焦点 09 书面表达-备战2024年中考英语复习之优秀生拔高特训（重庆市）

焦点09 书面表达 备战2024年中考英语复习之优秀生拔高特训 A 优秀品质(good qualities)对一个人的成长和发展具有重要意义。在初中三年的学习生活中，你逐渐成长为“眼中有光，心中有爱”的新时代中国青少年。你身上一定具有一些优秀的品质，如积极向上、认真负责、勇敢坚强、自信独立、诚实友爱…… 某校以“发掘自身优秀品质”为主题，在学生中开展征文活动。请你写一篇相关短文。 内容包括： 1. a good quality you have 2. an experience you had 3. your understanding of good qualities 要求： 1. 词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 Word Bank positive adj. 积极的 quality n. 品质 confidence n. 自信 persistent adj. 坚持不懈的 Looking back on the past three years, I have grown a lot. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ B 为进一步推动教育教学改革，改善学生中出现的不珍惜劳动成果、不想劳动、不会劳动的现象，促进学生多元化成长，学校开设了劳动品德教育，对此你表示赞同。请结 合自身的体会及如何培养劳动能力和精神，给校报英语专栏写一篇短文。 内容包括： 1. 上劳动课，学习生活技能； 2. 参加课后劳动，如……，丰富真实的劳动体验； 3. 学做家务，如……，培养学生独立生活的能力； 4. 你的想法和建议…… 注意： 1. 内容需涵盖所有要点，并作适当发挥； 2. 词数90词左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 不得在文中出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。 As we all know, hardworking spirit education can help more students to get a working spirit. As a middle school student, what should we do? _______________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ C 2023 年 12 月 18 日午夜，甘肃临夏州积石山县发生了 6.2 级地震，造成了 130 多人死亡，近 800 人受伤。假设你们学校近期要举办“地震自救知识演讲比赛”，请你根据以下内容提示，以“How to keep safe when an earthquake happens”为题写一篇英文演讲稿，谈谈在发生地震期间应该如何保护自己。 内容提示: A．保持镇定，如果地震发生时你在家或者在教室，应迅速躲到坚固的床或桌子下。不要从高楼跳下去。 B．可以用手或软的东西保护脸和头。 C．当地面停止晃动时要尽快离开建筑物，不要使用电梯；如果你在户外，要远离高的建筑物和路灯。 D．要勇敢，要乐于助人。 要求： 1.短文必须包含以上所有的提示要点，可以适当发挥； 2.文中不得透露个人真实信息； 3.不少于 80 词（开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇：keep calm, hide under, jump out of, protect, soft, ground, shaking, take a lift, in the open air, keep away from, streetlights, brave How to keep safe when an earthquake happens Hello, everyone. It’s very important for us to keep safe when an earthquake happens. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you. D 假如你是李华,恰逢Peter 来你校交流学习,你打算邀请他参加“汉语诗词朗诵/ Chinese Poetry Reading”课外小组活动｡请用英文写一封电子邮件,告诉他活动的时间､地点,简要介绍一下你们的活动以及你的感受｡ 提示词语:activity, (Room 4, Monday afternoon) start, last, go over(revise), a piece of poetry, new, explain, aloud, feelings …… 提示问题:When and where do you have it? What do you usually do in the group? How do you feel? Dear Peter, How is it going? I' m writing to invite you to join our “ Chinese Poetry Reading” group.   _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I' looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua E 随着社会的进步和教育的发展，我们初中生不仅要学习知识，更要注重提升个人能力和培养良好品质。校园报以“How to be a better _______”为题，面向初中毕业生开展征文活动。 请你用student, friend, teenager, reader, learner…，将题目补全，希望同学们能结合自己的生活实际，分享自己的经历，帮助其他同学也成为一个更好的……期待大家的精彩作品！ 要求： 1.意思连贯、语法正确、书写规范； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息； 3.词数80—120。 How to be a better _______ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ F 在丰富多彩的初中学习生活中，你一定积累了很多学习方法和经验吧！现校刊英文专栏以“Learning to learn”为题征稿。请你根据要求，用英语写一篇短文投稿。 Dear students, Learning to learn is more important than learning itself. What good methods do you have when you learn some subjects? Please share your learning methods with us? The following questions may help you. 1. What subject do you want to talk about? 2. What good learning methods do you have about the subject? 3. What are your feelings when you learn the subject? We are looking forward to your sharing. 注意： 1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 2.表达清楚，语言通顺，书写规范； 3.词数不少于100。文章的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Hello everyone! It’s my great honor to share my learning methods with you all. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ G 又到一年毕业季，又逢青春告别时。假设你是九年级一班的李华，你所在的班级计划举办一场告别初中的晚会（a farewell party）。请你撰写一份发言稿，谈谈三年来你的成长，你对未来的期待，以及你对同学或老师们的祝愿。 注意： 1. 词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 内容须包括所给要点，可适当发挥，条理清楚、语句连贯； 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等信息。 Dear teachers and classmates, As we are going to say goodbye to junior high school days, I am filled with joy and excitement. _____________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua H 在即将告别初中的时候，你一定有一些遗憾。但是一切都来得及，在高中以及更远的日子里都可以弥补。遗憾让人成长。请你以“My biggest regret”为题，根据写作要求，用英语写一篇短文，向学校校刊的英语专栏投稿。 写作要点：1)你最大的遗憾是什么？是由什么造成的？ 2)你打算怎么弥补这个遗憾。 写作要求：1)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 2)词数100 左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 My biggest regret As I prepare to say goodbye to middle school, I can’t help but think about my biggest regret. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I 为进一步增强中小学生的安全意识，提高自我保护的能力, 学校将举行以“安全”为主题的征文活动。请你根据下列表格内容写一篇题为“How can we make ourselves safe?”的英语短文。 要点 内容 饮食安全 不吃变质食物，少吃或不吃垃圾食品。 交友安全 网上慎重交友，不和陌生人交谈。 旅行安全 照看好私人物品，遇险及时报警。 游泳安全 不独自游泳，不到河、湖里游泳。 …… …… 提示词：be careful, go bad 要求： （1）必须包含所给的全部要点及内容，可适当发挥。 （2）文中不能出现真实姓名和校名。 （3）词数：80—100词。 How can we make ourselves safe? _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ J 介绍家乡美景，宣传家乡文化。近期，我市将面向全体中学生举办“师生 共话三门峡”的英语实践活动。假如你是Li Lei，想参加此次活动，请根据下面的提示信息，向负责本次活动的英语老师Mr. Yang写一封自荐信。 写作提示： 1. 你的简要信息； 2. 你的个人优势，例如：了解家乡名胜景点、历史文化、当地美食、擅长英语表达等； 3. 你对此次活动的感想或期待。 写作要求： 1. 100 词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入字数； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 Dear Mr. Yang, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Sincerely, Li Lei K 在三年的初中生活中，家人、老师、朋友、同学陪伴我们一起度过了许多欢乐的时光。但有时我们也会因某些原因与他人产生争执、摩擦等。请根据下面的思维导图，回忆一次你和别人之间不愉快的经历，描述那时你的心路历程，以及最后是如何解决的，并分享你的感悟与收获。 参考词汇：have an argument, be misunderstood, feel sad, learn from, ... 要求： 1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4.词数：不少于70词（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。 Life is not only about happiness. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ L 中华文化源远流长，博大精深。我校学生会特组织用英语讲好中国故事活动，邀请同学们分系列介绍中国文化。本期主题是“我最喜欢的城市”，请介绍你最喜欢的城市并陈述理由。 注意事项： 1. 短文须自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2. 词数在100个左右，文章开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。 My Favourite City My favourite city is _________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you can visit it some day. M 习主席曾说：“民之所忧，我必念之；民之所盼，我必行之。”作为中学生的我们，应该如何对自己、家庭和社会负责呢？请以“How to Be a Responsible (有责任心的) Student?”为题写一篇短文。 注意： 1. 短文须包含所有信息，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2. 词数90左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 短文中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息。 How to be a responsible student In the school study hard; At home do some dishes; In public help the elderly cross the road; ... Your hope How to Be a Responsible Student? As teenagers, we are the future of our country and we need to be responsible. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 焦点09 书面表达 备战2024年中考英语复习之优秀生拔高特训 A 优秀品质(good qualities)对一个人的成长和发展具有重要意义。在初中三年的学习生活中，你逐渐成长为“眼中有光，心中有爱”的新时代中国青少年。你身上一定具有一些优秀的品质，如积极向上、认真负责、勇敢坚强、自信独立、诚实友爱…… 某校以“发掘自身优秀品质”为主题，在学生中开展征文活动。请你写一篇相关短文。 内容包括： 1. a good quality you have 2. an experience you had 3. your understanding of good qualities 要求： 1. 词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 Word Bank positive adj. 积极的 quality n. 品质 confidence n. 自信 persistent adj. 坚持不懈的 Looking back on the past three years, I have grown a lot. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Looking back on the past three years, I have grown a lot. I have developed some good qualities. One of them is confidence. When I was in Grade 8, my teacher asked me to make a speech in class. Although I had practiced it many times, I still felt nervous and even forgot the words the minute I stepped on the stage. Then, I took a deep breath and said to myself that I could make it. Words couldn’t express my excitement when I finished it finally. My teacher spoke highly of my performance and I received much praise from my classmates as well. From then on, I have become more confident than before. In my opinion, good qualities not only encourage me to stick to my goals, but also help me develop a positive attitude towards life. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包括三个方面的要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，介绍你拥有的一个品质； 第二步，叙述你一次成长的经历； 第三步，表达自己的感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①take a deep breath深呼吸 ②speak highly of赞扬 [高分句型] ①In my opinion, good qualities not only encourage me to stick to my goals, but also help me develop a positive attitude towards life.  (not only…but also…) ②Although I had practiced it many times, I still felt nervous and even forgot the words the minute I stepped on the stage. (although引导让步状语从句) B 为进一步推动教育教学改革，改善学生中出现的不珍惜劳动成果、不想劳动、不会劳动的现象，促进学生多元化成长，学校开设了劳动品德教育，对此你表示赞同。请结 合自身的体会及如何培养劳动能力和精神，给校报英语专栏写一篇短文。 内容包括： 1. 上劳动课，学习生活技能； 2. 参加课后劳动，如……，丰富真实的劳动体验； 3. 学做家务，如……，培养学生独立生活的能力； 4. 你的想法和建议…… 注意： 1. 内容需涵盖所有要点，并作适当发挥； 2. 词数90词左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 不得在文中出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。 As we all know, hardworking spirit education can help more students to get a working spirit. As a middle school student, what should we do? _______________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 As we all know, hardworking spirit education can help more students to get a working spirit. As a middle school student, what should we do? Firstly, we should have hardworking spirit classes to learn some basic life skills at school every week. Secondly, we can take part in out-of-class activities such as planting trees or growing vegetables in order to enrich our real-world work experience. In addition, we need to try to do some housework at home like tidying rooms, washing clothes or cooking some dishes. Above all, we could form good working habits and value the importance of working hard through our experience. In a word, the hardworking spirit education is necessary and it helps to build us up. 【详解】[总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包括四个方面的内容要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，介绍劳动能力和精神的重要性，引出话题：中学生应该如何做； 第二步，结合提示内容，重点介绍我们应该如何做，给出恰当的建议； 第三步，书写总结。 ［亮点词汇］ ① in addition 另外 ② above all 尤其是 ［高分句型］ ① Secondly, we can take part in out-of-class activities such as planting trees or growing vegetables in order to enrich our real-world work experience. (in order to作目的状语) ② Above all, we could form good working habits and value the importance of working hard through our experience. (and连接并列句) C 2023 年 12 月 18 日午夜，甘肃临夏州积石山县发生了 6.2 级地震，造成了 130 多人死亡，近 800 人受伤。假设你们学校近期要举办“地震自救知识演讲比赛”，请你根据以下内容提示，以“How to keep safe when an earthquake happens”为题写一篇英文演讲稿，谈谈在发生地震期间应该如何保护自己。 内容提示: A．保持镇定，如果地震发生时你在家或者在教室，应迅速躲到坚固的床或桌子下。不要从高楼跳下去。 B．可以用手或软的东西保护脸和头。 C．当地面停止晃动时要尽快离开建筑物，不要使用电梯；如果你在户外，要远离高的建筑物和路灯。 D．要勇敢，要乐于助人。 要求： 1.短文必须包含以上所有的提示要点，可以适当发挥； 2.文中不得透露个人真实信息； 3.不少于 80 词（开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇：keep calm, hide under, jump out of, protect, soft, ground, shaking, take a lift, in the open air, keep away from, streetlights, brave How to keep safe when an earthquake happens Hello, everyone. It’s very important for us to keep safe when an earthquake happens. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you. 【答案】 How to keep safe when an earthquake happens Hello, everyone. It’s very important for us to keep safe when an earthquake happens. We should try our best to protect ourselves from being injured. We should pay attention to the following. First of all, we must keep calm. If we’re at home or in the classroom when the earthquake happens, we should hide under the hard beds or desks quickly. Don’t jump out of the high buildings. Second, we should protect our faces and heads with hands or other soft things. Third, when the ground stops shaking, we should run outdoors as soon as possible. But don’t take the lift. If we are outside, remember to keep away from tall buildings and the streetlights. At last, we should be brave and helpful. That’s all. Thank you. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示的要点，在每个要点下要适当增加细节，使表述内容更完整。 [写作步骤] 第一步，作文开头已给出，应领悟首句内容衔接好下文； 第二步，根据提示材料，分别从四个方面具体的介绍地震发生时应该如何保护自己并帮助他人； 第三步，总结上文，表达感谢。 [亮点词汇] ①try our best to进我们最大努力 ②pay attention to注意 ③keep away from远离…… ④be brave and helpful勇敢且乐于助人 [高分句型] ①It’s very important for us to keep safe when an earthquake happens.（when引导时间状语从句） ②If we are outside, remember to keep away from tall buildings and the streetlights. （if引导条件状语从句） D 假如你是李华,恰逢Peter 来你校交流学习,你打算邀请他参加“汉语诗词朗诵/ Chinese Poetry Reading”课外小组活动｡请用英文写一封电子邮件,告诉他活动的时间､地点,简要介绍一下你们的活动以及你的感受｡ 提示词语:activity, (Room 4, Monday afternoon) start, last, go over(revise), a piece of poetry, new, explain, aloud, feelings …… 提示问题:When and where do you have it? What do you usually do in the group? How do you feel? Dear Peter, How is it going? I' m writing to invite you to join our “ Chinese Poetry Reading” group.   _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I' looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Peter, How is it going? I’m writing to invite you to join our “Chinese Poetry Reading” group. We have Chinese Poetry Reading activity in Room 4 on Monday afternoon. It begins at 4:30 and finished at 5:30. First, we revise what we have learned. Then we begin to learn one or two pieces of new poetry. Our Chinese teacher usually explains the meaning of it. When we understand it, we read it about again and again. Sometimes we read it one by one. Finally we read it aloud with feelings together. I fell proud when I read Chinese poetry. I hope you could join us. I’ looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份，给Peter写一封邀请信，邀请他来参加汉语诗词朗诵。短文的内容包括活动的时间、地点、活动的主要内容和自己的感受。题目中还给出了一些提示词和提示问题，我们可以按照这些问题组织语言和写作的内容，在写的时候，使用上所给的提示词。要注意英语表达和汉语的不同，句式表达要从整体考虑，不能逐词去翻译。尤其是要注意每句话中谓语动词的形式，使用正确的时态、语态和单复数形式。在文章中还应使用一些连词或短语，使上下文的意思连贯，增强文章的表现力。 点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文，短文按照题目的要求给Peter写了邀请信。首先短文内容完整，层次清晰，分成了三段，第一段点明写信的目的，第二段是主体段，介绍了活动的时间、地点、安排等细节信息；最后一段表达了自己希望对方来参加的愿意。其次短文中使用了正确的人称和时态，语法规范，句型、短语的搭配都很准确。句式简洁、明了，清楚地表达了写作内容。短文中使用了一些较好的句型，如We have Chinese Poetry Reading activity in Room 4 on Monday afternoon. It begins at 4:30 and finished at 5:30、Our Chinese teacher usually explains the meaning of it. When we understand it, we read it about again and again.、I fell proud when I read Chinese poetry. I hope you could join us. I’m looking forward to your early reply等。 E 随着社会的进步和教育的发展，我们初中生不仅要学习知识，更要注重提升个人能力和培养良好品质。校园报以“How to be a better _______”为题，面向初中毕业生开展征文活动。 请你用student, friend, teenager, reader, learner…，将题目补全，希望同学们能结合自己的生活实际，分享自己的经历，帮助其他同学也成为一个更好的……期待大家的精彩作品！ 要求： 1.意思连贯、语法正确、书写规范； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息； 3.词数80—120。 How to be a better _______ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】 How to be a better teenager A nation will prosper only when its young people thrive. So how can we be better teenagers? First of all, we should develop healthy living habits. We can run for half an hour every day to keep healthy. What’s more, we should make a study plan and take actions to achieve it. The more knowledge we learn, the brighter future we will have. And we had better be friendly to others. When others need help, we should try our best to help them. Finally, it is good to take up good hobbies and take part in volunteer activities, such as cleaning the city park. In a word, if we try our best, we will become better and better. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：本文主要是介绍如何成为一名更好的年轻人，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，具体阐述怎样成为一个更好的青少年； 第三步，书写结语，表达“我们会变得越来越好”的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①keep healthy保持健康 ②take up开始从事 ③take part in参加 [高分句型] ①The more knowledge we learn, the brighter future we will have. (the+比较级，the+比较级句式) ②In a word, if we try our best, we will become better and better. (if引导的条件状语从句) F 在丰富多彩的初中学习生活中，你一定积累了很多学习方法和经验吧！现校刊英文专栏以“Learning to learn”为题征稿。请你根据要求，用英语写一篇短文投稿。 Dear students, Learning to learn is more important than learning itself. What good methods do you have when you learn some subjects? Please share your learning methods with us? The following questions may help you. 1. What subject do you want to talk about? 2. What good learning methods do you have about the subject? 3. What are your feelings when you learn the subject? We are looking forward to your sharing. 注意： 1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 2.表达清楚，语言通顺，书写规范； 3.词数不少于100。文章的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Hello everyone! It’s my great honor to share my learning methods with you all. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】 Learning to learn Hello everyone! It’s my great honor to share my learning methods with you all. My name is Lily. Here are my methods of English learning. First, I usually watch English movies and listen to English songs. I think it’s a relaxing way to learn the correct pronunciation and proper expressions. Second, reading passages on the same topic helps a lot in learning new words. In this way, the new words can be repeated and I can understand their meanings better. What’s more, it’s a good habit to keep a diary in English. That helps me think in English and improve my writing skills as well. Hope my methods can be helpful. But please remember, find the ways that are best for you. 【详解】【总体分析】 ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：提示已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 【写作步骤】 第一步，介绍自己想谈的科目； 第二步，具体介绍你学习这门学科的方法； 第三步，表达你的感受以及你从中学到什么。 ①listen to听 ②in this way以这种方式 ③what’s more而且 【高分句型】①I think it’s a relaxing way to learn the correct pronunciation and proper expressions.（宾语从句） ②Second, reading passages on the same topic helps a lot in learning new words.（动名词短语作主语） G 又到一年毕业季，又逢青春告别时。假设你是九年级一班的李华，你所在的班级计划举办一场告别初中的晚会（a farewell party）。请你撰写一份发言稿，谈谈三年来你的成长，你对未来的期待，以及你对同学或老师们的祝愿。 注意： 1. 词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 内容须包括所给要点，可适当发挥，条理清楚、语句连贯； 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等信息。 Dear teachers and classmates, As we are going to say goodbye to junior high school days, I am filled with joy and excitement. _____________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear teachers and classmates, As we are going to say goodbye to junior high school days, I am filled with joy and excitement. I still remember the first day of Grade 7 like it was yesterday. I used to be afraid of speaking in public. I thought I would never learn English well. But now, I realize that I was just being silly. Since then, I have tried to speak English in public many times and learned a lot. My classmates also helped me a lot, so I learned the important of working together. Now I am more and more confident. Even though I am sad that junior high will be over, I become happier and healthier to have new experiences in senior high school. I’ve made up my mind to improve the ability of study, and develop interest in voluntary activities. At last, I would like to show my best wishes to those standing by me all the way, teachers, parents and friends included. Thank you all! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇发言稿； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括三年来你的成长，你对未来的期待，以及你对同学或老师们的祝愿。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头已给出，即将告别初中生活； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。三年来你的成长，你对未来的期待，以及你对同学或老师们的祝愿； 第三步，表示感谢。 [亮点词汇] ① used to be 曾经是 ② the important of ……的重要性 ③ make up one’s mind 下定决心　 [高分句型] ① My classmates also helped me a lot, so I learned the important of working together.（使用so连接两个句子，表示因果关系） ② Even though I am sad that junior high will be over, I become happier and healthier to have new experiences in senior high school.（使用even though引导的让步状语从句） H 在即将告别初中的时候，你一定有一些遗憾。但是一切都来得及，在高中以及更远的日子里都可以弥补。遗憾让人成长。请你以“My biggest regret”为题，根据写作要求，用英语写一篇短文，向学校校刊的英语专栏投稿。 写作要点：1)你最大的遗憾是什么？是由什么造成的？ 2)你打算怎么弥补这个遗憾。 写作要求：1)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 2)词数100 左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 My biggest regret As I prepare to say goodbye to middle school, I can’t help but think about my biggest regret. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】     My biggest regret As I prepare to say goodbye to middle school, I can’t help but think about my biggest regret. When I was in Grade 8, I fell in love with computer games. As soon as I got home, I would sat in front of the computer and played computer games. I even stayed up late to play it. As a result, I often fell asleep in class. What’s worse, I failed a very important exam. How regretful I felt! As the saying goes, “It’s never too late to learn”. I plan to stop playing computer games. And I’ll try my best to study hard. I’ll preview lessons before classes, listen carefully in class, go over lessons and finish my homework on time. I believe where there is a will, there is a way. I will try my best to learn it well. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般过去时、一般现在时和一般将来时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己最大的遗憾，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，介绍自己最大的遗憾以及是由什么造成的； 第三步，介绍你打算如何弥补这个遗憾； 第四步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①as a result结果 ②fall asleep睡着 ③go over复习 [高分句型] ①As soon as I got home, I would sat in front of the computer and played computer games. (as soon as引导的时间状语从句) ②I believe where there is a will, there is a way. (宾语从句) I 为进一步增强中小学生的安全意识，提高自我保护的能力, 学校将举行以“安全”为主题的征文活动。请你根据下列表格内容写一篇题为“How can we make ourselves safe?”的英语短文。 要点 内容 饮食安全 不吃变质食物，少吃或不吃垃圾食品。 交友安全 网上慎重交友，不和陌生人交谈。 旅行安全 照看好私人物品，遇险及时报警。 游泳安全 不独自游泳，不到河、湖里游泳。 …… …… 提示词：be careful, go bad 要求： （1）必须包含所给的全部要点及内容，可适当发挥。 （2）文中不能出现真实姓名和校名。 （3）词数：80—100词。 How can we make ourselves safe? _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 How can we make ourselves safe? As teenagers, to learn how to make ourselves safe is especially important. Here are some of my suggestions. First of all, in order to eat healthily and safely, we’d better eat less junk food and not eat food that goes bad. Besides, we are supposed to be careful when making friends online, which may bring unnecessary trouble. Don’t talk to strangers. What’s more, we should take good care of our personal things when travelling. If we are in danger, call the police for help in time. In addition, remember not to go swimming alone in the river or lake to avoid putting ourselves into dangerous situations. Finally, when we go upstairs or downstairs, we shouldn’t crowd each other. In a word, safety is of great importance and all of us need to know how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍作为青少年学习如何使自己安全是特别重要的，并引出下文； 第二步，根据提示具体描述如何做； 第三步，最后表达总结。 [亮点词汇] ① in order to为了 ② be supposed to do应该做 ③ what’s more而且 ④ in addition此外 [高分句型] ①Besides, we are supposed to be careful when making friends online, which may bring unnecessary trouble.（时间状语从句，定语从句） ②If we are in danger, call the police for help in time.（条件状语从句） J 介绍家乡美景，宣传家乡文化。近期，我市将面向全体中学生举办“师生 共话三门峡”的英语实践活动。假如你是Li Lei，想参加此次活动，请根据下面的提示信息，向负责本次活动的英语老师Mr. Yang写一封自荐信。 写作提示： 1. 你的简要信息； 2. 你的个人优势，例如：了解家乡名胜景点、历史文化、当地美食、擅长英语表达等； 3. 你对此次活动的感想或期待。 写作要求： 1. 100 词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入字数； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 Dear Mr. Yang, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Sincerely, Li Lei 【答案】 Dear Mr Yang, I’m excited to hear that our school will hold an activity with the aim of promoting hometown culture. I really want to take part in it. It’s my great honor to introduce myself. I’m a boy from Class One, Grade Eight. My name is Li Lei and I’m 14 years old. I’m an outgoing boy. I have a good understanding of knowing many places of interest, the history of my hometown and local food. Besides, I have a good command of English. In a word, this activity is meaningful. We can not only improve our spoken English through the activity, but also have a deeper insight into our hometown. As a Chinese student, it’s our duty to make more people know about our history and culture! I expect that you can give me this chance to show myself and I’m looking forward to your reply. Sincerely, Li Lei 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为自荐信； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己的个人信息； 第二步，介绍自己的优势； 第三步，发表个人感想。 [亮点词汇] ①take part in参加 ②have an insight into了解 ③have a good command of精通 [高分句型] ①We can not only improve our spoken English through the activity, but also have a deeper insight into our hometown.（not only...but also...句型） ②I expect that you can give me this chance to show myself and I am looking forward to your reply.（宾语从句） K 在三年的初中生活中，家人、老师、朋友、同学陪伴我们一起度过了许多欢乐的时光。但有时我们也会因某些原因与他人产生争执、摩擦等。请根据下面的思维导图，回忆一次你和别人之间不愉快的经历，描述那时你的心路历程，以及最后是如何解决的，并分享你的感悟与收获。 参考词汇：have an argument, be misunderstood, feel sad, learn from, ... 要求： 1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4.词数：不少于70词（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。 Life is not only about happiness. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Life is not only about happiness. I still remember the unpleasant experience between me and my good friend Linda. One afternoon, after the math test results came out, Linda was very unhappy because she had failed the exam. I didn’t think it was a big deal, so I looked at the 59 on the paper and joked: You’re so awesome. You just did as the saying goes, “A miss is as good as a mile.” Linda was very angry and we had an argument. After that, she stopped talking to me, and I felt sad. I realized what I had done really hurt Linda, so I told her I shouldn’t play awful jokes on her grades. Finally, she forgave me. Through this experience, I have learned that everyone has different opinions about grades, so we should pay attention to what we say. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：根据实际情况灵活运用时态； ③提示：写作时要根据思维导图，回忆一次和别人之间不愉快的经历，并且要描述那时你的心路历程，以及最后是怎么解决的，并分享感悟和收获。语句要通顺，上下文连贯，可适当发挥，但不得出现你的任何真实信息。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明主题，表明与别人有过不愉快的经历； 第二步，描述自己当时的心路历程以及解决方法； 第三步，分享感悟与收获。 [亮点词汇] ①fail the exam 考试不及格 ②have an argument 吵架 ③pay attention to 注意 [高分句型] ①I have learned that everyone has different opinions about grades. (宾语从句) ②A miss is as good as a mile. (谚语) L 中华文化源远流长，博大精深。我校学生会特组织用英语讲好中国故事活动，邀请同学们分系列介绍中国文化。本期主题是“我最喜欢的城市”，请介绍你最喜欢的城市并陈述理由。 注意事项： 1. 短文须自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2. 词数在100个左右，文章开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。 My Favourite City My favourite city is _________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you can visit it some day. 【答案】 My Favourite City My favourite city is Beijing. Beijing, the capital of China, has a long history and culture. This city is famous in the world for its spectacular historical sites, modern buildings and rich cultural activities. Beijing is a city with multi-ethnic cultures, with colorful folk culture and delicious food, so that people can feel the charm of Chinese culture. Beijing has many places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Palace Museum, the Summer Palace and so on. If you come to visit Beijing, you can watch the raising of the national flag at Tian’anmen Square. You can enjoy some beautiful views in the Summer Palace. Also, you can try some delicious food like Beijing duck. If you want to learn more about Chinese art, don’t miss the opera shows there. I think Beijing is worth a visit. I hope you can visit it some day. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出“我最喜欢的城市”的话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“地理位置、景点、美食、文化”等方面进行介绍； 第三步，书写结语，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①the capital of……的首都 ②such as例如 ③learn about了解 [高分句型] ①If you come to visit Beijing, you can watch the raising of the national flag at Tian’anmen Square.（if引导的条件状语从句） ②I think Beijing is worth a visit.（省略that的宾语从句） M 习主席曾说：“民之所忧，我必念之；民之所盼，我必行之。”作为中学生的我们，应该如何对自己、家庭和社会负责呢？请以“How to Be a Responsible (有责任心的) Student?”为题写一篇短文。 注意： 1. 短文须包含所有信息，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2. 词数90左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 短文中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息。 How to be a responsible student In the school study hard; At home do some dishes; In public help the elderly cross the road; ... Your hope How to Be a Responsible Student? As teenagers, we are the future of our country and we need to be responsible. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 How to Be a Responsible Student? As teenagers, we are the future of our country and we need to be responsible. What should we do? I think as a good student, we should study hard and have good studying habits. In class, we need to listen to teachers carefully and be active in class. After school, we should finish our homework on time and do some reading. At home, it’s necessary for us to share the housework. We can do the dishes after dinner. Respecting parents is also important. In society, we can do some volunteer work like helping the elderly cross the road. Besides, we should be nice to others and follow the rules. By doing these things, we can make our family and society better. Let’s all be responsible and make a difference! 【详解】[总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包括表格中所列要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，强调青少年作为国家的未来应该有责任心，引出如何做的话题； 第二步，具体提出一些合理的建议； 第三步，书写总结，表达期待。 ［亮点词汇］ ① do some reading 阅读 ② make a difference  产生影响 ［高分句型］ ① At home, it’s necessary for us to share the housework. (it作形式主语) ② Respecting parents is also important. (动名词作主语) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$