Unit 13 We're trying to save the earth! 第6课时 单元写作指导-【众相原创】2024-2025学年九年级全一册英语分层练同步课件(人教版 广西专版)

九年级 RJ 1 Unit 13 We're trying to save the earth! 第六课时 单元写作指导 一阶 素材积累 二阶 典例探究 三阶 写作训练 一阶 素材积累 二阶 典例探究 三阶 写作训练 2 第六课时 单元写作指导 一阶 素材积累 3 开头句 1.The environmental problems are getting more and more serious nowadays. 2.It's high time people started paying attention to air pollution. 3.It's well-known that water is very important to man. 4.The earth is the only one place that we can live on. It's our duty to protect the environment. 4 中间句 1.It's very important to save water and energy in our daily life. 2.We are supposed to reuse the plastic bags when shopping. 3.We need to plant more trees and flowers to make the environment more beautiful. 5 4.We can water the plants and clean the restroom with our used water. 5.We should ask our government to control the pollution from the factories. 6.If each of us can plant a tree and build a birdhouse, the world will be more beautiful. 6 结尾句 1.If we keep doing these things, I believe the environment will be better and better. 2.How important it is for us to protect the environment! 3.Let's do our best to keep the water clean so as to save ourselves. 4.Let's act now from everything to save our environment. 5.If everyone makes an effort to protect the environment, it will get cleaner and tidier soon. 6.I believe if everyone takes action, the environment will change for the better. 7 俗语/谚语 1.Protecting the environment is every man's responsibility. 保护环境是每 一个人的责任。 2.It's our duty to save water. 节约用水是我们每个人的责任。 3.We never know the worth of water till the well is dry. 井干方知水可 贵。 4.Don't let our tears become the last drop of water on the earth. 不要让 我们的眼泪成为地球上的最后一滴水。 8 写作模板 Nowadays, our environment is getting worse and worse. To build a beautiful ____（地名）, we must protect our environment. First, ____（方法1）. ____（与方法1相关的内容）. Second, ____ （方法2）. ____（与方法2相关的内容）. Third, ____（方法3）. ____ （与方法3相关的内容）. What's more, in order to ____（目的）, we shouldn't/should ____（方法4）. Let's try our best to protect our environment. As long as we pull together, we will build a beautiful ____（地名）. 9 第六课时 单元写作指导 二阶 典例探究 10 为了保护环境、节约能源，越来越多的人选择低碳生活。作为中学生， 我们能为环保做些什么呢？请你根据以下要点提示用英语写一份倡议书， 呼吁你们班同学保护环境。 内容包括： 1. 少使用塑料袋； 2. 循环使用旧课本； 3. 节约用水、用电； 4. 多植树； 5. 最好步行或骑自行车上学。 11 注意： 1. 词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 参考词汇：reduce减少 Our environment is becoming worse and worse.___________________ 12 写作点拨 一、 仔细审题：提出保护环境的做法，用第1.____人称；呼吁大家采取一些行 动来保护环境，用2.__________时。 一 一般现在 13 二、初拟提纲： 14 高分范文 Our environment is becoming worse and worse. As students, what can we do to protect the environment? To reduce white pollution, we should use fewer plastic bags when going shopping. Use cloth bags instead. We should try to reuse old textbooks, so people needn't cut down more trees to make paper. In order to save energy, we should also save water and electricity. And we should plant more trees so that the air will be fresher. Besides, it will be better if we walk or ride a bike to school. 15 In fact, even the simplest everyday activities can make a difference to the environment. I believe that by working together we can make the world a better place to live in. 16 第六课时 单元写作指导 三阶 写作训练 17 一、句子扩写与升格 1. We shouldn't forget to turn off the lights when we leave the room. （用祈使句升格句子） ____________________________________________________ Don't forget to turn off the lights when leaving the room. 2. We should save everything as well as the food in our life. （用in order to作目的状语扩写句子） ________________________________________________________________ ___________________________ In order to make China Dream come true, we should save everything as well as the food in our life. 18 3. Mr. Wang will give some speeches to teach students the ways to protect the environment.（用“特殊疑问词+动词不定式”升格句子） ________________________________________________________________ _____________ Mr. Wang will give some speeches to teach students how to protect the environment. 19 二、书面表达 地球是我们共同的家园，然而我们的地球环境受到各种污染。保护环 境，人人有责。现校刊英文专栏以“How to Protect Our Environment”为题 征稿。请你根据以下要点，用英语写一篇短文投稿。内容包括： 1. 目前环境污染的现状（遍地垃圾……）； 2. 针对环境污染问题，提出你的三点建议（使用公共交通工具绿色出 行……）； 3. 呼吁大家一起行动，保护我们的环境。 20 注意： 1. 包含所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不得透露个人信息； 3. 词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 21 How to Protect Our Environment The earth is our home. _______________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ The environment pollution is becoming more and more serious. We can see white pollution everywhere. First of all, we need to reduce the production of garbage. We also have to reuse and recycle some things. Second, we have to sort the garbage. In that way, we can save energy. Third, we should plant more trees. Finally, we should try to walk or take a bus instead of driving. In a word, we should take action together to protect our environment. If we try our best, the environment will be better and better. 22 23 $$