天津市河西区2022-2024年中考英语二模试题分类汇编：书面表达

天津市河西区 2022-2024年中考英语二模试题分类汇编 书面表达 2024年天津市河西区中考二模英语试题 九书面表达(本大题共15分) 86. 假如你是李华, 在初中生活中, 丰富多样的校园活动和社会实践给你留下了美好的回忆 如学农活动、爱心义卖、春季运动会等。请给你的英国网友Mike 写邮件介绍一项你最喜欢的活动 (不只限于以上几种), 包括：时间、地点、主要内容、活动意义和你的感受与体会, 并邀请他七月份来天津与你共度暑假。 注意： (1)短文包括所有信息, 可适当增加细节； (2)词数：80—100; (3)短文首句已给出, 不计入总词数。 参考词汇：学农活动activities of learning agriculture 爱心义卖 charity sale Dear Mike, How are you doing recently? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Hua 2023年天津市河西区中考二模英语试题 九、书面表达(本大题共15分) 86. 在我们的成长过程中, 我们能感受到自身或同学发生的变化。请根据下面表格提供的信息, 用英语写一篇短文, 向同学们介绍你的同学李华自一年前转入你的班级到现在他的变化, 并简要说明发生变化的原因。 过去 1. 没有朋友, 一人独处。 2. 对学习不感兴趣。 3. 在课上有时难以管教。 大家的做法 老师和同学帮助他, 他也积极参加学校的社团活动。 现在 1. 学习进步。 2. 喜欢阅读, 分享好书。 3. 参加体育比赛。 4. . …(自拟一条) 要求： (1)词数：80～100个。 (2)开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全, 行文连贯, 适当发挥。 Li Hua is my classmate. I'm glad to see great changes happening to him now. One year ago, he came to my class. _____________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I am very proud of my class. Everyone helps each other and all of us develop quite well. 2022年天津市河西区中考二模英语试题 66. 安娜由于无法克制自己的紧张情绪，导致考试成绩不理想。她在网上写了一份求助的帖子。请你根据自己的经历和做法给她回一封信。 下面是Anna的帖子： I am a middle school student. I don’t know how to deal with my test anxiety (考试焦虑). I listen to the teacher carefully in class. And I’ve done all of my homework and studied hard every day. But when the day of the test comes, I feel so nervous that I can’t get it together to answer those questions. What would I do? Anna 要点提示： （1）考试的前几天：认真复习，修改错题，有问题问同学和老师；加强体育锻炼； （2）考试的前一天晚上：早休息，放松，听听音乐； （3）考试中：不紧张，……（再任写一条建议） 要求： （1）词数：80～100个。 （2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，适当发挥。 Dear Anna, Test anxiety can be a real problem if you can’t beat it. Try to do the following things and then you’ll feel better. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Everything takes time and practice, and learning to beat test anxiety is the same. Yours, Frank 答案： 2024年天津市河西区中考二模英语试题 86．例文 Dear Mike, How are you doing recently? There are plenty of various school activities in our school. Among them, my favorite is charity sale. Now I’m going to share it with you. Last Saturday, my school held a love charity sale on the school playground. My classmates and I took part in it. Before the sale, we made posters and prepared a lot of goods for the sale, such as handmade cards, toys, books and so on. On that day, we put on shows to attract more customers. It was full of joy. Through our hard work, we sold out all the things. After that, we sent all money we raised to Children’s Home. I’ve had much fun from the charity sale and realized that every small love could make a big difference. I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：给网友Mike介绍自己最喜欢的校园活动，具体包括活动的时间、地点、内容、自己的感受等信息；注意适当发挥，完善表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明邮件主题是分享义卖活动； 第二步，具体介绍义卖活动的过程； 第三步，谈谈自己的感受； 第四步，期待收到回信。 [亮点词汇] ①take part in 参加 ②such as 例如 ③a lot of 许多 ④and so on 等等 [高分句型] ①After that, we sent all money we raised to Children’s Home.（省略that的定语从句） ②I’ve had much fun from the charity sale and realized that every small love could make a big difference.（and连接并列谓语；that引导宾语从句） 2023年天津市河西区中考二模英语试题 Li Hua is my classmate. I'm glad to see great changes happening to him now. One year ago, he came to my class. At first, he didn't make friends with anyone. He always sat alone in silence. And he wasn't interested in lessons and sometimes was a little difficult in class. As his new classmates, everyone tried to help him. He also joined our school clubs. We managed to include him in our circle of friends. Now, he has made a lot of progress. He likes reading and often shares his favourite books with us. What's more, he plays basketball for our school team and gets the best scores in many matches. He says that he really feels something warm and friendly in this class. I am very proud of my class. Everyone helps each other and all of us develop quite well. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文； ②时态：写李华过去的表现以及老师和同学对他的帮助用“一般过去时”,写他现在的表现用“一般现在时”;③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。[写作步骤] 第一步，写李华才转入班级时的表现，可从他与同学之间的关系、学习等方面来写； 第二步，再写在老师和同学对他的帮助下，李华改变了许多，可从学习进步、积极参加活动、和同学之间相处较好等方面具体阐述； 第三步，书写结束语，表达自己对班级的热爱。[亮点词汇] ① in silence安静地 ②be interested in对……感兴趣 ③ try to do尽力做某事 ④ manage to do设法做 ⑤ make progress取得进步 ⑥ share sth. with sb.与某人分享.. [高分句型] He says that he really feels something warm and friendly in this class.(that引导的宾语从句) 2022年天津市河西区中考二模英语试题 【答案】例文： Dear Anna, Test anxiety can be a real problem if you can’t beat it. Try to do the following things and then you’ll feel better. A few days before the exam, you should review your lessons carefully, correct the mistakes and write down the correct ones next to the wrong ones. If you have any problems, go and ask your teacher and classmates. What’s more, you should do some exercise to keep you strong. You shouldn’t go to bed too late before the exam. Make sure to have a good sleep. You can listen to music to relax yourself. During the exam, keep calm and don’t be nervous. Finish the easy ones first and don’t spend too much time on one problem. This is my advice. Everything takes time and practice, and learning to beat test anxiety is the same. Yours, Frank 【解析】 【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇书信。针对安娜的考试成绩不理想这个问题提出一些建议，写一封回信。具体的建议要包含所给的提示，可适当发挥。 2. 写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第二人称为主。开头和结尾已给出，从考试前几天，考试的前一天晚上和考试中三个方面提出自己的建议。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。 3 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$