内容正文:
外研八年级上
模块主题写作
Module 2
My home town and my country
一、话题分析
本模块以“生活环境”为话题, 向我们介绍了如何运用形容词的比较级来谈论事物, 要求同学们熟练掌握形容词比较级的用法。具体到书面表达中, 要求我们能根据所学知识, 简单介绍自己熟悉的城市或自己的家乡。
二、写作方法
“三步法”比较两座城市的异同
1. 第一步: 描述甲城市的基本情况, 包括位置、面积、人口及天气等。
2. 第二步: 描述乙城市的基本情况, 包括位置、面积、人口及天气等。
3. 第三步: 进行比较并总结全文, 欢迎人们来这两座城市旅游观光。
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三、素材积累
(一) “生活环境” 类作文常用的词汇:
east // west // south // north // population //warm // cool // cold // summer // spring // autumn // busy // quiet // crowded...
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(二) “生活环境” 类作文常用的句型:
开头句
1. I come from... , a beautiful city in the east of...
2. It’s on the coast near...
3. It’s a newer city than...
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(二) “生活环境” 类作文常用的句型:
开头句
1. I come from... , a beautiful city in the east of...
2. It’s on the coast near...
3. It’s a newer city than...
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中间句
1. ... has a population of...
2. My home town is especially famous for...
3. There are lots of... to visit.
4. Tourists enjoy trips along the river by boat.
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中间句
1. ... has a population of...
2. My home town is especially famous for...
3. There are lots of... to visit.
4. Tourists enjoy trips along the river by boat.
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结尾句
1. I’d like to go there one day.
2. Some day it will become as busy as...
3. I think it’s a beautiful city.
4. Remember to visit...
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结尾句
1. I’d like to go there one day.
2. Some day it will become as busy as...
3. I think it’s a beautiful city.
4. Remember to visit...
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四、写作任务
假如你是Tank, 你的美国笔友Tony 想了解一下中国的两大城市——北京和上海。请你利用所学知识并根据下表的内容提示, 给Tony 写一 封信。
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四、写作任务
假如你是Tank, 你的美国笔友Tony 想了解一下中国的两大城市——北京和上海。请你利用所学知识并根据下表的内容提示, 给Tony 写一 封信。
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北京 1. 中国首都, 位于中国北部;
2. 人口超过2185 万;
3. 历史悠久, 名胜古迹众多。
上海 1. 一座现代化的大都市, 位于中国东部;
2. 人口超过2487 万;
3. 高楼林立, 东方明珠广播电视塔(Oriental Pearl TV Tower) 举世 闻名。
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北京 1. 中国首都, 位于中国北部;
2. 人口超过2185 万;
3. 历史悠久, 名胜古迹众多。
上海 1. 一座现代化的大都市, 位于中国东部;
2. 人口超过2487 万;
3. 高楼林立, 东方明珠广播电视塔(Oriental Pearl TV Tower) 举世 闻名。
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【写作模板】
“三步法”
比较两座城
市的异同 介绍甲的基本情况 ...is the capital of...
It’s in the north of...
介绍乙的基本情况 It’s in the east of...
There’re ... people.
总结 I hope you can...
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【写作模板】
“三步法”
比较两座城
市的异同 介绍甲的基本情况 ...is the capital of...
It’s in the north of...
介绍乙的基本情况 It’s in the east of...
There’re ... people.
总结 I hope you can...
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【高分作文】
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Dear Tony,
I’m very glad to tell you something about Beijing and Shanghai.
Beijing is the capital of China. It’s in the north of China. It’s an old city with a long history. The population of Beijing is more than 21.85 million. It’s hotter in summer and colder in winter than Shanghai.
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【高分作文】
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Dear Tony,
I’m very glad to tell you something about Beijing and Shanghai.
Beijing is the capital of China. It’s in the north of China. It’s an old city with a long history. The population of Beijing is more than 21.85 million. It’s hotter in summer and colder in winter than Shanghai.
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There’re lots of places of interest.
Shanghai is more modern than Beijing. It’s a big city with lots of tall buildings and it lies in the east of China. There’re more than 24.87 million people in Shanghai. The Oriental Pearl TV Tower is very famous in the world.
I hope you can come to China to visit them one day.
Yours,
Tank
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There’re lots of places of interest.
Shanghai is more modern than Beijing. It’s a big city with lots of tall buildings and it lies in the east of China. There’re more than 24.87 million people in Shanghai. The Oriental Pearl TV Tower is very famous in the world.
I hope you can come to China to visit them one day.
Yours,
Tank
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