北京市门头沟区中2022-2024年（三年）中考二模英语试题汇编：书面表达

北京市门头沟区中2022-2024年（三年）中考二模英语试题汇编 书面表达 2024年北京市门头沟区中考二模英语试题（含解析） 五、书面表达 38．根据所给提示，完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 假设你是李华，你们年级将组织露营活动。请你写一封邮件，告诉因事请假的交换生Peter露营的具体事宜，包括学校安排露营活动的目的、露营准备，以及集合时间和地点。 提示词语：improve, life skills, trainers, food and drink, Friday 提示问题：·Why does your school organize a camping trip? ·What do you need to prepare for it? ·When and where will you meet? Dear Peter, How’s everything going? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 39．向阳花会一直跟随太阳的方位生长，这种执著的精神告诉我们，要乐观积极面对生活，向往美好和阳光，永不言弃。 学校英语网站正在举办“向阳花开Sunflowers Bloom”为主题的征文连载活动。假设你是李华，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你对向阳花精神的理解，介绍一件帮助你对向阳花精神有了更深理解的事情。 提示词语：never give up, challenge, encourage, support, confident 提示问题：·What do you think of the spirit of sunflowers? ·What has helped you develop a deeper understanding of the spirit of sunflowers? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2023年北京市门头沟区中考二模英语试题（含解析） 五、书面表达 38．假如你是李华，在英国交换生Chris的帮助下，你的英语学习有了很大的进步。你很开心，想给他写一封电子邮件表达最真挚的感谢，内容包括：他是怎么帮助你学习英语的，你在哪些方面有了很大的提高，以及你从他身上学到了什么。 提示词语：method, helpful, encourage, practice, confident 提示问题： ●What did Chris do to help you learn English? ● What aspects（方面）have you made great progress? ● What have you learned from him? Dear Chris, I’m writing to thank you for your great help. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________                                                                          I’m sure you’ll have a good time with us. Yours, Li Hua 39．随着科技的发展，互联网给我们带来了很多便利和好处，但沉溺网络也带来很多不良影响。 某英文网站正在开展以“我和互联网”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你每天的上网时长，你上网都做些什么以及你对互联网的看法。 提示词语： spend, search for, convenient, be bad for, properly 提示问题：● How long do you surf the Internet every day? ● What do you often do on the Internet? ● What do you think of the Internet? The Internet and Me With the development of science and technology, the Internet has become a must in our life.   __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2022年北京市门头沟区中考二模英语试题（含解析） 五、书面表达 39．飞天梦，强国梦！2022年4月16日，神舟十三号载人飞行任务取得圆满成功。航天任务取得成功离不开航天人的坚守与努力。习总书记深情寄语航天人：“在航天事业发展的征程上勇攀高峰、不断前行”，“你们是新时代中国航天事业无数奋斗者、攀登者的代表”…… 假如你是李华，你校英语社团公众号正在做“我最崇拜的航天英雄”系列推送，请你用英语给公众号留言，推荐一位你最崇拜的航天英雄，对其作简要介绍，并说明推荐理由。 提示词语：work hard, stick to, dream, difficulty, overcome 提示问题：● Which space hero do you admire most? ● Why do you admire him/her? I am Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 9. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 40．沟通是春天的暖流，充满渴望；沟通是夏天的骄阳，炽热无比；沟通是秋天的大雁，盼望南飞；沟通是冬天的火炉，温暖人间。 某英文网站正在开展以“沟通(Communication)”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你日常生活中最喜欢和谁沟通，你喜欢和他/她（们）都沟通哪些事情，以及你有什么收获。 提示词语：school life, difficulties, problems, cheer up, advice 提示问题： ● Who do you communicate with most in your daily life? ● What do you often talk about with him/her? ● What benefits have you got from communication? As we know, communication is very important for our growth. 参考答案 2024年北京市门头沟区中考二模英语试题（含解析） 38．例文 Dear Peter, How’s everything going? I’m writing to inform you about our upcoming school camping trip since you’re currently on leave. Our school has organized a camping trip this Friday to help us improve our life skills. We believe that such activities are not only fun but also help us learn how to be more independent and self-reliant. For the camping trip, you’ll need to prepare some necessary things. Please bring along trainers for hiking, as well as food and drink for the duration of the trip. It’s also a good idea to pack some warm clothes, a sleeping bag, and a tent if you have one. We will meet at the school gate at 8:00 a.m. on Friday. Please make sure to be on time as we don’t want to keep everyone waiting. I hope you can join us for this exciting adventure! If you have any questions or need further information, feel free to reply to this email. Hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作目的——告知对方露营活动事宜； 第二步，简述该活动的目的，需准备的物品以及集合的时间和地点； 第三步，表达希望对方参加活动，并欢迎对方随时提问。 [亮点词汇] ①be on leave在休假 ②not only…but also…不仅……而且…… ③make sure确保 ④on time准时 [高分句型] ①I’m writing to inform you about our upcoming school camping trip since you’re currently on leave.（since引导的原因状语从句） ②We believe that such activities are not only fun but also help us learn how to be more independent and self-reliant.（that引导的宾语从句） ③It’s also a good idea to pack some warm clothes, a sleeping bag, and a tent if you have one.（it作形式主语；if引导的条件状语从句） ④Please make sure to be on time as we don’t want to keep everyone waiting.（as引导的原因状语从句） 39．例文： The Spirit of Sunflowers Sunflowers, which always face the sun, show us something important: we should be positive in life, want the best, and never give up. This spirit has a great influence on me. Once, when I struggled with a difficult math problem, I almost lost hope. But when I thought about how the sunflower never stops following the sun, I got my confidence back. With the encouragement and support of my classmates, I found the solution. This experience deepened my understanding of the sunflower spirit. It’s about staying confident and determined, even in the face of difficulties. Just like sunflowers, we should always strive for brightness and never give up. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，总述你对向阳花精神的理解； 第二步，简述和向阳花精神有关的个人经历； 第三步，通过个人经历，讲述你对向阳花精神的更深刻的理解。 [亮点词汇] ①give up放弃 ②have a great influence on对……有很大的影响 ③deepen my understanding加深我的理解 ④in the face of面对 ⑤strive for争取 [高分句型] ①Sunflowers, which always face the sun, show us something important…（which引导的定语从句） ②But when I thought about how the sunflower never stops following the sun, I got my confidence back.（when引导的时间状语从句；how引导的宾语从句） 2023年北京市门头沟区中考二模英语试题（含解析） 38．例文 Dear Chris, I’m writing to thank you for your great help. My English was not good before. I was very sad. You talked with me and encouraged me not to give up. You gave me a lot of methods on learning English. For example, I can use chants, songs and pictures to help me remember new words. And as for long passages, I should try to understand the general meaning and key points first. They are quite helpful. What’s more, you helped me practice spoken English every day. With your help, I have made great progress in English now, especially my speaking and reading. I am very happy. I am grateful to you. I become more confident than before because of your encouragement. And I have learned from you to be a positive person. And I shouldn’t give up whenever I meet difficulties. I’m sure you’ll have a good time with us. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中Chris是怎么帮助李华学习英语的，李华在哪些方面有了很大的提高，以及李华从Chris身上学到了什么的介绍。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍Chris是怎么帮助李华学习英语的。 第二步，具体阐述李华在哪些方面有了很大的提高。 第三步，介绍李华从Chris身上学到了什么。最后加上祝福的结束语。 [亮点词汇] ①as for至于，就……方面说来 ②try to设法，试图 ③what’s more另外，更重要的是 ④made great progress取得巨大进步; [高分句型] ①I’m writing to thank you for your great help.（thank you for句型表达感谢） ②For example, I can use chants, songs and pictures to help me remember new words.  （不定式短语to help me remember new words作目的状语） ③And I shouldn’t give up whenever I meet difficulties.（whenever引导时间状语从句） 39．One possible version: With the development of science and technology, the Internet has become a must in our life. I usually spend an hour surfing the Internet every day. I often search for some information on the Internet. I also listen to music and chat with my friends on WeChat. Sometimes I buy books online. In my opinion, the Internet is very convenient. We can do a lot of things online and we could have online classes during pandemic. But don’t spend too much time online. Our eyes get tired easily. And it’s bad for our health. So we should use the Internet properly. We can make use of Internet to do necessary things. We mustn’t depend too much on it. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给的几个问题，介绍自己每天上网的情况，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出互联网（已给出）； 第二步，介绍自己每天上网的时间，时长，以及都做了什么； 第三步，书写结语。表达自己对互联网的看法。 [亮点词汇] ①surf the Internet 上网冲浪 ②search for查找 ③listen to music听音乐 ④chat with与……聊天 ⑤make use of利用 [高分句型] But don’t spend too much time online.  (祈使句的否定句) 2022年北京市门头沟区中考二模英语试题（含解析） 39．例文 I am Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 9. All Chinese people are proud of the three astronauts, Nie Haisheng, Wang Yaping and Ye Guangfu. Among them, I admire Wang Yaping most. Wang Yaping is not only an astronaut but also a teacher in space. Born in 1980, Wang Yaping loved learning and was good at sports when she was in school. Her space dream started in 2003. She trained really hard and never gave up. After ten years’ effort, she joined the Shenzhou X mission and gave wonderful and lively lessons in space. Moreover, she is the first female astronaut who walked in space successfully in China. As a student, I truly admire Wang Yaping for her great spirit of devoting herself to her space dream. Whenever I meet difficulties, I should also learn from her to keep on trying and never lose heart. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示问题介绍自己最崇拜的航天英雄。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。 2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称来介绍，时态综合使用一般现在时和一般过去时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍王亚平；第三段介绍自己钦佩王亚平什么。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。 40．例文 As we know, communication is very important for our growth. I often communicate with my friends in my daily life. We talk about our studies, our lives and so on. I think the most useful skill to communicate better is to respect others. Last year I went travelling with my good friend. When we made the plan, we disagreed. We argued about it because I thought he should follow my advice. Later, I thought about it and realized that his advice was actually pretty good. We should respect each other. I said sorry to him and then we had a good trip. In my opinion, everyone should learn how to get on well with others. We should learn to listen and understand others. We should also respect others politely. 【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求以“沟通(Communication)”为主题写一篇英语短文，短文内容包括最喜欢和谁沟通，都沟通哪些事情，以及有什么收获。可适当发挥。 2.写作指导：本文主要以第一人称写作，时态为一般现在时和一般过去时。写作时要认真审题，根据提示的内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作；可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。 答案第1页，共2页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$