Unit2 综合素质评价-2024-2025学年牛津译林版英语九年级上册

Unit2 综合素质评价 限时：100分钟 满分100分 一、单项选择(每小题1 分，共15 分) 1. The actions and words of celebrities(名人) can have a great _____ because many people may follow them. So they should pay more attention to their behaviour and speech. A. change B. surprise C. progress D. influence 2. The skirt looks nice _____ Rose because she looks very energetic _____ red. A. on; in B. in; on C. for; on D. to; in 3. I feel very _____ when I listen to _____ music. A. relaxing; relaxing B. relaxing; relaxed C. relaxed; relaxing D. relaxed; relaxed 4. I suggest _____ a party to celebrate his 80th birthday. A. to have B. have C. having D. you to have 5. In his e-mail, David promised _____ his daughter during her stay in Japan. A. visiting B. visit C. visited D. to visit 6. Wearing red makes _____ for you to take action. A. that’s easy B. this easier C. one easy D. it easier 7. Daniel was _____ a bad mood and didn’t talk to _____. A. on; something B. with; anybody C. in; anybody D. in; somebody 8. — It seems that Jimmy is feeling bad about the exam. — He needs to _____. A “C” is not the end of the world. A. cheer himself up B. calm himself down C. let himself down D. warm himself up 9. — What a heavy rain! — So it is. I prefer _____ rather than _____ on such a rainy day. A. to go out; staying at home B. staying at home; go out C. going out; stay at home D. to stay at home; go out 10. — What did the shopkeeper say to you? —She asked me _____. A. when does the shop close B. where did I see the style C. if I preferred that orange dress D. what else I will buy 11. Paul felt _____ stressed before the English exam. A. a bit of B. a little of C. a little bit D. a bit little 12. —Is the tie made _____ silk? —Yes, and it is made _____ hand. A. from; in B. of; by C. of; with D. from; by 13. — Jeff, could you tell me if it _____ tomorrow? If it _____ tomorrow, I will stay at home. — It’s reported that it will be sunny. Let’s go camping on the Fenghuang Mountain. A. rain; rain B. rains; rain C. will rain; rains D. will rain; will rain 14. Someone says he is feeling blue. That means _____. A. he is feeling sad B. he is feeling calm C. he is feeling stressed D. he is feeling peaceful 15. — I’d like to choose blue as my bedroom colour. —_____. The colour makes us feel relaxed and peaceful. A. Take it easy B. Sounds great C. You’re welcome D. Enjoy yourself 二、完形填空(每小题1.5 分，共15 分) Once upon a time, the colours of the world quarrelled(争吵). They all thought that they were the best and most beautiful. Green said, “Clearly I am the most important. I am the sign of hope and of _____16. I’m the colour of grass, trees and leaves. Without me, all animals would die.” _____17 said, “What is the colour of the sky and the sea? Isn’t water the most important thing for life?” Yellow laughed, “You are all serious. I bring laughter, happiness and warmth into the world. Without me, there would be no _____18.” Orange said at the top of his _____19, “I am the colour of health and strength. I _____20 the most important vitamins. Think of carrots, pumpkins and oranges.” Red could stand(忍受) it no longer, _____21 he shouted, “I am the colour of blood as well as danger and bravery.” The colours went on _____22. Their voices became louder and louder. The thunder (雷) got angry and the _____23 started to pour. When the colours began to _____24, the rain said, “You foolish colours! Don’t you know that each of you is unique(独一无二的)? Join _____25 and follow me.” They did what the rain told them and together made the most beautiful rainbow(彩虹). 16. A. sun B. happiness C. sadness D. life 17. A. Black B. Blue C. Pink D. White 18. A. music B. flower C. fun D. colour 19. A. voice B. mind C. noise D. thought 20. A. eat B. carry C. like D. drink 21. A. while B. because C. so D. but 22. A. quarrelling B. speaking C. talking D. laughing 23. A. cloud B. wind C. snow D. rain 24. A. stop B. listen C. cry D. smile 25. A. heads B. hands C. eyes D. legs 三、阅读理解(共两节，共35 分) 第一节：阅读单选。(每小题2 分，共30 分) A Americans have used colours to create many expressions they use every day. We say we’re “in the pink” when we are in good health. It is easy to understand how this expression was born. When my face has a nice fresh pink colour, it is a sign which shows my health is good. The colour green is natural for trees. It is an unnatural colour for humans. When someone doesn’t feel well or someone who is sick, we use this word. For example, when someone doesn’t have what someone else has, we say he is “green with envy”. Some people are “green with envy” because someone else has more dollars, or “greenbacks”. Dollars are called “greenback” because that’s the colour of the back side of the money. Blue is a cool colour. The traditional blues music of American blacks is the opposite of red hot music. It is slow, sad and soulful(深情的). To be blue, of course, is to be sad. The colour black is often used in expressions. People describe a day in which everything goes wrong as a “black day”. A “black sheep” is the member of a family or a group who always seems to be in trouble. If someone meets a “black cat”, something unlucky might happen to him. Not all the “black” expressions have bad meanings. A company “in the red” is losing money. If someone tells you to put something “in black and white”, they want you to write it down. 26. After reading the passage, we can infer (推测)if someone “looks green”, he _____. A. looks well B. may need a doctor C. is healthy D. is “in the pink” 27. Which word describes the red hot music? A. Fast. B. Sad. C. Slow. D. Soulful. 28. Which of the following is TRUE? A. A company surely likes to be “in the red”. B. All the colour expressions in the passage come from British English. C. Not all the “black” expressions have bad meanings. D. Dollars are called “greenback” because it has trees on the back side. B I bought a jasmine(茉莉)plant for my office. When I bought it, I was told it would bloom(开花)and the sweet smell would fill my office. I had the plant for two months, and every day I looked at it, but there weren’t any flowers or pleasant smell. I was not happy, so I gave the plant to my friend Linda. One day, another friend Mary called and invited me to her office. When I walked in, her jasmine flowers surprised me. I reached out to touch the flowers. Mary cut some and gave them to me. I couldn’t help smelling them. Surrounded by the sweet smell of only a handful of these flowers, I suddenly understood something. Mary bought her plant the same time I did. It took a year for her jasmine to bloom. I was so impatient for mine to bloom; regretfully, I gave it away. In a way my life is like the jasmine plant. I need to be patient and let things happen. Last Sunday Linda told me that she was going abroad the next week. Before she left, she returned the plant to me. This time I am going to wait. I have learned that when we want something in our life, we have to be patient. I am slowly learning to have that patience to wait for my jasmine to bloom. 29. Before she gave the jasmine away, the writer had it for _____. A. one day B. one year C. two weeks D. two months 30. When the writer saw Mary’s jasmine, she felt _____. A. unhappy B. peaceful C. hopeful D. surprised 31. What has the writer learned from her experience? A. Patience is needed in life. B. Flowers can make life better. C. Friendship is necessary for us. D. Jasmine can be a wonderful plant. C There are many colours in nature. But do you know if a colour has weight? I think you’ll say “no”. But I am afraid you are wrong. If you don’t believe, you may do a small experiment. First, put two objects with the same weight into two boxes. Then cover the box. Third, wrap one box with a red piece of paper, the other with a white piece of paper. OK. Now hold the boxes with your hand one by one. It is certain that you will think the red one is a little heavier. Why do you think so? A scientist found that different colours have different weight in a man’s mind. So he did many tests and at last he got the result. That is to say, every colour has its own weight in our mind and their order is the same. The heaviest colour is red, then blue, green, orange, yellow and white. The scientist told us that colours also have smell. Can you smell the colour? Of course not. Then why did the scientist say so? That is because every colour stands for a kind of light with a certain wavelength. It reaches our brain through sense organs(感觉器官). According to this discovery, scientists say that people accept the colours they like, and refuse the colours they hate. So your body and mind will be healthy by using the colours you like. Or you’ll be nervous or even get ill. For example, if you stay in a room with red windows, wallpaper and furniture for two hours, you’ll feel you have been there for four hours. But if the room is blue, you’ll feel you have been there for only an hour. Another example, if a person walks out of a red room and into a blue room, his temperature will fall. That means our body temperature will change with different colours. 32. The purpose of the second paragraph is to tell us _____. A. a red box is heavier than a white one B. a colour has weight in one’s mind C. white paper is lighter than red paper D. you can know the weight of a colour by holding it 33. Why did the scientist say colours have smell? A. Because people can sense the light from colours. B. Because we can smell colours with our nose. C. Because every colour has its own sweet smell. D. Because every colour can give off light of the same length. 34. If a person walks from a blue room to a red room, his body temperature will _____. A. rise B. fall C. stay the same D. change now and then 35. This passage is probably a _____. A. book review B. fiction novel C. fairy tale D. science report D As usual, Amber was hurrying to catch the yellow school bus. Luckily the traffic lights turned green as she was to cross the road, so she made it. When the bus passed the golden arches (拱形门)of McDonald’s, they reminded her of a hamburger. She hadn’t had breakfast that morning because the fruit salad on the blue dish didn’t look delicious at all. However, Amber remembered that she was still on a diet. So now she was really in a black mood. You may have noticed that several colours were used in the above story so as to help describe Amber’s morning. In fact, colours influence your life more than you can ever imagine. Take language for example: You may describe a sick person as being “a bit green”. To describe a depressed(沮丧的)person, you say that the person is “feeling blue”. In short, colours do add interest to daily conversations. Besides, colours can be used in many parts of your daily life. Have you ever thought about why many school buses and taxis are painted yellow, and stop signs are painted red? Since yellow is the most eye-catching colour, it can catch people’s attention, especially in heavy traffic. As for red, it is the colour which usually shows warning; as a result, some traffic signs use this colour. For the same reason, hot-water taps are usually marked red. The colours of a dining environment possibly decide how much you eat. Most fast-food restaurants are often decorated in bright colours such as red, yellow, orange and white for the purpose of increasing people’s appetite (胃口). This is because bright colours are natural colours found in many foods, and able to raise people’s spirits. Blue, in comparison with bright colours, is said to lower people’s appetite because few foods are blue in nature. For those who are on a diet, blue dishes and bowls might help! “Morning, Amber! What happened? You look a bit green,” said Violet, Amber’s best friend. “Nothing...just feeling...blue,”said Amber. “Hey! Come to my place tonight. Do you know what I just bought? A wii! It’s red-hot. ” Amber was tickled pink to have the chance to play with the wii and said, “Sounds great!” 36. According to the passage, if you are on a diet, _____ might help. A. putting your food in a blue dish or bowl B. turning on a yellow light during the meal C. painting the walls of the dining room white D. covering the dining table with an orange cloth 37. Most school buses are painted yellow because _____. A. it tells other drivers to prepare to stop B. it helps bus drivers stay in a good mood C. it can easily catch other people’s attention D. it is the colour that most schoolchildren like 38. Which of the following statements is true? A. Amber looked ill when Violet saw her first. B. Amber ate up all her fruit salad in the morning. C. Amber refused to go to Violet’s house in the end. D. Amber didn’t catch the school bus and was late for school. 39. Which of the following is NOT mentioned in the passage? A. Colours influence people’s daily lives. B. Most fast-food restaurants are painted grey. C. Different colours are used for different purposes. D. Colours make daily conversations more interesting. 40. What can we infer(推断)from the passage? A. Amber was not fat at all. B. Amber cheered up at Violet’s invitation at last. C. Violet didn’t know how colours influenced our lives. D. Arches of McDonald’s are painted gold only to make them beautiful. 第二节：阅读还原。(每小题1 分，共5 分) What colour is your name? What colour is Wednesday? These questions might sound strange to most people, but some can answer right away. _____41 For another person, Wednesday is blue. These people have a condition called synesthesia(联觉). _____42 For these people, the senses of smell, sound, sight, touch and taste are not separate(分开的). They might see and also hear colours, for example, or hear as well as feel sounds. The most common form of synesthesia is to hear sounds as colours. A person with synesthesia might hear the number three as blue or the letter D as red. Someone might always see green upon hearing the word April. Another person might see different colours while listening to music. _____43 To one person, beef might taste blue and to another, yellow. Some people experience feelings in colour. For example, one person with synesthesia reports feeling pain as the colour orange. Another form of synesthesia is to experience sounds or tastes as shapes. _____44 Some people taste a sweet as a smooth ball. There are other forms of synesthesia, as well. For one man, different words have different tastes. Some words taste like pork; others taste like potatoes or eggs. _____45 Perhaps only one person in every 5,000 has it. For these people, the everyday world can be a colourful and interesting place. A. Some people also taste colours. B. Synesthesia is not a common condition. C. Some people taste colour as they see music. D. One person says her name is the colour red. E. Everyone always has the form of synesthesia. F. This means they experience two senses at the same time. G. Some people see music as squares and circles. 四、 根据提示完成句子(每小题1分，共10分) 46. Have you made a _________ (决定)to go on a vacation? 47. He felt a great _________ (悲哀)for this little girl. 48. An artist should _________ (创造)beautiful things. 49. Water is changed into steam by _________ (热)and into ice by cold. 50. The first resolution is about my own _________ (个人的)improvement. 51. Scientists around the world are working to _________ (发现)a medicine for AIDS(艾滋病). 52. The lasting p and the common prosperity are our common wishes. 53. Women often keep their things like mobile phones in their h when they go out. 54. It’s very important to keep _________ (not feeling nervous)when you are in trouble. 55. Boys often _________ (to like one thing more than another)toy guns and toy knives to dolls. 五、 【原创】短文填空(每小题1 分，共10 分) People send birthday greetings by using cards in both Eastern and Western countries. It is ___________56(know)when and where exactly the tradition began. It is said that it might begin in England in the early ___________57(nineteen) century. In those days people ___________58 (send)birthday cards when they couldn’t wish somebody a happy birthday in person. In 1840 the first stamp ___________59 (use)in Britain and sending birthday cards became easier, cheaper and more popular. The ___________60(develop)of colour printing processes(工艺流程)in the 1930s also helped to increase sales of birthday cards. Today cards are often given with a present, even when people can express ___________61 (they) wishes face to face. In recent times e-cards ___________62(become)popular. Many people are starting to use e-cards instead of traditional cards because they are free, environmentally friendly and easy ___________63(arrive). So will e-cards take the place of paper cards ___________64 (complete)in ten or twenty years? Probably not. For example, for kids and old people, they don’t use e-cards very often. If our birthday ___________65(come) soon, do you wish that at least one person could congratulate you with a beautiful card then? 六、书面表达(共15 分) Alex clever … organized green … white … yellow … … … Alex 非常聪明，他家中有一个美丽的花园。平时，他根据自己的喜好，在花园种植各种各样美丽的鲜花。他管理得井井有条， 各色鲜花四季常开。因此，他得到了老师和同学的一致好评。现在，你(Jim)根据上面表格提示，向班主任Mr White 推荐他担任班级生活委员。 要求：(1)推荐信必须包含提示内容，并适当增加细节(根据颜色、性格等形容词，必须用相应的行为动作进行描述)。 (2)短文开头和结尾已经给出，但不计入总词数。 Dear Mr White, I’m writing to recommend Alex as our new life secretary in our class. ________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Jim Unit 2 综合素质评价 一、1. D 点拨：句意为“名人的言行可能会产生很大的影 响，因为很多人可能会效仿他们。因此他们应该更 加注意他们的言行举止”。change 变化，改变； surprise 惊奇，吃惊；progress 进步；influence 影响。根据句意可知，名人的言行对人们是有很大的影响 的。故选D。 2. A 点拨：衣服穿在某人身上用介词on，穿什么颜色的衣服用介词in。故选A。 3. C 点拨：relaxing 令人放松的，常用来修饰物；relaxed 放松的，常用来形容人。第一个空主语I 为人，即“我感到非常放松”，故应用relaxed；第二个空修饰后面的music，故应用relaxing。故选C。 4. C 点拨：suggest doing sth. 意为“建议做某事”。故选C。 5. D 点拨：promise to do sth. 意为“允诺去做某事”。故选D。 6. D 点拨：it 用作形式宾语，动词不定式to take action 作真正的宾语。故选D。 7. C 点拨：考查不定代词及介词用法。句意为“丹尼尔心情很不好，不想和任何人说话”。英语中表示在某种情绪状态中用介词in；anybody 指任何人， 一般用于否定句或疑问句中。故选C。 8. A 点拨：用语境判断法。句意为“ ——看来Jimmy 对考试感觉不好。 ——他需要使自己振作起来。一个‘C’ 并不是世界末日”。cheer sb. up 使某人振作起来。故选A。 9. D 点拨：prefer to do sth. rather than do sth. 意为“宁愿做某事而不愿做某事”，是固定搭配。故选D。 10. C 点拨：考查宾语从句的语序和时态。宾语从句语序为陈述句语序，据此排除A、B 两项；主句为过去时， 宾语从句也应为过去的某种时态。故选C。 11. C 点拨：用词义辨析法。句意为“Paul 在英语考试前感到有点紧张”。a bit of 一点，少量，修饰名词；a little of 一点，修饰名词；a little bit 有点儿，修饰形容词或副词；D 选项的搭配不对。stressed 为形容词，只能由a little bit 来修饰。故选C。 12. B 点拨：用固定搭配法。句意为“ ——这条领带是丝绸做的吗？ ——是的，而且它是手工制作的”。be made of 能够从成品中看得出原材料；be made from 从成品中看不出原材料。丝绸变成领带只是经过物理变化， 看得出原材料，用介词of。第二个空是由手工制作，所以用介词by。故选B。 13. C 点拨：用语法判定法。句意为“ ——Jeff，你能告诉我明天是否会下雨吗？如果明天下雨我就待在家里。 ——据报道天气晴朗，我们去凤凰山露营吧”。第一个if 引导的是宾语从句，由tomorrow 可知，从句用将来时态；后句中的if 引导条件状语从句，主句用将来时，从句用一般现在时表示将来。故选C。 14. A 15. B 点拨：考查交际用语。句意为“ ——我想选择蓝色作为我的卧室颜色。 ——听起来不错。这个颜色使我们感到放松和安静”。根据答语中说到这个颜色的益处可知，此处表示赞同对方。故选B。 二、 【主旨大意】本文是一篇记叙文。几种颜色为了强调自己的重要性而争吵，一场大雨过后，在雨的劝说下， 它们终于停止争吵，携手组成了一道美丽的彩虹。 16. D 点拨：考查名词。句意为“我是希望和生命的象征。” sun 太阳；happiness 快乐；sadness 悲伤；life 生命。根据下文“Without me, all animals would die.”可知，绿色是希望和生命的象征。D 选项符合句意，故选D。 17. B 点拨：考查名词。根据下文“What is the colour of the sky and the sea?”可知，天空和海洋的颜色是蓝色的。B 选项符合句意，故选B。 18. C 点拨：考查名词。句意为“没有我，就没有乐趣”。music 音乐；flower 花朵；fun 乐趣；colour 颜色。根据上文“I bring laughter, happiness and warmth into the world.”可知，黄色给世界带来的是笑声、快乐和温暖， 如果没有黄色，就没有了乐趣。C 选项符合句意，故选C。 19. A 点拨：考查名词。句意为“橙色高声说道……” voice 说话声；mind 智慧；noise 噪音；thought 想 法。根据“at the top of his _____”可知，此处是橙色在大声说话。A 选项符合句意，故选A。 20. B 点拨：考查动词。句意为“我携带着最重要的维生素”。eat 吃；carry 携带；like 喜欢；drink 喝。根据下文“Think of carrots, pumpkins and oranges.”可知，胡萝卜、南瓜、橙子这些橙色食物富含人体所需的维生素。B 选项符合句意，故选B。 21. C 点拨： 考查连词。while 当…… 时；because 因 为；so 于是；but 但是。根据上文“Red could stand (忍受) it no longer”可知，其他颜色都发表了自己的看法， 红色也坐不住了，于是他也嚷嚷了起来。空格处应填入表因果关系的连词，用so 符合题意。故选C。 22. A 点拨：考查动名词。句意为“颜色们继续争吵着”。quarrelling 争吵；speaking 说话；talking 谈话；laughing 笑。根据上文“Once upon a time, the colours of the world quarrelled(争吵).”可知，颜色们在吵架，故此处说的是他们继续在争吵着。A 选项符合句意，故选A。 23. D 点拨：考查名词。句意为“……瓢泼大雨开始下了起来”。cloud 云；wind 风；snow 雪；rain 雨。根据下文“When the colours began to..., the rain said”可知，打雷之后下起了雨。D 选项符合句意，故选D。 24. A 点拨：考查动词。句意为“当颜色开始停止(争吵) 时……”。stop 停止；listen 听；cry 哭；smile 笑。根据下文the rain said 可知，雨开始说话了，说明颜色们停下了争吵。A 选项符合句意，故选A。 25. B 点拨：考查名词。句意为“手牵手，跟着我”。heads 头； hands 手；eyes 眼睛；legs 腿。根据下文“They did what the rain told them and together made the most beautiful rainbow(彩虹).”可知，颜色们最终听从了雨的意见， 携手合作，组成了一道美丽的彩虹。B 选项符合句意， 故选B。 三、第一节：A 26. B 点拨：推理判断题。根据短文中“The colour green is natural for trees. It is an unnatural colour for humans. When someone doesn’t feel well or someone who is sick, we use this word.”可知，当某人感到不舒服或生病时，用绿色来形容。故选B。 27. A 点拨： 推理判断题。根据短文中“Blue is a cool colour. The traditional blues music of American blacks is the opposite of red hot music. It is slow, sad and soulful (深情的).” 可知，the red hot music 与traditional blues music 的特点是相反的，因此可以用fast 来描述。故选A。 28. C 点拨：细节理解题。根据短文中“Not all the ‘black’ expressions have bad meanings.”可知不是所有与黑色有关的表达都有坏的意思。故选C。 B 29. D 点拨： 细节理解题。根据短文第一段中“I had the plant for two months, ... I gave the plant to my friend Linda.”可知，作者将花送给朋友之前自己已经养了两个月了。故选D。 30. D 点拨：细节理解题。根据短文第二段中“When I walked in, her jasmine flowers surprised me.”可知，当看到Mary 所养的茉莉花时，作者感到非常吃惊。故选D。 31. A 点拨：细节理解题。根据短文第四段“In a way my life is like the jasmine plant. I need to be patient and let things happen.”可知，作者感悟到生活需要耐心。故选A。 C 32. B 点拨：段意归纳题。通读第二自然段可知，颜色在人心中是有重量的。故选B。 33. A 点拨：细节理解题。由第四自然段最后两句可知答 案。故选A。 34. A 点拨：推理判断题。从最后一段的句子“Another example, if a person walks out of a red room and into a blue room, his temperature will fall.”可知从蓝色房间进入红色房间，体温会上升。故选A。 35. D 点拨：推理判断题。这是一篇科普文章，应该出现在科学报告中。故选D。 D 36. A 点拨：细节理解题。根据文章第四段中“For those who are on a diet, blue dishes and bowls might help!”可知， 想节食可以使用蓝色的盘子和碗。故选A。 37. C 点拨： 推理判断题。根据短文第三段中“Since yellow is the most eye-catching colour, it can catch people’s attention, especially in heavy traffic.”可知，校车被漆成黄色是为了引起人们的注意。故选C。 38. A 点拨：推理判断题。根据文章第二段中“You may describe a sick person as being ‘a bit green’.”和文章第五段中“Morning, Amber! What happened? You look a bit green,” 可知，Amber 看起来有点像生病的样子。故选A。 39. B 点拨：细节理解题。根据文章第四段中“Most fast-food restaurants are often decorated in bright colours such as red, yellow, orange...appetite(胃口).”可知，大部分的快餐店都喜欢装修成鲜艳的颜色，而不是灰色，B 项没有在文中提到。故选B。 40. B 点拨：推理判断题。根据文章最后一段“Amber was tickled pink to have the chance to play with the wii and said, ‘Sounds great!’”可知，Amber 很高兴有机会玩wii 游戏机。故选B。 第二节：41~45 DFAGB 四、46. decision 47. sadness 48. create 49. heat 50. personal 51. discover 52. peace 53. handbags 54. calm 55. prefer 五、56. unknown 57. nineteenth 58. sent 59. was used 60. development 61. their 62. have become 63. to arrive 64. completely 65. is coming 六、范文： Dear Mr White, I’m writing to recommend Alex as our new life secretary in our class. I think he has many strong qualities for this position. He is very clever. He always comes up with good ideas and he has won several maths and physics competitions. He has a beautiful garden with all kinds of nice flowers in his home. He often gets high praise from others. He is organized. He plants green flowers, because green represents energy and nature. He also plants some white flowers in order to help him calm down. As he knows that yellow represents wisdom and success, he would like to enjoy the yellow flowers in his garden when he has difficulty in learning. So I think Alex is the most suitable person to be our secretary. I hope that you agree with me. Yours sincerely, Jim 作文点评：这篇习作运用了“四步法”(即：Alex 的性格特征 ——绿色的含义 ——白色的含义 ——黄色的含义)的 写作方法，使文章层次分明、行文流畅。第一段开门见山， 点出写信的目的；第四段与第一段前后照应，首尾呼应。 添彩点：文中的出彩点有many strong qualities, come up with, get high praise from, be organized, in order to, calm down, have difficulty in, agree with 等，这些词 ( 12 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$