【期末备考】专题10：英语作文-上海名校2023-2024学年高二下学期英语试卷精选汇编

专题10 英语作文 1. 上海大学附属中学2022-2023学年高二下学期月考英语试题 2. 上海市格致中学2022-2023学年高二下学期期末考试英语卷 3. 上海市宝山区2022-2023学年高二下学期期末考试英语试题 4. 上海市敬业中学2023-2024学年高二下学期5月月考英语试题 5. 上海市南汇中学2023-2024学年高二下学期3月月考英语试题 6. 上海市华东师范大学第二附属中学闵行紫竹分校2023-2024学年高二下月考试题 7. 上海市金汇高级中学2023-2024学年高二月考英语试题 8. 上海市奉贤区致远高级中学2022-2023学年高二教学评估英语试题 9. 上海市宝山区吴淞中学2022-2023学年高二下学期3月月考英语试卷 10. 上海市南洋模范中学2021-2022学年高二下学期线上学情调研（二）英语试题 Passage 1 1．Directions:Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 学校正在招募暑期支教志愿者，你有意申请参加此次志愿服务，请写封申请信，需包含以下内容： 1. 你为什么申请这个岗位？ 2. 对此岗位，你有什么优势？ 3. 如果你被录用，你将会怎么做？ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 2．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是陈芳。你的好友王敏是新华中学的学生，下个月将去英国的姐妹校交流访问。王敏想拍摄一个短片，向英国的同学和老师介绍自己的学校。她通过邮件向你征求意见。写一封回信，内容须包括: 1、短片的主题以及与之匹配的主要内容； 2、你选择这些内容的理由。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 3 3．Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 有些人喜欢把亲友参加某些活动的信息发布在微信朋友圈里，让大家为他的亲友投票。 针对这一现象，请谈谈你的看法。你的文章必须包含： 是否赞成这种做法 赞成或反对的理由 你的建议 注意：请勿透露本人真实姓名和学校名称。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 4 4．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 6月 5 日世界环境日 International Environment Day将至, 你所在的班级准备以此为契机筹划一次班级主题活动，你积极参与筹划并设计了一个活动方案，请你在全班同学面前介绍你的方案。介绍包括以下两个方面： 1、简述你活动方案的主题和内容。 2、谈谈你设计该活动方案的理由。 (文中不能涉及真实信息) _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 5 5．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学学生李华，你的学校最近在征集如何提高学生体育锻炼兴趣的建议。作为学校的一员，你决定写一封信给校长。信件内容包括： 1)你对如何提高学生体育锻炼兴趣提供的建议： 2)提出这些建议的理由。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m Li Hua, a junior student in our school. Student physical exercise has become a focus of attention for governments around the world. Hearing our school is currently soliciting suggestions on how to enhance students’ interest in physical exercise, I’m so thrilled. Here are my suggestions. First, I suggest including a variety of sports events that cater to different interests and skill levels. This would encourage more students to participate and enjoy the festival. Additionally, I propose that we organize workshops or seminars on sports safety and health, as these are crucial aspects of sports participation that are often overlooked. By offering a diverse range of sports events, we can ensure that every student has the chance to do their preferred sport and feel included. For another, emphasizing sports safety and health will help create a safer environment for all participants and prevent potential injuries. Thank you for considering my suggestions. Yours sincerely, Li Hua Passage 6 6．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是明启中学的学生王磊，校方将举行一次消防演习并制定如下方案。请写一封邮件给校长，内容须包括： 1. 你认为方案中需要改进的地方及改进建议； 2. 你的理由。 School Fire DrillObjective: To arouse students’ awareness of fire hazard. Date of drill: March 6th, 2024     Time of drill: 8:00 to 8:10 Scenario (场景): Fire at the teacher’s office. Action plan: 1. Trigger the fire alarm. 2. Students evacuate (疏散) from classrooms. 3. A professional firefighter teaches students how to use the fire extinguisher. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________                                                                         Yours, Wanglei Passage 7 7．Directions: Write an English composition in about 120-150 words according to the instructions given. 假如你是李华，今年暑假你们班分三组开展了一次志愿者活动，第一组去了社区敬老院，第二组去了市中心的地铁站，第三组参加了环保组织的宣传活动，你也参加了其中一组，请给你的朋友王平写一封信，与其分享本次经历和收获。信的开头已经写好。 敬老院the nursing home    宣传活动campaign Dear Wang Ping, I am writing to share my volunteering experience in the summer holiday... _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 8 8．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是李华，你所在班的班长正向全班征集主题为“探索世界文明古迹”的海报创意，目前有金字塔(the pyramids of Egypt)，巨石阵(Stonehenge)，兵马俑(the Terra Cotta Warriors)三个古迹作为备选。给班长写信提出自己的想法，内容必须包括： 1. 你所选择的一处古迹以及你的理由。 2. 简要介绍海报的主要内容。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 9 9．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是明启中学的李明。为鼓励学生践行雷锋精神，帮助他人，最近学校打算举行一次学雷锋日活动，现在向师生征集活动建议。请你写一封邮件给活动组织者，内容须包含： 1. 为学雷锋日提出2-3条合理的活动建议； 2. 给出你的理由。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 10 10．Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 明启中学的高三学生李华邀请王磊参加下周五郊外的露天音乐会，但王磊由于路远，交通不便等原因犹豫不决，写封邮件说服他一起去。信的内容包括： (1) 提出解决问题的方法； (2) 阐释音乐会的重要性。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 第 6 页 共 6 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 专题10 英语作文 1. 上海大学附属中学2022-2023学年高二下学期月考英语试题 2. 上海市格致中学2022-2023学年高二下学期期末考试英语卷 3. 上海市宝山区2022-2023学年高二下学期期末考试英语试题 4. 上海市敬业中学2023-2024学年高二下学期5月月考英语试题 5. 上海市南汇中学2023-2024学年高二下学期3月月考英语试题 6. 上海市华东师范大学第二附属中学闵行紫竹分校2023-2024学年高二下月考试题 7. 上海市金汇高级中学2023-2024学年高二月考英语试题 8. 上海市奉贤区致远高级中学2022-2023学年高二教学评估英语试题 9. 上海市宝山区吴淞中学2022-2023学年高二下学期3月月考英语试卷 10. 上海市南洋模范中学2021-2022学年高二下学期线上学情调研（二）英语试题 Passage 1 1．Directions:Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 学校正在招募暑期支教志愿者，你有意申请参加此次志愿服务，请写封申请信，需包含以下内容： 1. 你为什么申请这个岗位？ 2. 对此岗位，你有什么优势？ 3. 如果你被录用，你将会怎么做？ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Sir/ Madam, Knowing that our school is recruiting summer teaching volunteers, I am willing to participate in this activity. Applying for this post is mainly to do something valuable for the society and put what I have learned into practice. For this position, I have some advantages. First of all, I like students and have a heart of loving children. Next, students are the future of our motherland and becoming a people's teacher is my lifelong pursuit. Besides, it is a very happy thing to teach scientific and cultural knowledge, which in turn will promote my business growth. I would be very grateful if hired. In the following work, I will try my best to serve every child and let children grow up in a happy and free environment. Yours, XXX 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给学校写封申请信, 申请参加暑期支教志愿者活动。 【详解】1.词汇积累 得知：know→ learn 参加：participate in→ join in 此外：besides → what’s more 如果……将不胜感激：I would be very grateful if…→I would appreciate it if… 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：For this position, I have some advantages. 拓展句：I have some advantages, which are fit for this position, 【点睛】【高分句型1】Applying for this post is mainly to do something valuable for the society and put what I have learned into practice.（运用了动名词短语Applying for this post作主语以及what引导宾语从句） 【高分句型2】Besides, it is a very happy thing to teach scientific and cultural knowledge, which in turn will promote my business growth.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） Passage 2 2．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是陈芳。你的好友王敏是新华中学的学生，下个月将去英国的姐妹校交流访问。王敏想拍摄一个短片，向英国的同学和老师介绍自己的学校。她通过邮件向你征求意见。写一封回信，内容须包括: 1、短片的主题以及与之匹配的主要内容； 2、你选择这些内容的理由。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Wangliang, Learning that you are going to visit sister schools in Britain next month, I am writing this letter to give you my suggestions on your making a short video about your school.I feel delighted since I have made some researches about making videos . To begin with,I do recommend that you should choose Campus Book Fair as the topic because reading is so popular in your school that it has gained public attention.In this way ,you can make your school known to more people.What’s more,you can also involve the library building located in the center of your campus,which is spectacular enough to represent the image of your school and your city. In conclusion, you should show your foreign friends the strong reading atmosphere in your school.It is reading that makes you so outingstanding. I believe you will complete the task perfectly.I am looking forward to your decision and good news. 【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求写一封建议信。 【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，要求写一封建议信。要求如下：假设你是陈芳。你的好友王敏是新华中学的学生，下个月将去英国的姐妹校交流访问。王敏想拍摄一个短片，向英国的同学和老师介绍自己的学校。她通过邮件向你征求意见。写一封回信，内容须包括: 1、短片的主题以及与之匹配的主要内容； 2、你选择这些内容的理由。 第2步：确定人称、时态。人称以第二人称为主；时态以一般现在时为主。 第3步：根据要求确定关键词，如：give you my suggestions；making a short video；it has gained public attention；make your school known to more people；is spectacular enough to represent the image of your school and your city； complete the task perfectly；I am looking forward to。 第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。 第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衍接与过渡，如To begin with；What’s more；In conclusion。书写要规范清晰，保持整洁美观。 【点睛】本文是一则建议信，内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。同时文中使用高级句子。Learning that you are going to visit sister schools in Britain next month, I am writing this letter to …现在分词做原因状语；I do recommend that you should choose Campus Book Fair as the topic because reading is so popular in your school that it has gained public attention原因状语从句和so…that结构的完美结合； What’s more,you can also involve the library building located in the center of your campus,which is spectacular enough to represent the image of your school and your city.非限制性定语从句；It is reading that makes you so outingstanding.强调句。 Passage 3 3．Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 有些人喜欢把亲友参加某些活动的信息发布在微信朋友圈里，让大家为他的亲友投票。 针对这一现象，请谈谈你的看法。你的文章必须包含： 是否赞成这种做法 赞成或反对的理由 你的建议 注意：请勿透露本人真实姓名和学校名称。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】      There exists a hot discussion whether it is acceptable to post the link that someone asks for voting after he or she takes part in an activity or a competition on the Moment or the chatting group of Wechat. I think it cannot be accepted. On one hand, personal information may be put on the street. Before voting, an official account need be added, by which a plenty of information may be collected and used for another commercial purpose. On the other hand, sometimes it can make a certain relationship broken between people. When receiving the message, he or she doesn’t vote for some reasons. The sender will feel disappointed and keep him or her at a distance. To sum up, be careful when getting noted or noting. A traditional way of voting can be a good choice to make someone stand out. 【分析】本文是一篇议论文。就现在微信中亲朋友发朋友圈投票的现象，谈谈你个人的看法。 【详解】第一步： 首先审题，议论文出现的频率较低，但也需要注意议论文的写作方法，第一部分提出需要讨论的主题，继而提出你个人的观点；第二部分就你个人的观点，提出论据，其中包括论点和论证；第三部分简单扣题，总结个人观点。需要注意的是：议论文尽量采用第三人称。 第二步： 确认时态，选用正确的人称和时态，本文可用一般现在时，第三人称来写。然后写出单个句子，使用正确的连词，连句成段。 第三步： 文章可以分为三段，第一段提出话题，并提出个人观点（不赞同）；第二段提出至少两点不赞同的原因；第三段总结自己的观点。 第四步： 注意事项：①写这篇文章时，要注意文中给出的细节都要包括，不要遗漏； ②这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可； ③写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题； ④尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。 【点睛】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的高级词汇、复合句和高级语法。例如： 存在句：There exists a hot discussion… whether引导的同位语从句：…whether it is acceptable to post the link… 介词+关系代词引导的定语从句：…, by which a plenty of information may be collected when引导的时间状语从句的省略：When receiving the message, he or she doesn’t vote for some reasons. Passage 4 4．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 6月 5 日世界环境日 International Environment Day将至, 你所在的班级准备以此为契机筹划一次班级主题活动，你积极参与筹划并设计了一个活动方案，请你在全班同学面前介绍你的方案。介绍包括以下两个方面： 1、简述你活动方案的主题和内容。 2、谈谈你设计该活动方案的理由。 (文中不能涉及真实信息) _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】As we all know, International Environment Day is approaching. To celebrate it, I have made a plan as follows. First, the theme of the activity is to know more about our environment . Through introducing something about the environment by videos and learning about something behind it, we may understand that we should protect it. Then, Let some students talk about their own experiences and feelings and how to protect the environment, which will be more convincing .Last, everyone is called on to make a poster, motivating more students to get involved. However, right now and right here, we should do something for it. This is my arrangement about this year’s International Environment Day, and I’m looking forward to your wise suggestions or better plans. Thank you. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。6月 5 日世界环境日 International Environment Day将至, 考生所在的班级准备以此为契机筹划一次班级主题活动，考生积极参与筹划并设计了一个活动方案，请考生在全班同学面前介绍考生的方案。 【详解】1.词汇积累 接近：approach→draw near 保护：protect→preserve 激励：motivate→inspire 建议：suggestion→advice 2.句式拓展 同义句 原句：Through introducing something about the environment by videos and learning about something behind it, we may understand that we should protect it. 拓展句：It is through introducing something about the environment by videos and learning about something behind it that we may understand that we should protect it. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Then, Let some students talk about their own experiences and feelings and how to protect the environment, which will be more convincing .（运用which引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】As we all know, International Environment Day is approaching.（运用as引导的非限制性定语从句） Passage 5 5．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学学生李华，你的学校最近在征集如何提高学生体育锻炼兴趣的建议。作为学校的一员，你决定写一封信给校长。信件内容包括： 1)你对如何提高学生体育锻炼兴趣提供的建议： 2)提出这些建议的理由。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Headmaster, I’m Li Hua, a junior student in our school. Student physical exercise has become a focus of attention for governments around the world. Hearing our school is currently soliciting suggestions on how to enhance students’ interest in physical exercise, I’m so thrilled. Here are my suggestions. First, I suggest including a variety of sports events that cater to different interests and skill levels. This would encourage more students to participate and enjoy the festival. Additionally, I propose that we organize workshops or seminars on sports safety and health, as these are crucial aspects of sports participation that are often overlooked. By offering a diverse range of sports events, we can ensure that every student has the chance to do their preferred sport and feel included. For another, emphasizing sports safety and health will help create a safer environment for all participants and prevent potential injuries. Thank you for considering my suggestions. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给校长写一封电子邮件，对如何提高学生体育锻炼兴趣提建议，并陈述提出这些建议的理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 激动的：thrilled→ excited 迎合：cater to→ meet 鼓励：encourage→ motivate/inspire 确保：ensure→ make sure 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：For another, emphasizing sports safety and health will help create a safer environment for all participants and prevent potential injuries. 拓展句：For another, that we should emphasize sports safety and health will help create a safer environment for all participants and prevent potential injuries. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Hearing our school is currently soliciting suggestions on how to enhance students’ interest in physical exercise, I’m so thrilled. (使用了现在分词作状语) 【高分句型2】For another, emphasizing sports safety and health will help create a safer environment for all participants and prevent potential injuries.. (使用了动名词充当主语) Passage 6 6．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是明启中学的学生王磊，校方将举行一次消防演习并制定如下方案。请写一封邮件给校长，内容须包括： 1. 你认为方案中需要改进的地方及改进建议； 2. 你的理由。 School Fire DrillObjective: To arouse students’ awareness of fire hazard. Date of drill: March 6th, 2024     Time of drill: 8:00 to 8:10 Scenario (场景): Fire at the teacher’s office. Action plan: 1. Trigger the fire alarm. 2. Students evacuate (疏散) from classrooms. 3. A professional firefighter teaches students how to use the fire extinguisher. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear headmaster, In a couple of days, theree will be a fire drill to be held. After reading the fire drill plan, I have the following suggestions for revision. Firstly, I think we should arrange for some teachers to guide students in key areas, which can provide more security to avoid trampling. Secondly, I think a professional firefighter should should give a special lecture on fire to raise students’ awareness of fire hazard. Besides, we could also add to some contents of fire drill process, such as student representative to address the comments, which can get the fire drill more impressive. Finally, I wish the fire drill a complete success! I hope my suggestions will be helpful.                                                                         Yours, Wanglei 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如考生是明启中学的学生王磊，校方将举行一次消防演习并制定如下方案。请写一封邮件给校长。 【详解】1.词汇积累 建议：suggestion→advice 提供：provide→offer 希望：wish→hope 举行：hold→throw 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：After reading the fire drill plan, I have the following suggestions for revision. 拓展句：It is after reading the fire drill plan that I have the following suggestions for revision. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Firstly, I think we should arrange for some teachers to guide students in key areas , which can provide more security to avoid trampling.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】I hope my suggestions will be helpful.（运用了省略that的宾语从句） Passage 7 7．Directions: Write an English composition in about 120-150 words according to the instructions given. 假如你是李华，今年暑假你们班分三组开展了一次志愿者活动，第一组去了社区敬老院，第二组去了市中心的地铁站，第三组参加了环保组织的宣传活动，你也参加了其中一组，请给你的朋友王平写一封信，与其分享本次经历和收获。信的开头已经写好。 敬老院the nursing home    宣传活动campaign Dear Wang Ping, I am writing to share my volunteering experience in the summer holiday... _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Wang Ping, I am writing to share my volunteering experience in the summer holiday. Last Saturday, my class organized a volunteer activity.We were divided into three groups. The first group went to the community nursing home, the second went to the subway station in the city center, and the third participated in the publicity campaign of the environmental protection organization. Some classmates and I went to the nursing home near our school. We took a lot of presents to the elderly. Some of us performed wonderful program, such as singing, dancing. We also asked them to join us and they were very happy. Some of us talked with the elderly seriously. They told us a lot about their lives. All of us were happy because we did something good to others. The most touching moment was when the elderly held our hands and thanked us for coming. We felt so happy that we could make them smile. Through this experience, I learned to be humble and grateful to the elderly. They have experienced many difficulties in life and their contributions to the society are invaluable. In my opinion, we should spend more time helping the elderly. Love the elderly is Chinese people’s virtue. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华，今年暑假你们班分三组开展了一次志愿者活动，第一组去了社区敬老院，第二组去了市中心的地铁站，第三组参加了环保组织的宣传活动，你也参加了其中一组，请给你的朋友王平写一封信，与其分享本次经历和收获。 【详解】1.词汇积累 礼物：present→gift 极好的：wonderful→excellent 对……感激：be grateful to→appreciate 以我看来：in my opinion→as far as I’m concerned/personally 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Some of us performed wonderful program, such as singing, dancing. 拓展句：Some of us performed wonderful program, which inluded singing and dancing. 【点睛】【高分句型1】All of us were happy because we did something good to others.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句） 【高分句型2】The most touching moment was when the elderly held our hands and thanked us for coming.（运用了when引导的表语从句） Passage 8 8．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是李华，你所在班的班长正向全班征集主题为“探索世界文明古迹”的海报创意，目前有金字塔(the pyramids of Egypt)，巨石阵(Stonehenge)，兵马俑(the Terra Cotta Warriors)三个古迹作为备选。给班长写信提出自己的想法，内容必须包括： 1. 你所选择的一处古迹以及你的理由。 2. 简要介绍海报的主要内容。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】     I strongly recommend the Terracotta Warriors to you, which are in the list of UNESCO. Located to the northeast of Xi’an, there are more than 8,000 statues made in the third century BCE to guard the tomb of the Chinese Emperor Qinshihuang! Each statue has a different face, leading researchers to believe that each one is a copy of a real soldier. The statues fill only one part of the emperor’s huge tomb, which still has not been completely unearthed. More than 700,000 people worked for nearly 40 years to build this tomb. However, no one in modern times knew about the tomb or the terracotta statues until 1974, when some farmers discovered the tomb while they were digging a well! Come and enjoy the grand and unbelievable wonders. 【导语】本文是应用文。要求考生选择金字塔(the pyramids of Egypt)，巨石阵(Stonehenge)，兵马俑(the Terra Cotta Warriors) 三个古迹之一做一份海报，参加班即征集主题为“探索世界文明古迹”的海报创意比赛。 【详解】1.词汇积累 推荐：recommend→propose 超过：more than→over 保卫：guard→defend 挖掘：unearth→dig out 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Located to the northeast of Xi’an, there are more than 8,000 statues made in the third century BCE to guard the tomb of the Chinese Emperor Qinshihuang! 拓展句：Located to the northeast of Xi’an, there are more than 8,000 statues that were made in the third century BCE to guard the tomb of the Chinese Emperor Qinshihuang! 【点睛】【高分句型1】I strongly recommend the Terracotta Warriors to you, which are in the list of UNESCO.（由which引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】Each statue has a different face, leading researchers to believe that each one is a copy of a real soldier.（由that引导的宾语从句） Passage 9 9．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是明启中学的李明。为鼓励学生践行雷锋精神，帮助他人，最近学校打算举行一次学雷锋日活动，现在向师生征集活动建议。请你写一封邮件给活动组织者，内容须包含： 1. 为学雷锋日提出2-3条合理的活动建议； 2. 给出你的理由。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear sir/madam,    Knowing that the school is going to hold a learning Lei Feng Day to encourage students to practice the spirit of Lei Feng and help others, I would like to offer some advice. To carry forward the Spirit of Lei Feng, our school can hold a meaningful activity in a nursing home. We could go to visit the elderly in their rooms in groups, presenting them with flowers, board games and self-made cards to show our sincere love and respect. It is traditional virtues in China and respect to each other is respect yourself. Besides, we can organize teachers and students to clean the streets to keep the city clean. It is the responsibility of every citizen to maintain our daily environment. A good environment can also make everyone happy. I would appreciate it if my advice could be considered. Yours, Li Ming 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是明启中学的李明。为鼓励学生践行雷锋精神，帮助他人，最近学校打算举行一次学雷锋日活动，现在向师生征集活动建议。请你写一封邮件给活动组织者。 【详解】1.词汇积累 建议：advice→suggestion 赠送：present→give away 老年人：the elderly→the senior citizens 开心：delighted→happy 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：I would appreciate it if my advice could be considered. 拓展句：I would be more than grateful if my advice could be considered. 【点睛】【高分句型1】 Knowing that the school is going to hold a learning Lei Feng Day to encourage students to practice the spirit of Lei Feng and help others, I would like to offer some advice.（运用了现在分词作原因状语以及that引导的宾语从句） 【高分句型2】 To carry forward the Spirit of Lei Feng, our school can hold a meaningful activity in a nursing home.（运用了动词不定式作目的状语） Passage 10 10．Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 明启中学的高三学生李华邀请王磊参加下周五郊外的露天音乐会，但王磊由于路远，交通不便等原因犹豫不决，写封邮件说服他一起去。信的内容包括： (1) 提出解决问题的方法； (2) 阐释音乐会的重要性。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: Dear Wang Lei， It's been a while since I heard from you. Last time, I invited you to attend the concert which will be held next Friday in the century park. Though you did not reply to me, the hesitation wearing on your face offered me a glimpse of what was going on in your mind. Maybe it is the recent ghastly weather or the terrible traffic that hinder you from making up your mind. However, as far as I’m concerned, it's still worth our efforts. This concert is not a pop music concert but a classic music one where several prestigious symphony orchestras will perform many well-known compositions. It must be a feast for all the audience. Moreover, chances are that we may have an album with performers autographs on it. You should never miss such a fabulous concert ! In terms of difficulties you are worried about, I have already found some solutions. My father will be available on that day so that he can drive us to the scene. I have managed to persuade him to make his promise. In addition, in case of a rainy day, I have prepared two raincoats. I am confident that we will indulge ourselves into the elegant flow of notes. I am looking forward to hearing your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作。要求考生写封邮件说服王磊参加下周五郊外的露天音乐会， 告知王磊如何解决路远，交通不便等问题，并阐释音乐会的重要性。 【详解】1.词汇积累 阻碍某人做某事：hinder sb. from doing sth → keep/prevent sb. from doing sth 就我而言，在我看来：as far as I’m concerned → in my opinion/from my point of view 成功做……：manage to do →succeed in doing sth. 此外：in addition→ what’s more /besides 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：In addition, in case of a rainy day, I have prepared two raincoats. 拓展句：In addition, in case it rains, I have prepared two raincoats. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Last time, I invited you to attend the concert which will be held next Friday in the century park.（运用了which引导的定语从句） 【高分句型2】Though you did not reply to me, the hesitation wearing on your face offered me a glimpse of what was going on in your mind.（运用了though引导的让步状语从句和what引导的宾语从句） 【高分句型3】This concert is not a pop music concert but a classic music one where several prestigious symphony orchestras will perform many well-known compositions.（运用了where引导的定语从句） 第 15 页 共 15 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$