报VOICE栏目的编辑写一封邮件,反映这些问题并提出建议。 Uncivilized behavior Suggestions •threw rubbish everywhere •picked flowers •climbed trees •put rubbish into bins •… 注意:(1)邮件内容必须包括上表所有信息,可适当增加细节; (2)你的建议至少两条; (3)词数:80—100; (4)邮件开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 参考词汇:不文明行为uncivilized behavior;编辑editor Dear editor, I was shocked to see some uncivilized behavior when I took a trip to a village last weekend. Yours sincerely, Liu Jun 分类训练四　观点表达类 假如你是李雷,上周参观了以“Working the Waste into Magic”为主题的环保 作品展。请你根据以下信息,写一篇短文,在英语课上介绍相关展品并分享自己的想法与感受。 What were on show What they are made of/from What you think clothes chairs model planes ... waste paper plastic bottles used wood and glass ... creative save... ... 注意:(1)短文须介绍至少两项展品,可适当发挥; (2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息; (3)词数:80—100。短文首句仅供参考,不计入总词数。 Hello, everyone! I'd like to tell you something about the show “Working the Waste into Magic”. 【高中书面表达考点聚焦】 考纲解读 应用文写作任务贴近学生真实生活,试题具有开放性和灵活性,有利于学生使用所学英语知识讲述身边的故事,表达自己的思想,有利于培养学生的创造性思维。撰写祝贺信,邀请信等应用文。考生需要根据情境任务,分析写作目的、写作对象,将审题时的思考与写作内容相关联,并结合自己的背景知识或经验,展开丰富的想象,构思活动内容和栏目内容,运用恰当的语言、得体的语气完成交际任务,撰写出各具特点的文章。 考点清单 备考建议 1.动笔前的审题是撰写高质量文章的保障。一般来说,审题包括几个方面: 审体裁(祝贺信还是邀请信等)、审人称(写给谁,收信人决定作文是正式文体还是非正式文体)、审时态(每一段用什么时态,现在时态还是过去时态等)、审内容(2个要点还是3个要点等)。 2.审题后考生可运用写作总体规划图勾勒出文章总体结构。 3.重视积累写作词汇,不断提高语言质量 词汇的积累是文章语言质量的重要保证,考生在日常欣赏年级或班级写作范文时,要注意摘抄好词好句。 4.注意要点之间的衔接,突出文章的逻辑连贯性 首先,注意要点与要点之间的逻辑连贯。英语应用文写作包括2—3个要点,考生要注意要点与要点之间的互相呼应。其次,注意要点与细节之间的连贯。考生还要注意所添加的细节必须与要点密切相关,不可以脱离主题句。最后,注意保持段落写作的完整性。构成段落的三个要素是主题句、扩展句和结论句。有时,由于篇幅有限,结论句可以略去。 类型一　邮件/书信——申请/求职 　　假定你是李华,今年暑假你校将迎来一批英国访客,现面向全体高三学生招募对苏州文化比较了解的同学做志愿向导,请你写一封信申请做志愿者,内容包括: 　　1.写信目的; 2.个人优势。 注意: 1.词数80左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头、结束语已为你写好,不计入总词数。 Dear Sir or Madam, Yours, Li Hua 写作类型二　倡议书 　　你校英语学习社团(English Club)将举办“读名著,学英语(Read Classics, Learn English)”活动。请你代表该社团写一封倡议书,发表在校报上。内容包括: 1.活动目的; 2.活动内容; 3.号召积极参与。 注意:写作词数应为80左右。 Read Classics, Learn English 写作类型三　邮件/书信——请求帮助/提供帮助 　　假定你是李明。你的外国朋友 David 最近选修了中文课程。他来信向你咨询学好中文的方法。请你写一封回信,内容包括: 1.提出建议; 2.表达祝愿。 注意:写作词数应为 80 左右。 Dear David, Yours, Li Ming 写作类型四　邮件/书信——感谢 　　假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim知道你即将参加高考,发邮件向你表示祝福并给你提供了几条考前学习的建议,你感觉非常有效。请你给他回复一封邮件,内容包括: 1.感谢他的祝福; 2.你比较获益的一条建议及理由。 注意:1.词数100左右; 2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, Yours, Li Hua 写作类型五　邮件/书信——告知/邀请 　　假定你是李华,你校正在为前来参加国际夏令营的外国中学生筹划中国传统艺术展。请你用英语写一封邮件通知外国中学生们,内容包括: 1.欢迎参观; 2.内容简介; 3.注意事项。 注意: 1.词数80左右; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 写作类型六　报道 　　你校最近举办了春季运动会,请你为校英文报写一篇报道。内容包括: 1.时间和地点; 2.运动会的基本情况; 3.比赛的意义。 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.短文题目已为你写好。 The Spring Sports Meet 写作类型七　演讲 　　假定你是李华,你校外教Mr Thomson下周将结束两年的聘期回国任教,你将作为学生代表致欢送辞。请你写一篇发言稿,内容包括: 1.对Mr Thomson 表示感谢; 2.介绍Mr Thomson的教学情况; 3.表达祝愿。 注意: 1.词数80左右; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 一 　　你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题,举办英语征文比赛。请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括: 1.海洋的重要性; 2.保护海洋的倡议。 注意: 1.词数100左右; Our Oceans, Our Responsibility June 8th was officially named by the UN in 2009 as World Oceans Day. 二 　　学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括: 1.学习活动状况描述; 2.简单评论; 3.你的建议。 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。 Learning English Beyond the Classroom There are many things we can do to learn English well. 三 　　假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你打算邀请英国好友Jim 为你们班做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括: 1.建议交流的具体内容及其原因; 2.交流时间和其他相关事项。 注意: 1.词数 100 左右; 2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, How's everything? Yours, Li Hua 四 　　假定你是李华,暑期在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者,内容包括: 1.写信目的; 2.个人优势; 3.能做的事情。 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.结束语已为你写好。 Dear Sir,  Looking forward to your early reply.  Yours, Li Hua  五 　　假定你是李华,经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括: 1.表示感谢; 2.回顾Alex对你的帮助; 3.临别祝愿。 注意: 1.词数80左右; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 六 　　你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Be smart online learners为题写一篇发言稿参赛,内容包括: 1.分析优势与不足; 2.提出学习建议。 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.题目和首句已为你写好。 Be smart online learners Learning online has become an important way to study recently. 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 衔接点20 书面表达（初高考点差异及衔接） 初中要求 书面表达主要考查学生以下能力: 1.综合运用英语的能力; 2.观察能力、理解能力、联想能力、灵活运用所学英语知识的能力; 3.初步运用所学的英语知识和表达方式传递信息和表达思想的能力。 浙江中考书面表达的话题包括个人情况、家人朋友、生活学习、兴趣爱好、人际交往、节假日活动、计划愿望、文化习俗、旅游交通、文娱体育、科技发明、饮食健康、自然环境等。设题通常有写人叙事类、介绍说明类、做法建议类、观点表达类、邮件回复类等。词数80—100。 高中要求 应用文写作任务贴近学生真实生活,试题具有开放性和灵活性,有利于学生使用所学英语知识讲述身边的故事,表达自己的思想,有利于培养学生的创造性思维。撰写祝贺信,邀请信等应用文。考生需要根据情境任务,分析写作目的、写作对象,将审题时的思考与写作内容相关联,并结合自己的背景知识或经验,展开丰富的想象,构思活动内容和栏目内容,运用恰当的语言、得体的语气完成交际任务,撰写出各具特点的文章。 【初中书面表达考点聚焦】 答题步骤 Step 1　审和列 先审题,理清、明确写作任务的体裁、主旨和要点,弄清题目所给的情境、要求表达的要点、文体格式、时态和人称等。然后,根据要点及关键词列出提纲,提纲可包括段落结构、单词、短语、句式等。 Step 2　扩和连 首先,将提纲中的单词、短语、句式扩展成句,再将句子扩展成段。然后,加上适当的连接词使文章层次分明,逻辑清晰。最后,酌情选用高阶表达优化写作,美化文章。至此,完成草稿。 Step 3　查和抄 把草稿誊抄到答题卡上之前要检查:①是否偏离主题;②是否遗漏要点;③语言是否正确、规范、得体;④行文是否连贯、流畅;⑤语言是否丰富多样;⑥词数是否符合要求。 誊抄时要注意书写整洁、大小写和标点符号使用规范。抄完后再核对一遍,确保无误。 分类训练一　写人叙事类 为了弘扬传统文化,你校结合“宁波元素”在今年5月19日(中国旅游日)开展了 丰富多彩的文化活动(cultural activities)。假如你是李华,请根据表格中的信息并 结合自身经历,写一篇英语短文向学校英语报投稿。 注意:(1)短文必须包括表格中的所有要点,并适当发挥; (2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名; (3)词数80—100;标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。 My Traditional Cultural Experiences On May 19, our school organized_____________________________________ 参考范文　 My Traditional Cultural Experiences On May 19, our school organized many traditional cultural activities. I was happy that I learned a lot.  In the morning, I visited Ningbo Museum with my classmates and enjoyed the beauty of traditional arts. Everyone was excited to learn about the long history of the city. At noon,we made Ningbo Tangyuan (Dumplings). We learned it was a symbol of family get-togethers. In the afternoon, we read many ancient local stories and shared them in the story-telling competition, learning about the traditional values of our city. These activities have not only helped me have a better understanding of our city, but also left a lasting influence on my heart and mind. 分类训练二　介绍说明类 你校英语文化节举办了主题为“Sharing My Hometown”的短视频征集活动, 你所在组的作品成功入选。请根据下表信息写一篇发言稿,在英语课上分享你们的创作历程及收获。 Process Gains •make a plan •collect information •create a video •understand local culture better •... 注意:(1)发言稿必须包括上表所有信息,可适当增加细节; (2)你们的收获至少两条; (3)词数:80—100; (4)发言稿开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 参考词汇: 收获gain Hi, everyone! I am happy here to share our experience in making a video of Sharing My Hometown. To start with,_____________________________________ Thanks for your listening! 参考范文　 Hi, everyone! I am happy here to share our experience in making a video of Sharing My Hometown. To start with, we had a heated discussion and made a plan carefully. After that, we made every effort to collect information in different ways. For example, we talked to our elders, who told us stories about traditional food and famous people. Using the information we had collected, we created an English video, which was later chosen as one of the best works to introduce our hometown.  From this experience, we have gained a lot. Above all, we now understand our local culture better. In addition, our English has improved greatly. Last but not least, we've realized how important good teamwork is! Thanks for your listening!  分类训练三　做法建议类 假设你是刘军,在上周末的乡村旅游中,你发现了一些游客的不文明行为。请根据下表信息给某英文报VOICE栏目的编辑写一封邮件,反映这些问题并提出建议。 Uncivilized behavior Suggestions •threw rubbish everywhere •picked flowers •climbed trees •put rubbish into bins •… 注意:(1)邮件内容必须包括上表所有信息,可适当增加细节; (2)你的建议至少两条; (3)词数:80—100; (4)邮件开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 参考词汇:不文明行为uncivilized behavior;编辑editor Dear editor, I was shocked to see some uncivilized behavior when I took a trip to a village last weekend. Yours sincerely, Liu Jun 参考范文　 Dear editor,  I was shocked to see some uncivilized behavior when I took a trip to a village last weekend. Some visitors threw rubbish everywhere and left plastic bags flying around. Some picked flowers without permission to take photos so that they could show off online. And some climbed trees for fun, which might result in serious accidents.  I think it is wrong to enjoy oneself at the cost of others. Visitors are supposed to protect the environment, like putting rubbish into proper bins. And they should be careful not to cause trouble to the locals and keep away from danger. In this way, a greener, cleaner and more civilized new village will be there for us all to enjoy. Yours sincerely,  Liu Jun  分类训练四　观点表达类 假如你是李雷,上周参观了以“Working the Waste into Magic”为主题的环保 作品展。请你根据以下信息,写一篇短文,在英语课上介绍相关展品并分享自己的想法与感受。 What were on show What they are made of/from What you think clothes chairs model planes ... waste paper plastic bottles used wood and glass ... creative save... ... 注意:(1)短文须介绍至少两项展品,可适当发挥; (2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息; (3)词数:80—100。短文首句仅供参考,不计入总词数。 Hello, everyone! I'd like to tell you something about the show “Working the Waste into Magic”. 参考范文　 Hello, everyone! I'd like to tell you something about the show “Working the Waste into Magic”.  A number of creative works were on show, including clothes made of waste paper and model planes made of used wood and glass. Another fascinating work is a chair that is made of plastic bottles. They are glued together and painted in different colors. I was most interested in a backpack for computers. It is made out of a pair of old jeans! With the zipper of jeans on the top, two pockets on two sides, the backpack looks both useful and fashionable. It even has a logo! I felt amazed at how waste could be put to such good use. It really helps to save energy and build a greener future. 【高中书面表达考点聚焦】 考纲解读 应用文写作任务贴近学生真实生活,试题具有开放性和灵活性,有利于学生使用所学英语知识讲述身边的故事,表达自己的思想,有利于培养学生的创造性思维。撰写祝贺信,邀请信等应用文。考生需要根据情境任务,分析写作目的、写作对象,将审题时的思考与写作内容相关联,并结合自己的背景知识或经验,展开丰富的想象,构思活动内容和栏目内容,运用恰当的语言、得体的语气完成交际任务,撰写出各具特点的文章。 考点清单 备考建议 1.动笔前的审题是撰写高质量文章的保障。一般来说,审题包括几个方面: 审体裁(祝贺信还是邀请信等)、审人称(写给谁,收信人决定作文是正式文体还是非正式文体)、审时态(每一段用什么时态,现在时态还是过去时态等)、审内容(2个要点还是3个要点等)。 2.审题后考生可运用写作总体规划图勾勒出文章总体结构。 3.重视积累写作词汇,不断提高语言质量 词汇的积累是文章语言质量的重要保证,考生在日常欣赏年级或班级写作范文时,要注意摘抄好词好句。 4.注意要点之间的衔接,突出文章的逻辑连贯性 首先,注意要点与要点之间的逻辑连贯。英语应用文写作包括2—3个要点,考生要注意要点与要点之间的互相呼应。其次,注意要点与细节之间的连贯。考生还要注意所添加的细节必须与要点密切相关,不可以脱离主题句。最后,注意保持段落写作的完整性。构成段落的三个要素是主题句、扩展句和结论句。有时,由于篇幅有限,结论句可以略去。 类型一　邮件/书信——申请/求职 　　假定你是李华,今年暑假你校将迎来一批英国访客,现面向全体高三学生招募对苏州文化比较了解的同学做志愿向导,请你写一封信申请做志愿者,内容包括: 　　1.写信目的; 2.个人优势。 注意: 1.词数80左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头、结束语已为你写好,不计入总词数。 Dear Sir or Madam, Yours, Li Hua 答案 Dear Sir or Madam,  I'm extremely glad to know our school wants a voluntary guide to receive a group of British visitors, so I'm writing to apply for this job. My grandpa is a silk craftsman, so I know a lot about silk textiles. I am also a loyal visitor to Suzhou gardens, their stories and buildings familiar to me. Besides, I have learned how to make folding fans. What's more, I have a good command of English, especially oral English. Additionally, I'm easy⁃going and skilled at communicating. I would appreciate it if you could consider my application. I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua  精彩语句 1.精美词汇　apply for申请　have a good command of 精通 2.出彩结构　I would appreciate it if you could consider my application.(条件状语从句) 写作类型二　倡议书 　　你校英语学习社团(English Club)将举办“读名著,学英语(Read Classics, Learn English)”活动。请你代表该社团写一封倡议书,发表在校报上。内容包括: 1.活动目的; 2.活动内容; 3.号召积极参与。 注意:写作词数应为80左右。 Read Classics, Learn English 答案 Read Classics, Learn English Dear fellow schoolmates, Aimed at appreciating the charm of English classics and promoting English learning, the school English Club will host the “Read Classics, Learn English” activity. This activity will last 2 weeks, scheduled from April 1st to 14th. Various activities have been designed, ranging from attending a lecture on reading tips to recommending the favorite English classics, followed by exchanging reading experience as well as reading skills. Anyone who has interest in reading English classics is welcome. Looking forward to your participation. English Club 精彩语句 1.精美词汇 　promote vt. 促进;推动　be aimed at旨在;以……为目的 2.出彩结构　Various activities have been designed, ranging from attending a lecture on reading tips to recommending the favorite English classics, followed by exchanging reading experience as well as reading skills.(现在分词短语作后置定语和过去分词短语作状语) 写作类型三　邮件/书信——请求帮助/提供帮助 　　假定你是李明。你的外国朋友 David 最近选修了中文课程。他来信向你咨询学好中文的方法。请你写一封回信,内容包括: 1.提出建议; 2.表达祝愿。 注意:写作词数应为 80 左右。 Dear David, Yours, Li Ming 答案 Dear David,  I'm delighted to learn that you've started learning Chinese! Knowing that you would like to have a better command of Chinese, I'm writing to share with you some practical suggestions, just for your reference. With proper guidance and enough practice, you're bound to learn Chinese well. To begin with, it is advisable that you regularly watch some Chinese learning programs, which will expose you to an authentic learning atmosphere and will help you develop a better understanding of Chinese culture. Besides, you'd better make some Chinese friends and communicate with them as much as possible. With frequent communication in real life, you'll eventually improve your oral Chinese and feel more confident. 　　Hopefully, my tips above can be of some help. Wish you success. Yours, Li Ming  精彩语句 1.精美词汇　have a better command of 更好地掌握　be bound to do 一定会做……　 be of some help有些帮助 2.出彩结构　To begin with, it is advisable that you regularly watch some Chinese learning programs, which will expose you to an authentic learning atmosphere and will help you develop a better understanding of Chinese culture.(虚拟语气和which引导的非限制性定语从句) 写作类型四　邮件/书信——感谢 　　假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim知道你即将参加高考,发邮件向你表示祝福并给你提供了几条考前学习的建议,你感觉非常有效。请你给他回复一封邮件,内容包括: 1.感谢他的祝福; 2.你比较获益的一条建议及理由。 注意:1.词数100左右; 2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, Yours, Li Hua 答案 Dear Jim, Thank you very much for your letter and your very best wishes, which really encourage me a lot. The tips you gave me are all practical and helpful. I have benefited a lot from them. The one that works very well on me is “Using Mind Maps to Review”. By drawing mind maps, I am clearer about the knowledge systems and have a better understanding of each section that I review. I am now more confident about my preparation and exams. Thank you very much again and best wishes to your graduation. May you have a fruitful college life. Yours, Li Hua 写作类型五　邮件/书信——告知/邀请 　　假定你是李华,你校正在为前来参加国际夏令营的外国中学生筹划中国传统艺术展。请你用英语写一封邮件通知外国中学生们,内容包括: 1.欢迎参观; 2.内容简介; 3.注意事项。 注意: 1.词数80左右; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 答案 One possible version: Dear friends, Welcome to our school! Knowing that you are keen on Chinese tradition, our school is holding a Traditional Chinese Art Exhibition for you. Let me introduce it in detail. The exhibition will last 3 days, from June 11 to June 13 in our school. It covers a variety of activities, ranging from learning daily Chinese to Chinese history and traditional culture. In addition, the exhibition provides a chance for students to enjoy some artworks in our museum, which is a good way to learn about our history. If you are interested, please sign up for it before June 10 on our school website. Yours, Li Hua 精彩语句 1.精美词汇　 be keen on 喜爱 　in detail 详细地　 sign up for报名参加 2.出彩结构　In addition, the exhibition provides a chance for students to enjoy some artworks in our museum, which is a good way to learn about our history.(which引导非限制性定语从句) 写作类型六　报道 　　你校最近举办了春季运动会,请你为校英文报写一篇报道。内容包括: 1.时间和地点; 2.运动会的基本情况; 3.比赛的意义。 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.短文题目已为你写好。 The Spring Sports Meet 答案 The Spring Sports Meet 　　To raise our awareness of physical health and enrich our school life, our school held the annual spring sports meet on the playground last Thursday and Friday. A lot of students from every class signed up for the sports meet. They took part in different kinds of events, such as running and the high jump, and tried their best to succeed in their selected sports. Some of them even broke the records of our school. The sports meet was highly appreciated, because not only did it provide a chance for us to exercise, but also made us more willing to cooperate. 精彩语句 1.精美词汇　sign up for报名参加　select v.选择　appreciate v.欢迎 2.出彩结构　①To raise our awareness of physical health and enrich our school life, our school held the annual spring sports meet on the playground last Thursday and Friday.(不定式作目的状语) ②The sports meet was highly appreciated, because not only did it provide a chance for us to exercise, but also made us more willing to cooperate.(because引导原因状语从句) 写作类型七　演讲 　　假定你是李华,你校外教Mr Thomson下周将结束两年的聘期回国任教,你将作为学生代表致欢送辞。请你写一篇发言稿,内容包括: 1.对Mr Thomson 表示感谢; 2.介绍Mr Thomson的教学情况; 3.表达祝愿。 注意: 1.词数80左右; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 答案 Dear friends, How time flies!Mr Thomson will leave for his homeland next week after he has been working diligently at our school for two years. Now, it is time for us to express our thanks to him. During the past two years, Mr Thomson has devoted himself to improving our English, which has left a good impression on us. He makes his classes so lively and interesting that all of us enjoy every minute of them. It is his creative work that has made us achieve great progress in our English learning. We wish Mr Thomson a pleasant journey home and good health. That's all. Thank you. 精彩语句 1.精美词汇 　leave a good impression on 给……留下好印象　devote oneself to 致力于…… 2.出彩结构　It is his creative work that has made us achieve great progress in our English learning.(强调句型) 一 　　你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题,举办英语征文比赛。请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括: 1.海洋的重要性; 2.保护海洋的倡议。 注意: 1.词数100左右; Our Oceans, Our Responsibility June 8th was officially named by the UN in 2009 as World Oceans Day. 答案　 Our Oceans, Our Responsibility June 8th was officially named by the UN in 2009 as World Oceans Day. It aims to raise people's awareness of protecting oceans.  Why should we protect the ocean? The reason is that it provides various benefits. To begin with, the sea is a significant source of food. With the world population growing, we are relying on the ocean more and more for survival. In addition, not only does the ocean produce much oxygen, but it also absorbs much carbon dioxide, which remarkably contributes to regulating the Earth's climate. Also,vast amounts of medicinal products come from the ocean, including ingredients that help fight cancer and heart disease. However, the sea is being damaged. Huge as it is, it is more sensitive than we think. Thus, it is high time that we took effective measures to protect it. Otherwise, future generations will not forgive us. 二 　　学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括: 1.学习活动状况描述; 2.简单评论; 3.你的建议。 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。 Learning English Beyond the Classroom There are many things we can do to learn English well. 答案　 Learning English Beyond the Classroom There are many things we can do to learn English well. To learn more about how senior high school students learn English after class, recently our school English newspaper is holding a heated discussion, whose theme is “Learning English Beyond the Classroom”. The following are the results of a survey connected to the discussion.  The percentage of students who choose to listen to English songs and watch English movies is respectively 65% and 50%, while those choosing to read books in English and browse English learning websites only account for 18% and 12%. From what has been said above, we can safely draw a conclusion that most students prefer to choose more relaxing and interesting ways to learn English beyond the classroom. As far as I am concerned, as long as we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing after school, we will learn English well. 三 　　假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你打算邀请英国好友Jim 为你们班做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括: 1.建议交流的具体内容及其原因; 2.交流时间和其他相关事项。 注意: 1.词数 100 左右; 2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, How's everything? Yours, Li Hua 答案　 One possible version: Dear Jim, How's everything? I'm writing to invite you to give us an online talk on English writing. Our classmates seem to be weak in organisation. Would you please give us some suggestions on how to connect sentences logically, how to develop a paragraph, and how to structure an essay? The talk will be about an hour, and you can decide on a date at your convenience. Please let me know which platform you'll be using. It would be great if we could have a 10⁃minute question and answer session at the end of your talk. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 四 　　假定你是李华,暑期在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者,内容包括: 1.写信目的; 2.个人优势; 3.能做的事情。 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.结束语已为你写好。 Dear Sir,  Looking forward to your early reply.  Yours, Li Hua  答案　 Dear Sir,  I am Li Hua, a student studying in London, who is more than thrilled to be informed of the message that there will be a Chinese painting exhibition in your local art gallery. I am writing to apply for being a volunteer. As a student from China, I have been keen on Chinese paintings. As you know, China has a growing influence on today's world. In the meanwhile, more attention is paid to the study of the traditional culture in Chinese high schools. So I have got the hang of the knowledge of Chinese paintings. By the way, I can also do well in communicating with others in oral English. I would extremely appreciate it if I have a chance to receive your approval. Looking forward to your early reply.  Yours, Li Hua  五 　　假定你是李华,经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括: 1.表示感谢; 2.回顾Alex对你的帮助; 3.临别祝愿。 注意: 1.词数80左右; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 答案　 Dear Alex, It's really a pity that you will leave us and go back to your country. On the occasion of parting, I would like to express my deep gratitude to you. Thank you very much for your help with my English study over the months. For various reasons, my English was not very good.But your timely help made a difference. With your patient and effective help, my English has improved a lot.What's more, thanks to your help, I now have confidence in my English study and have effective learning strategies. Parting is inevitable, but I believe our friendship will last forever. Wish you all the best and a good journey back home. Yours, Li Hua 六 　　你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Be smart online learners为题写一篇发言稿参赛,内容包括: 1.分析优势与不足; 2.提出学习建议。 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.题目和首句已为你写好。 Be smart online learners Learning online has become an important way to study recently. 答案　 Be smart online learners Learning online has become an important way to study recently. Students have easier access to more materials in their favor. Besides, there is no limit to learning time and space, which brings great convenience to all learners. However, some students who lack self⁃discipline may find their minds wandering when facing a screen rather than the faces of their teachers.  I benefit a lot from online learning, and for those who hope so too, my following suggestions will be helpful. First, put down learning tasks in detail before you start. Then, tick what you have achieved and rearrange those you haven't. Finally, set aside 10 minutes to have a break if you find it hard to focus on what you're learning. Keep in mind that distraction should be dealt with wisely. That's all. Thank you for your attention. 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$