衔接点15 书面表达 （小初考点差异及衔接）-2024年小升初英语无忧衔接（通用版）

衔接点15 书面表达（小初考点差异及衔接） 小学要求 要求考生运用所学词汇、句型、语法等知识构建语篇,完成写作任务。主要是记叙文。 初中要求 书面表达题主要用于考查学生综合运用英语的能力,特别是通过“写”所表现出的书面运用英语知识的能力。同时,也能较好地考查考生的观察能力、理解能力、联想能力、灵活运用所学英语知识的能力和初步运用英语表达思想的能力。 书面表达的命题特点: 1.根据话题分为经历感受类、做法建议类、观点看法类和说明介绍类。 2.所选话题多样,多为贴近学生实际生活的内容。涉及学校生活、学习方法、节假日活动、难忘的经历等。 3.词数要求一般为80—100词。 【小学书面表达考点聚焦】 一 假如你是Peter，请根据表格内容写一篇介绍自己的小作文。 要求：表格信息表达完整，可适当拓展； 条理清晰、意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确；书写规范、工整。 姓名 性格 课程表 (on Fridays) 喜好及原因 家附近公园的景色 Peter Funny hard-working Chinese English PE hill trees flowers delicious river ducks ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文 My name is Peter. I'm funny and hard-working. On Fridays, I have Chinese, English and PE. I like chicken very much. It's delicious. A park is near my house. There is a river in the park. There is a bridge over the river. There are some ducks on the river. Behind the river, there is a hill. There are some trees and flowers around the hill. 二 我们的城市徐州是全国文明城市之一，我们要从身边的小事做起，从保持我们的学校干净开始做起，为文明城市贡献自己的一份力量！ 要求： 请结合思维导图的提示，以“How to keep our school clean?”为主题谈谈自己的思考。(不少于5句话，不包括已给的开头) 。 语法准确、语句通顺、书写工整、注意标点。 可适当发挥。 Keep our school clean To keep our school clean and beautiful, we ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文 Keep our school clean To keep our school clean and beautiful, we should start from ourselves. First, we should clean our classroom every day. Then we should throw the litter into the dustbin. We shouldn’t litter everywhere. Thirdly, we should plant more trees and flowers in our school. We shouldn’t destroy the trees and flowers. I believe our school will be more beautiful and cleaner. 【初中书面表达考点聚焦】 考点清单 写作要求 1、写好句子： 1) 熟悉并掌握形成完整句子的基本框架结构。我们知道，单词、语法是学习、掌握和运用语言的基础，然而只靠它们拼凑句子是远远不够的，耗时费力不说，拼凑出来的也多是汉语式的英语，很不地道。因此，平时必须牢记所学过的“固定搭配”及“词组句型”，并会活用。 写句子要注意以下几点：（1）主谓要一致；（2）正确使用动词的时态、语态、语气；（3）名词的格要与代词的格一致；（4)句子结构成分完整，特别注意不要漏掉或添加成分。 2)一个句子一个重心，句意清楚，合乎逻辑。 3)句子开头首字母要大字，句末要使用正确的英语标点符号。 2、组句成文： 一般说来，文章可以通过句子的进展和句子之间的各种结合来构成。 1)熟悉并掌握表示并列、递进、转折等关系的过渡词(transitional words)。例如： 并列关系：and, as well as, also… 递进关系：besides, in addition, moreover, what’s more… 转折关系：but, yet, however, although, otherwise, or, in spite of, despite, instead of, in the end… 时间顺序：while, when, soon after, before, afterward, finally, first, then, next, as soon as … 比较、对比：like, unlike, on the contrary, on the other hand… 总结： in a word, in general, in short, above all, after all, generally speaking… 进一步阐述：in other words, that is to say, for example, for instance, such as … 因果关系：as a result, so, thus, therefore… 2) 内容要点全面，不要节外生枝。 3) 要点安排得当，使之文通字顺，合乎逻辑,层次清晰。 4) 注意养成写完后自我检查的习惯，应重点检查： 写作步骤 一、认真审题 看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求。审题时要看清文字说明、图画、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息，以及参考词汇，字数要求等等。如果是几幅图要将几幅图结合起来看，才能弄清人物关系和故事情节。还要审文体，确定格式，确定人称，确定主体时态。 二、列出要点 要点是给分的一个重要因素，为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要在看清看懂所有文字、图画、参考词汇的基础上，在草稿纸上将各个要点逐条列出。 三、写出词句 用英语写出各个要点的关键词语或句型，并用地道的英语句子将各个要点逐一表达出来。 四、连句成文 根据各个要点之间的关系，使用恰当的关联词语(详见语篇基础)，将各个句子连接成通顺流畅的短文。并注意以下几点：避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。注意长短句交错，几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板。 五、细心检查 短文写好后还要细心检一篇，看是否正确无误。你可主要检查：(1) 人称是否用错，并注意人称代词的主格和宾格形式是否有错；(2) 动词的时态形式是否准确无误，特别注意查看一般现在时主语是第三人称单数时谓语动词是否加了(e)s；(3) 名词的复数形式；(4) 单词拼写、标点符号和大小写是否有错；(5) 格式是否有错。 六、誊入试卷 经检查，准确无误后，才誊入试卷。要特别注意书写工整，卷面整洁。阅卷时正值天气炎热，老师工作量之大，时间紧迫，书写是否工整，卷面是否整洁与得分高低直接有关，同学们务必注意。 基础题 一 假如你是Wang Lin, 收到你美国朋友John的电子邮件, 想了解每年春节前你的购物情况。请根据下表所提供的信息，用英语给他回复。 Shopping for the Chinese New Year Reason When to go 节前一天，和母亲去 春节临近 How to go 乘坐公交车去购物中心 离家较远 What to buy 挑选自己喜欢的衣服 穿着神气 鸡蛋、肉、饮料 准备晚餐 What else to buy ……(自拟一点) ……(自拟一点) Your ideas …… (自拟一点) 注意: 1. 表达中必须包含所给要点，可以适当发挥。 2. 词数：80词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名和地名等信息。 参考范文 Dear John, I'm happy to get your email.Now let me tell you somthing about the Chinese New Year. The Chinese New Year is coming. It is an important holiday in China. I’ll go shopping with my mother before the festival.We will go to the shopping centre by bus because we live far away from it.And there are always many people on the bus because lots of Chinese people are busy shopping too. We have a lot of things to buy.First,we buy our favourite clothes.In China,people always wear new clothes and look smart during the festival.Then,we will buy some eggs,meat,vegetables and some drinks, because all the family members will get together and have a big dinner to celebrate the Chinese New Year.Next,we will buy some fireworks,We often let off fireworks after dinner. They are really wonderful.At last,we also buy some presents. We usually visit our friends and say Gongaifacai to each other,and we also give each other presents. I like Chinese New Year very much because I can get red packets from my parents,grandparents,aunts and uncles. We always have fun at the Chinese New Year! All the best. Wang Lin 二 我校将举办校园健康小达人活动，要求参加者在表演节目前用英语介绍自己；7(1)班的李霞想要参加这次活动，请你为李霞写一篇演讲稿。可以参考以下的信息： 外貌:长头发，戴眼镜，个子不是很高，疲瘦的，但看起来健康: 生活:妈妈告诉她健康的生活方式很重要；早餐吃…午餐吃…；晚餐吃并且要求她每天锻炼半个小时，因此她通常步行上学； 最喜欢的节日:春节:原因:……. 要求:1.不要逐句翻译，可根据演讲的需要作适当的补充: 2.语法正确，书写认真，词数80左右(开头已给出，不计在其内)。 范文1: Good afternoon, teachers and friends!Glad to be here with you. I am Lixia from Class 1,Grade 7.I am not very tall .I have long hair and wear glasses.I am slim, but look healthy. Because I have a healthy lifestyle. And my mother often cooks healthy meals for me.She asks me to eat some bread and milk for breakfast.At lunch,I often eat some meat and vegetables.At dinner,I eat some noodles and vegetables.She asks me to exercise for half an hour every day,So I usually go to school on foot. My favourite festival is the Spring Festival because I can get lucky money from my grandparents,parents and uncles. I like visiting my friends during the Spring Festival,that’s very interesting. That's all.Thank you! 范文2： Good afternoon, teachers and friends!Glad to be here with you. I am Lixia from Class 1,Grade 7.I am not very tall .I have long hair and wear glasses.I am slim, but look healthy because I have a healthy lifestyle. And my mother often cooks healthy meals for me.She asks me to eat some bread and milk for breakfast.At lunch,I often eat some meat and vegetables.At dinner,I eat some noodles and vegetables.She asks me to exercise for half an hour every day,So I usually go to school on foot. I like colourful clothes.So I am wearing a white cotton blouse, a grey and red sweater.I am also wearing a grey skirt and a pair of long red leather boots today.I think the grey skirt and the red leather boots match this sweater very well.They look nice on me. That's all.Thank you! 三 亲爱的同学们，进入初中，你们开启了一段新的旅程，现校英语报对全体学生征稿，投稿中需要向同学们描述平时你是如何在校内校外过精彩生活的。请结合图片和要点提示，以“Enjoy a Wonderful Life”为题，完成一篇英语短文。 注意： 1.所写内容必须包括图示中所有信息，并作适当发挥； 2.词数70左右。开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 参考范文 Enjoy a Wonderful Life As a middle school student, I try my best to learn how to make my life wonderful every day. In school, firstly, there are so many interesting subjects.I like the geography best, because it can make me learn more things about the world . Secondly, we all know that a good health is the key to a happy school life.So I always eat healthily and do exercise more,and I never eat too much junk food. After school,if I have free time,I can go shopping with my friends or parents. I also enjoy the fun of festivals, such as the Mid Autumn Festival and the Spring Festival. I really enjoy letting fireworks. I believe all of us can enjoy a wonderful life! 四 为了践行健康生活方式，学校英语俱乐部开展题为"My lifestyle”的征文活动。假如你是李华，请根据以下表格中的信息提示，用英语写一篇文章参加活动。 Name Li Hua Lifestyle eat many hamburgers,... often sleep late love football Plans eat more vegetables and fruit ...(自由发挥，至少两点) 注意: (1)词数80左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数； (2)文中应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯； (3)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。 参考范文 My lifestyle I'm Li Hua. I'm very happy to tell you about my lifestyle.As we all know,health is very important.We should eat healthily. But,I have some bad healthy diets.I like sweet food.I always eat too many hamburgers and cola.I like play computer games,so I often sleep late. That’s not a good thing.I need to change my lifestyle now.I plan to eat more fruit and vegetables everyday.I also need to eat some meat,because it can give me energy. Playing football is my favourite hobby.I am going to play football every week.There is a swimming pool near my home.I plan to learn how to swim every Friday. 五 寒假马上就要到了，为倡导同学们过一个愉快而有意义的假期，你校英文报See The world举行了以"My Winter Holiday Plan"为题的征文活动。请根据以下表格提示内容及要，用英语写一篇文章，讲述你的寒假计划。 项目 计划 锻炼与娱乐 1.每日早起锻炼半小时 2.不打电脑游戏，因为... 学习与交友 1.上午按时完成家庭作业 2.午后读书两小时，计划读... 3.晚上和朋友聊天，谈论... 庆祝与出行 1.和家人庆祝春节，通常... 2.去探望…… 其他方面 ...... 【要求】1.不少于100词，已给出部分不计人总词数。 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，字迹工整。 3.内容包括以上所有要点，可适当发挥。 4.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。 参考范文 My Winter Holiday Plan The winter holiday is coming. I am happy to share my winter holiday plan with you. During the holiday, a healthy lifestyle is important.I plan to get up early and take some exercise for half an hour every morning. Also,I won't play computer games because it is bad for my eyes. It is also important to study during the holiday.I will finish my homework in the morning first. In the afternoon, I plan to read books about history for 2 hours. After dinner,I will chat with my friends and talk about our hobbies. The winter holiday is also a good time to have fun. I will have a good time with my family by celebrating the Spring Festival. We'll have a big dinner and watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV together.My parents and I plan to visit my grandparents and give them our best wishes for the new year. I really hope everyone can have a happy winter holiday. 提高题 一．人物介绍　　　　　　 孔子学院(Confucius Institute)夏令营在武汉招募志愿者。假如你是李华,请用英文写一封自荐信。 内容要点如下: 1.性格外向,喜欢交朋友; 2.能用英语讲中国故事和与人沟通; 3.了解中国历史和文化,会唱楚剧; 4.爱好广泛,擅长乒乓球; 5.补充一两点有关信息或想法。 注意: 1.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称; 2.词数:60—80; 3.内容连贯,不要逐条翻译; 4.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 参考词汇:Chu opera楚剧　culture n.文化　ping-pang n.乒乓球 Dear sir/madam, I am Li Hua from Wuhan. May I have the honor to work as a volunteer at Confucius Institute?　                Yours truly, Li Hua 答案　 写作提示　 1.体裁:应用文; 2.时态:主体时态为一般现在时; 3.人称:以第一人称为主; 4.要点:性格、能力、爱好等。 参考范文　 Dear sir/madam,  I am Li Hua from Wuhan. May I have the honor to work as a volunteer at Confucius Institute? I'm good at Chinese and English. Chinese history and culture are my favorites. It's easy for me to communicate and tell Chinese stories in both languages. I've got many hobbies, such as playing ping-pong and singing Chu opera. I'm healthy, hard-working and like to try new things. I'm outgoing. I love to meet different people and make friends with them. In my eyes, volunteer work is a good opportunity to learn something new.  Looking forward to your early reply. Yours truly,  Li Hua  精彩语句　 1.精美词汇 be good at擅长　hard-working勤奋的　make friends with与……交朋友 2.出彩结构 It's easy for me to communicate and tell Chinese stories in both languages.(本句是一个简单句。在“It+be+adj.+for sb.+to do sth.”句型中,It为形式主语,动词不定式是真正的主语) 二．叙事类 假如你是李华,学业考试后要参加“21世纪杯”中学生英语演讲大赛,题目为A/An 　　　　　　Winter Holiday,请你根据所给信息完成一篇英文演讲稿,讲述刚过去的那段寒假经历,并谈谈它对你今后的影响。  注意: (1)将演讲稿标题补充完整; (2)演讲稿必须包含所有要点,并适当拓展; (3)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名; (4)词数100左右;首尾句已给出,不计入总词数。 A/An 　　　　　　Winter Holiday  Ladies and gentlemen, it is my pleasure to present my speech here. My topic today is             　　That's all for my speech. Thank you for your time. 答案　 写作提示　 1.本文是一篇英语演讲稿。 2.本文可从描述寒假的总体感受开始,第二部分从Activities you did、Something you learned和Influences on your future三方面描述,最后总结。 参考范文　 An Unforgettable Winter Holiday  Ladies and gentlemen, it is my pleasure to present my speech here. My topic today is an unforgettable winter holiday.  Personally, this winter holiday was quite different. Because of COVID-19, I had to study at home and take online classes. As a result, I found I was able to learn by myself. I also helped my parents with housework like cooking. And I learned how to cook well. Last but not least, I had more time to communicate with my parents. Therefore, I learned to get on better with them. What I learned during this holiday will surely influence my future life. I will be more self-controlled and independent. And I'm sure I will face difficulties and challenges more bravely. That's all for my speech. Thank you for your time.  三．介绍说明类 　　在中国传统文化中,“家”是一个永恒的话题。家人相聚一堂,才是完整的家,温暖而有力量。请你结合下图,以“Home”为题,写一篇约110词的英语短文,让外国朋友了解中国文化中的“家”。                   答案　 写作提示　 1.体裁:说明文; 2.时态:主体时态为一般现在时; 3.人称:以第一人称和第三人称为主; 4.内容:应结合图片介绍中国文化中的“家”。 参考范文　 Home Home means a lot to every Chinese. When our family members come back for reunion, we sit around the table, sharing our achievements and happiness. Home becomes the warmest place. It's a place full of love. Love can be expressed by gifts, family dinner and phone calls. However, none is better than going back home and spending time with our families. It's also a place full of strength. Whenever we have difficulties, we can return home. Thanks to the encouragement and help from our families, we can rebuild our belief and confidence to keep moving forward. So how long have you been away from home? Come back. Home is always waiting for you. 精彩语句　 1.精美词汇 reunion n.团聚;achievement n.成就;express v.表达;strength n.力量;encouragement n.鼓励;thanks to多亏 2.出彩结构 Thanks to the encouragement and help from our families, we can rebuild our belief and confidence to keep moving forward.(Thanks to the encouragement and help from our families在本句中作原因状语) 四．做法建议类 　　校学生会为即将到来的“健康周”活动策划了两个项目。假设你是学生会成员,请写一篇英语短文,在校英语报上介绍其中一个项目的活动内容及其益处。要点提示如下: Projects A School Trip Day A Sports Day Activities ·fly kites ·have a picnic ·… ·have ball games ·play tug-of-war(拔河) ·… Benefits (益处) ·develop friendship ·feel relaxed ·… ·develop friendship ·keep fit ·… 注意:(1)短文必须包含表中你所选项目的所有信息,并适当发挥。 (2)文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。 (3)词数:80~100。短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。 During the Health Week, we will have 　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　        答案　 写作提示　 1.体裁:说明文。 2.人称:主体人称为第一人称或第三人称。 3.时态:以一般将来时为主。 4.要点: 1)选择一个项目; 2)介绍活动内容,并适当发挥; 3)介绍活动的益处,并适当发挥。 参考范文　 ①During the Health Week, we will have a School Trip Day on Friday. Here is the plan for the day. We will start our trip by walking to the Lakeside Park. In the morning, there is going to be a kite-flying competition. At noon, we will have a picnic near the small lake there. After lunch, we will go boating on the lake. We can feel a sense of peace in mind while we are rowing on the blue water.  By being part of these activities, we will not only develop friendship with our classmates, but also relax ourselves and be free from the pressure of study. ②During the Health Week, we will have a Sports Day to make our school life more colorful. On that day, there will be different sports. In the morning, we will play ball games. Everyone can go in for their favorite ones. In the afternoon, there will be a game that you can never miss—playing tug-of-war. It is really a good chance to make us better understand the meaning of teamwork. After that, there will be a kung fu lesson, which can help us to keep fit.  All these sports will do us good. Not only can they make us feel relaxed but also develop friendship. 精彩语句　 1.精美词汇 pressure n.压力;miss v.错过;relax oneself放松自己;a sense of peace平静感;in mind在心中 2.出彩结构 We can feel a sense of peace in mind while we are rowing on the blue water.(本句为主从复合句,while引导时间状语从句) After that, there will be a kung fu lesson, which can help us to keep fit.(本句为主从复合句,which 引导非限制性定语从句) Not only can they make us feel relaxed but also develop friendship.(本句为倒装句,not only...but also...不仅……而且……) 五．观点表达类 学生喜欢在家还是在电影院看电影?就该话题你在班中做了调查(结果见下图)。请你据此写一篇短文在校英语社团主题活动中进行交流,并谈谈你的选择和理由。 注意:(1)短文必须包括图中所有内容,可适当增加细节; (2)你的理由必须与图中所列理由不同; (3)词数:80—100; (4)短文首句仅供选择使用,不计入总词数。 Recently, I've done a survey about whether students like to watch movies at home or in the cinema.　　　 　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  答案　 写作提示 1.本文是调查报告类的说明文。 2.本文可以按照三段式来写。第一段总述,第二段具体写调查情况,第三段写自己的选择和理由。 参考范文 Possible version 1: Recently, I've done a survey about whether students like to watch movies at home or in the cinema. 64% of the students like to watch movies at home. For one thing, they can spend less money. For another, they will have more choices of what to watch.  However, others prefer going to the cinema. From their point of view, they will have the chance to enjoy huge screens and feel excellent sound in the cinema, which can always give them a wonderful watching experience. For me, it's a better idea to watch movies at home. I can be free to do what I want while watching movies, like eating or talking about the characters with my family. Possible version 2: Recently, I've done a survey about whether students like to watch movies at home or in the cinema. 64% of the students like to watch movies at home. For one thing, they can spend less money. For another, they will have more choices of what to watch.  However, others prefer going to the cinema. From their point of view, they will have the chance to enjoy huge screens and feel excellent sound in the cinema, which can always give them a wonderful watching experience. Personally speaking, watching movies in the cinema is a better choice. I can hang out with my friends and it's really exciting. At the same time, it's a good way to develop friendship. 精彩语句 1.精美词汇 prefer doing sth.偏爱做某事;from one's point of view 在某人看来;personally speaking就个人而言 2.出彩结构 From their point of view, they will have the chance to enjoy huge screens and feel excellent sound in the cinema, which can always give them a wonderful watching experience.(which引导非限制性定语从句) 一 Doing Housework Makes Me 　　  提示:家务是生活中的一部分,我们作为一名家庭成员,应该学会分担家务。请以“Doing Housework Makes Me 　　　”为题,用英语写一篇短文,叙述一次你做家务的经历,并谈谈你的体会。  要求:1.请先将题目补全后,再作答; 2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,词数不少于60个; 3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。                 答案　 写作提示　 讲述经历要符合故事的基本特点:时间、地点、人物、事情经过、结果和感受等。 参考范文　 Doing Housework Makes Me Happy Doing housework is a part of our life. It's necessary to share housework with other family members. I'd like to tell you one of my experiences. Last Mother's Day, I made a special dinner for my mom. It didn't work as well as I thought. I hurt my fingers while cutting carrots, and I forgot to put salt into the dishes. When my mom came back home, she was happy to taste them. Then she hugged me and said, “Good girl!” From this experience, I've learned doing housework can not only help me grow up but also bring happiness to my family. 精彩语句　 1.精美词汇 a part of our life我们生活的一部分　share sth. with sb. 和某人分享某物　put...into把……放进……　not only...but also 不仅……而且　grow up成长 2.出彩结构 It's necessary to share housework with other family members.(“It is+adj.+to do sth.”句型中,It为形式主语,动词不定式to do sth.是真正的主语) 二 勤俭节约是中华民族的传统美德。为了弘扬这种传统美德,杜绝浪费,学校开展以“勤俭节约从我做起”为主题的演讲比赛。假如你是李华,请你根据以下要点提示,写一篇英文演讲稿参赛。 要点: (1)生活中常见的浪费现象;(至少3条) (2)你的建议;(至少3条) (3)发出号召。 参考词汇:thrift n.节约; virtue n.美德; waste n. & v. 浪费; save v.节省; tap n.水龙头 要求: (1)短文须包含要点提示中的所有信息,可适当发挥; (2)词数:80左右 (短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数); (3)文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。 Ladies and gentlemen, Today I'd like to talk about thrift.                That's all. Thank you! 答案　 写作提示　 1.本文是一篇演讲稿。 2.主体时态为一般现在时。人称以第一人称为主。 3.按题目要求呈现要点:(1)生活中常见的浪费现象; (2)你的建议; (3)发出号召。 参考范文　 Ladies and gentlemen,  Today I'd like to talk about thrift. Thrift is one of the traditional virtues in China. However, there exists much waste in our daily life. For example, some people keep the taps on after cleaning hands. Some people often forget to turn off the lights before leaving the rooms. And many of us throw away lots of food and other things.  I think we should develop a habit of saving things around us. Firstly, remember to turn off the taps and lights in time. Second, we should spend less money on things that we don't need. Lastly, don't take more food and clear our plates. All such small things can help us become a person with good virtues. Let's fight against waste from now on. That's all. Thank you!  精彩语句　 1.精美词汇 traditional adj.传统的　develop v.发展,养成　throw away扔掉 2.出彩结构 Second, we should spend less money on things that we don't need. (本句使用了spend sth. on sth.短语,things作先行词,后面接了定语从句that we don't need) 三 　在日常生活中,人们会遇到交友、饮食、交通或防疫等安全问题。请以“Self Protection”为题,用英语写一篇短文。 内容包括: 1.结合生活实际,谈谈自我保护的重要性。 2.列举生活中的安全问题(至少两个方面),并分别提出合理化建议。 3.发出自我保护的号召。 写作要求: 1.语言流畅,层次清晰,可以适当发挥。 2.词数80—100词,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数;书写规范,卷面整洁。 3.文中不能出现考生本人的学校名称和姓名。 Self Protection These days, people pay more attention to safety problems.               　　In short, self protection is important to us. Wish everyone a safe life! 答案　 写作提示　 1.体裁:说明文。 2.人称:以第一人称为主。 3.时态:一般现在时。 4.要点: 1)自我保护的重要性; 2)列举生活中的安全问题,并给出建议; 3)号召人们学会自我保护。 参考范文1　 Self Protection These days, people pay more attention to safety problems. For example, eating unhealthy food makes us ill. Fire can be dangerous if we are not careful about it. Learning to protect ourselves is necessary for us. But do we really know how to protect ourselves in our daily lives?Here are my suggestions.  Firstly, we are supposed to be careful when making friends. Never accept strangers' invitations or gifts, because they may be harmful to us. Secondly, wearing masks is one of the best ways to keep COVID-19 away. We should remember to wash hands as often as possible. Let's take action to learn more about self protection and live in safety. In short, self protection is very important to us. Wish everyone a safe life!  四 　　中华文化源远流长,博大精深,展现出独特的魅力,让世界为之赞叹。假如你是李强,你的外国笔友Steven非常喜欢中国,想对中国文化有更进一步的了解。请你从以下几个方面,给他写一封email,向他简单介绍中国的文化特色。 注意:1.文中不得出现真实的校名、人名等个人信息; 2.根据上图,至少要写两个方面的内容(可适当发挥); 3.80词左右,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。照抄阅读语篇不得分。 Dear Steven, How is it going?                Yours, Li Qiang 答案　 写作提示　 1.体裁:应用文。 2.人称:主体人称为第三人称。 3.时态:以一般现在时为主。 4.要点: 1)风景名胜; 2)节日; 3)…… 参考范文　 Dear Steven,  How is it going? As is well known, China has such a long history that many foreigners are interested in our Chinese culture. And I am glad to introduce some to you.  On the one hand, there are so many places of interest, such as Tian'anmen Square, the Palace Museum and the Great Wall. The Great Wall is one of the most popular attractions. As a result, millions of people from all around the world visit it. On the other hand, there are some traditional festivals, such as the Spring Festival and the Mid-Autumn Festival, during which people usually get together and have a great time. Come to China, and you will have fun here. Yours, Li Qiang  精彩语句　 1.精美词汇 introduce v.介绍　attraction n.向往的地方　a place of interest名胜古迹　millions of 数百万的 2.出彩结构 The Great Wall is one of the most popular attractions.(one of+the+形容词最高级+可数名词复数) 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！7 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 衔接点15 书面表达（小初考点差异及衔接） 小学要求 要求考生运用所学词汇、句型、语法等知识构建语篇,完成写作任务。主要是记叙文。 初中要求 书面表达题主要用于考查学生综合运用英语的能力,特别是通过“写”所表现出的书面运用英语知识的能力。同时,也能较好地考查考生的观察能力、理解能力、联想能力、灵活运用所学英语知识的能力和初步运用英语表达思想的能力。 书面表达的命题特点: 1.根据话题分为经历感受类、做法建议类、观点看法类和说明介绍类。 2.所选话题多样,多为贴近学生实际生活的内容。涉及学校生活、学习方法、节假日活动、难忘的经历等。 3.词数要求一般为80—100词。 【小学书面表达考点聚焦】 一 假如你是Peter，请根据表格内容写一篇介绍自己的小作文。 要求：表格信息表达完整，可适当拓展； 条理清晰、意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确；书写规范、工整。 姓名 性格 课程表 (on Fridays) 喜好及原因 家附近公园的景色 Peter Funny hard-working Chinese English PE hill trees flowers delicious river ducks ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 二 我们的城市徐州是全国文明城市之一，我们要从身边的小事做起，从保持我们的学校干净开始做起，为文明城市贡献自己的一份力量！ 要求： 请结合思维导图的提示，以“How to keep our school clean?”为主题谈谈自己的思考。(不少于5句话，不包括已给的开头) 。 语法准确、语句通顺、书写工整、注意标点。 可适当发挥。 Keep our school clean To keep our school clean and beautiful, we ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【初中书面表达考点聚焦】 考点清单 写作要求 1、写好句子： 1) 熟悉并掌握形成完整句子的基本框架结构。我们知道，单词、语法是学习、掌握和运用语言的基础，然而只靠它们拼凑句子是远远不够的，耗时费力不说，拼凑出来的也多是汉语式的英语，很不地道。因此，平时必须牢记所学过的“固定搭配”及“词组句型”，并会活用。 写句子要注意以下几点：（1）主谓要一致；（2）正确使用动词的时态、语态、语气；（3）名词的格要与代词的格一致；（4)句子结构成分完整，特别注意不要漏掉或添加成分。 2)一个句子一个重心，句意清楚，合乎逻辑。 3)句子开头首字母要大字，句末要使用正确的英语标点符号。 2、组句成文： 一般说来，文章可以通过句子的进展和句子之间的各种结合来构成。 1)熟悉并掌握表示并列、递进、转折等关系的过渡词(transitional words)。例如： 并列关系：and, as well as, also… 递进关系：besides, in addition, moreover, what’s more… 转折关系：but, yet, however, although, otherwise, or, in spite of, despite, instead of, in the end… 时间顺序：while, when, soon after, before, afterward, finally, first, then, next, as soon as … 比较、对比：like, unlike, on the contrary, on the other hand… 总结： in a word, in general, in short, above all, after all, generally speaking… 进一步阐述：in other words, that is to say, for example, for instance, such as … 因果关系：as a result, so, thus, therefore… 2) 内容要点全面，不要节外生枝。 3) 要点安排得当，使之文通字顺，合乎逻辑,层次清晰。 4) 注意养成写完后自我检查的习惯，应重点检查： 写作步骤 一、认真审题 看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求。审题时要看清文字说明、图画、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息，以及参考词汇，字数要求等等。如果是几幅图要将几幅图结合起来看，才能弄清人物关系和故事情节。还要审文体，确定格式，确定人称，确定主体时态。 二、列出要点 要点是给分的一个重要因素，为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要在看清看懂所有文字、图画、参考词汇的基础上，在草稿纸上将各个要点逐条列出。 三、写出词句 用英语写出各个要点的关键词语或句型，并用地道的英语句子将各个要点逐一表达出来。 四、连句成文 根据各个要点之间的关系，使用恰当的关联词语(详见语篇基础)，将各个句子连接成通顺流畅的短文。并注意以下几点：避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。注意长短句交错，几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板。 五、细心检查 短文写好后还要细心检一篇，看是否正确无误。你可主要检查：(1) 人称是否用错，并注意人称代词的主格和宾格形式是否有错；(2) 动词的时态形式是否准确无误，特别注意查看一般现在时主语是第三人称单数时谓语动词是否加了(e)s；(3) 名词的复数形式；(4) 单词拼写、标点符号和大小写是否有错；(5) 格式是否有错。 六、誊入试卷 经检查，准确无误后，才誊入试卷。要特别注意书写工整，卷面整洁。阅卷时正值天气炎热，老师工作量之大，时间紧迫，书写是否工整，卷面是否整洁与得分高低直接有关，同学们务必注意。 基础题 一 假如你是Wang Lin, 收到你美国朋友John的电子邮件, 想了解每年春节前你的购物情况。请根据下表所提供的信息，用英语给他回复。 Shopping for the Chinese New Year Reason When to go 节前一天，和母亲去 春节临近 How to go 乘坐公交车去购物中心 离家较远 What to buy 挑选自己喜欢的衣服 穿着神气 鸡蛋、肉、饮料 准备晚餐 What else to buy ……(自拟一点) ……(自拟一点) Your ideas …… (自拟一点) 注意: 1. 表达中必须包含所给要点，可以适当发挥。 2. 词数：80词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名和地名等信息。 Dear John, I'm happy to get your email.Now the Chinese New Year. The Chinese New Year . It is in China. I’ll go shopping with my mother .We will go to the shopping centre by bus we live far away from it.And always many people on the bus because lots of Chinese people are busy shopping too. We a lot of things . ,we buy our favourite clothes.In China,people always wear new clothes and look smart during the festival. ,we will buy some eggs,meat,vegetables and some drinks, because all the family members will get together and have a big dinner to celebrate the Chinese New Year. ,we will buy some fireworks,We often let off fireworks after dinner. They are really wonderful. ,we also buy some presents. We and ,and we give each other presents. I I can from my parents,grandparents,aunts and uncles. We always at the Chinese New Year! All the best. Wang Lin 二 我校将举办校园健康小达人活动，要求参加者在表演节目前用英语介绍自己；7(1)班的李霞想要参加这次活动，请你为李霞写一篇演讲稿。可以参考以下的信息： 外貌:长头发，戴眼镜，个子不是很高，疲瘦的，但看起来健康: 生活:妈妈告诉她健康的生活方式很重要；早餐吃…午餐吃…；晚餐吃并且要求她每天锻炼半个小时，因此她通常步行上学； 最喜欢的节日:春节:原因:……. 要求:1.不要逐句翻译，可根据演讲的需要作适当的补充: 2.语法正确，书写认真，词数80左右(开头已给出，不计在其内)。 范文1: Good afternoon, teachers and friends!Glad to be here with you. I am Lixia from Class 1,Grade 7.I am not very tall .I have long hair and wear glasses.I am slim, but look healthy. Because I . And my mother often .She some bread and milk f . ,I often eat some meat and vegetables. ,I eat some noodles and vegetables.She asks me to every day,So I usually go to school on foot. is the Spring Festival because I can my grandparents,parents and uncles. I like visiting my friends during the Spring Festival,that’s very interesting. That's all.Thank you! 范文2： Good afternoon, teachers and friends!Glad to be here with you. I am Lixia from Class 1,Grade 7.I am not very tall .I have long hair and wear glasses.I am , but because I have a healthy lifestyle. And my mother often .She some bread and milk . ,I often eat some meat and vegetables. ,I eat some noodles and vegetables.She asks me to every day,So I usually . I like colourful clothes. I am wearing a white cotton blouse, a and red sweater.I am also wearing a skirt and today.I think the skirt and the red leather boots this sweater .They me. That's all.Thank you! 三 亲爱的同学们，进入初中，你们开启了一段新的旅程，现校英语报对全体学生征稿，投稿中需要向同学们描述平时你是如何在校内校外过精彩生活的。请结合图片和要点提示，以“Enjoy a Wonderful Life”为题，完成一篇英语短文。 注意： 1.所写内容必须包括图示中所有信息，并作适当发挥； 2.词数70左右。开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 参考范文 Enjoy a Wonderful Life As a middle school student, I every day. , , there are so .I like the geography , because it can about the world . , we all know that is the key to a happy school life.So I always and ,and I never eat . ,if I have free time,I can go shopping with my friends or parents. I also festivals, such as the Mid Autumn Festival and the Spring Festival. I really . I believe all of us can enjoy a wonderful life! 四 为了践行健康生活方式，学校英语俱乐部开展题为"My lifestyle”的征文活动。假如你是李华，请根据以下表格中的信息提示，用英语写一篇文章参加活动。 Name Li Hua Lifestyle eat many hamburgers,... often sleep late love football Plans eat more vegetables and fruit ...(自由发挥，至少两点) 注意: (1)词数80左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数； (2)文中应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯； (3)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。 参考范文 My lifestyle I'm Li Hua. I'm very happy to tell you about my lifestyle.As we all know, .We should eat healthily. But,I have some bad healthy diets.I like sweet food.I always eat too many hamburgers and cola.I like play computer games,so . That’s not a good thing.I now.I plan to eat more fruit and vegetables everyday.I also need to eat some meat,because it can . Playing football is my .I am going to play football every week.There is a swimming pool near my home.I every Friday. 五 寒假马上就要到了，为倡导同学们过一个愉快而有意义的假期，你校英文报See The world举行了以"My Winter Holiday Plan"为题的征文活动。请根据以下表格提示内容及要，用英语写一篇文章，讲述你的寒假计划。 项目 计划 锻炼与娱乐 1.每日早起锻炼半小时 2.不打电脑游戏，因为... 学习与交友 1.上午按时完成家庭作业 2.午后读书两小时，计划读... 3.晚上和朋友聊天，谈论... 庆祝与出行 1.和家人庆祝春节，通常... 2.去探望…… 其他方面 ...... 【要求】1.不少于100词，已给出部分不计人总词数。 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，字迹工整。 3.内容包括以上所有要点，可适当发挥。 4.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。 参考范文 My Winter Holiday Plan The winter holiday . my winter holiday plan you. , a healthy lifestyle .I and for half an hour every morning. Also,I won't play computer games because it is bad for my eyes. to study during the holiday.I will in the morning first. In the afternoon, I about history for 2 hours. After dinner,I will and . The winter holiday is also . I will by celebrating the Spring Festival. We'll and watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV together.My parents and I and for the new year. I really hope everyone can have a happy winter holiday. 提高题 一．人物介绍　　　　　　 孔子学院(Confucius Institute)夏令营在武汉招募志愿者。假如你是李华,请用英文写一封自荐信。 内容要点如下: 1.性格外向,喜欢交朋友; 2.能用英语讲中国故事和与人沟通; 3.了解中国历史和文化,会唱楚剧; 4.爱好广泛,擅长乒乓球; 5.补充一两点有关信息或想法。 注意: 1.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称; 2.词数:60—80; 3.内容连贯,不要逐条翻译; 4.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 参考词汇:Chu opera楚剧　culture n.文化　ping-pang n.乒乓球 Dear sir/madam, I am Li Hua from Wuhan. May I have the honor to work as a volunteer at Confucius Institute?　                Yours truly, Li Hua 二．叙事类 假如你是李华,学业考试后要参加“21世纪杯”中学生英语演讲大赛,题目为A/An 　　　　　　Winter Holiday,请你根据所给信息完成一篇英文演讲稿,讲述刚过去的那段寒假经历,并谈谈它对你今后的影响。  注意: (1)将演讲稿标题补充完整; (2)演讲稿必须包含所有要点,并适当拓展; (3)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名; (4)词数100左右;首尾句已给出,不计入总词数。 A/An 　　　　　　Winter Holiday  Ladies and gentlemen, it is my pleasure to present my speech here. My topic today is             　　That's all for my speech. Thank you for your time. 三．介绍说明类 　　在中国传统文化中,“家”是一个永恒的话题。家人相聚一堂,才是完整的家,温暖而有力量。请你结合下图,以“Home”为题,写一篇约110词的英语短文,让外国朋友了解中国文化中的“家”。                   四．做法建议类 　　校学生会为即将到来的“健康周”活动策划了两个项目。假设你是学生会成员,请写一篇英语短文,在校英语报上介绍其中一个项目的活动内容及其益处。要点提示如下: Projects A School Trip Day A Sports Day Activities ·fly kites ·have a picnic ·… ·have ball games ·play tug-of-war(拔河) ·… Benefits (益处) ·develop friendship ·feel relaxed ·… ·develop friendship ·keep fit ·… 注意:(1)短文必须包含表中你所选项目的所有信息,并适当发挥。 (2)文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。 (3)词数:80~100。短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。 During the Health Week, we will have 　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　        五．观点表达类 学生喜欢在家还是在电影院看电影?就该话题你在班中做了调查(结果见下图)。请你据此写一篇短文在校英语社团主题活动中进行交流,并谈谈你的选择和理由。 注意:(1)短文必须包括图中所有内容,可适当增加细节; (2)你的理由必须与图中所列理由不同; (3)词数:80—100; (4)短文首句仅供选择使用,不计入总词数。 Recently, I've done a survey about whether students like to watch movies at home or in the cinema.　　　 　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  一 Doing Housework Makes Me 　　  提示:家务是生活中的一部分,我们作为一名家庭成员,应该学会分担家务。请以“Doing Housework Makes Me 　　　”为题,用英语写一篇短文,叙述一次你做家务的经历,并谈谈你的体会。  要求:1.请先将题目补全后,再作答; 2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,词数不少于60个; 3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。                 二 勤俭节约是中华民族的传统美德。为了弘扬这种传统美德,杜绝浪费,学校开展以“勤俭节约从我做起”为主题的演讲比赛。假如你是李华,请你根据以下要点提示,写一篇英文演讲稿参赛。 要点: (1)生活中常见的浪费现象;(至少3条) (2)你的建议;(至少3条) (3)发出号召。 参考词汇:thrift n.节约; virtue n.美德; waste n. & v. 浪费; save v.节省; tap n.水龙头 要求: (1)短文须包含要点提示中的所有信息,可适当发挥; (2)词数:80左右 (短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数); (3)文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。 Ladies and gentlemen, Today I'd like to talk about thrift.                That's all. Thank you! 三 　在日常生活中,人们会遇到交友、饮食、交通或防疫等安全问题。请以“Self Protection”为题,用英语写一篇短文。 内容包括: 1.结合生活实际,谈谈自我保护的重要性。 2.列举生活中的安全问题(至少两个方面),并分别提出合理化建议。 3.发出自我保护的号召。 写作要求: 1.语言流畅,层次清晰,可以适当发挥。 2.词数80—100词,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数;书写规范,卷面整洁。 3.文中不能出现考生本人的学校名称和姓名。 Self Protection These days, people pay more attention to safety problems.               　　In short, self protection is important to us. Wish everyone a safe life! 四 　　中华文化源远流长,博大精深,展现出独特的魅力,让世界为之赞叹。假如你是李强,你的外国笔友Steven非常喜欢中国,想对中国文化有更进一步的了解。请你从以下几个方面,给他写一封email,向他简单介绍中国的文化特色。 注意:1.文中不得出现真实的校名、人名等个人信息; 2.根据上图,至少要写两个方面的内容(可适当发挥); 3.80词左右,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。照抄阅读语篇不得分。 Dear Steven, How is it going?                Yours, Li Qiang 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！7 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$