Unit 1 Teenage Life Reading for Writing课件-【上好课】2024-2025学年高一英语同步精品课堂（人教版2019必修第一册）

Unit 1 Teenage Life Reading for Writing 人教版2019必修第一册 目 录 Lead-in A letter of advice Reading Writing Learning objectives: At the end of this lesson, students are able to: 1.Study the organization and language features of a letter of advice; 2.Master the method of writing a letter of advice; 3.Obtain the structure of a letter of advice; 4.Use words and expressions to give advice about problems faced with the senior high students; 5.Write a letter of advice successfully. Lead-in： What problems do you have in your daily life? Game Addiction Bullying Smoking Lack of support from family Depression Peer-Pressure Puppy love Lead-in： Facing these problems, how will you seek for help ? turn to teachers and parents for advice talk to reliable friends with previous experiences write a letter to a professional adviser Lead-in： What do you usually do when faced with a dilemma? 1. Listen to light music and shut myself in the room for a whole day. 2. Pour my heart out to a journal. 3. Turn to my dear parents for help. 4. Manage to seek an effective method all by myself. 5. Spend time in the gym. 6. Go to an adviser for teenagers (teacher / consultant) for help. ... Reading： Do you have such problems as mentioned by the following teenagers? Eric, 15, Chicargo Xu Ting, 15, Hangzhou Min Ho, 15, Seoul Reading： Can you give them some suggestions? Susan Luo, an adviser for teenagers, always receives many letters asking for advice from many worried friends. In addition she is also responsible for providing advice for confused and worried parents in a column called “Talking Teens”. Here is a letter of advice from Susan. in addition 而且 in a column 在一个专栏中 be responsible for负责... Reading： 10 September 2018 Dear Worried Friend, But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life. Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life. I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies. Why not discuss the problem together? I am sure he will listen to you, since you are his good friends. I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behavior. It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world. You wrote that you are very worried about your friend, Chen Lei. I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible. You think that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online. All the best, Susan Luo Date Greeting Body Close Signature A Letter of Advice Reading： But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life. Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life. I think you should encourage your friend to try new obbies. Why not discuss the problem together? I am sure he will listen to you, since you are his good friends. I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behavior. It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world. You wrote that you are very worried about your friend, Chen Lei. I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible. You think that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online. All the best, Susan Luo date and greeting you understand how he/she feels. suggestion(s) & reason(s) the problem what you think will happen Close and signature. 10 September 2018 Dear Worried Friend, A Letter of Advice I know what The problem is. I understand how you feel. This is my advice and reason(s). I think my advice will help. A letter of advice： How to write a letter of advice? 1. I know what the problem is. 2. I understand how you feel. 3. This is my advice and reason (s). 4. I think my advice will help. 点明问题 表示理解 提出建议 表达愿望 文章开头 文章主体段 文章结尾 A letter of advice： How to write a letter of advice? Beginning describe the problem clearly and briefly (offer comfort and understanding) Body give advice and its supporting details (Don't give advice that's not related to the problem. ) Ending give comfort and encouragement ( end the letter in a polite way) Beginning describe the problem clearly and briefly (offer comfort and understanding) Empathy: I know your pains and I can understand. A letter of advice： How to write a letter of advice? A letter of advice： More Expressions Showing understanding I feel terribly sorry to hear/ know/ learn that ... I know well how it feels to ... I know you didn't mean to ... I know you have trouble in ... It happens to everyone. Everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong. Take it easy and things will be better. A letter of advice： How to write a letter of advice? Body give advice and its supporting details (Don't give advice that's not related to the problem. ) A letter of advice： More Expressions Making suggestions Why don't you ...? It couldn't be better if you could ... I think it would be beneficial if you could ... I'd like to suggest that you should ... It's recommended to do ... You may as well do ... You may consider doing... From my point of view, it would be a good idea to do ... A letter of advice： How to write a letter of advice? Ending give comfort and encouragement ( end the letter in a polite way) More expressions ※I believe you will take my advice into consideration. ※I hope you will find these suggestions useful/ helpful. ※I do hope that my ideas will work. ※I hope my advice is helpful and you'll soon feel calmer and carry on. A letter of advice： How to write a letter of advice? Dear XXX, You wrote that________. I understand quite well that___________. I’d like to offer you some useful advice on__________. To begin with, I recommend you_______ because________. What’s more, it’s also a good choice to _____________, which will_______________. Besides, doing sth. also helps. Only in this way can you ______________ I’m confident that you will ______ with these suggestions. Yours, Li Hua A letter of advice： Write the date and greet the reader.  Show the reader that you know what the problem is.  Tell the reader that you understand how she or he feels.  Tell the reader what you think he or she should do.  Explain reasons.  Tell the reader what you think will happen. Close and sign the letter. How to write a letter of advice? A letter of advice： Writing： Four steps of writing the body Step 1: To show your empathy with the worried teenagers or parents.(表明你的感同身受) I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible. 我非常明白你的心情，感觉糟糕而且非常焦急。 Step 2: To state clearly the problems worried teenagers or parents faced with. (清晰陈述问题的症结) You think that your friend/son/child play computer games too often.... Step 3: To put forward your suggestions and your reason.(提出建议及理由) I recommend that you talk to your friends/son/daughter about....It's not unusual for...to ...,but ... Step 4: To encourage the worried teenagers or parents try your suggestion. (鼓励对方尝试你的建议) I think you should encourage your friends to try new hobbies. Why not....? I'm sure... Writing： 为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART­ TO ­HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请你用英文给该同学写一封回信。 内容要点如下： 1．表示理解并给予安慰； 2．提出建议并说明理由。 Writing： Hi Worried， I'm sorry to know that you are having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don't have to worry so much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you'll regret. Here are three tips for you. First of all, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Besides, I recommend that you go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of your anger. What’s more, why not be optimistic about your future? Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits. I hope my advice is helpful and you'll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal. Yours， Jamie 控制脾气 宣泄怒气 摆脱怒气 积极的生活态度 对……乐观的 振作精神 照常进行 Writing： Hi Worried， I'm sorry to know that you are having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don't have to worry so much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you'll regret. Here are three tips for you. First of all, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Besides, I recommend that you go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of your anger. What’s more, why not be optimistic about your future? Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits. I hope my advice is helpful and you'll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal. Yours， Jamie Beginning: problem and understanding Body: three tips Ending: my encouragement Writing： Are all the parts of a letter included and organized in a good order? Does the writer give reasons for the advice? Does the writer use proper expressions to give suggestions? Does the writer use commas and stops correctly? Is the handwriting easy to read? The checklist Thank You ! Reading for Writing 人教版2019必修第一册 $$