内容正文:
咨询信
一、必备词
1.关于regarding/concerning
2.询问 enquire/inquire
3.请求 request
4.具体的 specific
5.相关的 relevant
6.优势 advantage/strength
7.收费 charge
8.涵括:覆盖cover
9.入场费:门票entrance fee
10.好成绩 good grades/marks
11.感到紧张 feel nervous
12.英语课程 English course
13.代表... stand for/on behalf of
14.犹豫 hesitate
15.希望 in the hope that
16.各种各样的 a variety/diversity of
17.更多的信息 further/more information
18.为...表示感激之情be grateful for
19.对...来说很重要 be important/vital/essential to
20.全力以赴做某事 make every effort to do sth./ go all out to do sth. /spare no efforts to do sth
21.渴望做某事 be eager to do sth./for sth.
22.提供关于...的信息 provide sb. with information regarding/concerning...
23.咨询您相关信息 consult you on some relevant information
24.询问一些细节inquire more detailed information
25.对...有兴趣have great interests in
26.感谢您的考虑Thanks for your consideration
27.感谢您的帮助 Many thanks to your assistance
二、闪亮篇首句:说明写信目的
1. I'm Li Hua, planning to... I'm writing to ask for/inquire some information/details about it.
我写信是为了询问关于此的一些细节信息。
2. I'm interested in your program of the educational travel posted on the Internet and I'm writing to see if it is
possible for you to provide me with information regarding/about it.我对你们在网上公布的教育旅行计划很感兴趣,我写信是想知道你们是否能提供有关这方面的信息。
3. I am ...I wonder if you could provide some specific information about...
我是...我想知道你是否能提供一些关于...的具体信息。
4. I'm writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information on/about/regarding/concerning.....我写信是想知道您是否能提供我关....的信息。
5. I'd like to acquire all the information relative to the English Speech Contest.
我想获得关于英语演讲比赛的所有信息。
6. I'm interested in... Could you please provide me with more details?
我对...很感兴趣,您能提供我更多的细节吗?
7. I'm Li Hua. I wonder if you could tell me the information about...
我是李华,我怕想知道您是否可以告诉我关于...的信息。
8. Would you be so kind as to tell me some information about...? 您能告诉我关于...的信息吗?
三、出彩篇中句:咨询具体事宜
1. In the first place, I would appreciate it if you could tell me the requirements for the applicants which will help me know if I fit the bill. Then...In addition,...首先,如果您能告诉我对申请者的要求我将不胜感激,这将帮助我知道自己是否符合条件,其次....此外....
2. To begin with, would you please....? Moreover, we would like to... Besides, please provide us with..首先,请问您可以....? 此外, 我们还想.....还有,请您提供我们....
3. Another point I am not certain about is....我还不确定的另外一点是...
4. In addition, could you be so kind as to tell me what activities we will participate in apart from visits?另外,
您能告诉我除了参观外我们还将参加哪些活动吗?
.5.Furthermore, what deserves my special attention is the whole cost of this educational travel (including the airplane tickets and accommodation).此外,值得我特别注意的是这次教育旅行的全部费用(包括机票和住宿费)。
6.To start with, I'd like to.... If convenient could you please....? What's more, I would be obliged if you let me
know...首先,我想.... 如果您方便的话另外如果您能告知.我将不胜感激
7. Since it is the first time for most of us to..., we'd like to know the details about.. Besides, is it possible for you to....? Last but not least, I would appreciate it if...由于这是我们大多数人第一次.....我们想知道关于...的细节。此外,您是否能...?
8. I would be most grateful if you could send me information regarding/concerning...
如果能给我提供一方面的信息我将不胜感激。
9. Besides, is there anything that I should pay special attention to?
此外,有没有我要特别注意的事情?
10. I sincerely expect to get informed of details on accommodations and expenses to ensure my preparation in
advance.我真诚希望了解住宿和费用的详细信息,以确保我提前做好准备。
四、精彩篇尾句:表示感谢并期盼回复
1.I'm expecting to receive your favorable reply.我期待您的佳音。
2.Your timely attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated.感谢您及时关注我的询问。
3. I would be grateful for your early reply. 感谢您的及时回复
4. Thank you for your kindness, and your early reply to this letter will be highly appreciated.
感谢您的好意,如能早日回信,我们将不胜感激。
5. Your early reply would be highly appreciated. Thank you in advance for your assistance/cooperation.感谢
您的及时回复。提前谢谢您的帮助。
6. Your attention to this letter would be highly appreciated.感谢您对此信的关注。
五、写作模版
Dear ,
I’m (自我介绍). 1'm writing to inquire(总述咨询的内容).
To start with, I'd like to (具体内容1). If convenient, could you please offer me some detailed information about_ (具体内容2)? What's more, I would be obliged if you(具体内容3).
I'm expecting to receive your early reply. Thank you in advance for your assistance.
六、参考范文(2021全国甲卷)
假定你是李华,你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会,并在英语网站上展示,请你给外国朋友 Chris写封信,向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国朋友,内容如下:
1. 阐明写信事由; 2.征求建议; 3.表达感谢。
Dear Chris,
Word came that our school is going to hold a class meeting whose topic is related to Chinese traditional customs. Because this activity will be presented on the English website. I sincerely want you to offer me some advice.
As far as we know there is a huge cultural difference between China and the western countries. In order to get more clicks, you'd better tell me which Chinese culture you westerners prefer. What's more, if I want to decorate my website with some Chinese element.
What should I do? Knowing you are interested in China, I do believe you can help me solve these puzzles. lf possible, you can reply to me as soon as possible. I will take your advice into consideration. I really appreciate your help.
Yours,
Li Hua
学科网(北京)股份有限公司
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