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应用文题目呈现:
假如你是李华,你所在的国际学校庆祝6月5日世界环境日(World Environmental Day)系列活动落下帷幕,校英文报在全校征集活动反馈。请你写一封邮件给编辑,内容包括:
1.对活动的评价;
2.分享个人收获。
注意:1.词数80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
【写作思路分析】
引言:
简要介绍自己(I'm Li Hua)和写邮件的目的(提供对世界环境日活动的反馈)。
对活动的整体评价:
明确指出活动非常成功(immensely successful)。
阐述活动成功的原因:
提高了对环境问题的认识(raising awareness about environmental issues)
并激发了大家采取行动(motivating us to take action)。
1 The events were exceptionally well-organized and provided valuable insights into environmental conservation.这些活动组织得非常好,并提供了关于环境保护的宝贵见解.
2 The interactive workshops and engaging clean-up drives were particularly effective in raising awareness among students.
互动工作坊和清理活动在提高学生意识方面特别有效
3 The variety of activities catered to different interests and made learning about the environment fun.
各种活动迎合了不同的兴趣:让学习环境知识变得有趣。
4 Overall, the events successfully highlighted the importance of environmental protection.
总的来说,这些活动成功地强调了环境保护的重要性。
分享个人收获:
强调活动对个人而言具有高度的教育意义和启发性(highly educational and inspiring)。
详细说明学到了什么,例如可持续性的重要性(the importance of sustainability)和日常选择对环境的影响(how our daily choices can impact the environment)。
提及活动中的互动研讨会和讨论如何促进了学生之间的社区感(a sense of community),并鼓励大家共同保护地球(encouraging us to work together to protect our planet)。
1 Personally,l gained a deeper understanding of sustainable practices and the significant impact of plastic waste on our planet.
就个人而言,我对可持续实践和塑料废弃物对地球的重大影响有了更深的理解:
2 Participating in these activities has motivated me to adopt a more eco-friendly lifestyle.
参加这些活动激励我采用更环保的生活方式:
3 l learned practical ways to reduce my carbon footprint,such as recycling and using reusable products.
我学到了减少碳足迹的实用方法:如回收利用和使用可重复使用的产品。
4 The experience was both educational and inspiring ,encouraging me to spread awareness among my peers这次经历既有教育意义又令人鼓舞,促使我在同龄人中传播环保意识。
感谢与期望:
对组织者的辛勤工作表示感谢(Thank you for organizing such meaningful events)。
表达希望学校能继续推广环境意识的愿望(I hope we can continue to promote environmental awareness in our school)。
参考范文
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm Li Hua. I'm writing to provide my feedback on the World Environmental Day activities held at our international school. I believe the series of events were immensely successful, not only in raising awareness about environmental issues but also in motivating us to take action.
Personally, I found the activities highly educational and inspiring. I learned a great deal about the importance of sustainability and how our daily choices can impact the environment. Additionally, the interactive workshops and discussions fostered a sense of community among students, encouraging us to work together to protect our planet.
Thank you for organizing such meaningful events. I hope we can continue to promote environmental awareness in our school.
Best regards,
Li Hua
下水文1
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am delighted to be able to provide feedback on the World Environmental Day series. This activity is of great significance, giving me a deep insight into the importance of environmental protection. My awareness of environmental protection has been enhanced by making environmental posters, participating in garbage sorting games and environmental volunteer activities. Plus the activity has also strengthened the cooperation and communication between the students, therefore building a more powerful spirit of teamwork.
In short, this is a rewarding activity, and more activities like this are highly expected. Let us make all the difference to the earth's environmental protection with our joint effort. (104 words)
Best regards,
Li Hua
本文的亮点:
(1)of great significance很重要;
(2)giving me a deep insight into使我更深入理解...;
(3)plus此外;
(4)... are highly expected某事是高度期待的;
(5)make all the difference起到重大影响;
(6)with joint effort共同努力。
下水文2
Dear Editor
I am Li Hua from the International School, and l would like to share my feedback on the World Environmental Day activities.
The events were exceptionally well organized and provided valuable insights into environmental conservation.The interactive workshops and engaging clean-up drives were particularly effective in raising awareness among students Personally,l gained a deeper understanding of sustainable practices and the significant impact of plastic waste on our planet. Participating in these activities has motivated me to adopt a more eco-friendly lifestyle and to inspire others to do the same.
The experience was both educational and inspiring. Thank you for organizing such meaningful events.(102 words.)
Best regards,
Li Hua
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