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外研社选择性必修第四册- Writing 学案
写作技法·情景演练
概要写作的方法:
第一步:通读全文,明确文章结构
根据意义划分文中的自然段,这一般就是要点的数量。
第二步:删除冗繁,提炼关键信息
找出段落主题句,最后归纳的要点往往是这些词句的同义转述。删除原文中描述性的语言和细节性的信息,如列举的数字和事例等。
第三步:罗列要点,进行同义转换
为避免和原文句子重复,可利用同义转述和句式转换这两种方式归纳要点。控制字数,分清主次。要注意不增不减不曲解信息,在正确理解原文的前提下,用简洁的语言表达信息。
第四步:丰富表达,注意衔接过渡
合理使用非谓语动词、从句和特殊句式等高级表达,句子结构不可过长,也不要用太复杂的句子结构。同时选用适当的衔接词连接上下文,保证概要部分内容的连贯性。
2.常见的词义转换
(1)表示受欢迎
be/become popular with/among sb.
受某人欢迎/在某人之间开始流行起来
gain/enjoy growing/increasing/great popularity
受到日益增长的/广泛的欢迎
go viral走红
(2)表示某物成为人们关心的热门话题
be/become the focus/concern of the public成为公众的焦点/忧虑
arouse/cause great controversy over/about关于……引起很大争议
(3)表示某事/物成为一种趋势
...becomes a trend/fashion.……成为一种趋势/时尚。
People tend to do...人们往往……
(4)常见的现象
a common phenomenon一种常见现象
It's common for sb. to do sth.某人做某事是很常见的
(5)被看作……
be considered/regarded/viewed/referred to/
recognized as/to be...
(6)与……有关/有联系
be linked/related/connected/relevant to...
be associated with...
have something to do with...
find a connection/link between...and...
(7)对……负责
be responsible for...
be to blame for...
(8)处理……
deal/cope with...
resolve/tackle/handle/address...
(9)反对……
be against/opposed to (doing) sth.
oppose/object to/disapprove of (doing) sth.
argue against sth.
disagree with sb.
(10)赞成
approve of (doing) sth.
support...
advocate (doing) sth.
argue for...
be in favor of...
find favor with sb.
(11)对……有益
be of great benefit to...
be beneficial to sb.
do good to sb./do sb. good
be good for...
have an positive effect on...
benefit sb./sth.
benefit from...
bring benefit to sb.
(12)对……有害
do harm to sb./do sb. harm
be harmful/damaging to...
cause damage to...
have a negative/bad effect on...
be bad for...
(13)有助于……
be of great help/use to...
contribute to...
(14)重要的
important/significant/vital/crucial/critical
be of great value to...
be of vital importance to...
...counts/matters
(15)重视
attach great importance to (doing) sth.
attach significance to...
pay attention to...
sth. must come first
sth. must/should be put in the first place
Ⅱ.情景再现
阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
It's a really good idea to visit colleges before you apply because their websites can all start to look and sound the same. Nothing will give you the sense of what it will actually be like to live on a college campus (校园) like visiting and seeing for yourself the dorms, classrooms and athletic equipment and, of course, the students. It seems a little crazy once senior year hits to find the time to visit college campuses, and it can also be pricey if the schools you are applying to happen to be more than a car ride away. But keep in mind that you are making a decision about the next four years of your life, and do all the research you can to make sure you are making the right one.
There's no excuse not to visit the schools in your local area. In fact, a lot of college applications even ask if you have visited campuses, and obviously, if you live across the country that won't be as much of a possibility, but if you live nearby, go and check it out!
If campus visits aren't going to happen before you apply, at the very least you should find some time between applying and getting your acceptance letters to visit the schools you'd like to attend. It can save you a lot of heartache if you rule out now the things that you don't like about certain campuses, things that you wouldn't know unless you actually visit.
Now, if time and money are making it impossible, then check out the online college fairs at CollegeWeekLive. It's a chance to chat online with admissions officers, students, and college counselors (顾问), and it won't cost you a penny! You can register for its online college fair at collegeweeklive.com. While visiting an online college fair can't take the place of an actual campus visit, it can be a very useful tool that along with all your other research will help you make an informed decision about which colleges or universities you'd like to attend.
答案:
将以上句子连成一篇语言流畅、用词准确、逻辑严密的短文。
It's really worthwhile for students to visit their desired colleges personally before they apply. Firstly, students should visit their local colleges, which may be included in applications. Secondly, there is no doubt that students should pay a visit to the schools they want to go to between applying and getting the acceptance letters. Thirdly, for those students who are short of time and money, to better understand schools, they should visit their favorite college campuses online, and it can also help them make a better choice.
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