2024届高中英语冲刺读后续写家人和科技救助了中风的Kwapong讲义

读后续写原题目： A woman who had a stroke (中风) while on a Face Time video call with her sister, said the technology saved her life. Esmee Russell, head of the Stroke Association, said, “A stroke can happen to anyone, at any age, at any time. That’s why it’s so important that people know how to act fast: it could save a life.” Strokes happen when the blood supply to part of the brain is cut off by a clot (凝块), or damaged by bleeding that causes brain cells in the affected area to die. Opokua Kwapong, who lives alone in New York, was on a call with her sister, Adumea Sapong, in Manchester, when Mrs Sapong noticed that her elder sister “didn’t look right”. And she also noticed her sister’s voice was slurred (口齿不清). Ms Kwapong said she had not realised how serious the situation was. The 58-year-old Kwapong had woken from an afternoon sleep when Mrs Sapong called her on Face Time. Ms Kwapong said “My sister looked at me and said she could see that my face didn’t look right. She also said that I was slurring my words, but I thought she was making a fuss (大惊小怪) and I didn’t believe her.” Mrs Sapong said When I called Kwapong, she said that she'd not been feeling well and had been feeling tired and was also having some difficulty walking. I said, ‘Perhaps you need to take some medicine.’ She tried to pick up a glass of water and wasn’t able to. Then I noticed on the Face Time video call that her face was drooping. I told her she needed to hang up and immediately see a doctor. She thought I was making a fuss so I then called one of my other sisters, who is a doctor, and she could hear her speaking and could also tell that her speech was slurred. We both told her to call for help at once.” 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Para. 1: Ms Kuapong hung up the call and then dialed the emergency services.________________________________________________________ Para. 2: Ms Kwapong said: “There is no doubt that the internet and technology saved my life.__________________________________________________________ 续写情节梳理 - 中文 材料 1)中风事件：独居纽约的Opokua Kwapong在和她姐姐Adumea Sapong进行FaceTime视频通话时中风。 2)早期症状：Sapong注意到Kwapong的脸色不对，讲话含糊不清，但Kwapong没有意识到问题严重性。 3)视频通话细节：Kwapong醒来后接到姐姐的FaceTime电话，姐姐发现她脸色不对，讲话含糊，但Kwapong认为姐姐大惊小怪。 4)警告信号：Sapong说Kwapong感到不舒服、疲惫、走路困难。Sapong建议她服药，并注意到她拿不起水杯，面部下垂，建议她立即看医生。 5)进一步确认：Sapong联系另一位医生姐姐，医生姐姐通过通话也发现Kwapong讲话含糊。两位姐姐都告诉Kwapong立即寻求帮助。 续写 1)紧急呼叫：Kwapong挂断电话后拨打紧急服务电话，救护车赶到她家，护士将她送往医院。 2)医院诊断：Kwapong被诊断为中风，需要住院至少一周，姐姐Adumea Sapong照顾她。医生说她很幸运及时接受治疗，否则会有更多问题。 3)感言：Kwapong表示，互联网和技术救了她的命。如果姐姐没有注意到问题，情况会完全不同。技术不仅救了她的命，还让她能够继续生活。她依赖FaceTime，因为她不能像以前那样旅行。虽然有很多关于互联网和技术的负面消息，但这是技术如何帮助我们日常生活的一个例子。 分析：对于考生写续写的具体启示 1)保持情节连贯： ①　续写接着原文情节来写；上下文也要衔接流畅；要有过渡句 ②　本文例子：原文中Kwapong拨打了紧急服务电话，续写部分应紧接着描述救护车到来、她被送往医院的过程。 2)描写细节： ①　影响情节发展（引出下文重点内容）的部分，要进行细节描写 ②　本文例子：描述救护车到来时的场景，比如“救护车的警笛声在街道上回荡，急救人员迅速进屋，将Kwapong抬上担架。” 3)情感表达： ①　人物受伤、受到重大打击、感动等情节描写，要写内心感受。 ②　本文例子：Kwapong在医院中的感受，“她躺在病床上，意识到如果没有姐姐的及时反应，她可能会面临更严重的后果，心中充满感激。” 4)突出主题： ①　本文的主题是“技术的应用”，结合故事中的具体情节，强调技术如何在关键时刻发挥作用。 ②　示例：续写可以详细描述FaceTime如何帮助Kwapong的姐姐发现她的异常，“如果没有视频通话，她的症状可能会被忽视。” 5)描写情感的力量： ①　比如描绘家庭成员在危急时刻的支持和关爱。 ②　本文例子：续写中可以描述姐姐在医院里照顾Kwapong的场景，“她的姐姐一直陪在床边，握着她的手，给她无尽的鼓励和安慰。” 6)总结和反思： ①　在续写的结尾，总结故事带来的启示和教训。 ②　本文例子：“通过这次经历，Kwapong深刻体会到家人和技术的重要性，她决定更加珍惜生命中的每一天。” 参考答案： Ms Kwapong hung up the call and then dialed the emergency services. The ambulance rushed to her house and nurses sent her to hospital. In hospital, Ms Kwapong was diagnosed with stroke and should stay at hospital for at least one week, Her sister Adumea Sapong looked after her. Her doctor said she was lucky to receive treatment quickly or she could have had much trouble. Ms Kwapong said: “There is no doubt that the Internet and technology saved my life. If my sister had not noticed that something was not right, then things could have been so different. Not only did technology save my life, it now also allows me to live my life. I rely a lot on FaceTime as I’m not able to travel as much as I did previously. You hear a lot of negative stories about the Internet and technology, but I think this is an example of how technology can help us in daily life.” 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$