2024届高三英语写作提升训练：交友信 讲义

高中英语写作提升训练：交友信 假定你是李华，你在网上看到一名英国学生Brian发贴，希望结识一位中国朋友，并了解一些中国的文化风俗。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1. 介绍信息来源并表示愿意成为朋友；2. 自我介绍：姓名、年龄、居住地、兴趣爱好等；3. 愿意帮助Brian了解中国的文化风俗。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 写作步骤 一、任务分析 1. 审题：确定文章的人称和时态 该写作任务要求给Brian写一封邮件，主要内容是介绍自己的情况并表示愿意成为Brian的朋友，故人称应以第一人称和第二人称为主。李华要介绍的是自己现在的情况，故时态以一般现在时为主。 2. 确定文章结构本文的语篇类型是应用文中的交友信。交友信的正文可以分为三段。第一段：介绍自己的姓名并表明写信目的；第二段：介绍自己的年龄、居住地、兴趣爱好和自己将怎样帮助Brian了解中国文化；第三段：希望尽快得到答复。 二、词语、句子罗列  1. 词语 (1) make a Chinese friend/make friends with a Chinese 交一个中国朋友 (2) on the Internet 在网上 (3) become good friends 成为好朋友 (4) learn about 了解 (5) Chinese culture and customs 中国的文化风俗 (6) what’s more/besides 此外 (7) look forward to … 盼望…… 2. 句子 (1) 我从网上得知你想交一个中国朋友。 I learned about your wish to make friends with a Chinese on the Internet. I learned that you want to make a Chinese friend on the Internet. (2) 读完你留下的关于你自己的信息后，我想我们可以成为好朋友。 After I read the information you left about yourself, I think we can become good friends. After reading the information you left about yourself, I think we can become good friends. Having read the information you left about yourself, I think we can become good friends.  (3) 让我再告诉你一点关于我自己的情况。 Let me tell you a bit more about myself. (4) 我对外国的文化习俗很感兴趣。 I take much interest in foreign cultures and customs.I’m interested in foreign cultures and customs very much. (5) 我想我可以通过发电子邮件来帮助你了解中国的文化风俗。 I think I can help you learn about Chinese culture and customs by sending e-mails. 三、扩充要点，连词成句Dear Brian, My name is Li Hua. I learned that you want to make a Chinese friend on the Internet. After reading the information you left about yourself, I think we can become good friends.  Let me tell you a bit more about myself. I am 15 years old and live in Beijing, China. I, just like you, like traveling and take much interest in foreign cultures and customs. Besides, I enjoy dancing. I think I can help you learn about Chinese culture and customs by sending e-mails. What’s more, we can chat on the Internet about other topics.  I’m looking forward to hearing from you.  Yours, Li Hua 知识储备:交友信套用句式 介绍信息来源 I learned about your wish to make friends with … on the Internet.  I learned that you want to make a … friend on the Internet. I happened to know you from …Having read your information, I’m writing in the hope of making friends with you. 自我介绍 Let me tell you a bit more about myself.Now I’d like to introduce myself to you.My name is …/I’m …, a … boy/girl.I come from …, which is … I come from … It is …My hobbies are …My favourite sport/person … is …In my spare time, I like/enjoy/am fond of …I take much interest in …/I am interested in … very much. 对友情的期待 I hope we can keep in touch with each other. I think it a great opportunity for us to … I’m looking forward to developing our friendship! 我希望我们能与彼此保持联系。我认为这是一个很好的________的机会。我期待着发展我们的友谊！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$