江苏省南京市建邺区2022-2024年中考英语二模试题分类汇编：书面表达

江苏省南京市建邺区 2022-2024年中考英语二模试题分类汇编 书面表达 2024年江苏省南京市建邺区中考二模英语试题 八、书面表达(满分15分) 76. 你在学校英文校刊KIDS MAG上看到 “Life in 2045” 的征稿启事。请根据图片内容, 选择至少2个方面, 畅想未来生活, 并用英语写一篇短文投稿。 注意： 1. 内容涵盖要点, 全文连贯通顺。 2. 不少于80词(已给出的文章开头, 不计入总词数)。 3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息, 如校名、人名等。 Life in 2045 Life in 2045 will be quite different. __________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2023年江苏省南京市建邺区中考二模英语试题 八、书面表达(本题共15分) 英语校刊Teenage Journal正在举办有关学习习惯的征文比赛。请根据征文要求, 用英语写一篇短文投稿。 ( Good study habits are important to every st u dent . For example , Millie often takes an active part in group discussions in order to understand the meanings of certain words . What good study habits do you have? What do you think of them? How do they help you with your study? Please write down your opinions . )注意： 1. 内容涵盖要点, 全文连贯通顺。 2. 词数80词左右(已给出的文章开头, 不计入总词数)。 3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息, 如校名、人名等。 My study habits I have some good study habits. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2022年江苏省南京市建邺区中考二模英语试题 九、材料作文 76．“Kids’ Fun” 杂志正在举办征文活动，请根据征文要求，用英语写一篇短文投稿。 Just as our magazine’s name, “Kids’ Fun”, we pay special attention to the fun kids have. Over your school days in junior high, you have experienced many school trips. Which one is the most unforgettable one? Write a passage to tell us why you always remember that trip. Is it because of the place you went? Or the things you saw? Or the activities you enjoyed yourself? Or the feelings you would never forget? We are looking forward to your sharing. 注意：1.要点齐全，文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 3.词数80左右，邮件的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。What an unforgettable school trip! I have experienced many school trips, but the one I will never forget is ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 答案： 2024年江苏省南京市建邺区中考二模英语试题 76．例文： Life in 2045 Life in 2045 will be quite different from today. First of all, my house will become very amazing. Imagine waking up in the morning and my smart kitchen has already prepared a tasty breakfast for me. The future house will know what I want and satisfy my needs. Secondly, getting around will be easier and faster because of future transport. The future cars will take us anywhere we want to go. Flying cars might even become a reality, making long-distance travel much quicker. These are just some of the exciting changes I can expect in 2045. I can’t wait to see what will happen in the future! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇图示作文； ②时态：时态为 “一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点题，说明2045年的生活有何不同； 第二步，具体阐述2045年的生活，从“房子、购物、交通”等方面介绍； 第三步，书写结语，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①satisfy one’s need 满足某人的需求 ②can’t wait to do sth. 迫不及待做某事 [高分句型] The future house will know what I want and satisfy my needs.（what引导的宾语从句） 2023年江苏省南京市建邺区中考二模英语试题 76．范文 I have some good study habits. They have affected my study greatly. First of all, I often try to create an interest in what I learn. As the saying goes, “Interest is the best teacher.” When I learn something I am interested in, my brain is more active and it is also easier for me to focus on it for a long time. For example, I am a music fan, so I sometimes listen to English songs to practice my listening and speaking. In this way, I never get bored when learning English. Second, I go over what I have learnt as often as possible. I often review all the notes I need to cover for each course, which helps me become more organized in study. Now I have become an active learner instead of a passive one. I will keep these good study habits, and I believe I can learn more wisely and better in the future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③要点：写作时应围绕提示问题用第一人称进行写作，注意不要遗漏信息，语句应通顺连贯有逻辑。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明养成好习惯能从中受益的观点； 第二步，描述这几种好习惯的具体做法以及在学习中起到的作用； 第三步，书写结语。表达将坚持这些好的学习习惯的决心。 [亮点词汇] ①as the saying goes 常言道 ②focus on 专注于…… ③as often as possible 尽可能经常地 ④instead of 而不是 [高分句型] ①I often try to create an interest in what I learn. （what引导的宾语从句） ②It is also easier for me to focus on it for a long time.（“it is adj. for sb. to do sth.”句型） ③I often review all the notes I need to cover for each course, which helps me become more organized in study. （“I need to cover”是省略了that的定语从句；which引导非限定性定语从句） 2022年江苏省南京市建邺区中考二模英语试题 76． 例文： What an unforgettable school trip!     I have experienced many school trips, but the one I will never forget is visiting the Great Wall and the Fragrant Hills.     We met at the school gate at eight and then we set off by bus. First, we visited the Great Wall. When we got there, it was nine. We started to climb the great wonder of ancient China immediately. That was the first time that we had visited it, so we were very excited. We took many photos of the Great Wall. Then we had lunch there, after which we left for the Fragrant Hills. When we got there, we were amazed at the beautiful maple leaves, which made us not want to leave. We stayed at the top of the mountain for an hour and at five we returned by bus. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇投稿，写自己最难忘的一次旅行。写作时需要包含以下要点：（1）你最难忘的旅行是哪一次？（2）为什么你总是记得那次旅行。在写作时应承接短文开头，围绕主题展开。语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚。 2.写作指导：本文是讲述过去的一场旅行，故时态为一般过去时；主语为第一人称；描述旅行时，内容应描写细致；并且把旅行时的所见、所闻、所感都介绍清楚。 4 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$