内容正文:
九年级 RJ
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Unit 2 I think that mooncakes are
delicious!
第六课时 单元写作指导
一阶 素材积累
二阶 典例探究
三阶 写作训练
一阶 素材积累
二阶 典例探究
三阶 写作训练
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第六课时 单元写作指导
一阶 素材积累
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开头句
1.My favorite festival is the Spring Festival, which is one of China's
traditional festivals.
2.Traditional Chinese festivals are an important part of Chinese culture.
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中间句
1.The festival has a history of more than 2,000 years.
2.Family members get together, spending their time making dumplings,
eating a big dinner, setting off fireworks and watching the Spring Festival
Gala.
3.On Chinese New Year's Day, people visit relatives and friends, and
greet each other with the words “Happy New Year”.
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4.At night, they admire the full moon, share delicious mooncakes with
their family and tell stories about Chang'e.
5.Another reason why I like the festival is that autumn is my favorite
season of the year.
6.On that day, people watch exciting dragon boat races and make
delicious zongzi, a kind of special food.
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结尾句
1.The Spring Festival is the most important for us Chinese because it's
the beginning of a new year. I'm always happy during the Spring Festival.
2.I hope you will come here and experience this wonderful festival.
3.However people's spirit of celebrating the holiday is still the same. We
should always value our family.
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写作模板
My Favorite Festival
Hello, everyone. As a Chinese, it's my great honor to be here to
introduce ____(节日名称).
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It's one of the most important festivals in Chinese culture(节日的地
位,最重要的之一). The reason why I love it is ____(喜欢这个节日
的理由). On ____(节日名称), family members get together to____ .
They always ____(在这个节日人们通常会做的事情). There are all
kinds of____(有什么活动或食物). To me, ____(节日名称)
means____ . Because at that time, ____(对自己来说,这个节日有什么
意义,为什么).
Welcome to China to celebrate____(节日名称) together.
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第六课时 单元写作指导
二阶 典例探究
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假如你是李华,你的学校正在组织以“My Favorite Chinese Festival”
为题开展的征文活动。请你根据下面的提示和要求,用英文写一篇短文投
稿。内容包括:
1. 说出一个你喜欢的节日,并说明理由;
2. 描述人们通常是怎样度过这个节日的;
3. 谈谈你对这个节日的感受或建议。
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注意:
1. 词数为80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4. 短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Favorite Chinese Festival
My favorite Chinese festival is___
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写作点拨
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仔细审题:介绍自己喜欢的传统节日与理由应用第一人称,人们如何度过
这个节日应用第1.____人称,自己对该节日的感受,应用第一人称;介绍
自己喜欢的传统节日与理由应用一般现在时,人们如何度过这个节日应用
2.__________时,自己对该节日的感受,应用一般现在时。
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一般现在
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二、初拟提纲:
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参考范文
My Favorite Chinese Festival
My favorite Chinese festival is the Spring Festival. It is one of the
most important traditional festivals in our Chinese culture. The reason
why I love it the most is that I can get lucky money, which is a really
popular activity for children. It is believed that giving out the lucky
money is a symbol of giving out good luck.
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During the festival, all the family members get together to have a
big feast and watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV. Moreover, people
visit relatives and set off fireworks to celebrate the festival.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival is not only a meaningful festival,
but also a time for people to value life and wish a better future. I feel
thankful for everything I have and I look forward to a great new year
ahead.
第六课时 单元写作指导
三阶 写作训练
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一、句子扩写与升格
1. I like the Spring Festival.(用because引导的原因状语从句扩写句子,
补充说明喜欢的理由)
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I like the Spring Festival because I can not only have lots of delicious food, but also spend more time with my family.
2. The Mid-Autumn Festival is in September or October every year.
(用fall in升格句子)
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The Mid-Autumn Festival usually falls in September or October every year.
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3. People believe it. The full moon is a symbol of reunion.(用宾语从句
升格句子)
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People believe that the full moon is a symbol of reunion.
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二、书面表达
假定你是李辉,为了弘扬中华传统文化,你校英语角组织以 “My Favorite
Traditional Festival”为题的英语征文活动,请你根据以下要点并结合自身
经历用英语写一篇短文投稿。
1. 你最喜欢的传统节日及理由;
2. 这个节日的时间及庆祝活动;
3. 呼吁关注传统节日。
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注意:
1. 词数为80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4. 短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
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My Favorite Traditional Festival
As we all know, there are many traditional festivals in China.
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Let's pay more attention to our traditional festivals. The more we learn about them, the more deeply we will love our culture.
Among them, I like the Lantern Festival best. It's celebrated on the 15th
day of the first lunar month. During the festival, we usually eat sweet
dumplings, admire beautiful lanterns and enjoy the fantastic lion or
dragon dances. The most interesting activity is guessing lantern riddles.
We can have fun and learn something from it. The festival not only
brings us joy, but also makes us know more about our culture, so it's
my favorite festival.
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